Staise, the Guard of Iron (Reworked)

LilStacey87··2 votes·1,517 views

DUE TO SO MUCH CONFUSION WITH THE MOVE SET, I COMPLETELY CHANGED THE KIT TO A MORE SIMPLER PLAY STYLE. PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR FEEDBACK ON HOW YOU FEEL. Also, please VOTE on the polls or up-vote my idea. HOPEFULLY I CAN GET A VIEW FROM RIOT, THANKS

I got the picture from a guy on Devion Art

Lore:

In the towns within of Fyrone, a brave solider lives. Staise spent alot of time in Navori mastering different aggressive style of fighting. He was born into Valoran's ways of war and took little time to enjoy the precious trees and lakes of his country. His home had been invaded numerous times by the Noxian army and their affiliates. Defending himself was far more important than quality time. Though he was far more greater than an exceptional warrior, he sought only peace. So he moved to Fyrone Flats to start a new life. There, he became a Guard for his home town, swearing to defend any invasion that came his way. But to do this he mastered a style he created himself called Goi: and honed it day and night. Soon, Goi became to become mentioned in the same breath as Wuju and Hiten. Through training he became a Master of Masters.

*He heard rumors of a wind wanderer (Yasuo reference) and Sand (See Sangrin in Community Creations) technique user roaming Valoran. He was willing to put his body through the ultimate trials to bring war to an end. He had heard tales of the new warriors going into the Institute of war for various reasons and he knew that only there could "Goi" perfected. He left Fyrone Flats for a the time being, hoping to come home with everything he needed to be the protector he promised. And for his home to be the safe haven he longed for. *

"Protect the faithful" -Jarvan 4th

SIDE NOTE:- Goi stands for Guard of Iron and I made up the name myself. It's just Karate techniques with the Tonfa as shown in the video below. As of now Staise uses health to cost to do skills and bonus damage to represent the effort he puts into his attacks. Staise is about 5'10 and medium/muscular build. He has light brown skin and brown eyes with a bald head.

KIT

Passive: **Goi-Style **

Gains 10 Armor and Magic Resist for every 500 health

(Q) Tonfa Punch

Staise does a hard lunging punch with his Tonfa, dealing 120/140/160/180/200% (Total Attack Damage) plus 1/2/3/4/5% (Bonus Health) and stuns the opponent for 0.5 seconds. Cooldown: 7 Range: 250 Radius Cost: 5% Health

(W) Aggression

Toggle: 3/6/9/12/15% Movement and Attack speed. Staise flips his Tonfas around, gaining a short amount of attack range when activated. Passive: Auto attacks also reduce the cooldown of abilities by 1 sec. Cooldown: 5 Aggression AA Range: 145 Cost: 2% Health per basic attack

(E) Backfist

A whipping back fist that does 1.5 bonus attack damage (plus 4/5/6/7/8% of Staises Maximum health) an enemy in melee range. If the target is Stunned/Rooted and Aggression is Toggled ON, he then throws a follow up punch with the other hand doing the same amount of damage. Cooldown: 12 Range: 145 (Single-Target Spell) Cost: 10% Health

ULTIMATE Equalizer

Suppresses the enemy as he does a Karate-like pose as he channels for 1.5 seconds, during the channel he gains 10/20/30% bonus armor and magic resist and cannot be disabled. Afterwards he does a hard punch, dealing 10% (+an additional 0.1% for every 1% missing) of the his maximum health as Physical damage and is granted a Shield for the same amount. Cooldown: 100/80/60 Range: 145 Cost % 10 Health

He fights like the guy with the hat.

CHANGE LOG

I completely changed the passive. (x2) I tried to make the character more balanced and fun to read. I added costs for Abilities. There is a slight change in the lore. (x2)

11 Comments

Absolute XIII1 votes

Too op

LilStacey871 votes

I did some re editing to the numbers and abilities. Thanks for your opinion.

Big Cute Boy1 votes

This is way too over powered. He seems like kinda like jax only really op. Plus all of his abilities basically do the same thing (that being a 1.0 ad scaling or buff) also he looks super gay

LilStacey871 votes

Appreciate the honesty. I didn't get deep into numbers because there's no need. The passive might be a little OP, true. But I wanted to be creative. Keep in mind that it's just a concept, and I really think I made him with realistic scaling compared to some of the champs I've seen on here, but if not my apologies. And I did not draw the picture, I just posted it because my concept IS a black guy with tonfas.

