Nyjal, The Demon Gunsmith

Varrakllek·5/15/2016, 10:46:12 PM·1 votes·928 views

Nyjal

The Demon Gunsmith

Passive): One shot One Kill: Nyjal can only fire one bullet before reloading but after hitting someone with an auto attack the bullet will linger following them periodically striking them dashing and slashing through them every 3 seconds.

Q): Sinful Shot: Nyjal fires a powerful bullet on the next autoattack that bounces between enemies.

W): Black Blood: Nyjal drinks a mysterious liquid from a bottle that increases his attack speed.

E): Demons Meld: Nyjal turns into living shadow becoming untargetable and giving him a movement speed bonus. (He can't do anything but move in this form)

R): The First Bullet: Nyjals next auto attack fires the first bullet ever forged carrying all the sins of the bullets that came after it and deals damage based on the enemies ad/ap.

Lore The Demon Gunsmith Demacia and Noxus are filled with sin and war as many of those caught in the middle have less than nothing to defend for, but those who have what they want are victims of those who do not. This is a story about a man who lived in Demacia with nothing but his possessions he was an average man not rich not poor but found himself a victim of bandits attempting to extort him of his valuables, when he refused they came knocking banging smashing with swords and guns and axes, the man pleaded he begged then as the men approached a musket pistol fell on his lap. He knew not from where but he grabbed it and fired at the men at his door knocking on it with their hammers, the musket ball was glowing it dashed slashed and traveled across the block slashing cutting and ripping the bandits apart. One by one they fell to the floor covered in bullet holes from one shot and by the time it was over the bullet turned to dust and the bandits were dead. He looked at the pistol, on the right it was carved “Every bullet has a price”. Many years later the man had grown a mass of wealth and was preparing for his wedding to a beautiful woman. He prepared then he heard noises in the main hall, as he ran out to see he saw Noxian assassins trying to kill the woman he loved, a diplomat for Demacia, he pulled out the pistol once more that had saved him so long ago, he fired it towards the assassins again with blazing glory the bullet flew and shred through the Noxian forces until they were bleeding out of the bullet holes as all of them died in agony. Another few years later at a party him and his wife were throwing at their massive mansion where many came friend and foe, one of his enemies another noble challenged him to a duel for whoever loses shall win inherit the other man's house, the two men grabbed their pistols and began marching but the man was not gonna lose he didn't want to so he swapped his pistol with the one that saved him so many times. They turned and fired at one another the noble missed but the bullet of the musket pistol zoomed and flew and in a flash straight through the nobles skull. Then time came to a stop as a figure appeared in front of the man the figure wore a short black suit jacket with gold buttons a wide black hat with a red scarf. On his shoulder he carried a massive musket dark red wood engraved with golden metal supports, instead of a stock the gun curled down into a handle, he wore dress shoes and had black leather gloves covering his hands. He approached the man and said, “What a waste, such promise, but greed falls on all those who have control. The slain men for your possessions what right do you have to choose”. He fired his musket and the bullet zoomed away destroying his house and all his riches, the bullet you used to save your beloved will now cut her to pieces. The man cried out to his wife but she could not hear him as another bullet was fired surging through her chest and into her heart, the man began to whisper,“every bullet has a price”, the demonic figure laughed as he fired his last shot.

“Let the enemies sins be their undoing.”

Enemies: Jhin: Sinful use of guns angers Nyjal. Miss Fortune: Guns are to be preserved as a marksman's best friend not a
lunatics trigger finger attitude.
Jinx: A mad woman using his weapons for sin

Allies: Caitlyn: Appreciates Caitlyn's use of guns for justice. Warwick: Similar use of violence for a greater good.

Dance: Tap dance. Joke: Accidently fires off musket and attempts to dodge his magic bullet. Laugh: Quiet laugh while leaning on his musket. Taunt: Points gun forward then drops it on shoulder.

Im trash at punctuation.

7 Comments

Amoebanator5/15/2016, 10:58:50 PM1 votes

One problem i see is that this seems to be an adc, and he only has damage based off his basic attacks. these tend to make fairly weak champion kits. Maybe consider adding some form of mobility and exchange either his q or his ult for a pure damage skillshot? or make a second ability have some minor cc? (slow, vision reduction, root). Something to set the Kit itself apart other than cool lore. backstory is cool and all, but the kit has to be fun and exciting for those who don't read the lore. Good work though, keep at it!

Also, maybe elaborate a bit more on what exactly these abilities do?

King Maruilla5/16/2016, 1:01:21 PM1 votes

Counter Taunts:

Maruilla "If you carry your sins, you'll be consumed by virtue." Marie "Good...but not as good as Darius and Shyvana." Tenbatsu "We don't need your sins, demon!" Nonki "...Leave your sins behind...you'll won't regret it." / (If surviving Nyjal's Ult) "I don't need to face my sins any longer." Nura "May the tunes fill you with the sin of violence." Valkista "Give me a chance, and I'll prove you how wrong you believe in those sins!" Saishū "Don't get too close, blind man." "You remind me of Swain...but lamer." Pious "You are blind..." "I may be slow, but my summons are not."