Lily, Serenity's Embrace

Mandaari··7 votes·809 views

Been a long time since I've written anything creative. If you like it give it an upvote and comment. I might do more.

#Background

I've always been happy with my life, however short it may be. Sure, there are lots of things I won’t get to do, but how many people can look back on their life and remember nothing but joy?

This place - the Blessed Isles… I couldn’t ask for a better home. The first thing I can remember is my mother carrying me through the forest paths. I couldn’t have been more than a few years old, but I still remember the way the leaves rustled and floated by in the cool sea breeze. We sat and listened to the waves lap against the cliffs, watching the sun dance on the water. I remember thinking how this is all I’ll ever need in the world.

Now that I lay on my deathbed I can still hear the waves topple against the shore. It’s getting harder to breathe and my illness took my sight some time ago, but even now I can feel the sea breeze enter my lungs. My mother is sitting beside my bed, sobbing. Her clasp is so tight that it hurts, but the more it hurts the more I know she loves me. I think the only thing I regret about my fate is that I’ll be leaving my mother alone. I can feel her tears dripping onto my arm. They’re warm - comforting.

Everything was fading. I could still feel the breeze and my mother’s hand in mine, but it all felt so distant. One thing seemed very clear though: there was someone else here. Whoever it was looked down at me from behind, nimbly balanced on my headboard. In a young, soft voice she spoke. “Are you ready?”

I smiled and answered. “Yes, I think I am.” My mouth didn’t move but she still heard me. From elsewhere in the room I could hear an animal’s submissive growl, as if denied its dinner.

“Good.” She took my hand and I felt my soul leave my body. In that very moment I felt neither alive nor dead. I was something else entirely, and the world around me felt different too. The darkness gave way to sunshine and I removed the bandages around my eyes. “Take one last look.”

Everything was pristine. It had been so long since I’d actually seen the world I thought of so fondly. My head whipped around, taking in all the vivid beauty. Everything was frozen in time. Not still, but eternal and untouched. Aside from us there wasn’t another soul around. It made me think back to that first memory with my mother. “May I show you something before we go?”

I turned back to my companions. It hadn’t occurred to me who I was with until now, but I recognized them at once. I’m not sure how - I’d never met or even heard of them before, yet they seemed so familiar. Before me stood Kindred, cocking their heads in surprise. Wolf shrugged and Lamb chuckled behind her mask. “Sure, why not?”

I tugged at Lamb’s hand and brought her to my favorite spot on the isles. Stepping forward I gazed out over the cliffs. The dewy grass tickled my feet and I turned toward Kindred. “Amazing, isn’t it?”

“Yes, it certainly is”. Lamb and Wolf both looked out at the ocean for a brief but wondrous moment. “Come, it’s time to-”. Kindred went silent and spun around to look inland before locking eyes. They sensed something I had not, perhaps from the world I left behind.

Lamb turned back toward me. “These lands have become a place for neither the dead nor the living. Stay, and one day we will return to finish your journey.”

Wolf began to dart back and forth excitedly, fangs on display. “Come Lamb, my feast awaits!”

And with that they vanished.


“Why here? Anywhere but here!” I clung to a plank as I washed upon the rocks. Like so many before me I made the mistake of crewing a ship on a path past the Shadow Isles. Like so many before me my life was now forfeit. I wished it was forfeit sooner.

The ocean waters were freezing, and so too was the air. I climbed off the plank onto land. I wish I hadn’t. The instant my feet hit the ground I felt a chill. Yes, I was cold, but this was something else entirely. Terror shot through my very bones. My every muscle tensed and my hands clenched shut tight enough for my fingers to pierce the skin of my palms. It was everything I could do just to take a step. Another. Another until the beach was out of sight. I didn’t know where I was. I didn’t know where I was going. I just wanted to be away from the spot I stood in. Surely anywhere else must be better than here, yet every step brought me more regret.

These isles choked out what life dared encroach upon it. It was hard to think. Every action I took was my body’s primal response to flee while my mind cowered. Occasionally I would recognize sounds through the fear. There was no wind, yet tree branches strained and snapped around me as if being torn at by an ocean gale. The waves behind me beat mercilessly on the cliffs like a war drum. The razor sharp rocks bit at my bare feet until I collapsed to one knee.

