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Special thanks to LeifTheExplorer
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This time I tried to make it in website format. Feedback would be awesome!
XxJustJokenxX1 votes1200 damage proc! Kinda overpowered don't you think? Just r and dash the backline and it's pretty much over. Aside from that the kit is pretty fluid. Solid champ.
I'd like to know what you think of my ideas. https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/uT5tQpgK-concept-the-suns-lament
Gushis1 votesThe ult proc does 200/300/400 (+100% AD).
XxJustJokenxX1 votesWhat then does the thrice relate to? I'm a bit confused now.
Gushis1 votes"Hitting auto attacks, Q, or E on Vulnerable targets thrice consumes Vulnerable, dealing physical damage to all enemy units within 150 units." Basically after hitting a target three times (thrice) with AA, Q, or E, it procs the effect.
XxJustJokenxX1 votesthanks for clearing that up. it makes way more sense
xFizzzyBubblech1 votesThe execution on this is fantastic, you really covered every element of concept design well. Most people have a clear weakness in lore writing, or number balancing, or whatever. But you actually tackled everything well. The voice acting and theme music worked better than I expected(but as a note for the future, let your voice out a bit more. The "kinda whispering but kinda shouting" doesnt sound natural) I appreciate that this is a simple concept. As much as I love making crazy and completely game changing concepts, every once in a while I'll just do a concept without any gimmicks or new mechanics, and just try to make a kit that works well. The shield breaking is a new mechanic, but its pretty straightforward, and is also a nice counter to a mechanic that currently has no specific counters. My only real critique is on his identity. His backstory is well writen and expresses his character really well, but I dont know if it does enough to distinguish itself from the countless other "gritty, master swordsmen with dark pasts". And I'm not just talking about Yasuo and Riven, I mean in general media as well. I'll admit that I'm biased, as I personally prefer experimental and creative archetypes over more universal and reliable archetypes, but its still something to consider On a more minor note, Q damage is really high at level 1. If both hits land, its ~180+4% max health damage, plus the shield as a bonus.
Gushis1 votesThanks for your feedback! I appreciate everything you said. Although the backstory is sort of a "gritty master swordsman," I tried to be original and creative with the rest of the aspects of the story (and I think I did pretty well with that). Now that I look at Q, you're right about that too. For my voice acting, I just kind of went for "Ionian" style for him, never tried it before thought I might as well. I agree with you, I don't think it was very good lol. I did voice other stuff before which I'll link below. Once again thank you very much for your feedback, and good to see you again :)
Requested voice lines: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n4v__4Rchg0 Voice lines for my other champion Morgan: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U6xY-_bKo1E I always work to improve my voice acting skills
