[Champion Concept] Yarath — The Unchained

KingMogar·12/29/2017, 6:02:25 AM·2 votes·562 views

Rha’zul —The Unchained.

Lore: Framed... No. Guilty.... Not Guilty, Framed. It wasn’t my fault... chained, tortured... bleeding... pain... no, unfeeling now. Hate?... vengeance... right the wrong... no, punish the guilty. Freedom, no... illusion. .... I didn’t kill them, my own family... Framed. Revenge? No, hate. I will have my revenge... punish the guilty, and nobody will stop me.

My scars tell a story... of when life tried to break me. But Failed. — Rha’zul

Passive: Untoppable — Every 30/20/10 seconds, the next crowd control that would effect Rha’zul is negated and he gains a 30/35/40% movement speed bonus for 2/2.5/3 seconds.

Q: Look Behind You — Rha’zul blinks behind target enemy champion within a 650 unit range. Dealing physical damage and slowing the target by 20% for 0.75 seconds.

W: Passive — Scar Tissue: Rha’zul basic attacks deal 40/60/80/100/120 (+3% targets max hp) bonus physical damage, and mark one side of the target with Scar Tissue for 5 seconds. Basic attack’s won’t deal the bonus damage on scar tissue.

Active — Rha’zul throws a dagger in a strait line. If the dagger hits an enemy he can recast the ability to recall the dagger, healing him for 30/40/50/60/70 (+10% targets max hp) ((The dagger will damage any enemies it passes through on the way back))

E: Final Swipe — Rha’zul does a short lunge forward, slashing his sword in a large arc in front of him, dealing physical damage to all enemies hit. But is immobile during the slash.

R:

Passive — Broke Bones: Rha’zuls basic attacks slow enemies by 10/15/20% for 1 second and his passive cooldown is reduced by 30/40/50%. For the duration of this abilities active.

Active — Shattered Chains: Rha’zul gains +50% health regen, 35% attack and movement speed, and 20% lifesteal for 5/7/10 seconds.

Let me know what you guys think and I can make some changes

(The name has been changed due to similarity to another champ, sorry if the title name is wrong)

8 Comments

SeaChange12/29/2017, 8:29:21 PM1 votes

He seems like he would be a fun jungler, minimal mobility, but outlasts everyone else. All I can say is, I bet you could make his W a bit more fun. Maybe a skill shot that heals him if he lands it? Also His ult should have an active part, maybe some sort of close range execute, like eve's ult. Also, maybe his passive could work with his perseverance by granting him some boost when he absorbs a CC? I don't know what I'm saying.

TheZacStreetBoys12/30/2017, 12:14:47 AM1 votes

I like it, I like it... but I have 2 minor complaints. 1: Yarath sounds a lot like Xer'ath, who is also sort of an "unchained" champ. I don't really have a problem with this, but if you want you can change it. 2: Shaco's Passive is also called Backstab. I'd suggest something different. Aside from those 2 tiny complaints, I love it. You can change them if you want, but I don't mind if you like them the way they are. Take my upvote <3