I made several champions and i would like to know which is the best one. I am still pretty new, so knowing which was best would be good. I would know on what to focus in the future, what to avoid.
My champions: Pla'Sma - The Void Cannibal Overkill - The Failed Assassination God Plasma Fog King - The Divided Divinity Kat Enigma - The Masked Demonic Executor Unfallen - The Risen Prince
Bootleg Gay4 votesSorry to say that none of these really stick out to me. I don't care for any of them really, and I don't want to vote. Keep up the ideas though.
VictoryDance961 votes-1 for making me read sh*t.
+2 for some really thought-provoking ideas.
Pla'Sma sounds interesting in a team fight, but only as a utility champ who really cannot affect the outcome much, if at all. Also, it seems like you would want to make him a support, since his abliites would not help him clear great in the jungle, as well as having effects that benefit others more than yourself.
Overkill is an interesting (and creepy) champ. His passive of "recharging" his blades is a fresh idea. However, his ult seems incredibly situational, unless is it at least semi-global.
I did not read the others in full, but I would go with Unfallen.
Keep up the good work, brother!
PlasmaFogKing1 votesWhy you say i making you read sh*t?
ClownNAround1 votesI like how this is what you take out of his comment. Not all the compliments he gave you.
PlasmaFogKing1 votesI am not very good in english and google translate show it as a bad thing. I am just asking what he or she meant.
ClownNAround1 votesIt was a joke, he was kidding about that part, only take the compliments seriously. Good work on the design. All of em.
PlasmaFogKing1 votesAaa, sorry. It is hard to understand foreign jokes. Thanks, i done lots of work on translating and research to make my champions. Glad you like it.
VictoryDance961 votesWhy you say i making you read sh*t?
Excuse me, I meant sh*t as comparable to "stuff".
PlasmaFogKing1 votesI understand now. Other person explained that that was a joke.
TheOperatorsBox1 votesI love the ideas for all these champions! The only issues i have are the names and titles. They just seem bland and generic to me.
For Pla'Sma, i'd suggest looking at Rek'Sai. her race is called the Xer'Sai, and it can probably be inferred that other races share the same end part (the Sai part), but have a unique name for the first part. Of course, for the race, it is not going to be Xer as the first part, as there is a race known as the Zz'Rot. However, these are primeval and small beings, so maybe for larger races, Xer is the right title (social justice much?) By looking at the names of current void characters, they do not represent a word such as Pla'Sma does. One thing I've noticed is that, with the exception of Cho'Gath, void creatures have 3 letters for each half of their name, so focus on one part at a time. All voidborn have a hunger, or purpose, and for Pla'Sma, it is not as clear. Back to names, however. I like the beginning sound of Pla'Sma, but I think the end part can change. The beginning part, try out Plo and Plu, maybe? Also, his kit is off the convention, as all voidborn deal true damage in their kit, except Kha'Zix, and all void-related champions stack something.
The next 3 have kinda generic names that you didn't put thought into. Think of what Riot would name it, first. Think of their current naming conventions. The titles for these are also pretty bland; we have too many gods in league, and I personally think we should change them up. The undead are cool, since they can still be expelled, but people like Bard, Kindred, and the like are kinda bland to me, since it is not clear as to why they came to the league, and lack background. Gods in league can be cool, but let's be honest, any more and we become smite. If you ABSOLUTELY need gods in your ideas, I'd put a bit more thought into the names; make them fit the title and lore, but not make them literal words. Kat seems like a good first part, but Enigma doesn't work well.
The last one, Unfallen, seems like a good concept, BUT his name seems more like a title. When Jhin was not yet released, people thought he would be Deadeye, The Jhin, or Jhin, The Deadeye. You see how the second one seems more like a champion than Deadeye, The Jhin? It isn't as clunky. The final title was better, though, as The Virtuoso. However, this isn't the case with Unfallen, as The Risen Prince isn't a name either. Try to stick to the one word convention if you can, and if you can't stick to it, use 2 words at the max, like how Ao Shin/Aurelion Sol are. The first/second word is shorter, and doesn't have much grandeur or importance.
Overall, your ideas for a kit are really well thought out, you just have to rethink the names and tweak numbers to make them REALLY shine. Thanks for reading, and sorry about the criticism!
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PlasmaFogKing1 votesI don't know how to name voidborns. Found no instructions how to. All i found, they names are ancient shurima words or something. And i tried to follow general things about voidborns. Augmented basic attacks and W buff/debuff stacks.
Naming champions is hard. I am not good in english, so i chose names that sounds good. Miss fortune is also two normal words, but it sounds good to me.
Naming is hard, sorry.
TheOperatorsBox1 votesI don't know how to name voidborns. Found no instructions how to. All i found, they names are ancient shurima words or something. And i tried to follow general things about voidborns. Augmented basic attacks and W buff/debuff stacks.
Naming champions is hard. I am not good in english, so i chose names that sounds good. Miss fortune is also two normal words, but it sounds good to me.
Naming is hard, sorry.
Back on Pla'Sma, go to this page: http://leagueoflegends.wikia.com/wiki/Shurima
The Xer'Sai are named so because they inhabit the Sai Desert.
Use the names given there to help you name.
Also, take a look at my other post
PlasmaFogKing1 votesNow i understand. Voidborns are named after places in shurima, yes?
TheOperatorsBox1 votesYes, mostly places they reside in, or for other characteristics (Kog'Maw because he is the Mouth of the Abyss) There is a settlement known as Bel’zhun, you could use that as an idea!
TheOperatorsBox1 votesI cant reply for the life of me lol.
PlasmaFogKing1 votesDoes this champion name is better: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/b3t7ATVG-champion-concept-saul-the-legendary-flaming-crusader ?
TheOperatorsBox1 votesYes, actually. It is a much better name!
PlasmaFogKing1 votesThanks.
TheOperatorsBox1 votessorry for the harsh criticism!
PlasmaFogKing1 votesNo problem. I got a lot of dislikes and sometimes i don't even know why. Criticism is better.
TheOperatorsBox1 votesHonestly, i love the idea of a voidborn support, but to make it REALLY shine, id say change his kit to have something that stacks, which you have, and something that deals true damage, maybe his E? Overall, you're doing a good job and if you need any help, just message me here: https://discord.gg/0rCmNiQ0KSmsQHPb
PlasmaFogKing1 votesW slow and movement speed buff can stack. Isn't that good? His R does true damage. Did you missed that?
TheOperatorsBox1 votesI did, sorry.
Akenero1 votesTry entering in the CCOS, you'll have a singular entry(has to be a new concept though) judged with others. it's not going up until march, keep an eye out.
PlasmaFogKing1 votesI did tried last month. Got pretty low position. Something like 9th place or something like that.
Akenero1 votesI did tried last month. Got pretty low position. Something like 9th place or something like that.
ah, sorry to hear that, but keep trying!
PlasmaFogKing1 votesI will. That is why i made this poll. Now i know who should i put in the contest.