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A champion I've thought of

TheShadowyOwl·6/19/2016, 9:52:40 PM·7 votes·3,031 views

So I've thought of a champion but before I get started I do wanna say that if you do have a champion either link me to it or write it in the comments cause I do enjoy hearing about them now here we go. Oh 1 more thing i'm going to be using the old lore as in the institute of war and summoner thing will exist.

Design: His hair is brown, he has a scarf and has a hood that are grey, his eyes are dull red, his clothes are a white shirt, black pants, his leather glove that has a bright purple device on it, boots that look similar to the ionian boots of lucidity but they are very old, he's also got a belt. His splash art is him standing in front of one of his portals and 2 to the left and 1 to the right holding each of his weapons.

Mensio "The Portal Jumper" Roles: Support Secondary: Mage When Mensio was born his mother died because she had an ailment that caused her body to be fragile when under great amounts of pain. His father out of spite for the child left him at a foster home of an old friend, They took care of him well enough, but they never showed him any signs of how a normal family treats their child. As such most of the ways he learned about technology and created his Portal machine was through books that he had to buy himself and teachings of some scientists that would pass through, one that he was very fond of was Corin Reveck and his Daughter Orianna, after a while his foster parents sent him to the school of Techmaturgy where he met Viktor and usually afterschool he would go and meet up with Ekko, both of them were good friends who helped improve his technology and gave him the feeling of a family. However they went their separate ways, when Viktor became full on machine and intended to conquer Zaun he went to his best friend Mensio, intending to get him to join him, by force if necessary, no matter how much he tried to convince him Mensio refused and soon he was forced to try to hold him still and force it onto him. He joined the Institute of War to find someplace safe until he could convince Viktor to change back too his normal self so they could change Zaun into a better place.

Stats: Health: 600+75 Attack damage: 65+6 Attack speed: 0.734+3% Movement Speed: 355 Health regen: 3.2+0.748 Armor: 50+6 Magic Resist: 45+5

Passive: Time for an upgrade Mensio starts out with a weak magic basic attack however depending on which item you get first will choose how his passive will work as well as what weapon he has increases that stat by 30.

Physical power: If you get item 1055 or item 1036 you will get a tomahawk and the passive is every 3 basic attacks it's a critical hit however even if it kills the unit it will bounce off to the side and into a wall, if he picks it up he gets to do it again however if he doesn't get it within 5 sec. or if an enemy gets it the passive is disabled for 15 sec.

Ability power: If you getitem 1056 item 1082 item 1052 the weapon you get is a gunblade, you'll get one of 2 passives depending on what you get if you got item 1056 gives you manasteal as in 5% of the damage you do returns as mana, if you got item 1082 or item 1052 every 5 attacks will do ability power and slow them for 30% for 3 sec.

Defense: if you get item 1054 item 1033 item 1029 you get a buckler and twin guns, you're passive is that when you get hit with a debuff your defense and magic resist increase by 50.

Q: Portal When activated the player can pick anywhere in a 600 unit radius to teleport Mensio. Cooldown: 18/15.5/13/10.5/8 Mana: 210/170/130/90/50

W: Rune Spears Mensio when activated Mensio will be immovable he will summon a spear 3 times in a 700 unit radius pinning the target for 1 sec. and dealing 120/145/170/195/220+(25% ability power)(25%physical power) as physical damage, the same unit cannot be hit while pinned and cannot be pinned 2 times as well as it does 50% damage the second time and 25% damage the 3rd time. Cooldown: 15/14/13/12/11 Mana: 80/100/120/140/160.

E: Weapon Rain Mensio opens up a portal in a 1000 unit radius that rains spears, daggers, swords, and other sharp objects on the opponents in a 500 unit radius, dealing 70/90/110/130/150+(10% physical power)(10% ability power) in physical power per sec. for 3/4/5/6/7 sec. Cooldown: 10 sec. Mana: 60/70/80/90/100

R: Discord Zone Mensio uses a device that causes the portal he summons within 2500/5000/7500 unit radius to be a weird black area that has red pulses going throughout it (700 x 700 units), it has a 4 sec. warning as the ground becomes red and it begins blinking when it happens, while in it champions will constantly be warped to the middle every 1 sec. for 6 sec. when reactivated enemies become silenced and Mensio will warp to each enemy champion within the Discord Zone and deal 100/220/340+(75% physical power)(75% ability power) in half physical, half magical damage, this stops the ability but if he manages to kills all the targets he gets to recast it immediately. Cooldown: 180/140/100 Mana: 200/340/480

Animations for the R: His Tomohawk goes (if their are all 5 if their isn't it ends on the respective number): 1st strike: Simple Swing. 2nd strike: He spins around through his enemy 3rd strike: Swings and jumps up. 4th strike: Slams the targets head. 5th strike: He jumps up then slams the target on the head.

