A Champion I've Thought of: Part 3, 3: I'm back!

TheShadowyOwl·12/24/2016, 1:27:51 AM·1 votes·582 views

Yeah, sorry about this being late, I was waiting for winter break, and I kinda got a little late, so yeah, sorry! But now we're back and we're looking at! Looks at paper Well hello there, some of you who have been following me for a while might know who this guy is.

Dialass "The Renegade Cyborg" Roles: Mage Secondary: Fighter Attack type: Melee

Dialass was born into very poor living conditions, as such he didn't have the best parents or upbringing, however he had a very bright eyed and happy, he had big dreams of being a great inventor one day. In his late teens he created a new form of energy, it would use the energy of other sources to power itself, it was very efficient and very powerful, yet no matter how hard he tried, his morbid curiosity would always make others leave him. Eventually Piltover began to face major progress when Heimerdinger and Ziggs began sharing their inventions with Piltover he decided to join them, however not only could he never find someone willing to sponsor or fund such a thing, but no one in Piltover had a care to him, for he had a reputation for his curiosity causing trouble in an attempt to further progress. Eventually during one day, a man in Zaun sent him a letter, it praised his machinery and offered him a job in creating weapons, he could create or experiment as he desired. How could he turn down such an offer, he could really get somewhere with this, he immediately went there and began working in the black market as a weapons dealer, overtime he changed, what was once innocent and curious turned into a mind that was only interested in "progressing" the world, and his moral's shifted, he would steal or murder to finish his project, eventually his actions caught up to him, and he was called to be under arrest by the Piltover sheriff, while he managed to escape, he lost his eye and arm, yet this led to the creation of his signature robotic arm. Now his love of humanity is dead, and he joined forces with Viktor in evolving the world to a new robotic age.

Stats: Health: 560+35 Health Regen: 1.87+0.06 Armor: 15+3 Magic Resist: 25+2 Attack damage: 62+4.35 Attack speed: 0.54+0.0345 Movement Speed: 365 Mana: 340+25 Mana Regen: 1.13+0.18

Passive: Power Converter Dialass will convert 2.5%(+0.5% per level) of his mana into physical and ability power.

Q: Power Disks Cooldown: 8 sec. Mana: 70/100/130/160/190 Dialass shoots out 3 disks that will converge wherever the finger is (distance: 500 units, UPS Speed: 200 units per sec.), any units hit by the disks will gain up to 3 drain stacks per disk that hits, the damage per disk is 60/100/140/180/220+(75% ability power).

W: Energy Drain Cooldown: 18 sec. Passive: Hitting enemies with abilities will add a stack of drain to them up to a cap of 3

Active: Dialass will drain the health of all targets that have a stack of drain on them within a 300/600/900 unit radius, for each stack of drain they have they'll take 45/90/135/180/225+(150% ability power), however for each stack he's draining the time he spends increases by 1 second, if he is hit it'll interrupt the channel, but decrease the cooldown by 75% he converts all the damage into mana.

E: Ether blade Cooldown: 9/7/5 sec. Mana: 30/50/70/90/110/130 Dialass will convert his normal mechanical claw arm into a blade for 3/5/7 sec. for this time his basic attacks will deal 20/50/80/110/140+(50% ability power), and will add a stack of drain per hit. During this his attack animation changes, he does flips and jumps, like Yoda from star wars.

R: Shift Dash Cooldown: 30/20/10 Mana: 120/150/180 Dialass will dash to the cursor up to 600 units (UPS speed: 600 units), he can store charges up to a cap of 5, the first is his cooldown, the rest take 7 sec.

Description: Dialass is good at positioning, early harass, and 1 v 1 late game, however if he is face with really speedy champs, champs that have range, or more than 1 champion early game, he'll be bound to die a lot, however when he hits level 6 he can escape a lot easier, however champions like Bard Ezreal and LeeSin give him trouble because they can catch up to him when he runs, as well as high range isn't a good thing for him. Recommended order: Take Q first but max it second Take W at level 3 and max it last Take E at level 2 and max it as soon as possible And upgrade R at 6, 11, and 16

Design: He wears a lab coat plus a red and white mechanical suit, he is a relatively young man, his hair is a light blue, his mechanical arm is red, black, and white, it has a lot of bumps on the top for guns, the ether blade, and the section containing the crystal, and he wears an eyepatch brown and black.

Portrait: He is looking at a computer on the data of the crystal he uses.

