[Champion Concept] Lanaveus, the Vorpal Magi

japan hate acc··2 votes·1,014 views

Mage, Assassin

Power. It is what drives all beings, regardless of social standing, race, or culture. Power is what holds society up, and power is what will bring it down. However, it is at what lengths people will go to obtain power is what defines them. Lanaveus is part of a select few that would do anything for it. He and his ilk are dangerous, deemed insane and unstable by common men and women. Yet to him, it is blissfully simple.

The vast, infinite universe is teeming with power. Waiting, begging to be used. And Lanaveus has tapped into that. He wields the universe itself. His cloak is the night, his sword a black hole. Though he is hated and envied in equal amounts, none can deny one thing:

His Power.

What He Looks Like http://www.zidean.com/data/zv4_41/duyanh1363_dw_8726.jpg

Abilities:

Passive [Desperate Rush]: After losing over 75% of his maximum health in less than 15 seconds, Lanaveus gains a shield lasting for two seconds, shielding him from 100-550 damage, depending on the champion level.

Q [Swirling Vortex]: Lanaveus summons a vortex, slowing and dealing 30/40/50/80+(55% of his Ability power) every second they stay in the circle. After 3 seconds, the vortex will explode, throwing all enemy units outwards, and dealing an additional 10 true damage.

W [Night Cloak]: Lanaveus becomes invisible for a maximum of 3.5/4/4.5/5 seconds, all the while his mana draining rapidly during this time of invisibility. If he is hurt or attacks during this time, the ability cancels.

E [Star Beam]: Lanaveus shoots a continuous beam of energy, dealing 20/30/35/50+(46% of his Ability power) to all units in course. The beam lasts for 2/2.5/3/3.5 seconds.

R [Black Hole]: Lanaveus summons a black hole. Enemies knocked in it will be dealt 60/90/100+(15% of his Ability power) and shot out somewhere random on the map.

*Sorry for the brief explanation, I'm kinda tired, might update it later. Please comment -politely- and give me feedback/ideas. Thanks!

~Sciraen

4 Comments

MrXonte1 votes

Passiv: Seems kinda useless. It basicly means if you are about to die you get some mana, but what good does it do you? Any decent player manages his mana well anyways so they will have mana.

Q: AP scaling seems a bit high since it deals 165%ap over its duration which is a bit insane if you build full ap and why 10 true damage? that is like nothing at all xD

W: Why reduce his attack speed? if he can attack and stay invisible its complettly broken anyways, but normal stealth mechanics break when attacking

E: i assume it deals the damage per second and if so i suggest slightly lower ap ratio because i assume he can move the beam , otherwise you can make it even higher since this skill will be pretty useless in most situations xD

R: NO. This is the ultimate disengage and there is a decent chance the enemy will be thrown on a part of the map thats controlled by your team or he could even be thrown in your base or into your tower. Nothing about this ability is healthy in terms of gameplay

japan hate acc1 votes

I wasn't quite sure what to do with his passive, do you have a better idea? I am open to any. I also majorly lowered his AP ratio on his Q, and adjusted the W and the E, I wasn't quite sure what I was thinking as I was making him xD As for his ult, I made it so you'd have to step/be knocked in, and since his Q knocks enemies back, he would have to calculate it perfectly. I think this is a more fair idea, though I'm still thinking of a better passive. I'm including the 10 true damage just because.

MrXonte1 votes

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I wasn't quite sure what to do with his passive, do you have a better idea? I am open to any. I also majorly lowered his AP ratio on his Q, and adjusted the W and the E, I wasn't quite sure what I was thinking as I was making him xD As for his ult, I made it so you'd have to step/be knocked in, and since his Q knocks enemies back, he would have to calculate it perfectly. I think this is a more fair idea, though I'm still thinking of a better passive. I'm including the 10 true damage just because.

you could give him a shield or ap when his passive procs that way it feels more like a desperate rush

japan hate acc1 votes

Okay.

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