Jhalorik

Gentleman Gems·11/25/2014, 5:28:17 PM·2 votes·793 views

This is another champion I have thought of. He is Tanky and meant to support. He is a large damage absorber and deals some damage back to his attackers due to his taunt as well as some sustain. I worked with him based on the comments from DustWind8 (thank you) as well as edit my previous champion. hope this one is better.

Jhalorik: The Wandering Relic

History: The man was walking through a large city of gold and silver. He was walking with another, smaller man, and surrounded by smaller people. A little girl entered from a golden palace and gave him a gift of some, it was a beautiful amulet. The man next to him spoke “Jhalorik here will serve you well, oh Mistress Galica”. The girl had long brown hair and had beautiful sand coloured skin. Jhalorik, was that his name, the lady responded. “Thank you, I wish Nalazir was hear, but his ramblings of a, Great Lord of Sands, drove him into the jungle and never returned”. There was a clang, and everything faded. Jhalorik awoke to the sound of clashing blades, there nothing but sand and ruins around him. He wondered where his home went,where Mistress Galica went? His memory processors came on, and he remembered the lush jungle land of Shurima. He then remembered the trees moving and being ripped from the ground as sand rushed in from everywhere, and his home turned to ruin. He saw a silhouetted figure in the form of a bird rise above him, and the end of life as he knew it. But know Jhalorik was awake, his stone gears turning, clinking, and removing any sand left in it's cracks. “Gears.” Jhalorik stated, remembering that he was a construct. Not just any construct, but an elite guardian, made to protect the innocent. As he became coherent of his surroundings he saw a man under attack by multiple brigands. Fallowing his instincts, Jhalorik rushed in the battle to join the fray. He protected the man, not caring of his own existents, only protecting the man. Jhalorik was beaten for a long time by these ferocious bandits. Eventually the thugs began to wear him down, But Jhalorik realized that there was an powerful source of energy welling up in him at each blow they made. When he felt his weakest he released the energy in a giant wave, blowing away the desert brigands. Realizing the brigands were not dead. He was willing to give his life to defend the man behind him. The man groaned and began to rise. Jhalorik turned around to see the man he was defending, tall muscular build, brown hair, and pure blue eyes. "Stand down sir, the agressors are still..." he was cut off by the man who promptly responded while unsheathing an extremely large blade "I can defend my self sir, so unless you can help you may move". The man charged to battle and took out some of the bandits. Though Jhalorik still battled the bandits to protect the man he wondered if he needed it. Maybe at first, but know, with such strength so apparent. As the rest of the Bandits ran the man turned towards Jhalorik and greeted himself “I am Garen of Demacia. You fight well and helped me against those Assailants, who are you traveler?” “Jhalorik” Jhalorik responded “Citizen Guardian 12, of the..." he paused, there was no more Nalizo, and no home. In his depressing realization he forgot he was still talking to the man Garen of Demacia "of the former city of Nalizo.” Jhalorik then explained his former life, what happened to his city, and what was here before this desert. Garen looked up in interest “I see, you are strong of heart and in conviction. Will you help me return to my home, I can see if it will give you purpose?” Jhalorik fallowed, having nowhere else to go, and listened to Garens tales of his home. He listened him talk about there great king, mighty warriors, and there many great deeds. He also spoke of his recent mission to take a secret message to Prince Jarven IV and how he was attacked by the assailants from before, who caught him off guard and seemed to just spring from the sand. Jhalorik was proud to hear of the great defenders of Demacia, and the League in which they worked in to prevent unnecessary bloodshed. He also felt good that he defended such an important person with important purpose. When they got to Demacia, he pledged his services to the kingdom, and joined the League in there name. Many summoners have studied him in there spare time, baffled by the unique mixture of magic and machine worked into him. Haimadinger was the closest to figuring out and replicating the Technique, but, as he said himself “Much of the secrets to the technology and magic used in this is lost in time” but did conclude the existence of the ancient practice of magic and technology as one.

“That's the kind of man I myself would stand behind” Braum, hearing of Jhalorik and his entrance in the League

Description Race: Construct Material: Golden plating and silver gears. Hight: 8.7 Age: ??? Physical summery: Large plating on the body with large gears standing out and strong surges of magical energy pulsing around the body Fights with: Fist

Base stats HP: 690 (+ 67) Health Regen: 13.0 (+1.21) Range: 120 (Melee) Base AD: 30 (2.5) Base AS: 0.452 (0.91) Armor: 24 (4.4) Magic Resist: 20 MP: None (Runs on cool down)

Abilities (His ult is available at first level)

Passive: Battlechanted Plating: Every 5 points of armour is converted into 1 point of magic resist and vice-verse.