I couldn’t stay here. Nobody would come for me. I couldn’t possibly escape. What was there to do but die? Tears started to roll down my cheeks. That was as far as they got before freezing to my skin.

A wolf howled nearby. In a way it was comforting that there was something else here aside from me. I willed myself to stand and take a step to run, but it was hopeless. Before I could take a second I felt the wolf’s fangs sink into my arm and throw me against a tree trunk. Its spectral, frenzied eyes stared into my own as it began to charge. I closed my eyes as tight as possible awaiting my death.

It never came. At least not right then. I peeked an eye open and saw the wolf standing just feet in front of me, staring off into the trees. My gaze followed.

Surely my eyes were lying to me. A young girl? Here? She couldn’t be more than twelve or thirteen. She looked so peaceful, slowly skipping along and humming a children’s tune. It was such a calm sight - serene even. Everything was serene at that moment.

I looked back to the wolf. The craze in its eyes dwindled away. It no longer boasted its fangs and its tail wagged back and forth. It reminded my old hunting dog. The wolf stepped closer but I felt no reason to be afraid. I sat still and it nestled its nose under my ear. Its soft fur rubbed against my leg as it licked at my wounds. The blood trickled from where the wolf had bit me earlier. It felt warm.

I turned back to look at the girl who had stopped in front of a tree. Her head tilted back as she gawked at its height. I looked up at it myself. I’d never seen such a large tree before. It was amazing! Looking around I couldn’t help but notice how grand the landscape was. The rocks towered in majesty and I could hear the nearby river surge with awesome power. Why hadn’t I noticed this incredible landscape before?

I heard the humming begin again and the girl started skipping down the path once more. She stepped closer and warmth filled the air around me. I half expected to turn and see my friends gathered around a campfire, laughing and telling stories. Everything right then reminded me of home.

As the girl walked by the wolf rested its muzzle on my lap. She took no note of us. I don’t think she knew we were there. Rather to her I don’t think we were really there at all. I watched as she skipped away toward the cliffs, still humming her tune which I was now humming to myself. Finally she turned the corner and was out of sight.

She was gone. In her place was just the shroud of night. I winced as my bite wound grabbed my attention. It was throbbing and the chilling air stung my lacerated feet. I looked down at the wolf. I watched its eyes fill with manic bloodlust as it got to its feet. The beast snarled and circled me, getting ready to pounce once more. But it seemed the beast was as unlucky as me. Almost.

A bloodcurdling shriek filled the air and a massive creature repelled down the rocks behind the wolf. The wolf tried to run but the creature tossed it aside before turning to me. In my final moment I tried to remember that children’s tune, but all I could hear was the spider’s song.

#Abilities Passive: Death’s Door - Once every 3 minutes when Lily dies she instead grants 20% of her missing health to herself and all nearby allied champions.

Q: Selfless in Death - Lily sacrifices 10% of her current health every second to grant target allied champion lifesteal and spellvamp. A portion of any healing granted to the target by Selfless in Death is also granted to Lily. Lasts until canceled.

W: Sea Breeze - Lily summons a strong breeze for 4 seconds at the target location, increasing all allied units’ movement speed in the direction of the breeze by and decreasing all enemy units’ movement speed in the direction opposite the breeze.

E: Wanderer - Target allied champion briefly gains a shield that absorbs an ability. Additionally the champion gains movement speed that decays to zero.

R: Serenity - Lily places a large zone on the ground at her feet for 3 seconds that negates all damage and crowd controlling abilities. Additionally, all allied and enemy units inside the zone are silenced and cannot attack. Lily can continue using abilities inside the zone.

15 Comments

Koofigi3 votes

Awesome idea, great story! The abilities make a lot of sense with the character. You should consider naming her ult "Lilly's Song" rather than "Serenity", so that it fits in better with the lore. Just a thought.

LichKing2342 votes

I love the champ omg readding that lore was so good. this is just a nitpick can you give some of her stats and ap ratios and i can see her being a primarry support as shes going to work well with kill lanes but her abilties are like dual edge swords kind of like new rakas healing allies, its going to make her a huge target early game. since shes going to be easy to force out of lane shes going to have to build tanky regardless with hp regain so her abilties dont hinder her to much.

item 3190 , item 3112 , item 3065, item 3083 , item 3084 , item 3056 , item 2051 , item 3401

just saying shes goign to need hp regain alot do to her abilties.[slayer-jinx-wink]

Mandaari1 votes

Heh I'm glad you liked it. I hesitate to put number on her since people read into them way too much, but I'd imagined her being something like Janna or Nami. Her Q would give her enough health back to sustain herself as long as her cast target is aggressive. It'd also scale somewhat with AP.