His Gunblade 1st strike: simple slash downwards. 2nd strike: slashes through the target. 3rd strike: will do a triple slash combo. 4th strike: will stab and do a powerful shot 5th strike: will stab, slice upwards, jump up, then shoot the enemy 3 times.

His Guns and Buckler 1st strike: bashes with the buckler. 2nd strike: slides and shoots the target. 3rd strike: slams the target with the buckler. 4th strike: walks forward shooting the target. 5th strike: throws buckler at the target then jumps up shooting target with his guns flipping around causing a barrage of bullets, then warps to the buckler and picks it up before warping back.

Description: He is supposed to be a combo and aggressive support champion, he's supposed to pin his ADC's targets down so they can do high damage and he can do high damage as well too deal high damage with his ADC. He can also be a high mobile mid laner if the player wants too play him like that.

Freinds: Ekko Ezreal Orianna Rivals: Viktor DrMundo Singed Blitzcrank Twitch

Quotes: His voice will be very deadpan and monotone because of his uplifting. Being Picked: "Greetings Summoner, in what way shall we fight?'

Moving: "On my way." "I'm going." "Why can I not teleport?" "Time to go." "Onwards."

Attacking: "Fight me." "Try me." "You're in the way!" "Exterminate this!" "Better start begging."

Low Health: "Just a little longer." "C'mooooooooooon." "Pant, Pant." "Let's not die now."

Death: Mensio will fall over and then be sucked up by one of his portals.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO." "groan, pant, pant, cough, cough."

Q: "Let's go places." "Here I go." "Moving." "Missed me."

W: "Hrrrah!" "Take this!" "Stand Still!"

E: "For you." "There we go." "A good ol' pincushion will take care of this."

R: "I have you now!" "You're not getting away!" "Come Here!" "You can't escape me!" "You can run but you won't get away!" "Pick your god and Pray!"

when reactivated: "Incoming!" "Alright, Let's Go!" "Farewell!" "This is the end friend."

Recall: Pretty basic he opens up a portal then the portal will suck him in. However if an ult such as enchanted crystal arrow barely misses him when he recalls a gust of wind will follow behind him and he'll say "Wow who opened up the window?"

Special Interactions:

Ekko: Joke: "I know you're expecting a joke Ekko but when you live in Zaun the funniest thing is how you're even living there."

Taunt:"Your time is up Ekko."

Ezreal: Joke: "Remind me how'd you talk me into this mess again?"

Taunt: "You betray me Ezreal? then I guess i'm sending you to piltover in a box."

Orianna: Joke: "I'd offer a dance but that's not exactly what you learn when you're an orphan on the streets of Zaun."

Taunt:"Under a new order Ori?"

Viktor: Joke: "My weapons are better." "You're humanity is dead robotic voice ALL THAT'S LEFT IS A MACHINE!"

Taunt: "Trying to kill me again?" "I won't be a robot like you!"

DrMundo: Joke: "Oh it's you."

Taunt: "You can't kill me, can't, won't, will not"

Twitch: Joke: "I'm not in the mood Twitch."

Taunt: "Yes I know you were hiding."

Item build: Depends really on what you want but here's what I would think as a build for each set. AD Damage: Starting set: item 1055 or item 1036 item 2003 item 3340, pretty obvious starting set. Early Items: item 3006 item 3070, Berserkers Greaves for the passives so that he can pop the passive more often, the tear of the goddess so that when his ADC leaves he can stay and keep the lane going. Essential Items: item 3004 item 3078 item 3156, Trinity force so that when he combo's his abilities he can also do high damage, Maw of Malmorus will help him out with not having to worry about cc as much and getting a little more health. Rapid attack Items: item 3094 item 3142, This is incase you want to get the crit. out faster and youmuu's will give extra attack speed and damage. Damage Items: item 3071 item 3033, This is if you want to do damage and as well as do a little extra support-ish abilities, as well as if a tank is carrying these will help out. Example Final Build: item 3006 item 3042 item 3078 item 3156 item 3142 item 3071

AP Damage: there are 2 so i'll do 2 Starting set: item 1056 item 2003 item 3340 Early Items: item 3145 item 3006 item 3070, Berserker's Greave will help you have giant manasteal so you can stay in longer, Hextech gives you extra damage and AP early game. Essential Items: item 3030 item 3115 item 3004, The main course of this build is too be mana sustainable and have high attacks speed and AP these items give you that. Mana Sustain: item 3165 item 3027 item 3078, if you want mana sustain plus a little extra attack speed then go with this Ability power: item 3089 item 3135 item 3090, just if you want to do extra damage with abilities and when you basic attacked. Example Final Build: item 3006 item 3042 item 3030 item 3115 item 3090 item 3089.

