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Kat Enigma - The Masked Demonic Executor (champion suggestion)

PlasmaFogKing·2/2/2016, 5:42:58 PM·3 votes·933 views
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This is my second try to make a champion. My english is still not good and i am sorry for all mistakes i make.

Picture from cartoon called Yumekui Merry.

#Abilities

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Passive: Sentence? Killing an enemy champion will temporarily send him to hell, where they will have to fight Netherguard. If they manage to defeat it, then they will resurrect at their base instantly. However, if they lose to it, then their respawn time gets increased by 50%. While enemies are in hell, their respawn timer gets frozen. (enemy champion can spend unlimited time in hell, if they can survive; each enemy is sent into their personal hell)

|Hell's size: 800x800|

Netherguard's stats (its level will be equal to yours) Armor: 37 + 3 per level; 91 at level 18 Magic resist: 45 + 1 per level; 63 at level 18 Health: 420 + 80 per level; 1860 at level 18 Attack damage: 63 + 7 per level; 189 at level 18 Movement speed: 365 Attack speed: 0.714 Attack range: 185

Passive: Execution? When enemy champion exits combat with 10% or less health, you gain vision on that enemy champion for 5 seconds and your Behead? becomes global for one use, only on that enemy champion, for 5 seconds. |Cooldown: 140 seconds|

Passive: Unmasked? Every 5th basic attack against same enemy will perform special attack, instead of your normal basic attack. This special attack deals 30 / 40 / 50 / 60 / 70 / 80 (+ 90% of AD) physical or magic damage (damage type is chosen automatically based on which damage type would do more damage) and inflict fear into your target for 1 second.

|Fear cooldown: 12 seconds|

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Q: Hunter? Become invisible for 1.2 / 1.4 / 1.6 / 1.8 / 2 seconds. In addition, increase range of your next basic attack, causing you to jump to your target, and cause it to deal 20 / 25 / 30 / 35 / 40% more damage for 5 seconds. This attack can not be critical. Instead, it have change, equal to your critical strike chance, to trigger your Unmasked? with bonus damage scaling from this ability.

Passive: increase your movement speed while invisible or in bush by 20%.

|Jump range: 650| |Mana cost: 50 / 55 / 60 / 65 / 70| |Cooldown: 16 / 15 / 14 / 13 / 12 seconds|

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W: Sinners? Passive: when neutral jungle monsters gets killed by an enemy champion, you get notification about it (small indicator in mini map, lasting for few seconds) and you get mental picture of that enemy champion for 15 seconds (you can have only one mental picture at one time). While you have mental picture of that enemy champion, your basic attack deals 20 / 25 / 30 / 35 / 40 (+ 15% of AD) (+ 15% of AP) bonus magic damage to him and heal you for 30 / 40 / 50 / 60 / 70% of that bonus damage.

|Range: 900|

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E: Horrors? Launch up to 4 homing silver spirits to find nearby enemy champions. Only one spirit can follow one enemy champion at one time. If no enemy champion is present, then refund 50% of mana used for this ability. Each silver spirit deals 70 / 110 / 150 / 190 / 230 (+ 40% of AD) (+ 60% of AP) magic damage and mark hit enemy champions for 5 seconds. If two or more marked enemy champions gets too close to each other, then mark gets triggered and affected enemy champions gets knocked back from each other.

|Range: 700| |Range to trigger knock back: 240| |Knock back range: 200| |Mana cost: 130 / 140 / 150 / 160 / 170| |Cooldown: 15 seconds|

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R: Behead? Summon guillotine on targeted enemy champion stunning him for 0.5 seconds. After that, targeted enemy champion suffers 200 / 250 / 300 (+ 90% of AD) (+ 50% of AP) physical or magic damage (damage type is chosen automatically based on which damage type would do more damage). Same enemy champion can not be targeted by this ability more often, than once every 10 seconds.

Passive: killing an enemy champion removes remaining cooldown of your Execution?.

|Range: 400| |Mana cost: 140| |Maximum number of charges: 3| |Recharge time: 40 seconds|

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#Story

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Underworld In the underworld, deepest and darkest corners, he served as tormentor, eternally punishing evil spirits of the man. Demon, created only for that purpose, he never questioned his existence, Kat just accepted that his job for all eternity is to torment evil spirits. He never knew no other life, he never wished any other job. Nevertheless, the new life found him.

