The Star Guardians Oath

TheHobbits··6 votes·941 views

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As soon as I saw the Star Guardians teaser one thing sprang to mind. The oath. Like the Green Lanterns.

I instantly pictured each guardian hurling though space past planets each reciting a verse of their oath.


Help me finish this oath.

The cosmos bleak, but full of life. For every world and its race,

A Dark Star forms where there is strife, An evil swift in its bitter haste.

A Dark Star forms, but it will not grow. An evil will rise that must be atone.

Our purest light, our fiercest glow, From the highest sun to the merest stone.

For every star that will fade another will take its place. Though the sky is black and fear is set, You are not alone.


Those of the Guardians Oath

Fondling Gems Ralanr FloRaider42

9 Comments

Fondling Gems3 votes

For every star that fades another will take it's place

Stars Shaper4 votes

AurelionSol So fck Targon and spit to its face!

TheHobbits1 votes

[zombie-brand-facepalm]

FloRaider422 votes

When Dark Stars form, we will not bow When Evil rises, it must atone

Our light of hope, its warming glow from the brightest sun to the darkest moon

May the sky seem bleak, we will stand strong For brilliant stars, won't fight alone

Ralanr2 votes

"In the endless cosmos, light shall be shown."

Before the dark star line. I wish I could think of something better.

TheHobbits1 votes

{quoted}

When Evil rises, it must atone from the brightest sun to the darkest moon For brilliant stars, won't fight alone

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"In the endless cosmos, light shall be shown."

Before the dark star line. I wish I could think of something better.

Both good additions. Gonna make some adjustments. What do you think now?

Ralanr1 votes

Not bad. But you gotta find another word other than form.

TheHobbits1 votes

You're right. It does sound a bit off.

(Can you notice im not that good at rhymes and poems? haha)

Ralanr1 votes

Rhymes are hard. Granted not all poetry is rhyming but if you're basing it off lantern oaths then rhyme away.

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