Hey Kitty,
I am really sorry for forgetting this fic. But overall I think that people should read fics because they enjoy them. I have been with you since your first tale, and I enjoyed it despite you killing all of the important people in Demacia. But, with your most recent chapters, killing J4 and Shyv, just too much for me. I can't help but feel that you are antagonistic towards Demacia and all who reside in it, and want Noxus to look like the best place ever. Now that isn't bad in moderation, but writing Demacians as morons or "apes" (your favorite word for Garen) just isn't fair to the people who like those champs or factions.
When you write a fic, generally you want to stick as close to the lore as possible, or else you give an OOC warning at the beginning or tell people it's an AU. But I digress. as LostFrost said, I think you lost your purpose in writing. Before you did it to have fun and because it made you happy. I could tell and I could see past your portrayal of Demacia. Now not so much.
Don't get me wrong, as long as you like your fic it is a good one, I just don't think I'm the appropriate audience for it. As a guy who likes Demacia and the champions in it, I wouldn't read this fic if I didn't know you. Not saying its bad, but I just wouldn't be interested. I read this as a favor to you, because you weren't confident in your writing. I hoped that my reading it made you confident enough to find a fanbase that would enjoy your work, like Noxian fans.
Another thing I have noticed is that you can be very defensive of your writing, let me just say that everybody isn't going to like your writing. I know a guy who despises my Jhin/Jinx fic, but we still talk and are quite friendly to one another. People have different tastes and that's fine. The trick is to write a fic that you enjoy, because that is how you motivate yourself to keep going. Write yourself the story, and see how many others like it as well.
Take care of yourself Kitty. This won't be my final message, but I and others have pushed you to finish your first tale, whether you finish your second is up to you. I will still pop in from time to time to see your progress.