LichKing2341 votes

yeah i know what yeah mean i like readding numbers so i can see how well she would do in the current meta if she was added. also early game if she keeps it on shes going be looking more health than she can regan still making her a huge target. she would loose to supports that can poke her down and keep her poked. lanes that can outsubstain her and burst lanes.

with her Q and ult is where i mostly have my complants about its good but its a double edged sword as since its 10% and she gets a portion of that health back im thinking its going to be like she bought a cull since its not going to be profitable early game. i dont see her putting a point in it till like lvl 3 depending on her laner and or oppenets. her ult is well its basicly an upgraded kinderds and bard u ult just with no healing and everyone can still move. witch when you think about it since all her ablities revovle around aidding her allies and since i assume they can and the enemy leave the area it can make it down right useless unless you want to stop like a tower dive but since it stops all dmg well you see what i mean.

dont get me wrong i love her and these are just some criticisms i have with her.[slayer-jinx-catface]

Mandaari1 votes

Glad to take criticism. Like I said don't read too much into numbers. The idea is that 10% makes her not want to keep her Q active, yet be enough for her ally to outpace with lifesteal. Maybe that value's not 10%.

I see her ult being used in situations like:

  • Talon or Rengar is mid-jump on your carry. Press R and wait out their steroids.
  • Your team is doing Baron, so you drop your ult on the path in so that the other team can't initiate a fight.

Maybe I should change her ult so that when an enemy champion attempts to use an ability it instead places all of their abilities on cooldown for a few seconds. Basically in punishes them for being offensive inside her zone, but they can also just wait it out and try to make a move when the ult disappears.

LichKing2341 votes

Ah ok so you can place it anywhere on the map? if so then it becomes more useful. and those points you made are pretty good as i didnt know she can place it anywhere.

with that being said she doesnt have well any early game dominiance shes more mid to late game that way she has more hp regan and she can keep her Q on pretty much all the time and i can see warmongs being a core item on her and when she gets that anyone she targets with her Q basicly have god substain ( and if it scales holy fucking shit this ability will be strong).

if anything i see her mostly being an ap support tank.

[slayer-jinx-catface]

Mandaari1 votes

No, you place it at your feet. Also the idea of it being a percent health drain is so that you can't just stack health or regen and outpace it.

I think she'd be a strong late game support. Good disengage, bad engage.

LichKing2341 votes

well since its current health and not max health it can be outpaced with a warmongs and a few other items that increase hp regain. also if its at her feet then like i said shes going to have to build tanky and i mean very tanky. and you are right she does have good disengage, but bad engage.

but if tis true her ult still works like kinderds and bards just with no healing and they can still move. unless its like instacast where oh your about to jump on my carry how about you dont.

the reason i say she needs to be tanky is if shes squishy then an assassion will kill her before she can pop her ult. also silances and surpressions ill fuck her up.

anthor thing with warmongs its passive doesnt go on cd if its self inflicted DrMundo (as he goes where he pleases) meaning warmongs can infact outpace it since if i rember correctly max health is better than current health. now if her Q was max health instead of current then you wouldnt beable to outpace it.

[slayer-jinx-wink]

Mandaari1 votes

Yes it would be instacast or at least a very fast cast time.

I don't think she'll need to build tanky. Janna doesn't need to build tanky and yet she excels at keeping teammates safe. Yes, Lily has little for direct peel, but I don't think it'd be too much of an issue.

What I meant by outpace is that it'll always heal faster than it hurts you, not just at low HP levels. And no, it would not be able to deal fatal damage (or trigger your passive).

