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[Champion Suggestion] Deirdre, The Mourning Father. (with music)

Leon Black·2/2/2019, 4:27:09 AM·1 votes·1,166 views

suggestion: listen to the music along with reading this; if you wanna skip the intro of the song, go to 3:17.

Name: Deirdre, The Mourning Father (This Celtic and Gaelic name means "sorrowful" or "sad one").

Role: initiator/jungler/bruiser

Lane: top/jungle/mid

Range: Mele;

Movement: 350

Mana: 300-900

Passive:_ Denial_.

Every 9/7/5 seconds Deirdre releases a scream that damages all enemies around him for 10/30/50 physical damage (+10 ad) (+10 ap) and gaining 15/20/25% burst of movement speed that decreases over 3 seconds. (scales on 6/11/16 lvl).

Q: Rage (range: 250 units; cost: 35 mana per cast; 9/8/7/6/5 seconds cooldown):

  • First cast: Deirdre swings his left arm from right to left forcing all enemies in front of him in the radious to be displaced to the left (the further away, the more the displacement) and causing them 20/30/40/50/60 physical damage (+25% ad) and 1s of 20/25/30/35/40% slow.after 1.5s he can recast this ability within 4s.

  • Second cast: same skill but with his right hand forcing them to the right. same amount of damage and slow.

W: Bargaining (cost: 40 mana per cast; self cast; 10/9/8/7/6 second cooldown)

Passive: Deirdre gains 5/10/15/20/25% attack speed. while this skill is on cool down, this passive is also on cool down.

  • _First cast: Deirdre gains an extra 10/15/20/25/30% attack speed stacking with the passive above and 5/10/15/20/25% life steal for the next 3s. after 1.5s he can recast this ability within 4s. _
  • Second cast: Deirdre gains a shield that shield him for 20/30/40/50/60 (+25% armor) and a magic shield that shield him for 20/30/40/50/60 (+ 30% magic resist) for the next 3s.

E: Depression (area cast; first cast cost: 35mana; second cast cost: 60 mana; 600 range; effect radius: 350; 15/14/11/9/7 second cooldown)

  • ** First cast:** on a target location a dark circle arises that deals 40/50/60/70/80 magical damage (+30% ap) (+15% ad) after 2s. after 1.5s he can recast this ability within 4s. (that is 1.5s after the cast of the ability which means the ability hasn't exploded yet)

  • _** Second cast:** all enemies inside the area of effect are drawn to the centre and stunned for 1.25/1.50/1.75/2/2.25s getting an additional 30/40/50/60/70 magical damage (+30% ap) (+15% ad) _

R: Acceptance: (cost: 100 Mana first cast, 50 mana second cast; self cast; 100/80/60 second cooldown)

  • First cast: Deirdre draws shadow power from the earth channeling inside him increasing his range (he now is a ranged champion for the effect of this cast) getting bigger in size, giving him 30% damage reduction, 40/60/80 armor and 40/60/80 magic resist.this ability lasts for 10s. After 1.5s he can recast this ability.

  • _Second cast: on an area around him (on his ranged range so that is 550 units approximately) Deirdre releases his anger. he is unable to do an auto attack, he can still cast abilities. all enemies within that area get 50/70/100% of his total amount of damage (ad and ap) in ticks depending on his attack speed. this ability lasts for 5s. _

_Lore: _

_(you need to read the Lore of my other creations: Evander, Ni' Vex, Dim, Erin and Nesh in order to understand fully this Lore.) _

_ Deirdre was a farmer, Living in his land on the outskirts of demacia. He had an only son that loved more than anything in this world. One Day the Demon Ni' Vex awoken and the world started being swallowed into darkness. Demacia had to do something about it. They waged a full fledged war against Ni' Vex and sided with Nesh to stop her. They recruited many young men including Deidre's only son, Faramir. Faramir was an amazing warrior, the best in his village, with a lot of virtue and charisma. His sword play is with difficulty matched but was not his best skill. No he was a painter, his paints would touch everyone's souls. But in the war against a powerful demon skills hardly matter._

**Denial: ** Before he left for the wars, Faramir left behind his favorite scarf, promising his father that he would return to claim it. After 3 battles against her, Deidre received a letter asking him to attend Faramir's funeral in the capital. Deidre could not believe that his son was dead. Faramir was enclosed inside a metal box, covered in the demacian flag. He asked to see his son for the last time but they did not allow him as his state was not fit. He was told that his son was a hero that saved hundreds of lives by sacrificing himself but all he could hear was "your son was a tool we used. thank you. now we clear the board and move on."

**Anger: ** Upon his return to home, deidre was filled with rage against everyone. He set out to kill the demon that took his son, and after a lot of search he found her. Fought her hard but with no hope. He then started crying so loud, Ni' Vex felt his power and saw his potential. So in order to fulfil her mission to plunge the world into darkness she gave him some of her powers and oh boy was that a bad decision. He immediately exploded drawing her shadows from the earth and sending them aggressively back at her forcing her to retreat.

**Bargaining: ** Deidre then started looking for mages and shamans, known dark people that can conjure spirits or even bodies back from the dead. That is how he met Dim a noxian that had managed to summon the incorporeal form of his friend Erin into their plane of existence. Dim explained to Deidre that he did not know how he did it, only that he felt powerful for a moment there and there he was, right next to him. Disappointed, Deidre gave up on his quest and headed back to his home.

_Depression/isolation: 90 days he isolated himself inside his house, only going out to get the necessities and how many times didn't he thought of killing himself. Buy he didn't, he did not know why but something drove him. something deep down boiling a force he could not recognise until Nesh came at his door, seeking to pass him wisdom and support. Instead Deidre fought him, he was one of the people responsible for his son's death after all. The fight lasted for several hours until both of them were exhausted. In the end Nesh convince Deidre that his only enemy is Ni' Vex leading him to the last stage of grief. _

Acceptance: He now knows what his purpose is, he is focused and more dangerous than ever before. His eyes are set on Ni' vex. He is coming stronger than ever.

Sorry for the TL;DR but his lore and abilities are kinda intertwined, i also am creating my own storylines because i just love creating storylines, i love creating universes and i love creating champions for this game even if i am the only one reading them after all XD

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