[Champion Concept] - Mihai, The Lightbringer

Krizalid··10 votes·10,678 views

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Lore: Born in the village near Demacia, he’s one of the last remnants of his kind – beast slayers, demon annihilators and prophets, praying for the souls of mankind. Some of his ancestors died in a great war in the lands of former Kalamanda, but most of them died in the ancient opposition between light and darkness. Trained to the cracks of bones, each member of his family was raised as true warriors of light, clerics, and defenders of weak destitute. In the age of young man, he, his father and his people decided to assault grand temple in the mountains of Noxus, which, according to dark rumors, was full of evil presence. The haunted temple, however, wasn’t so affable. The moment his father stepped into the evil domain, they heard a dry laugh coming out from nowhere. The only thing his father succeeded to say was – “Run, son”, as his body collapsed as bouquet of roses, showing all the crimson grim beauty of his anatomy. Screaming in the pain and fear, villagers, dropping down the torches and pikes, ran away, dying one by one. Fountains of blood have arranged a fearsome carnival, as the young Mihai, paralyzed by these pictures, cried bloody tears. The blood mage appears with a satisfied smile. He looks at the young man and snatches his eye and arm, tortures him, but lets him survive. “Your eyeballs have seen too much for a pitiful creature like you: one of them is more than enough. Run, as your father has told you, and care that one eye of yours. You will need it as you’ll seek for revenge. I’ll let you see me one more time, and then it’s gonna be your last”. Friends: Vayne Lucian Rivals: Vladimir

KIT

Passive - Saviour's road: Every third strike gives him bonus effect depending on dominant powers (stat that has 10 points more than other stats, except attack damage) which activates on every third strike and deactivates if the fourth strike is attempted. Only one effect can be enabled at the same time (same item build). Passive is activated only after buying one single item, which increases his stats (disabled by default). Has cooldown of 7 seconds. Crusader - Building armor: every third strike gives him shield, absorbing some amount of damage for 1 hit. (Whip glows with yellow thorns). Priest - Building m. resist: every third strike gives him magic shield, absorbing some amount of m. damage. (Whip glows purple for a single strike). Pilgrim - Ability power is fused with his movement speed*: every third strike gives him little bonus to movement speed. (whip burns with blue flame for a single strike). Usable if Mihai is intended to be played as support, to successfully control the enemy. When Mihai's mana is low, he misses with every third basic attack because he can't control his iron arm.

Q - Blasphemy! Mihai slaps a single enemy with a whip and launches him back, slowing the target for a short amount of time but not dealing any damage.

W - Holy Symphony When toggled, every third basic attack slows (but makes Mihai lose his physical attack)(Pilgrim), replenishes mana (but makes Mihai lose life)(Priest) or silences (but makes Mihai lose movement speed)(Crusader) enemy depending on which road he has chosen to walk.

E - Lightout Mihai dashes backwards and throws knives in front of him. Can be used either to chase or to run from his enemy. Or even to outrun him, so he can use "Blasphemy (Q)" to send enemy backwards to Mihai's teammates.

R - Divine mace Mihai smashes the ground vertically, dealing big amount of physical damage and marking enemies for few seconds. Next basic attacks on the marked enemies replenish a little amount of Mihai's mana.

Even though Mihai should be built to punish his enemies with basic attacks, he strongly relies on timing and the right usage of his passive ability, which not only makes him a more defensive and thinking character, but also a more risky and deliberate one. He needs to know when to rush into the fight and when to cleverly escape it. His passive is easily punished if he's being forced to fight whenever he's not ready to handle enemy's full cast. He will be mostly forced to go into the magic resist, because he will always need mana if he doesn't want to miss every third hit, however he still can chose what kind of progression he likes the most (which are way more risky).

Possible skins: *Dragonslayer Mihai * http://i.imgur.com/cNvQ2M5.jpg

  • instead of whip, he's fighting with a chain and his armor is similar to Braum's armor. His prime color theme should be red or orange (something similar to Simon Belmont). High Noon Mihai/Adventurer Mihai: http://i.imgur.com/EI5iGSU.jpg Cowboy with lasso or Indiana Jones-like skin. Extras

Jokes:

  • Good? Bad? I'm the guy with the whip. (Evil Dead, Ash reference)
  • I say whip it. Whip it good! (Devo – Whip It reference)

Taunts: Urgot Sion - It's time to end your miserable existence. Lucian Vayne - We are walking the same path. Too bad you stand in my way. Vladimir - Your sins will not be forgotten, monster! Vladimir - Your time has come. Die, monster! Karthus - It's time to reap all you've sown.

**Upon dying: **

  • Forgive me, father...
  • It shouldn't end like that...

When buying items:

item 3102 - My faith protects me. item 3026 - To rise from the ashes of grace. item 3174 - I've buried my joy and faith. item 3153 - Ruin in Pieces.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oUiOylPbfV0

20 Comments

RiotRiot Sweet12 votes

Cool, there are a bunch of nuggets here that could be refined to diamonds so let's break it down.

##Lore / Identity:

  • There is something here, the idea of revenge is a powerful motivator but what separates him uniquely from other champions
  • Mihai comes across as a generic vamp / demon hunter, what could you do to push the concept further? (Examples being: He was left massively scarred instead of just losing an eye and wears a hood or cape to hide his hideous looks. Or perhaps he's been tainted by the dark magic that attacked him leaving him internally at war with himself)

#Kit

  • The idea of building differently to change his skill set is pretty neat, but does this make him too much a one-champion-fits-all?
  • Too much utility in one champ can make them less dynamic and interesting.
Krizalid2 votes

Oh my, I'm really glad to see a Rioter posting!

