I've been making champion concepts for a LONG TIME, and these are the 12 I made!

Gushis·May 28, 2017·3 votes·589 views

Hello, thanks for clicking on the post! Before you write down a comment about how posting 12 concepts is not okay, just listen. I put my heart into all of these; behind each concept are at least 3 scraped concepts. That comes into play with poems, 100+ voiced quotes, in game pictures of kits, each name having a hidden meaning behind it, etc... That being said, I'm proud of them. I was reluctant at first to post these here (because who the heck posts 12 concepts at once) but I decided to try it anyways. Please let me know what you think, on all or specifics. If you like it, tell me why; if you dislike it, tell me why too :)

Thanks a lot for viewing this! [slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

14 Comments

TerakaliMay 29, 20171 votes

Tell you what, Gushis, I will review every single one if these if you do the same for me. https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/player/na/Terakali?content_type=discussion

GushisMay 29, 20171 votes

Sure! If you don't wanna do all that's fine though

TerakaliMay 29, 20171 votes

As many as you review, I will.

ShovelShepherdMay 29, 20171 votes

I think I'll leave you two alone [slayer-jinx-wink]

GushisMay 29, 20171 votes

Oh, no. You're welcome to join [slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

ShovelShepherdMay 29, 20171 votes

Bistir's lore doesn't really match-up with his game-play fantasy. The lore doesn't strike me as particularly bounty hunter. More like a "What's Eating Gilbert Grape", where he's just passively stuck in the same rut, helping his family, until something bad happens. Second, his kit doesn't seem like it's got a lot of counterplay. If he decides to kill you, he could just e, w behind you, maybe q and then ult you into his tower if you aren't dead yet. Also, could you explain his q a little more to me, without all of the stats. Drova seems kinda cool, but she'd face the problem of Nasus, being largely irrelevant until late game. She'd be a split-push monster, though, like Yorick, but more susceptible to ganks. Maybe she could choose to move hives OR place new ones with her ult? That way, she could keep her power in one place and have that feel of a hive-queen. I think I'm done for now, though :P

GushisMay 29, 20171 votes

I think you might have red Bistir's lore wrong. Basically, his mom didn't teach him the Noxian way of life -> rebellious Bistir joined the Noxian army -> he was talented, and after training became an assassin and personal man of an elite general -> turns out the Noxian army raided some villages which failed to cooperate -> his mom died, he decided to go rouge, putting his skills as an assassin to good use as a paid bounty hunter -> he now operates in the streets, messing with Noxian plan and killing officials. The reason we have not heard of him yet is because anyone who speaks of him turns out to be dead in the days. So those who do know of him take precautions but are smart enough to say nothing. Yes, I probably could have written the lore better on this one :>

Evading Bistir in-game is all about positioning. If he manages to flank you and W or flash onto you -> ult, you done goofed. His ult is dodge-able and cc-able. He has a bunch of mobility and tools, but if he gets cc-ed he's basically toast, sort of like Lee Sin. Also, he needs to hit his skills to really do impact.

Q: 2 charges. Bistir shoots an arrow which deals damage and places a mark on the target. If Bistir fires the second arrow at the marked target it deals extra damage and slows. If Bistir ults a marked target, the range of the dash is doubled.

Keep in mind that the concepts are chronological, so in theory they should get better as you move on

Thank you kindly for the feedback!

ShovelShepherdMay 29, 20171 votes

No prob, and I didn't really get the rebellious thing, thanks for the clarification. Also thank you for the q explanation.

GushisMay 31, 20171 votes

I probably could have written they lore better, you're right about that

GushisJun 9, 20171 votes

I'll start reviewing today

SilvarsparkMay 29, 20171 votes

Just from a presentation perspective: If you present something, be proud of it and confident. Dont say you are sorry for posting original content or stuff like that. It's a really weak first impression if the person who came up with it, obviously isnt confident about it. You are literally making the case for potential haters. If someone has crap to say, let them say it. It's not your job to do it.

GushisMay 29, 20171 votes

I'm confident, but I was worried that my post would get downvoted into oblivion just because of people not liking the fact that I'm posting 12 concepts. It seemed that this community is more tame than reddit though

xFizzzyBubblechMay 29, 20171 votes

Nice! Drova seems a bit outdated but still fine (like Nasus), but overall they all have nice themes and kits. My favorite is Mo Khu, I could see myself playing that xD

GushisMay 30, 20171 votes

Thanks for the feedback! I agree Drova is oldish, but that's because, well, she was designed a long time ago. In theory, as you move forwards in champions they should get better and more up-to-date since the list is chronological.