New Champion Idea

This is a new champ idea, I did another but I don't think I did enough on that, So I added more detail. I would like some 'Constructive' feedback on what you think, Back story, stat or ability modifications for balance , or a complement if you can spare one. Best Regards. Leahcim.

Update: Abilities Rework

Position: Jungle, ADC, Top

New Champ: Krest'Crit: The Bane of Demacia

History: Krest'Crit was at first a nameless homeless Domacian boy who had faith in its proclaimed righteousness. He would watched in aw as Damacian knights rode through the streets to stop evil. He especially adored Garen, and wished to be like him someday. He never doubted Demacia and her glory, until one day all that changed. It was Fall in Demacia, the weather was cool, the markets full of people, and the town cheerful. Krest'Crit was hungry and hadn't eaten for some time. He couldn't find any food scraps thrown in the nearby trash can for some few days and decided to ask someone for some food. He never tried before, but these were Damacians and had good hearts, they would give food to him if he asked. He asked the first women he saw who carried a lot of food for some of it, but she said no. he asked many other people for food but they all said no, this left him confused. “Why wont they give me some food, do they need all of it?” he thought this to himself and decided to wait a bit before asking. By night fall Krest'Crit was very hungry and desperate, he wondered if he'd live through the cold. Then he saw it, an empty food stand, with apples. Delicious juicy red apples, and so many. He would just take one, they wouldn't care. He tip-toed towards the stand, and he attempted to take an apple. As he grabbed it the store owner came out the door and saw him. “THIEF!” he screamed, and in only a fortnight Krest'Crit was convicted of thievery and put in jail for 1 week. He laid in his cell, Depressed that all his Domacian kin were so narrow sighted that they convict him when he was desperate. But he still had a small glimmer of hope, maybe Garen could save him. He would understand, right. As he thought this the door opened, it was Garen himself, Krest'Crit's hope shined. He reached his hand towards him, trying to get his attention. Suddenly there was a swoosh, Garens blade pointed at him, “Don't try anything, thief!”. Krest'Crit was heart broken, Garen, The one person he saw the Demacian Heart in, was like all the others. His mind festered on that thought for days during his imprisonment, Hating everything he once believed in, Despising Demacians and all of there kind. From that day he resented his connections with them, and sought to end them, but he lacked any skill. He was depressed and desired the power to destroy the evil that is Demacia, and someone listened. A spy from the Black Rose reported her findings to LeBlanc, who saw the hidden power within and set out to retrieve it. At the end of the week, Krest'Crit was supposed to be released from his prison, but refused to leave and enter the streets of Demacia, That and the relentless insulting of the Demacian Nobles, Including the prince himself, he was forced in jail for his mortal life. One day he saw a cloaked lady walk in the jail and turn towards the cell. The guards tried to stop her but they passed through her into a cell and were locked in. Krest'Crit saw that it was an illusion as a sweet voice came from the shadows "Silly guards, they fell for the oldest trick in the book". the image dissipated and the real woman came in to the cell, and looked a Krest'Crit, judging him. Then she said in the same soothing sweet voice “You see the Demacians “Justice”, and you know that is a lie...”. “yes...” he responded, accepting the fact that they would not care for him in here. “I have hope for you, freedom, power to smite those who despise you.” the woman stated. Krest'Crit became curious, like a child to a bug “who are you?” the woman lifted her hood, and responded in a superior voice “I am LeBlanc of the Black Rose”. he knew of them, they were the only people manage to get under the skin of Demacian Law enforcement. Knowing this, he decided to join her, And LeBlanc trained him. During training LeBlanc saw a unique trait within Krest'Crit. His illusions were more potent, able to bend the lines of reality and fantasy. LeBlanc helped worked this trait into his spells, and after some years of training secessions in magic he came to The Institute of War. There he joined the League of Legends so he may smite the Demacians, and all of there lies. Though he came with LeBlanc he shares no official alignment with her and tends to spend his time away from the league enjoying fun times and good drinks at the bar. He is not at all evil. He even spared a Damacian guard that drank at the same table because he was decent company, and he did not wish to steal the target of the assailant behind him.

“I created this evil because I did not hear his cry for justice before hand, I take full responsibility in ending it.” Garen.

Description

Race: Human Skin color: White Hight: 5.4-5.5 Age: 19 Hair: Dark brown, smooth and well combed Eyes: A Deep green Clothes: dark cloak and dark leather attire Attacks with: Throwing knife

Base stats Health: 420 (+30) Health Regen: 6.0 (+.32) MP: 300 (+70) MR: 8.0 (+.78) Range: 493 (ranged) Base AD: 70 (3.2) Base AS: 0.789 (+1.9%) Armor: 9 (.4) Magic Resist: 2 (.4)

Abilities

Passive: A Blurred Line:When Krest'Crit is weak he will dissapear and leave an illusion of him dieing to leave the enemy unwary. When Krest'Crit reaches 15% health he becomes invisible for 5 seconds and an illusion is made in his place. The illusion dies as soon as it's made. While the Illusion does respond with "An enemy has been slain" or any of the proper death messages, There are three portraits that appear instead of his actual portrait. These include 1. Zurbert face/ 2. Nah, Nah, Nah face/ 3. The thumb bite face. These faces state that his passive activated and the killer should be alert because he could decide to counter attack. Cool down: 190 sec.

