[Champion Concept] Rha’Zul — The Tortured Soul

KingMogar·1/1/2018, 12:58:34 AM·1 votes·488 views

Rha’Zul — The Tortured Soul

Lore: A bright light appeared in the darkness, lasting only a second. With a pop it was gone, in its place a woman. She began loudly screaming and yelling. “It’s no use lightslinger, nobody but me and the Warden can hear you in here.” She gasped and turned to see the voice that came from the darkness. “Who are you?” She asked. “Just another soul trapped in this prison, just like you.” The voice replied. Suddenly a steel whip with a 4 pronged grappling hook style end slammed into the ground next to her then slowly coiled back to its origin point, the prongs creating sparks as it went. She reached for her weapon but, the holster on her belt was empty. “Senna, is it?” A body finally came out of the shadows to give form to the voice. “How do you know my name?” She asked. “Lucky guess I suppose.” She saw a person, but they weren’t completely human, some sort of metal/flesh mix. A single red glowing eye would forever haunt her. “Well, lightslinger now that your here, you are going to help me get out.” The light appeared once again, but this time it was red, “I’ve spent years figuring out how to do this, you were the only thing left to complete it.” The stranger grabs her and using her like a human shield, ran through the light, as he become himself in the real world, she disappeared. Returned to the eternal prison of the lantern. “Warden, I believe my prison sentence has reached its end.”

Many prisons, many failed wardens. They are all the same, and none can contain me. — Rha’Zul

Abilities:

Passive: No prison can hold me — Every 30/20/10 seconds, Rha’zul will negate the next crowd control that would effect him. When Rha’zul negates a crowd control, he gains 20/30/40% bonus movement speed for 2 seconds. (This included negating suppression and airborne)

Q: From Darkness — Rha’zul explodes into a cloud of pure darkness, Becoming invisible for 2/2.25/2.5/2.75/3 seconds. And gaining 30% bonus movement speed while invisible. Enemies inside the cloud are blinded while inside until it goes away or unless they leave. Any enemies within 800 units, even if they can’t see him will hear his laugh. ( cloud lasts for 1 second after it spawns)

W: Siphon — Rha’zul throws his whip out in a strait line in front of him, if it hits an enemy champion it deals low physical damage and heals him for 15% of targets max hp. If the whip hits a minion or neutral monster he can then cast Living Shield.

2nd Active: Lving Shield — Rha’zul pulls target to him, if he pulls a minion he gains that minions max hp as a shield that lasts 4 seconds or until destroyed. If he pulls a neutral monster he will heal for 10% of its max hp as well as gain a shield equal to 10/20/30/40/50% that monsters hp that lasts for 2 seconds.

E: WhipSlash — Rha’zul swipes his whip in a large arc in front of him, dealing physical damage to all enemies, the damage decreases the further away, but enemies hit with the spiked end of the whip take 200% damage.

R: Grinder — Rha’zul gains 20/30/40% movement speed and 50% slow resistance. He then splits his whip in two, creating two identical weapons and begins spinning them on either side of him. They reach out 400/500/600 units in front and behind him each spin deals physical damage for 6/8/10 Seconds. Spin speed and damage increase over the duration.

Interactions:

First move — “First freedom, and then revenge”

First move with thresh on enemy team — “Hello warden, returned to take back your prized possession? Then come and get me” (the enemy thresh can hear this)

Move near thresh — “This time warden, I will claim your soul”

“ You will never take me again warden”

Kill thresh — “Failed, just like the rest”

“You failed Warden, your soul is mine”

Die to thresh — “I will return”

“Revenge will be mine!”

Negate crowd control — “You think you can contain me!?”

“Not even the warden could hold me, what makes you think your any better?”

Lemme know what you guys think! Any feedback is welcome!

4 Comments

Serenely1/1/2018, 3:46:11 AM1 votes

This champion idea seems cool but it seems way too overpowered to me... Just my thoughts :)

Wachomen1/1/2018, 6:19:24 AM1 votes

good idea bro, me to publish a champion n.n hope rite read us :)

Drako1251/1/2018, 4:10:40 PM1 votes

The idea of a soul escaped from Thresh's lantern is cool imo, you definitely nailed that part. His Q would be an issue, since we already had a teleports behind u "nothin personnel kido" ability on old Talon and that was not a fun thing.