Friends: Viktor Rumble Rivals: Heimerdinger Caitlyn

Quotes: His voice is like rumbles yet more soft. Being Picked: I have a great gift, with it comes great responsibility. Being Banned: Very well. Moving: I'm going. Very well. As i'm told. Attacking: You'll slowly fade. Here we go! I'm on it! Q: Yah! W: I'll take it all away! You'll feel light-headed and weak. E: Hehe R: grah! Joke: "Hmm, I wonder what happens when I do this-He gets shocked-well, that's one question answered. Taunt: "I find the beauty in simple things." Special Interactions: Viktor: ally: "Our genius will be understood, one day.." Enemy: "Even you betray me!" Rumble: Ally: "I admire your devotion.." Enemy: "I shall be taking those plans and progressing the world with them!" Heimerdinger: "Do you not see how terrible this world is!?" "Piltover betrayed me! It needs to change!" "You think that sharing with them will progress the earth?!" Caitlyn: "I'll take great pleasure in this one!" "YOU!!!" "You and your town brought me to ashes, and yet I survived!"

Skin Ideas: Mad Scientist Dialass Semi-Final Boss Dialass Tyrant Dialass Ok, there is my 3rd champion concept for part 3, please, let me know your thoughts or improvements in the comments below, link to the other 2 concepts below and i'll see you soon for the 4th concept! [slayer-jinx-wink] http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/zrk0h6Pc-a-champion-ive-thought-of-part-3-2-the-infiltration-has-begun http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/Bktbe0bK-a-champion-ive-thought-of-part-3-1-initiate

4 Comments

CobaltTheMadMage12/25/2016, 11:23:47 PM2 votes

Backstory sounds like Jayce's, Viktor's, and any Piltover Yordle's thrown into a blender. Honestly think it could be a bit more unique if he were a Zaunite- everyone in Piltover shunned him for his morbid curiosity even as Heimerdinger and Ziggs succeeded, but then he finally found a sponsor in the dark underbelly of Zaun where he was finally free to experiment and build as he desired. What effect this would have on his sanity or moral compass remains to be seen.

Passive: Looks like Ryze's, except instead of AP also being bonus mana, bonus mana becomes both AP and AD. I'll need to keep this scaling in mind when I look over his other abilities.

Q: Isn't this basically Heimerdinger's W but with fewer projectiles? Also, what exactly do these "Drain" stacks do? You didn't exactly mention that.

W: Ah, that's what they do. Could probably be easier to make the Drain just be a passive of this ability where dealing damage with his abilities gives stacks of Drain, up to 3, and then activating it steals health based on stacks. Making him channel to consume them seems a bit unusual, though; should he get some kind of Armor/MR bonus while channeling a la Yi's W?

E: Ah, THAT's why he scales both AP and AD.

R: So he's somewhere between Yasuo, Ezreal, and Kassadin in terms of mobility. Interesting.

Overall I get the vibe that he's a mobile mixed-damage blaster like Ezreal, except focused more on mobility and sustain that just straight-damaging abilities. Not bad, but not particularly great either, IMO.

THE RlVER KlNG1/2/2017, 2:38:50 AM1 votes

This champion is absurd. You'll be hearing that word a lot.

Level two he can safely harass you across a minion wave with Q to deal 240 [+300% AP] damage when all three discs hit. He will then use his drain ability for 270 [+450% AP] damage and restore the same amount as mana, removing any possible mana issues in lane. Do you understand how toxic and unfun that is?

But it gets worse. You're not allowed to ever fight him in a melee one-one-one, because his E lets him apply anywhere from 2 - 17 more stacks, depending on his attack speed, for a grant potential total of 5270 [+2250% AP] should he have his W and E maxed and with 2.5 attack speed - and restoring the same amount as mana. Granted, an niche situation, but beyond broken. That is not factoring in his E auto-damage (which is higher than every auto-attack enhancer in the game bar none, without even being limited to 1-3 attacks), or his ranged, safe, absurdly high damage poke. Level 9 he will be hitting you for 840 [+300% AP] every 6 seconds, perhaps less with CDR.

To top it all off, this isn't some hyper-fragile mage doing this, with no escapes. This is a guy with up to 7 800-range dashes.

7, 800-range, linear dashes that require no target. You will never, ever, be able to gank this guy, nor will you ever be able to run away.

Akali, generally considered the queen of targeted dashes, has up to 3, and they have a range of 700.

There is nothing fun or interesting about this champion. He has a stat-stick passive, which has caused trouble on champions such as Vlad and Ryze, and said passive is ten times more powerful than both combined thanks to its, you guessed it, absurd scaling. His Q is an absurdly safe and ridiculously high damaged poke tool with negligible cooldown and mana cost that scales down to none. His W costs nothing despite potentially being the most broken ability I have ever seen on these boards. His E rewards him to build tanky-mana and get a shitload of free damage because of how stupidly high his bases are. If you go AP bruiser, there is nothing in the game that can stand against your damage. He also gets up to 7 of the longest-ranged dashes in the game, while already having the highest movement speed, armor, magic resistance, and mana pools as well (nearly double the next highest, Janna)......? What the actual fuck.

Oh, and by the way, at level 18 his passive grants him 294 bonus AP and AD, without any items.

Needs an enormous amount of work, and by work I mean completely gutting every number in the kti.