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[Champion Concept] Frederick, the Spawn of Pain

Krizalid·12/4/2014, 9:37:19 AM·10 votes·3,166 views

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Lore Once a demacian warrior, now an adjutant of blood arts master, Frederick has become a servant of the one who he has claimed to destroy. Knights of hope, demolishers of justice and bearers of honor – these are the men he always wanted to be like. But eventually, the darkness in his heart has made him choose the opposite of light, the nemesis of good, something beyond both morality and humanity. He was found by accident when he was just a 3 years old child in the village near Demacia. From his first steps he was raised like a future defender of his new homeland with a book in one hand and the dagger in another. When he has reached the age of 25, his new father and his men planned to assault the grand temple of an infamous blood mage named Vladimir, who tricked both death and life, who feasted on human’s flesh and souls. From the moment he heard about this plan, Frederick started having nightmares about his childhood. He wasn’t really sure if he was actually adopted as it was never revealed to him, but these dreams and pictures of his own actions made him curious about his true origin. The sanguine light of red moon has filled their hearts with doubts and uncertainties. The closer they came to the damned temple, the greater was their fear. He was waiting for them, as his pawns were ready to break their skulls and to reap their bones. The bloody battle between dark magic and brave hearts was about to end with the mage being ruined, but something in the air has shifted. Frederick’s vision has blurred, he began to feel sick. Strangely familiar feelings begin to wrap his soul. He hardly looks into the sky and notices a humanoid silhouette with a giant living sword. Frederick couldn’t see his face, but he was sure that their eyes have met already. This stranger wasn’t fighting, but it felt like he was the biggest part of this battleground. Shadows lean on him. Frederick finds himself in front of the dark lord, the ruler of this grim yet sacred place, with a blood on his one remaining hand. The most of the blood around him wasn’t demonic; it belonged to the men who fought on his side few moments ago. His nightmares were merely a preparation for a true damnation he was about to suffer from. And this was the long awaited night where he betrays not only his home, but his humanity. Frederick was trembling in fear, as the pictures in front of him grew even darker with every last breath of his. “- For what you’ve done and for what powers are hidden inside of your mortal yet dying body, I shall spare your life and make you one of my greatest minions”. Vladimir cuts himself and lets the betrayer drink his blood. All pain is gone, as he was born from it. His eyes now see the flesh in pure design. http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/338/3/9/frederick_background_by_krizalidbrando-d88mpbx.png

Stats

Role: Fighter, Tank

Health 580-2025 Health Regen. 10.1 - 22.6 Mana 250 – 1020 Mana Regen. 8.2 – 17.4 Melee 125 Attack Damage 60-130 Attack speed 0.666 (+0% - 48%) Armor 24.0 – 75.0 Magic Res. 32.1 – 53.4 Mov. Speed 350

Abilities:

Passive: Spawn of Pain [Blood Magic Amateur] http://i.imgur.com/3kOL7DH.png Whenever Frederick’s mana drops lower than 2& of it’s maximum, he stops to regenerate it for 15 seconds and his abilities instead start to consume his health with double amount except The Condemned Devourer.

Q: **Bloody Bullet ** http://i.imgur.com/rIO3lWk.png Frederick triggers his magical pistol-knife and sends bullet made of his own blood that will deal physical damage and apply on-hit effects to the first enemy it hits. After reaching its target, bullet leaves a hunger mark on it for 6 seconds. When Condemned Devourer is activated: with a slash of his scythe sends 3 blood balls in a triangle trajectory.
Mana cost: 40/45/50/55/60 mana. Health cost: 30/40/50/60/70 health. Range: 800 Projectile speed: 1900 Physical Damage: 45/65/85/105/125 (+ 100% AD) Cooldown: 10/9/8/7/6

**W: ** Hemic Carnival http://i.imgur.com/vHfS8Ce.png Frederick turns into untargetable bloody fog with only his hand and head being visible for 2 seconds (also unavaliable to use abilities). He gains 20% speed, ignores unit collision and is able to shoot enemies in the opposite way of his movement slowing their movement down by 60% for 2 seconds and dealing no damage. When Condemned Devourer is activated: gains 40% speed, ignores unit collision. Mana cost: 45/50/55/60/65 Cooldown: 25/24/23/20/15 Range: 500

E: Posthuman Starvation http://i.imgur.com/jeAgpHV.png Frederick rushes forward and bites closest target to restore his own health and then quickly dashes backwards. If target is still under the hunger mark, Posthuman Starvation will root Frederick and his target for 1 second. Mana cost: 35/40/45/50/55 Range: 450 Magic Damage: 70/100/130/160/190 (+50/65/70/75/80% AD). Health regained: 20/25/30/35/40 (+30% AD). Cooldown: 20/18/16/14/10

R: The Condemned Devourer http://i.imgur.com/8pqEo1w.png Frederick releases the seal on his left arm and summons a giant scythe made of his own blood which expands his attack range and greatly increases his lifesteal for 10 seconds. Condemned Devourer can also expand some of his base skills. Mana cost: 100 Health cost: 30% of current health. Attack range increased from 125 to 255. Lifesteal bonus – 30%/50%/70% Cooldown: 150/130/110

Friends: Vladimir Allies Vladimir Enemies: Vayne Lucian Garen Sion Unknown links: Aatrox

Taunts: Vladimir - "I disobey". Lucian - "You will never find her". Aatrox - Frederick just stares at him, shocked. Aatrox - "That sword.." Garen - "When judges are just dead sinners, there can't be no justice". Vayne - "I will purify your blood from your flesh". Sion - "You are nothing but a delusion of a broken legend". Sion - "You are the main goal of my inclination to destroy". Kalista Hecarim - "I've read about you. Hmph, worse than I've imagined".

http://i.imgur.com/WmsDrr1.png http://i.imgur.com/eq9KtTB.png I will update this thread with time and also I'm going to add his possible skins. As example - Bioforge Frederick, Dreadknight Frederick.

