My First Champion Conccept Ro The Parasite

WW ll Veteran·10/3/2016, 1:44:59 AM·3 votes·982 views

LORE: Ro was once a dragon slayer. From zaun, he had volunteered for many experiments to increase his ability's. One of the doctors there offered to infuse a his body with a dragon. Ro wanting to get stronger to kill dragons made it one-sided so he accepted. The doctor strapped him and began fusing his body with a decaying dragon known as Severan The Parasite. The Procedure was going well until a raid on the facility caused the power to go out so the procedure was interrupted. Half way through the doctor injected Ro with a virus completing the fusion, but Ro wasn't a human anymore he was half human half dragon. The doctor was so proud of what he accomplished, he asked Ro is he was ok. Ro grabbed the doctor and began to infect his mind. After the doctor was drained of life Ro destroyed the facility and was never seen again.

Role: Jungle Melee Details: Ro is a Hybrid creature that looks like a Dragon/human (like Shyvana but more dragon hybrid) with damaged wings. Its covered in a slimy substance and has a cut off tail. Arrows are stuck in its skin and scars on its sides. Hands haves glowing purple scales.

Passive: Gate of Severan Ro can place a portal at certain points on the map which connect him to the store. And is his respawn point. ( so lets say you want to go back to the store if you take the portal it takes you to the store. No recall. But you cant take it back the other way. Also if Ro dies he spawns at the portals location.) The cooldown for the portal is about 10 min. He can use it to go back to the store as many times he wants but it disappears when he dies and respawns.

Q: Blighted Sac Ro creates a plagued egg sac at a location that releases toxins for 5 seconds. if the sac is killed or the duration has ended it explodes dealing magic damage. Unlike Gangplank barrels if an enemy kills it the sac still explodes.(when ulted sac damage doesn't stack.) Damage Dot: 10/15/25/35/50 (30% AP) Damage: 70/95/110/130/155 (60% AP) CD: 15/14.25/13/12/11 Mana: 70/85/100/115/130

W: Plague Claw Passive- Ro's autos poison the targets dealing X magic damage that scales with level.(AD) Active - Ro infects the targets body making them spew puss that slows them and reduces their magic resist. Slow: 10%/15%/20%/25% Reduced Magic Resist: 10/15/20/25 CD: 10/9/8.5/7/6 Mana: 40/50/70/85/95

E: Corrupted Blood Ro uses his blood to create a ray that sticks onto an enemy doing % health damage. If used on an ally he heals them for % health. Damage Ap & Heal: 5%/10%/15%/20%/25%(70% Ap) CD: 14/13/12/11/10 Mana:60/65/75/80/100

R: Rage of Ro Ro lets the Dragon take over his mind, and goes into a rage. While in a rage Ro's autos cause him to charge the selected champion dealing damage. Consecutive charges on the same champion does less damage, but resets when he charges different characters. Ro also gains Health and all his ability are empowered(can only cast one ability). (edit: Ro takes 10% of his gained health as damage when he charges.) Health Gained: 200/300/400 Damage: 100/175/215 Reduction per charge: 10%/20%/30% Empowered Q: Creates a wall of Egg sacs that grow at a faster rate and explode in a bigger radius.

Empowered W: The Toxin Causes the enemy to become Contagious and spread the toxin to nearby enemies.

Empowered E: The Blood Attaches to all nearby enemy's and ally's. (pretty Simple)

Stats/ Health:647(+47/Per LvL)=1446 Mana:279(+36/Per LvL)=891 Armor:17.25(+3.1/Per LvL)=69.95 Magic Resist:20.1(+2.5/Per LvL)=62.6 (this is a start. I probably need help on other stats.) I don't know How to balance his stats with ability's so any help with that would be great. Here are some quotes (comment more if you so desire).

Walking "Must corrupt this land." "We will take this world, like many others..." "Where are my brothers?e." "My master calls to me." Autos "Another life to be corrupted." "You dare challenge me?!" Casting Q "Grow my children." "Its full of surprises." "Pop like a weasel." Casting W "Do you feel my power warping your mind." "None shall escape me!" "It crawls from beneath." Casting E (on enemy) "Blood is a sacred bond." "You are part of the me." "Wither Away." Casting E on ally "The corruption wishes to save you." "Are you the chosen one?" "Yes I see..." Casting Ultimate "This is my higher purpose!" "You dare stand in my presence!" Casting Ulted Q "You cant escape me!" Casting Ulted W "Spread death to your friends!" Casting Ulted E "The blood touches ALL!"

Ty for looking at this concept

Edit on Ult- Recommendation from CobaltTheMAdMAge.

Final Build Tank item 3071 item 3151 item 3078 item 3065 item 3111 item 3107 This is a tank champ who can do very well on his own but his lack of escape makes him a easy target to gank. His ult can be used for many situations kinda like karma's. Your q could be for blocking a path and finishing a target or maybe you want to be a support and heal all your allies and still do dmg. He is very diverse in playstyle so he could be a fun champ to play with and against. :3

9 Comments

CobaltTheMadMage10/3/2016, 2:18:19 AM2 votes

How bad do you have to be at forming magical pacts to accidentally tear a hole in the void?

Honestly the kit concept is rather interesting, but I question the viability of the passive. Placing portals to instantly transport allies back to base could be a cheap way out of a teamfight that might give a little too much of an edge to his team, and the secondary effect would basically just be a glorified Guardian Angel except late-game the enemy team might just have enough time to camp out his corpse and kill him the second he respawns due to how long it would take.

Q: Detonating when destroyed would basically make it only helpful for ADCs or other ranged champs to pop it, as it punishes attempts to destroy it in melee since they would have to be in the blast radius by necessity. The fact that they detonate over time rather than on command like Gangplank's would make them more like Morgana's or Soraka's AOE abilities for lane denial in that respect, provided they don't persist for an inordinate amount of time.

W: I see you both gain bonus magic damage per AA and gain the ability to reduce magic resistance with its active. So it's like an AD version of Vi's W in that it lets you shred and shut down single targets if you can land it. Interesting.

E: Is this percent current health or percent max health? If the former it would be a good engage against enemies as it hits the hardest while they're at full health, meanwhile it could help top off allies without necessarily making him viable as a full medic. If percent max health, then it would probably need some smaller percentages otherwise it would deal more damage than some ults and more healing than Soraka herself.

R: I think this would be more easily balanced by empowering a single ability like Karma or Heimerdinger's ults; giving him three empowered abilities AND a stat/performance buff could be OP.

As for the lore, I have a feeling this probably doesn't need to be associated with the Void. Not only are there already an abundance of Void Parasite champ ideas on these boards (mine included) which may turn some viewers off altogether, but personally I feel a horrible twisted fusion of man and dragon of this caliber sounds more like it should be some kind of failed Zaun experiment than anything else.

CrimsonCobra310/3/2016, 2:32:54 AM1 votes

You need to specify how he scales. (EG, AD vs AP.)