Feirya, The Aspect of Justice

I LAV IT MATE·Mar 22, 2018·2 votes·717 views

Hey guys, this is a humble champ concept that i made, hope u enjoy it. PS: -excuse me for my english xD

Region: Mount Targon Gender: Female

Abilities

Passive – Justice Bringer Feirya gains Ability Power for each ally death.

Q – Light Rings Feirya launches two light rings. Each ring deal magic damage to an enemy. If the rings hit the same target, it will be rooted.

W – Messenger of The Solari Feirya dashes twice, getting bonus with each dash: First dash: her next normal attack with deal bonus magic damage. Second dash: her next ability with heal her.

E – Target of The Gods Passive: every 4 hits (normal attacks or abilities) will mark the enemy. Marked enemies will take more magic damage. Can’t mark the same enemy for a duration

R – Pure Crown Feirya’s crown shines unleashing divine energy, healing allies and reducing enemies’ vision

6 Comments

Lloyd CastagnierMar 22, 20184 votes

Hi!

I read the whole thing and while, not very detailed... One thing comes to mind; You say it is the aspect of justice, yet, the only thing related to it is the passive and just the name of it.

Like, what is justice? How does she embody it? How are her character and abilities related to her theme overall?

The abilities are nice, maybe explain a little how they actually work because the Q is interesting.

I LAV IT MATEMar 22, 20181 votes

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Hi!

I read the whole thing and while, not very detailed... One thing comes to mind; You say it is the aspect of justice, yet, the only thing related to it is the passive and just the name of it.

Like, what is justice? How does she embody it? How are her character and abilities related to her theme overall?

The abilities are nice, maybe explain a little how they actually work because the Q is interesting.

Yes, i agree... it's not detailed enough to give you the whole idea about what i thought ... my bad... i focused on her kit and giving a general idea. For the "Justice" part, i know it's not screaming justice xD ... it's more like i'll save my mates and bring justice to them ... so i thought about giving the enemy and advantage as well ... risky ... but i'll see how can i make it fair.

Thank you mate !!

JoeMGMar 22, 20182 votes

I like her kit a lot. Assuming Q is a skill shot and hwr main damage source, it looks like her W and E compliment it really well. The ult seems a little out of place unless maybe its tied in with her passive somehow like allied deaths in her ult range add AP.

Would be nice to see a targon mage cuz idk if Zoe really counts.

I LAV IT MATEMar 22, 20181 votes

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I like her kit a lot. Assuming Q is a skill shot and hwr main damage source, it looks like her W and E compliment it really well. The ult seems a little out of place unless maybe its tied in with her passive somehow like allied deaths in her ult range add AP.

Would be nice to see a targon mage cuz idk if Zoe really counts.

Thank you !! I really appreciate your feedback

HalcyonDwellerMar 22, 20182 votes

I keep trying to read the name but it just looks like Freya, are you basing it on the god from Norse mythology? If so then there's no need to change the name, Riot has characters like Wukong that are named directly after characters from mythology.

Interesting passive, but it would need more balancing. Also I'd be worried about it encouraging her to not help allies so they would die to give her more stats.

I like the Q, how do you plan it to work? is it a 2-cast ability or do they both launch at the same time like Galio's Q?

W is cool too, I like the duality of it.

E doesn't have an active, but that might be okay with the 2 cast W.

R makes thematic sense, and it's a cool effect.

I LAV IT MATEMar 22, 20181 votes

{quoted}

I keep trying to read the name but it just looks like Freya, are you basing it on the god from Norse mythology? If so then there's no need to change the name, Riot has characters like Wukong that are named directly after characters from mythology.

Interesting passive, but it would need more balancing. Also I'd be worried about it encouraging her to not help allies so they would die to give her more stats.

I like the Q, how do you plan it to work? is it a 2-cast ability or do they both launch at the same time like Galio's Q?

W is cool too, I like the duality of it.

E doesn't have an active, but that might be okay with the 2 cast W.

R makes thematic sense, and it's a cool effect.

The name was randome .. but yeah maybe it came from Freya .. cuz i played Smite a little bit .. but i didn't thought about it xD thanks for the remark The Q is a single-cast ability .. but there's a short duration between the first ring and the second one ... once you press the Q, both rings will be shoted

Thanks you!!