And some music for the soul! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VSNnEZjYJ8A - main theme. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IUN7ZdsRAGQ - fighting Sion. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w9GZj_fmsXo - fighting Garen/Lucian/Vayne. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zSvbOux-MRo - fighting Aatrox. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lHFqg5KsANo - fighting Shadow Isles characters.

31 Comments

wunaway12/4/2014, 9:42:17 AM2 votes

RITO, PLS!

SpaceClown12/4/2014, 1:50:55 PM2 votes

too generic

GetBoomedOn12/4/2014, 2:47:37 PM2 votes

Extremely generic, kiddy themes ( a scythe made of his own blood?) an overpowered W that makes him untargetable, 100% AD ratios on Q and E really? On hit effects on Q? Built in kite with his E? Super low cooldowns at late game makes him like 100x more OP than yasuo with a 100% lifesteal ult? Press R Q W E to win. This guy would be super OP. Not to mention super low mana costs all game.

Carniverous12/4/2014, 8:35:44 PM2 votes

Ok, first off I would like to compliment your passive! It has a serious draw back, and makes it so your opponent has a good window to really trade back.

But if I were to play this champ. I'd do what Gangplank dose and chug potions all day and shoot my opponent into oblivion.

Speaking of the Q, it's a little high in damage. Perhaps consider making the % bonus ramp up like Shavana's Q. Starting at 80%, and like ending at 100%

And that brings me to his E. Thanks for making it magic damage. But the Ratio dose feel high. Perhaps make it .7 or .6, and add a small AP ratio somewhere. People will build Trinity foce on him. And static shiv because he can just Q it onto someone. Then get a item 3042 to avoid the draw back on the passive.

I think the W fog ability is pretty cool. But it also sounds too strong. Imagine Vlad being able to use spells while he's a puddle. I think it might turn out okay as long as he can't use spells either. But in the game of Leauge becoming untargetable is too powerful. All damage can be negated. Fizz and Yi can miss out on taking 2k damage timed right. In lane: We'd try trading, you'd poke, I'd poke. But if you do an all in trade, or I do. You'll go invincible waiting for cooldowns and AA'ing me while the minions AA me for two seconds. And I'll be SOL. If I chance, you kite. If I run away, you'll chace and poke.

R: No one win their right mind will use up 30% of current health. They'll get a few light mana items and avoid his drawback. Now, I don't know how much you played the Old Sion, but his ult was extremely powerful. I was behind by 5k gold because of the lee sin who got 6 ganks on my lane at top. He was 1 item from full build. I had 132% lifesteal. I ripped him open, with less items, and sat there 1v1 ing him with a 5k gold difference. And won. It was stupid. On the other hand.

I do the same thing with the new Olaf. ~130% lifesteal. But there's a difference. For olaf to have that much lifesteal he has to be at about 20% HP. Meaning, I could still go down. The major difference was as Sion I had it like that if I was at 90% HP, or 5%. Because it's always on. I never went down to 20% like Olaf.

Over all I like the concept. But my main issue is that he feels like a couple of chamions combined. Vladimir Gangplank and a bit of Aatrox I think he needs to have a stronger Identity seen in his game play.

StupidSavant12/4/2014, 10:08:13 PM2 votes

As a vlad main I dislike this, his w be infringing on vlad's puddle of blood powers :P but all in all it seems cool, although I do agree with some of the lower comments about balances, putting a range increase on a champ that can also run anywhere like hell seems powerful

CoopShwoop12/5/2014, 3:16:24 AM2 votes

Wow you put A LOT of thought, heart, and artistic ability into this, i'm rooting for you dude. I may not be a pro LoL player but this guy look pretty much ready fro the big show, i thought i was close with my Ventus champion idea, it doesn't even BEGIN to touch yours, i obviously need to put more work into it though. I do have one complaint though: Frederick, really? Doesn't exactly scream spawn of pain, lol, but seriously dude nice job. Maybe you could help me make my champion Ventus a reality you obviously know what you're doing, and i frankly get confused with all the pro league terms

NarokKurai12/5/2014, 1:35:39 PM1 votes

Yeah... I remember being in middle school too...

Nothing wrong with flexing your creative muscles kid, but your character is overpowered both thematically and mechanically, and just REEKS of pointless edginess.

General tips when designing characters (both story-wise and mechanics-wise) think of what makes your character strong, then think of what makes them weak. What counters them? What are they afraid of? What sort of situations do they want to avoid? This is your chance to add depth and dynamism to your character. Anyone can design an overpowered demon king who laughs in the face of god, but the challenge is to make a character with weaknesses worth overcoming.

Krizalid12/7/2014, 8:29:48 AM1 votes

Up

Krizalid12/9/2014, 8:31:03 AM1 votes

Up

CoopShwoop12/5/2014, 3:23:33 AM1 votes

maybe name him Nox

Krizalid12/4/2014, 2:54:24 PM1 votes

Little update, I've added a Bloodknight (similar to Bloodknight Hecarim) skin for him.

AnonymousZao12/4/2014, 4:10:39 PM1 votes

That attack speed, I see what you did there.

Le Lightside12/4/2014, 4:38:44 PM1 votes

like