AP Damage 2: Starting set: item 1082 or item 1052 item 2003 item 3340 Early Items: item 3117 item 3113, if you want to be able to chase down enemies and deal high damage then go with this. Essential Items: item 3116 item 3146 item 3089, superb Items since he can do really high damage with his abilities. Damage Items: item 3165 item 3090 item 3135, These are high damage that will help spoil enemies with abilities. Situational Items: item 3090 item 3027 item 3157, These are in case you're having trouble staying in because of high damage. Example Final Build: item 3117 item 3116 item 3146 item 3089 item 3165 item 3027

Tank Set: Starting set: item 1054 or item 1029 or item 1033 item 2003 item 3340 Early Items: item 3117 item 3082 or item 1057 Boots of mobility help you get in quick and grab the armor for some tank early on. Essential Items: item 3050 item 3102 item 3512 Armor: item 3025 item 3075 Magic Resist: item 3065 item 3137 Example Final Build: item 3117 item 3050 item 3025 item 3102 item 3512 item 3137

So yeah that's the champion I thought of if any of you have a champion idea link me to it or write it down since I would love to read it as well as if you have any tweaks about it tell me in the comments i'm open to tweaks and critiques so yeah thanks for reading.

Update: OK so click on Ahri right here to go to the 2nd champion i've made for Ionia

Ahri http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/vVXjVN64-a-champion-ive-thought-of-2

And click on Caitlyn here she'll take you too the 3rd champion I've made for Piltover

Caitlyn http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/55YxX360-a-champion-ive-thought-of-3

Ok so in celebration of Noxuses victory though very few of you voted Draven will gladly take you too our next champion.

Draven http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/pxTwF9Er-a-champion-ive-thought-of-4

Click here for my champions poll http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/9cuaeONu-so-howd-i-do-with-them

46 Comments

Ýones6/20/2016, 5:24:19 AM1 votes

How long is 30 foot?

Communist Toast6/20/2016, 6:41:11 PM1 votes

so your E it's activation is basically karthus's ult except better?

Kaktos6/20/2016, 8:58:20 PM1 votes

Hello!

Great concept, but lacks uniqueness and purpose.

Review:

My favorite part of your champion idea is the passive. Having the choice between four different versions is great for a situation. Truly unique passive. However, champion stats will eventually level up to reach over 100, most likely his attack damage (some champions do not go over 100 though). Maybe some other way to decide? Also, I recommend to combine his defense (armor I assume) and magic resist for a tank should not just build one but both for the other team is most likely balanced with AD and AP champions. The thing that is not unique about the passive is the affects. The tomahawk is basically Veigar or Nasus. And the gunblade is Orianna. The defense (armor I assume) is a good passive. The magic resist however is kind of weak... Most tanks barely reach 250 magic resist and late game 250 is nothing.

Now his Q. It is a buffed version of Bard's Magical Journey.

Moving on to the W...... what are you trying to do?! Haha. At max rank you can basically troll perma stun an enemy. Once you are hit you are done (Olaf Gangplank ). It is worse than Morgana bind. Also another champion kind of already has this ability, Heimerdinger.

Okay now his E. As the other comment had already said it is a Karthus ult except better. Also, you get to summon elemental minions that deal a ton of early damage? Jesus Christ.

Now his ultimate, R. It is confusing and I can already tell you there will be a lot of bugs if this ultimate is actually used as stated.

Summary:

Cons -Lacks Uniqueness -Lacks synergy -Where does this champion belong?! (Mid lane I am guessing) -WTF damage

Pros -Unique passive (the choosing part) -Lore

I could tell you spent a lot of time with the lore and I love that you did. However the abilities also needed more time to be thought of, there is no synergy (Orianna, Gnar; it just feels like you just put in abilities you thought were cool [they are]). Riot's goal is to make unique champions that can also give bring a new unique game-play style (Kalista's passive, Gnar's passive, etc). Think about it, if Riot made similar champions all the time it would just be, well, boring.

Recommendation:

-Make the champion more unique -Have some sort of new unique game-play style -Fix passive -Make the abilities have synergy with the others

Ideas -Maybe instead of a stat reaching 100, you can just buy a starter item (item 1056 item 1082 item 1052 or item 1055 item 1036 or item 1054 item 1033 item 1029) and you will gain a set of abilities based on the item you chose (so three sets of four abilities + passive). I really like this passive because it can be hard to counter

I really want to see what you will do next with this champion please inform me! [slayer-jinx-catface]

Senteth6/29/2016, 5:00:44 PM1 votes

I see you adhere to the warframe design philosophy of "If it's cool, then it's good." Now there is nothing wrong with that, but it does stray away from whats needed for a highly competitive game like LoL. Perhaps I'm reading to much into this, but game design is my passion so... whatever...