I think that he could actually have only one arm remaining as well. Let's see. I've portrated him with a spiked gauntlet and a shoulder armor which is covering the whole arm. Maybe he will be the first character who uses magic to move the shoulder armor just like if he actually didn't lose it? And the fact that his passive doesn't last longer than his third strike may be because he can't really handle it much longer due to his physical restrictions. And maybe the lack of mana will make him miss his strikes?

I certainly wanted to give him that universal gameplay, but otherwise it only affects how we will actually build him and against whom we are going to fight and not the role we are picking. Maybe you are actually right about the big amount of utility being a minus. Maybe his ult should be just a damage based ability which should be landed properly? Or maybe his toggle ability should have a lifesteal or mana replenisher instead of control.

darkdill2 votes

T_T I work my ass off on my concepts and you Rioters never drop by and say anything... T_T

Anyhow, I could get behind a whip-user. The Castlevania vibes are enough to get me interested.

RiotRiot Sweet6 votes

{quoted}

T_T I work my ass off on my concepts and you Rioters never drop by and say anything... T_T

Anyhow, I could get behind a whip-user. The Castlevania vibes are enough to get me interested.

Doing my best to comment more often on these. I often read the champ concepts and lurk around but another player mentioned it was nice to hear feedback of any kind.

GaleWinUnleashed4 votes

Do you know if a "Seen-by-Rioter" feature has been considered for the boards? It's too much to expect you guys to comment on every thread, but it'd be great to have a way for us to see how much of this stuff you really read.

ABlueQuaker1 votes

Just make sure you revisit threads you've posted on. Nothing annoys me more than when a Riot says something, moves on to another thread, and then misses a really cool idea that someone posts as the discussion progresses in the absence of the Rioter.

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/etuTknPA-champion-concept-kayohe-the-sower-of-corruption

Keagn1 votes

[{quoted}](name=Riot Sweet,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=EAUabkbE,comment-id=000000010000,timestamp=2015-02-03T02:02:50.895+0000)

Doing my best to comment more often on these. I often read the champ concepts and lurk around but another player mentioned it was nice to hear feedback of any kind.

@Riot Sweet, you have no idea what kind of danger you've put the balance of order and chaos in.

But as a community member, I'm glad someone's doing it.

Hizsoo1 votes

Yep, it is nice to see a sign about what king of feedback, concept or anything is welcome and appreciated from Rioters. Sometimes valuable threads get more downvote and hate, than actual discussion and feedback.

Chromatic Eagle1 votes

This is why they don't comment. Now they have to do it for everyone.

Krizalid2 votes

So, what did I change recently:

  • Mihai has an iron armguard but no arm. He controlls it with his willpower and when he lacks mana, he misses with ever third basic attack.
  • His ult now marks his enemies for few seconds instead of slowing them. If he hits the marked enemy with a basic attack, he will replenish a little amount of mana.
  • His toggle ability now looks like

When toggled, every third basic attack slows (but makes Mihai lose his physical attack)(Pilgrim), replenishes mana (but makes Mihai lose life)(Priest) or silences (but makes Mihai lose movement speed)(Crusader) enemy depending on which road he has chosen to walk.

Which now mostly forces him to go into the magic resist, while still leaving a room for his other variations of passive ability.

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[{quoted}](name=Riot Sweet,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=EAUabkbE,comment-id=0000,timestamp=2015-02-03T01:35:44.314+0000)

Cool, there are a bunch of nuggets here that could be refined to diamonds so let's break it down.

##Lore / Identity:

  • There is something here, the idea of revenge is a powerful motivator but what separates him uniquely from other champions
  • Mihai comes across as a generic vamp / demon hunter, what could you do to push the concept further? (Examples being: He was left massively scarred instead of just losing an eye and wears a hood or cape to hide his hideous looks. Or perhaps he's been tainted by the dark magic that attacked him leaving him internally at war with himself)

#Kit

  • The idea of building differently to change his skill set is pretty neat, but does this make him too much a one-champion-fits-all?
  • Too much utility in one champ can make them less dynamic and interesting.

Gnar hi there, my name is Gnar and I heard you said "Too much utility in one champ can make them less dynamic and interesting " heh well Riot Sweet, as Gnar I'm one of the most used champions in league but lately I've been getting banned for reasons that many can tell you. But anyways, I'm here to remind you that my gf RekSai feels the same as I do.

Krizalid1 votes

I've made a new picture for you guys! I hope you like it and I think it represents his character much more than the old one!

Chromatic Eagle1 votes

This is the type of feedback I'd like in these threads.

Sir ArmaMalum1 votes

Oh hey I remember this guy, I see you changed his title. Great to see a previous CCC entry coming back for another pass and getting additional feedback. ^_^

Krizalid1 votes

Thank you! Yeah, it's been a while. I thought it won't be bad to revive this old concept and to remake it a little bit. I guess it needs some fixes though, as Riot Sweet has stated.

Sir ArmaMalum1 votes

Even Red Champ designers would need tweaking on paper, imho. Keep at it!

Krizalid1 votes

Up :)

Krieg the Psycho1 votes

Now if only Riot would accept ideas from the community for champs, they already do it for skins, why not take it a slight step further?

Krizalid1 votes

I agree. Also, Up!

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