Rework Concept: Veigar, Puppet of the omnipotence

VEIGAR, Puppet of the omnipotence Lore: Veigar was an ionian yordle who envied the many powers that ionia held, and wanted to grasp those powers himself. After traveling through ionia, learning and tracking, he came across a book which had countless centuries worth of knowledge. This book was concieved by what veigar calls "the omnipotence". Even just seeing the words in this book, veigars mind was corrupted, and he learned not only how to use magic, but to grasp the very fabric of reality. Although veigar is still concious his corrupted mind is telling him to find the omnipotence, so he may save himself from an eternity of insanity. Unfortunatly, the omnipotence didn't write the book, the book was written by another person corrupted by the omnipotence. As for who this presence is, nobody knows, As its only known by the corrupting knowledge of the book. The omnipotence is already with veigar, and the vicious cycle will repeat itself eventually.

Passive: Mark of the omnipotence Veigar is a unique mage for the fact that he doesn't use mana, instead he uses corruption (its a working title, i haven't found a name i like yet). When the game starts, or when he respawns, he starts off with 100, with the max being 500. When he goes back to fountain, it will only refill to 100. Veigar gets more corruption by damaging minions or champions with autos, or spells. Autos give 10, and abilities give 50. when veigar is at 500 corruption, his spells get a unique effect, at the cost of going down to 50.

Q: Baleful Strike Veigar shoots a skill shot that stops at the second target it, or at its maximum range. If it either kills a minion, or hits an enemy champion, its cooldown is slightly reduced, and half of the cost is refunded. Q (Max Corruption) the ability becomes a point and click, and after the cast, the ability will bounce up to 5 times, or until it hits a champion. It does bonus magic damage to the last target, or the champion it hits.

W: Spreading the word Veigar executes a minion or large monsters (not epic) below 20% health (10% for large monsters). When this happens, the minion will explode, creating a damaging 300 unit aoe. If any minions that are below 20% get caught in it, they will also explode, creating the same effect. This is veigars ultimate waveclear ability. If veigar casts this on a minion above the threshold, or on a champion (regardless on health) it will just do damage, and will slightly refund the cooldown. Minions in the explosion of an executed minion above the threshold will only take damage. EDIT: If this ability does enough damage to kill a minion above the threshold, it will execute, and continue the explosion effect anyway, same with the aoe explosion. If used on a champion, it will only do damage, but will still do the explosion effect. W (Max Corruption) Veigar can execute a minion regarldess of health, and minions below 50% caught in that explosion will explode. This does not work on champions, or epic monsters.

E: Grasping Horizon Veigar graps the fabric of the rift, creating an aoe slow for 3 seconds (think veigars current e, but shaped more like a hand). After the 3 seconds, the fingers of the hand will shoot 500 units towards veigar, doing magic damage to anything caught by the fingers. This ablility will leave behind "tears", which is relavent to veigars ultimate. He can only have up to 2 tears at a time. E (Max corruption) The damaging part of the ablility will go away from veigar 500 units before coming towards veigar 1000 units from there.

R: Tears in reality

EDIT: Passive: veigar gains bonus ap based on how much corruption he has, for every 100, veigar gains 20 bonus ap.

Active: Veigar grabs a hold of any enemy champion foolish enough to be in the tears (aoe 600 unit suppresion) for 3 seconds. During this time, veigar is immobile. EDIT: If any minions are caught in the suppresion, they are instantly executed, regardless of health, and if any champions below 15% percent are caught, they are executed in veigars hands. EDIT: (ability can be cast while the E slow is active) R (Max corruption) Veigar is able to move during the suppresion (but silenced) and if theres at least one enemy champion in both of the tears, they switch places.

I'm no game designer, I just wrote down what I thought would be cool for a champions kit to be, while making sure the concept gives veigar an idenity. I'd love to hear suggestions and feedback.