LilStacey871 votes

I also want to say that I do actually like the art work though, not how I really invision my guy but the dude who drew him is 100x better than my own art skills.

Aquaponeyy1 votes

hey dude!

nice idea! a pure fighter! and he is not too op!

He is different of Jax, and a second "true" fighter would be nice!

Ratios and values have to be tested guys, how you can tell that!

I have not understood 2 points (maybe because english is not my langage...xD):

(1) how can you activate Self-Defense and Agression with the same button (W)

(2) i don't understand his ultimate, what is the interest to gain armor and mr during 1,5 sec? i suggest you to remove the shield, and he keeps the gains after posing during 3/5/7 sec (something like that).

to summarize, geat idea, need small modifications and has to be tested (Jax is know balanced, but he took a long time)

See you, enjoy the game and don't forget to have fun (IT'S A Game !!!).

P.S.: don't forget to create your "conceptor account" !

LilStacey872 votes

Hey, thanks for your comment. The guys below were right, My old moveset was very overpowered, so I hate to tone Staise down a lot so he could be a great character to play. Here's an Answer to both your questions.

(1) how can you activate Self-Defense and Agression with the same button (W)

Answer: It's a Toggle Skill. Think of Aatrox'sAatrox(W). When you level up your (W) it would automatically give you the **Self-Defense **activation buff, reducing the next source of Damage by (x) amount, It would also give you the "Persistent" effect like UdyrUdyr. Pressing (W) again would switch you to Aggression doing the same thing, which is giving you the Movement Speed upon activation and everything else while toggled.

(2) i don't understand his ultimate, what is the interest to gain armor and mr during 1,5 sec? i suggest you to remove the shield, and he keeps the gains after posing during 3/5/7 sec (something like that).

Before I answer, here's a side note: The Ultimate his like a "Equalizer" Abilities cost Health per cast which can be a pain and he's probably going to take a lot of punishment with no real escape tools. So using it at about half health or lower is probably going to benefit you more as the battle goes on because the Shield would be larger, allowing you to stay in the skirmish.

Answer: The Ult only hits one enemy, and during this time if your in a team fight focus could be on you! The Armor and MR ** PERCENTAGE** buff reduces damage while channeling and encourages you to buy items such as maybe Omen'sitem 3143 or Bansheeitem 3102 to reduce damage during focus fire. Think of this move as being a like Warwicks ULT, where he does an Animation on the Target but the range is pretty much melee and it's a Single Blow.

PS: I've been waiting for someone to show some interest, thanks alot. And if you have anymore questions, comments or suggestions feel free to post them. And don't for get to Vote on the Polls for me. -Thanks

Aquaponeyy1 votes

ok thank you for details its more clear now (for me, xD) !

For the Ultimate, my suggestion was you gain armor and MR during a period because he is an awesome fighter and can hit one time with a heavy strike a specific target. If you don t think it is not better, i trust you (i dont play Jax).

(if i m not clear, sry, it s 4:07 am for me ; ) )

Go on! Good luck! and i already gave a +1.

See you!

LilStacey871 votes

Thanks for the suggestion. For now I'll just keep the shield though, I vision this champion to be up there with Jax in creativity but he has to have unique skills. Armor and MR on top of a damage shield would prob be insane lol. In my mind he has a weird build, but his skills and abilities would benefit from it.

It's rare that a class has only one primary role, there's only about 1 or two per category (except Support) but besides fighter, I don't know about his secondary role. But The way I did his skills his core build would look something like.

item 3022 ,item 3068 item 3005

Thanks for the +1!

LilStacey871 votes

P.S.: don't forget to create your "conceptor account" !

What's a conceptor account?

Aquaponeyy1 votes

you know make your concept account here with the link of your baby:

[Champion Concepts] of LoL Community](http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/gcpmkxBE-champion-concepts-of-lol-community?show=flat)

you can also present you, your aim, for example why you make Champion Concept, your resources: etc etc

i created this discussion because a lot of concepts (and awesome) concepts are lost with time. Do you have seen the numbers of concept posted today: around 10 !!!

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