Q: Deceptive throw: Krest'Crit throws a knife at a target enemy with the attempt to throw them off his target, making his real target easier to kill. Krest'Crit throws his knife at target enemy (Range: 635) slowing them by 10% for .25/.4/.5/.7/.9 seconds than bounces to nearby enemy (prioritizes weak champions) dealing 50/70/75/85/95 (.7 AD) range damage and reducing there armour by 10% for 15 seconds. (Stacks up two stacks) Cost: 80/80/80/80/80 . Cool down: 15/13/12/10/8

W: In and Out: Krest'Crit jumps into the fray swinging his blades to feint the opponents than dashes out, knocking away anyone in his path. Krest'Crit jumps towards target area (Range: 390) and hits all champions in a circle (410) applying a 10% slow on each one in the area of effect. He can activate it again for 2 seconds, Causing him to dash forward in a target direction (Range: 460) knocking away champions in his path and stunning them for .5/.7/1/1.4/1.7 second. Cost:120/150/190/210/240. Cool down: 9/9/9/9/9

E: First Strike: Krest'Crit throws a special knife that is imbued with a teleportation spell, when he hit's a target he teleports to it and then kicks it, sending it flying in that direction. He also uses it to escape if he really needs to. Krest'Crit throws a knife with a magical rune in a straight line. The first champion it hits takes 60/ 75/ 85/ 90/ 95 (+.5 AD)(+.6 AP) ranged damage, Krest'Crit than teleports using the rune and kicks the enemy champion forward a bit dealing 70/ 75/ 80/ 90/ 105 (+1 AD) melee damage (distance the champion flies is 370). If that champion hits an obstacle (Wall, Turret etc.) he becomes stunned for .34/ .67/ .79/ .92/ 1.2 sec. If he hit's another enemy champion, the target stops and both are stunned for the duration of the effect both take a bonus 10 (+ 80% of targets health) damage. If the knife hit's an obstacle, he can teleport there instead Cost: 170/ 200/ 245/ 270/ 310. Cool Down: 13/11/10/9/7

R: The Fiend: Krest'Crit creates a monster from his mind that takes the form of the fear of his enemies for 4 seconds and stays in the same place, this demon of fear creates an area that slows all enemies in it by 30% as long as its active and it attacks enemies in range (420 for attack and 390 for slow) dealing 240/290/320 + (.4 AP) and (.5 AD). When "The Fiend" expires, he dives into the ground and the enemy champions still in the area of slow are knocked back by the force and take 200/240/290 (+.9 AP) magic damage. "The Fiend" itself takes up 3 feet/4 feet/5 feet. The Fiend acts as an obstacle and can activate the effects of abilities like Vaynes condemn, Poppys Heroic Charge, and others. and can't be walked through, Dashes do work though. Special effect (These are small examples): : Sees people laughing at him and attacks with tomatoes. : Sees Nothing and just gets hit by depression. : Sees Jayce and and gets hit by his hammer. Cost: 260/340/410. Cool Down: 290/ 250/ 220 sec.

Animation Selection: Did you choose me, OR DID I CHOOSE YOU TO CHOOSE ME!? Walk: (low sneak) "Movin in", Let's make some mayhem" Attack: (Throws a knife) "You got it". Base: throws a knife back towards base and counts the time left before the spell is done, than he teleports there and picks up the knife. Dance: Eager Face Dance Laugh: A Boisterous care free laugh Joke: (Holds knife like a microphone and speaks through it.) "Two hobos walk into a bar, than the Demacian guards arrest them for attempted robbery." "You want a joke, fine, Garen." "I am not the thief your looking for." "I prefer pocket money." Taunt: (Pulls a list from his pocket and begins to check it off.) "I'm sorry, what was that? I couldn't hear you over the gurgling blood in your mouth". (Most Demacians) "good residence to bad rubbish." (Garen) "Demaci-what?" (Shivana) "you still have time to free yourself from there lies, I can help." (Quinn) "Mmm, I love chicken", Jarven: "Your the king, well I didn't vote for you?" Death: (Dies a humorously over dramatic death) "Ack, eek, ooh, ugh" (If the killer was Demacian he instead says) "I'll...be back...soon"

Friends: LeBlanc: teacher and student, it's that simple Riven: They both were let down by the kingdom they once served and feel a mutual connection from that (just friends) Gragas: Bar Buddies, these two have shared more bar brawls than they can count (mostly because they were so drunk) Shyvana: though more of acquaintances, Krest'Crit believes that he can free here from the "Demacian Lie" and Shyvana has looked at his court documents. This has left her questioning her service to the king who lets this happen, but she still has yet to leave due to this. Twisted Fate: They have "Scratched each others backs" and have built a trust, One that will be tested soon enough.

Enemies: All other Demacians besides those listed above: Do I need to give the reason? Dr. Mundo: He feels Mundo's Constant abuse of the lower class of Zaun to use them as test subjects appalling Viktor: Krest'Crit disagrees with the idea of Viktor as an "evolved being" who is "Above his emotions". Swain: Though he is silent about it the details, anyone who asks receives this answer "Forget that, that's not important. What's really important is this, I hate deceivers, demons, or even psychos. I especially hate it when they are all squished together in one package, with the fools near him thinking he cares about their existence. Anyways I need to do other stuff so I'll see you later" Cailyn: He has some laws in Piltover in his work and has gotten her attention Gangplank: Krest'Crit has stolen a lot of his gold and given it away "willy nilly"