Noh'va, the guiding light. (champion concept)

Artwork not mine http://www.deviantart.com/art/moon-mage-505533085

Class: Fighter

Stats: Health: 505 (+70 per level) Health regen: 7 (+.5 per level) Armor: 20 (+3.15 per level) Magic resist: 30 (+0 per level) Atk: 52.4 (+3.65 per level) Atk speed: 0.7 (+1.65% per level) Movement Speed: 330

Stats to focus on: Movement speed, Ability power Crit

Lore: Born on distant planet, drafted into reconnaissance division of her World's defense @ the age of 13. She was nimble and quick. Her speed and agility began to be noticed by the Hierarchical Society figure heads. Her abilities matched those of the House Of Vayea. Testing her blood, the nobles found small traces of the bloodline present in her DNA. Scared for the safety of their planet sent her away to the outreaches of their solar system to search for threats and 'Gateways' from alternate veres.

While drifting for 7 sevens she had discovered nothing. On the eve of her 21st birthday,her body started to holding heat. She thought it was just space getting to her. However after a couple hours of this her skin started glowing, Her vision heightened, eye burned as if being seared by lasers. She stumbled to the lavatory to see if there was any visual signs of what was happening to her. When she gazed into the mirror all she could she was herself a radiant light, burning brightly throughout her ship. She was confused and scared, What was happening to her. Suddenly a wave of energy busted from her body slicing through the hull of her ship. Light and alarms buzzed and flickered, as the waves continued one after another, each stronger than the one before. Soon enough her ship exploded under the barrage of energy, engulfing her body in flames, but she felt nothing but the small dust particles bouncing off her skin as her ship was disintegrated. She was floating through the abyss breathing nothing, It's like she had not the need to breath air anymore.

She was shocked and amazed at what was happening to her. She could see millions of molecules around her vibrating, and interacting with one another. What is this she wondered. Reaching out and waving her hand through the mixture of particles that surrounded her. Each acting a different way than the other. In awe she pointed at a small cluster of particles that were grouped together, they instantly burst into flames of energy then imploded out of existence, leaving behind a window to what appeared to be a grass path. She gazed through it to see a group of warriors fighting on a giant field of battle. Intrigued to what this place was and how she had found it. She studied each warrior, one by one, time after time. Sometimes there were different warriors from different planes of existence. She was fascinated by the vast differences between each fight and their outcomes. After 2 years of watching at a far she decided to gain a closer look. and shot through her window of recon to this new world.

Abilities:

Passive: Every 180 seconds Noh'va creates a Star Disc at her feet. Any Ally who steps over these plates are granted and addition 40 movement speed that decays by 8 over 5 seconds. If a Star Disc is step on by and enemy the are revealed to all allies, and temporarily immobilized for 1.5 seconds.

Q) Comet Barrage: Blast enemies in a line with 3 comets, dealing 55/70/85/100/115 magic damage from the first comet, 60/75/90/105/120 from the second, and 65/80/95/110/125 from the third. each one doing more damage the first target hit. If all three comets hit the same target, they are stunned for .5/1/1.5/2/2.5 seconds. If only two comets hit the same target they are slowed by 25% for .75/1/1.5/2/2.5 seconds.

W) Universal Exposure/Searing sight: (Passive) For every ward active on the map, Noh'va gains 100 range of sight and 10 additional movement & 3 attack damage. (Active) becomes rooted to the ground, closes her eyes charging up her energy, after 2 seconds blast every enemy she has vision (including map vision) on with 70/80/90/100/110 (+50 AP) magic damage.

E) Spontaneous Combustion: Noh'va rubs her hands together scattering charged particles at a location. Any unit that walks through the area collects the particles. After 3 seconds the particles interact with the air exploding dealing 60/75/90/105/120 (+65 Ap) Magic damage. and reduces enemy unit's caught in the blast armor by 15 for 4 seconds.

R) Black Abyss Gate: Noh'va thrust her arm out toward a location to produce a wormhole that reverses the direction of any enemy unit that walks through it for 2/3/4 seconds.During this time the enemy cannot change directions but can use any and all abilities. Dealing 175/325/700 (10% AP) Magic damage over the time period.

Her Look: This is kinda where let the imagination go type thing. She would be almost pure energy. but you would be able to make out her figure. and her hair would just be waves of energy. Her clothes/armor would be some kinda space age metal, mixed with comet dust. Idk if she would just be floating and cast her abilities using her hand kind of like malzahar.

Then like her secondary skin she could be have her power under control enough where her skin is showing just with cracks in it that light up purple, blue, red and yellow. she would appear to be darker skin like Karma. with long flowing hair with streaks of energized different color hair. and she is wearing a robe or futuristic clothing.

Tell me what you think. Please i'm dying to know how i could improve on this concept.