LichKing2341 votes

True but janna has a knock back, and a knock up, and a team heal, slow, a sheild that gives ad (comeplete bullshit by the way). plus any champ that can close the distance on her shes mincemeat as taric says you are nothing more than ass waitting to be smashed. yeah a good janna will almost never get caught.

but lily doesnt have that type of what i call mid size CC at most when her ults not up she has a slow and spell sheild. yeah early game her Q is going to be next to useless cause your going to be loosing alot more health than your regaining. but again in a practical sense shes going to be an easy target. janna isnt an easy target do to her mid CC unless the enemy has some ahrd ass engage like leona or can outsubstain her like sona and raka, and mabye taric.

witch is why i say shes going to need to be tanky cause other than her ult she has no barely any CC and her passive isnt going to save her alot of the times since its only 20% and if shes squishy 20% isnt going to be alot and they will just kill her again.

these are some very glaring weaknesses in her kit if she was released she would be under powered. cause she has no dmg ablities, little CC outside her ult(im counting her slow but its light soo eh) and very little survivalabltiy unless she builds tank. janna can get away with it cause her kit is pure disengage. lilys kit at the most just counters assassins atleast while her R is up but if its insta cast or has a fast cast time just bait it out and your good then just dive the carry then boom dead carry.

at the most she would be a support that counters assassins, but utlity mages like janna, sona, and raka also counter assassins. but do her job alot better.

just saying shes abit underpowered.[slayer-jinx-wink]

BladeSteel2 votes

These are my thoughts. Passive:Maybe instead of giving it to herself she just gives it to allies? (and maybe buff the % by a bit) it doesn't seem that great to have her revive as well, but it supports her supporty nature still. Q-this one is interesting, i don't really see any reason to dislike it. But at the same time i don't find a reason to like it either. Maybe you could make her a double champion (meaning like lulu. on allies it does this. on enemies it does this. same with all her other abilites minus ult) w-does it do damage or not? basically galio e. I'd like something to differentiate between this and galio besides the slow. e-i like this ablity, but maybe do something like i said w/ the q. make it do something on enemy cast too (maybe if you cast it on the enemy it debuffs them making one of your allies abilites do x% more damage) r-interesting ult. does it silence your allies too? or is it just enemies? that isn't very clear (thinking of kindred ult) it says "all units inside are silenced and cannot attack". if it effects both your allies and enemies, it could be interesting. especially since she can use abliites...but at this point what abilites would she use? if it effects both, her q does nothing, and enemies are silenced, so her e does nothing. basically all she can do is w (according to my understanding). so it is interesing but a little unclear.

LichKing2341 votes

R effects both allies and enemy and only she can use abilties so yeah her ult is basicly its fuck everyone.

BladeSteel1 votes

So it is an interesting ult. But she can't use any abilities either except her w. her q only gives an ally lifesteal etc....and they can't attack. her e block an enemy's ability...but they can't use abilities in it. So thats why I say that she should be like lulu and have her ablities do something else if cast on an enemy.

LichKing2341 votes

same i mean on paper shes a sound design but if implamented shes very underpowered and i know the creator doesnt want to get into numbers but with a champ like this she needs numbers cause if not we dont know if she would be very underpowered or broken beyond beleif.

personly with ablitlies like hers shes going to need to be tanky. mostly do to her R. and shes going to have to be very passive in lane as with out her R shes going to be a very easy target and any good assassin can bait out her ult. Its one of those ults thats easy to mess up.

im not saying she isnt good she is but her kit just has alot of very glaring weaknesses that can if a good team can exploit.[slayer-jinx-wink]

Mandaari2 votes

Thanks for the feedback. Out of curiosity did you skip to the abilities? I'm more interested in what people thought of her backstory than her kit.

In regards to casting things on champions I'd prefer to keep her as "non-aggressive" as I viably can. I'll consider making some of her abilities castable on enemies, but I'm going to er toward preventing enemy aggression over damaging or otherwise "hurting" an enemy.

Q - I could add that casting it on an enemy heals allied champion for the damage done to that enemy specifically, a portion of which goes to Lily.

W does not do damage, though that may leave her lacking heavily in the damage department (maybe that's a good thing to make her unique?). However the slow and speed bonuses would be very heavy. It'd be something around the magnitude of Karma's Mantra + shield combo, if not a bit more.

E - It's true that it won't block a spell during her ult duration, but since she can still cast she can set up the shield just before her ult expires. It also gives the speed boost. Of her abilities I think I'm least likely to dramatically change this one.

R - Will clarify in OP.

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