Staise, the Guard of Iron (Reworked)

LilStacey87·8/17/2014, 1:22:53 AM·2 votes·1,517 views

DUE TO SO MUCH CONFUSION WITH THE MOVE SET, I COMPLETELY CHANGED THE KIT TO A MORE SIMPLER PLAY STYLE. PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR FEEDBACK ON HOW YOU FEEL. Also, please VOTE on the polls or up-vote my idea. HOPEFULLY I CAN GET A VIEW FROM RIOT, THANKS

I got the picture from a guy on Devion Art

Lore:

In the towns within of Fyrone, a brave solider lives. Staise spent alot of time in Navori mastering different aggressive style of fighting. He was born into Valoran's ways of war and took little time to enjoy the precious trees and lakes of his country. His home had been invaded numerous times by the Noxian army and their affiliates. Defending himself was far more important than quality time. Though he was far more greater than an exceptional warrior, he sought only peace. So he moved to Fyrone Flats to start a new life. There, he became a Guard for his home town, swearing to defend any invasion that came his way. But to do this he mastered a style he created himself called Goi: and honed it day and night. Soon, Goi became to become mentioned in the same breath as Wuju and Hiten. Through training he became a Master of Masters.

*He heard rumors of a wind wanderer (Yasuo reference) and Sand (See Sangrin in Community Creations) technique user roaming Valoran. He was willing to put his body through the ultimate trials to bring war to an end. He had heard tales of the new warriors going into the Institute of war for various reasons and he knew that only there could "Goi" perfected. He left Fyrone Flats for a the time being, hoping to come home with everything he needed to be the protector he promised. And for his home to be the safe haven he longed for. *

"Protect the faithful" -Jarvan 4th

SIDE NOTE:- Goi stands for Guard of Iron and I made up the name myself. It's just Karate techniques with the Tonfa as shown in the video below. As of now Staise uses health to cost to do skills and bonus damage to represent the effort he puts into his attacks. Staise is about 5'10 and medium/muscular build. He has light brown skin and brown eyes with a bald head.

KIT

Passive: **Goi-Style **

Gains 10 Armor and Magic Resist for every 500 health

(Q) Tonfa Punch

Staise does a hard lunging punch with his Tonfa, dealing 120/140/160/180/200% (Total Attack Damage) plus 1/2/3/4/5% (Bonus Health) and stuns the opponent for 0.5 seconds. Cooldown: 7 Range: 250 Radius Cost: 5% Health

(W) Aggression

Toggle: 3/6/9/12/15% Movement and Attack speed. Staise flips his Tonfas around, gaining a short amount of attack range when activated. Passive: Auto attacks also reduce the cooldown of abilities by 1 sec. Cooldown: 5 Aggression AA Range: 145 Cost: 2% Health per basic attack

(E) Backfist

A whipping back fist that does 1.5 bonus attack damage (plus 4/5/6/7/8% of Staises Maximum health) an enemy in melee range. If the target is Stunned/Rooted and Aggression is Toggled ON, he then throws a follow up punch with the other hand doing the same amount of damage. Cooldown: 12 Range: 145 (Single-Target Spell) Cost: 10% Health

ULTIMATE Equalizer

Suppresses the enemy as he does a Karate-like pose as he channels for 1.5 seconds, during the channel he gains 10/20/30% bonus armor and magic resist and cannot be disabled. Afterwards he does a hard punch, dealing 10% (+an additional 0.1% for every 1% missing) of the his maximum health as Physical damage and is granted a Shield for the same amount. Cooldown: 100/80/60 Range: 145 Cost % 10 Health

He fights like the guy with the hat.

CHANGE LOG

I completely changed the passive. (x2) I tried to make the character more balanced and fun to read. I added costs for Abilities. There is a slight change in the lore. (x2)

11 Comments

Absolute XIII8/19/2014, 4:51:41 AM1 votes

Too op

Big Cute Boy8/19/2014, 5:21:33 AM1 votes

This is way too over powered. He seems like kinda like jax only really op. Plus all of his abilities basically do the same thing (that being a 1.0 ad scaling or buff) also he looks super gay

Aquaponeyy8/24/2014, 11:52:42 PM1 votes

hey dude!

nice idea! a pure fighter! and he is not too op!

He is different of Jax, and a second "true" fighter would be nice!

Ratios and values have to be tested guys, how you can tell that!

I have not understood 2 points (maybe because english is not my langage...xD):

(1) how can you activate Self-Defense and Agression with the same button (W)

(2) i don't understand his ultimate, what is the interest to gain armor and mr during 1,5 sec? i suggest you to remove the shield, and he keeps the gains after posing during 3/5/7 sec (something like that).

to summarize, geat idea, need small modifications and has to be tested (Jax is know balanced, but he took a long time)

See you, enjoy the game and don't forget to have fun (IT'S A Game !!!).

P.S.: don't forget to create your "conceptor account" !