Q: Retaliate: Passive: every time you take damage from a basic attack, deal 20/30/40/50 true damage to the attacker and gain a Counter stack. (max:10)/ Active: when activated, consume all Counter stacks and your next basic attack deals bonus damage for every stack consumed multiplied by 8 (20% AP) for up to 10 sec. then it dissipates. if 10 stacks were consumed, the target will also be stunned for .6/ .7/ .8/ .9/1 sec. Cool Down: 13/13/12/11/9

W: Come You Fiends!: Taunt all enemies within 7 feet of Jhalorik for 2 seconds while increasing your armor and magic resist by 5%. Cool Down: 15/14/13/12/11

E: Last Stand: you gain health equal to half your missing health over 5 seconds, than increase your Armour and Magic resist by 15% for 4 sec ( It does not stack). if a nearby ally is at 30% or less health points they get healed by that same amount split up between every nearby champion who meets these requirements. Cool Down: 12/11/11/10/10

R: Undying Loyalty Active: Jhalorik Protects target champion by jumping and covering them(Range: 700) gaining a shield against all damage for each attacking champion + 50/100/120 for 20 seconds, He cannot go beyond 1 healthwhile this is active. After 5 seconds Enemies who damaged Jhalorik will lose 20% of their Armor and Magic Resist for 20 seconds and take 100/120/140 + half the total damage dealt by each damage, this does not count any damage beyond the 1 health. Jhalorik can't attack for that time and loses all bonus armor and magic resistance. Cool Down: 210/180/165

Animation When chosen: Let us fight for those who cannot. Walk: Tall, loud and proud. To protect, seeking Aggressor Attack: Throws a slow but strong punch into the target. says “Defend against the aggressors!” Base: Stands straight in attention stance until he teleports to spawn Dance: Marches in place Taunt: Your weapons and spells are useless against my might. (Against Azir): It can't be... Laugh: I am not sure of that command Joke: I can't think of one right now, there is something pinching my plating. Oh, it's just a Ballistic weapon. Death: Lands on knee's while reaching his arm out and says “I HaVE FaAAaILEd...” then falls over.

Friends: Siver: Familiar for some reason. Orianna: The only being he can relate to within yearning purpose. Nauses: Nauses knows him, and Jhalorik will sometimes seek wisdom from this mysterious character

Enemies: Azir: He feels an instinctive hatred Renekton: He does not hate him and tries to convince him to reform to his old ways. he is always met with a blade to his throat though

10 Comments

Bayard1/12/2015, 12:50:53 AM1 votes

He's cool, but too tanky. He's too tanky and no wave clear or escape or dmg besides dmg that disuades you r opponets from attacking you. This champion could cause major disconnect in the gameplay where your oppponent can't attck you and you cant do much damage to them. Also the e is so broken and should be put on the ult or remove for wave clear or and escape, also think about it. every 22 seconds lvl 1! you will be at full health. That adds to the disconnect i was talking about. Between passive and aggro game play. Reconsider the abilities and their play style. I like the q, could be tweaked. Also put the lore at the end because its a bit big and distracts the reader from the important part of the champion, the abilities. That's my opinion, plz no haterino.

Bayard1/12/2015, 12:18:32 PM1 votes

Didn't realize he was a support, but the e is an empowered heal every 12 seconds. The ult is cool though.

Would he be fun to play? yes cause you'd have more wins with him on your team. Would he be fun to play against? If he e'd then you couldn't get kills, unless alot of burst came out. Would he play any lane but bot? no, no wave clear and his taunts would be less useful in a solo lane. Would anybody attack him purposefully during the entire game? no, probably not.

Even Braum gets atacked.

Fwaffle1/12/2015, 1:56:55 PM1 votes

this character is a combination of alot of other characters strong points, while i aggree with im being able to absorbe damage and hold the line that is cool and all, but it is very over powering, you could deny alot of damage, also the ammount of damage he would obsorb from his ult would alwasy kill him, it does not matter how much MR or Ar you have, he is going to die, unless the enemy team is completely under fed, which kind of makes his ultimate a little under powering also, a few tweeks here and there i would suggest. but all in all i like the idea of a true tank.

Gentleman Gems1/12/2015, 7:31:55 PM1 votes

Updated: fixed his ult and made him killable. Hint his allies death are key

Gentleman Gems2/2/2015, 4:25:48 PM1 votes

Ok to put his "OP"ness to res i have a basic note on his weaknesses He is easily killed by a stun or snare fallowed by Spells in early game. When he gets his ult, he can be weakened by focusing allies nearby. Champions that can beat him include but not limited to: Ahri , Ryze , and Brand He can fight well against champions like: Jax , Tryndamere , Ashe

His passive only compensates for lacking of defence in certain areas, only making it a little harder to kill. Health is important sense the more he losses during his ultimate, the more damage it does