When extremely powerful spirit was sent into underworld, and it started to take it over, Kat just happened to be in the way of this spirit. This spirit turned to be a prince, but not any kind of prince. He changed his name into Unfallen, his wish was to take over the underworld. Unfallen offered Kat to follow him, to be his right hand, but the most importantly, he offered him a new life. Kat took the offer and become second in command of the demonic army led by Unfallen.

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Afterlife? When Unfallen was resurrected and Kat was left alone to lead demonic army, he learned about the world before underworld. Kat learned that his whole life was spent in the world of death, eternal nightmare. This puzzled him, because the more he learned about the world of the living, the more he questioned his own existence. Why he was born in the underworld? Why he was put to torture souls? Why he deserve to live in such place? Why couldn't he have be born in the world of the living? All these questions burned inside of him stronger and stronger, eating him alive from inside.

He got a chance to get his answers, to see the world before death, because Unfallen found a way to summon him, but only him, into the world of the living. After being summoned, he was tasked to find more ways to summon demons into Runeterra and serve their ruler.

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Don't Look At Me As Kat roamed the world for demonic summoning, as his master commanded him, he was feared and despised for his demonic appearance. People recognized demonic features, they were afraid. Kat, hiding from place to place, finally found something like an ally. He met Shaco, who offered a way to hide his demonic appearance via mask and cape. Kat took his offer, masked himself and continued his travels, but not only for summoning his demon brothers.

He got a chance to explore new world, to experience things he never knew existed. He met people, talked with them, helped them. From one place to another, he was overflowing with joy and jealousy. He viewed people as ignorant creatures, who had no idea how horrible life is in the underworld. Yet, he found it fascinating, that people could life so happily.

So, while he enjoyed life among the people, he continued to serve his master and search for ways to destroy this fragile world. However, it is hard for an old cat to learn new tricks, so Kat continue to punish evil people wherever he finds them. A little bit ironic, because he himself is working for evil.

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Friends: Shaco Love interest: Ahri Enemies: Bard Kayle Soraka Warwick

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4 Comments

Raxistaicho2/2/2016, 6:04:51 PM1 votes

I'm sorry, this guy's impossible to balance.

Any one of his 3 innate skills would be really good, but you gave him all of them.

His Q gives him stealth and a 775 minimum range targeted dash (targeted dashes normally have 600 to 650 range, _only _ultimates go farther than 700), and causes it to do bonus damage, and stacks with his unmasked? passive. Just so you know, if Unmasked? triggered on his Q it would deal 112 + 154% total AD that cannot be properly itemized against. And despite being a strong skill on its own, it gets a passive that it doesn't need that makes him move at Sonic the Hedgehog level speeds while stealthed. Because the stealth itself is instant cast, there is no _running _from or chasing this guy while his Q is up. He'd outrun even Ahri or Kassadin with ease.

His W would completely wreck the concept of jungling against a team that has him because he gets constant updates on where the enemy jungler is and isn't. I'd _love _to jungle with this guy on my team because I'd be stealing the enemy jungle camps regularly. This might almost be okay if it only worked in his own team's jungle. And anyways, you slapped another passive onto this skill just because I guess it wasn't strong enough already.

His E is kinda gimmicky and deals too much damage for being auto-targeted. Also remove the full refund, it makes this ability too safe to just use at random to see if somebody is or isn't nearby.

His ultimate is actually pretty balanced, except again it's impossible to itemize against. You could probably drop the mana cost quite a bit as a matter of fact if you just made it not change damage types.

And also, it gets another passive, just 'cause.

You really need to cut down the number of passives on this guy. People rage at CertainlyT just for having 3 passives on Yasuo, but this guy has** 6**.

Vbunnie2/2/2016, 6:39:50 PM1 votes

you need your passive to be unmasked it makes the most sense and the first is very hard to make work and while behead is really cool it is a little overpowered. the Q works well with unmasked.... W needs to lose the second passive rather you can increase the amount of bonus damage make it a short duration and make it an active effect..also throw in some ap scaling to make it fun.... e needs to lose the auto target and rather would be better if the ghosts fire in four different directions at the same time this can be a conic pattern of trajectory made by the four linear skillshots... lower the ad bonus to about 70%AD