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My Champion Idea : Ventus

CoopShwoop·12/4/2014, 11:00:37 PM·3 votes·2,104 views

I had this cool idea for a new champ, Ventus (Latin for wind) He would be a fighter / marksman and would have a body type / form similar to Xerath

passive: Raging Storm: (This would replace mana for a fury like substance) When he hits his enemies with his basic attack or one of his abilities, the clouds around his body start to turn darker and admit static from them. When the gauge is full he can choose one of his abilities to use in his storm mode (maybe his passive could scale with critical strike items or cooldown reduction items, most likely cooldown)

basic attack: Ventus is seen slamming down both of his arms on an enemy and you would see a rush of air push the enemy down

Q: Gust: Select a route to use the ability (medium length line) Ventus summons a strong wind to rush in a certain direction damaging the target

Q: (full gauge) Gale: Ventus summons a sudden strong dark wind into a certain direction, with more damage and knockback

W: Mistral: Ventus summons down a (medium) circle of wind that slows down any enemy champ to cross it and gives off slight damage (similar to Miss Fortune's Make It Rain)

W: (full gauge) Funnel: Ventus summons down a (large) circle of wind that slows down anything to cross it and gives off slight damage (little bit more), and if any enemy champion stays in there too long they get stunned

E: Crosswind: Ventus summons a wind that gives him a speed boost and carries him a medium distance (medium length line)

E: (full gauge) Split Breeze: Ventus summons down a wind that gives him a slight speed boost and carries him in a medium distance, and when used knocks back any enemy champ behind you

R: Whirlwind: Ventus summons down a funnel of wind (about as big as Zigg's ult) at a target location (radius of about Zigg's ult) that does high damage

R: (full gauge) Eye of The Hurricane: Ventus surrounds himself and anyone else near in a hurricane, that slowly sucks them towards Ventus and has major damage (radius of Gangplank's ult)

death: Ventus is killed and his remnants fly up into the sky, so fast creating a sonic boom, pushing nearby enemy champs away

well, i hope you guys liked my idea, it took A LOT of thinking. If you guys like my champ idea and think it should become a thing, comment and like so Rito can see and make this happen, also comment with your own champion ideas.

IF MY CHAMP IDEA GETS ENOUGH ATTENTION I WILL ATTEMPT TO DRAW AND POST MY VERSION OF VENTUS

24 Comments

GetBoomedOn12/4/2014, 11:11:09 PM2 votes

Solid, not OP. Good work. Thumbs up

Astrid12/5/2014, 12:24:13 AM2 votes

Ventus has way too much CC for his amount of damage, the fact that he is manaless, and his passive.

Nautilus is, I think, the only other champion with 4 CC, and he has little damage, mana, and he's a tank.

And the death thing should be his passive, otherwise he has both a Rengar and a Kog'Maw passive and that's just OP.

The champion is way too similar to Orianna -- but better than her. Orianna is restricted to 2 CC, mana, and not having a Rengar passive, as well as not having a revenge 2nd passive and her ult range smaller.

First of all, his abilities seem to be almost identical to other champion's abilities, except more powerful. His 2 passives are both very powerful. The first one, Raging Storm, acts like Rengar's secondary resource pool.... except Rengar is melee, and has a small amount of CC, to offset it. Ventus is ranged with a ton of CC and damage. This passive can really not be balanced with Ventus's kit.

His Q is a much more powerful version of Janna's Howling Gale. It has more damage and does not have a charging time. Janna is also extremely mana hungry and this ability costs a LOT of mana, so she's balanced in that sense. Ventus can just spam Q all day long with basically no counterplay.

Ventus's W and E are basically MF and Orianna abilties, except E is a gapcloser as well. Along with Q, this ensures that literally nobody can catch you, ever. Kalista 2.0 with 4 CC, nopls.

His ult.... oh boy. Full gauge and GG WP. Let's combine Orianna, Galio, and Gangplank's ults into one ult. This would be fine if his kit wasn't what it was. Neither Galio nor Gangplank nor Orianna also have a gapcloser, escape, speed boost, peel, peel #2, and peel #3, also being manaless and ranged.

BUT WAIT

THERE'S MORE

Ventus can't have two passives while not fitting other criteria. That gives him 5 abilities without any reason, such as a form change/toggle - not to mention it's a slightly nerfed version of one of the most annoying passives in the game coughKog'Mawcough.

So even if they do catch you, if they're melee, they're revenged killed.

TL;DR nerf amount of CC, redo passives, make him have mana.

Sorry if it sounds like I'm being rude, if you fix some of his major flaws it's an interesting idea.

HUGE EDIT: I didn't see that the death passive didn't do damage. It's stationary and doesn't do damage. However, it's very situational and could A) potentially save an enemy's life or B) kill an ally or C) serve as another CC in teamfights that can cancel basically everything.

Speaking of his CC, knockbacks are hard CC that interrupts basically everything and would PROBABLY count for Yasuo ult. I'd suggest only having 2 of these at most, with one of them being his ultimate, not 4.

Astrid12/5/2014, 12:49:45 AM2 votes

sorry, this REALLY is the last time, i want Ventus to be a melee that's why i put fighter/ marksman like Jayce

Jayce is both melee and ranged, though.

If Ventus is a melee champion, he still wouldn't feel like one. He has too much ranged poke and ranged CC to be offset by his melee hindrance. He can Q-E-W and there's still no escape.

By no escape I mean there is literally no escape except flash/CC removal.

Raging Storm'd W means you can't even flash.

Frozen Mallet + QEW = ded Randuin's Omen + QEW = ded Literally any item with CC + ventus = ded

How about his e and r can only affect champs? EDIT: i didnt see the cc r recommendation, how about his e and w can only affect champs?

The problem is it affecting champions. That's why it's OP.

Also, I didn't think about this, but Ventus has a crapton of waveclear as well.

HangOnOtherBarry12/5/2014, 1:49:48 AM2 votes

hey this is a great idea. and for his passive he can fart a wind gust and it like smells so bad other champions have a speech that says "WTF thats gross"

also the champion should have a pretty big johnson so it can weigh itself down in all that wind

CoopShwoop12/5/2014, 12:31:19 AM1 votes

ty, i wish i would have seen those flaws

CoopShwoop12/5/2014, 12:32:00 AM1 votes

wow looks like i have some work to do

Blazing Tenshi12/8/2014, 1:15:24 AM1 votes

Ventus the keyblade wielder. I like it.

CoopShwoop12/8/2014, 1:26:44 AM1 votes

idk, maybe i should take away his dying sonic boom, or give him mana, thoughts?

CoopShwoop12/5/2014, 2:25:57 AM1 votes

i really hope more people see this and Ventus actually becomes a champion

CoopShwoop12/5/2014, 2:53:03 AM1 votes

What do you think guys, should i draw Ventus and give him a lore?

CoopShwoop12/5/2014, 2:53:05 AM1 votes

also if i'm in the mood, maybe i'll draw what i think Ventus's abilities should look like

CoopShwoop12/5/2014, 3:04:01 AM1 votes

oh yea, and his voice should make him sound winded (pun intended)

CoopShwoop12/4/2014, 11:30:13 PM1 votes

sweet, thanks

CoopShwoop12/4/2014, 11:56:24 PM1 votes

Also i'll make Ventus's lore/ story if you guys are really interested in this champion becoming a real champion

reallifejedi12/7/2014, 3:06:05 PM1 votes

good idea i was the person who created rasalam denki aisu and ranar 226 in three days wow