I like the passive so I'll give it extra attention. Rather then have the passive weapon tied to what item you buy first, it is my opinion that having it as a separate thing purchased in the shop would be better. You know... something similar to gangplanks ult upgrades except bought with gold. Perhaps even free if you can't swap it out later in the game. These upgrades would give him the altered basic attacks, while also increasing his bonus AP/AD/HP or whatever by X%.

As for the rest of the kit, I don't know... I'm a bit confused as to what his play pattern is supposed to be, or what his role is in a team comp. He has a lot of damage and a lot of CC, but he also has a powerful mobility skill. So is he some sort of mage/assassin? What is the win condition for him or his opponent?

Sorry if I'm being a bit nitpicky. It's what I want from others, and I have been known to project a little.

Also his lines make him sound much older and snarky-er then his lore would suggest.

Okay, I'll stop now...

DragexMan7/5/2016, 6:54:20 PM1 votes

Honestly, not lying at all, supports who can go into a carry role are my favorite champions in the game. Blitzcrank, Sona, Braum, Zyra. AD thresh isn't my favorite but it works too. Anyways, this is super complex, you thought of everything! Good work man keep it up!

lIIllIlI7/6/2016, 11:16:08 PM1 votes

Wonderful idea and lots of creativity but this just seems to crazy of a champion to ever be balanced properly. This concept seems just to crazy for a game like League of Legends. I do love the concept though.

Stephenizgod7/25/2016, 5:52:31 PM1 votes

Hey sorry it took me awhile to read your concepts, been busy. I will try to at least get through 1 a day, maybe more if I can.

Ok so before i get into any criticisms i want to say this is a very cool champion design. There are some issues with it, but overall its interesting and original. I also am going to say here that I am not going to focus on the numbers, it is hard to balance damage and stats, so I won't even mention them.

Let's start with the Passive, i like the base idea but I think it needs to be changed so it can actually work in League. I like the idea that your first item changes your basic attacks, but sometimes you pick 1 item because it fits your playstyle or because of a certain match-up (ex: Gangplank can start Doran Ring if he wants mana sustain, most Juggernauts can go Doran's Shield or Doran's Blade depending on the match-up). I don't think you should be locked in for the rest of the game simply because of your very first decisions. It should be similar to Gangplank's passive where he can pick 1 upgrade then change it through-out the game if needed.

Like he gets the Tomahawk but later on he wants the Gunblade, he should be allowed to change it for a price, not gold perhaps but something he earns throughout the game. He can choose to either upgrade the Tomahawk to a better Tomahawk or he can switch to Gunblade and try to upgrade that instead. I feel like this would create meaningful decisions for the player that allow variety while retaining counter-play and balance.

On to the Q! This is ability is Ultimate status strong. Think Blitzcrank but targeted and it can never miss. This ability is all kinds of broken OP, simply because he can pick the enemy ADC and teleport them into the middle of his team. There is no counter-play to this ability and therefore i think it needs to be changed. Even the ability to teleport an ally is strong, Ryze and Tahm Kench have similar abilities but they require a channel that can be interrupted and they are their ultimates. Maybe if he could only teleport himself or allies or I don't really know, but I do know that this ability is too strong.

The W is slightly confusing hopefully I am understanding it properly. He becomes immobilized and summons 3 spears which he can use to either attack 3 different people or the same person 3 times once the root duration is over, similar to Xerath's ult? Can he root 3 people at the same time? That seems a bit much to be honest unless the duration is like 0.5 seconds or something. If i am understanding the ability correctly, I think it is a pretty well designed ability, but it seems slightly confusing.

The E is cool, I don't like the first part of it though. I don't think the Electric Elemental fits with his theme and with the rest of his kit, the Active part fits more with his design. I think you should remove the Passive part and slightly tweak the Active part. He creates a portal and can summon weapons right? Why not instead of Lightning, which has nothing to do with his theme, he summons a rain of swords or weapons? If you think that is slightly lackluster you can add in that while he is standing in his E he gains a bonus to his Auto-Attacks or something.

I don't really like the R, its like Orianna's ult but it does true damage? It doesn't really fit with his design to be honest, it should have something to do with his core design, he uses portals to summon weapons and teleport things. I don't really have an idea on what you would replace it with, but I would recommend you replace it. However this is just my opinion, I could be wrong.

Overall a well thought out concept, fun read :).

CrazyBear198711/8/2016, 4:53:07 AM1 votes

for his passive ever consider that he starts of with like "Basic Blade" as an item in his inventory, and he can buy watever he wants, but if he wants his attack to change, then he can buy a recipe maybe for 50gold or something to change his "basic blade" to be forged into something else.

but reading on his passive has no relation with his other portal abilities, ever think of making that for a seperate champion and giving this one a portal based passive?