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Kiara, the Moons Vessel

Nikushimi Zero·2/13/2015, 4:46:41 PM·1 votes·849 views

Health: 620 (95) Health Regen: 10 (1.25) Attack Damage: 62 (4) Attack Speed: 0.68 (4%) Armor: 27 (4) Magic Resist: 32.1 (1.25) Melee Range: 125 Movement Speed: 350 Resources: Light of the Moon (See her Passive for more info) Primary Role: Tank/Fighter (Let me know! :D) Secondary Role: Assassin/Mage (Let me know! :D)

Edits:

  1. Changed Q's marks added damage per mark to magic damage instead of true.
  2. Changed W's active to not do Knockback damage. Adjusted cooldown.
  3. Completely reworked her Ult. It works a bit differently, but still keeps some of the old.

Background: Kiara was an orphan. Taken in by an old order when she was young and raised in its beliefs. Being trained from an early age in the arts of magic and swordplay she was molded into their killing machine. Able to withstand immense pain and and injuries. She was once beset upon by a legion and destroyed them all. The sword marks, arrows, and other injuries barely even seemed to phase her. She danced among them with a purpose and from that learned the truth.

Her masters had been lying to her. They were not of the order she had thought them to be, but were indeed corrupt. During the battle night had taken over and a full moon appeared before her just as she was facing defeat. Immense stores of power burst forth from her and she decimated all of her enemies and the voice of the moon spoke to her. A goddess. She explained the deceit and corruption she was being fed and who they truly were.

Enraged she headed back to her "temple" and confronted them all. Her look and determination struck fear into their hearts. Pleading for their lives she gave them no quarter. Feeling the weight of everything bear into her she fell to hear knees and wept. She felt lost and used. Never feeling the touch of another in her life. Always being pious and righteous. Following the workings of her fellow monks only to hear from the goddess herself she was being lied to.

The goddess, feeling her pain, appeared before Kiara and embraced her. Calming her and becoming one with Kiara. The sheer pleasure of the bond enlightened them both and together they set out on a journey of righteousness and to set things correct. No longer could the goddess see her children fall to corruption and death. She promised that as long as she lived none shall harm Kiara or the children of the land again.

Joining the League was a step to set things right. Perhaps here they could finally do some good.

Appearance: Flowing Silver hair and dark purple eyes with flecks of gold in them. She wears a flowing dress that covers her entire body with only her head showing skin. The dress flows behind her not being a full skirt. Her legs completely armored with a form fitting material. Her dress made out of a substance stronger than steel but as flowing and smooth as silk. The color of silver and trimmed in black. She wields a large scythe that moves with deadly force and precision.

Passive - Moons Embrace: Kiara was built for battle. She is strengthened by it. For as long as she is in battle she gains increased armor and magic resistance. Every 2 seconds she gains 1 to armor and magic resistance up to a stack of 10. Every third hit heals her for 10% damage dealt. This effect diminishes quickly when out of combat for more than 5s.

Kiara uses nothing but the Moons power. The Goddesses love sustains her in all things. Each attack landed and taken give Kiara "Moonlight" which she adds to her stores of power for 25 each time. Her power is broken down into bars. Each bar contains 100 Light of the Moon. She has 10 bars to begin with and gains an additional bar each time she levels up. When not in combat she gradually restores her bar at a slower rate than if she was in combat.

Q Moons Touch/Moons Fury: Passive: Each strike against an enemy adds a Mark of the Moon to them up to a max of 5. These add extra damage to Kiara's attacks against that opponent. They last for 10s.

Activate: Kiara activates all the Marks dealing damage to all who bear it. Each mark activated creates an area of effect as well for reduced damage to those around the marked enemy.

Passive Damage Bonus: 5/7/10/13/15 magic damage per mark. Activated Damage: 20/40/60/70/100 (+60% AP. Enemies close to them take half that damage) Cost in Moonlight: 50/100/150/200/250 in Light of the Moon. Cooldown: 10s/9s/8s/7s/6s/5s

W Moons Love: The Goddess basks Kiara in her love. Passive: When out of combat the Goddess heals Kiara Gradually over time while she is not moving using store of Moonlight. Active: When activated the goddess protects her from all damage and crowd controls for a few moments. When activated it Knocks back all enemies around her. If enemies have Marks of the Moon on them they are the detonated.

Passive Heal Rate: 5/10/15/20/25 every second while not in combat. Passive Health cost: 10/20/30/40/50 every second until healed. Active Duration: 3s/4s/5s/6s/7s Active Cost: 25/50/75/100/125 Cooldown: 35s/30s/25s/20s/15s

E Twilight Embrace: Using her Scythe she cleaves through her enemies with tremendous force in a wide arc sending a wave of pure Moonlight through their ranks dealing damage to all in its path. Any who are hit while bearing the Mark of the Moon have the marks detonated and healing Kiara for a percentage.

Damage: 30/50/70/100/120 (+70% AP) Healing on Mark damage: 5/10/15/20/25% damage. Cost in Moonlight: 100/120/130/150/200 Cooldown: 20s/17s/15s/13s/10s

R Decimation of the Moon: Kiara and the Goddess become one. Embracing the Goddess, Kiara becomes her embodiment. Charged with her powers she unleashes hell upon her enemies. She becomes immune to all damage for a few seconds and gains enhanced movement speed and attack speed. She can unleash her abilities at no cost and cooldown. Gaining bonus damage to her attacks. Instantly marks all enemies within a range of 500 units with Marks of the Moon.

Cannot be interrupted and removes all crowd control.

Note: If cast at or below half moonlight then all effects and durations are also halved.

Bonus to Twilight Embrace: 50/100/150 magic damage (+100% AP) Bonus damage to attacks: 30/70/110 (+30% AP) Bonus damage to Q active: 20/30/50 (+30% AP) *Bonus movement speed: 20/30/40% *Bonus attack speed: 10/20/30% Duration: 5s/7s/10s Immune to damage duration: 2s/3s/4s Cost: All stored Moonlight. Cooldown: 120s/110s/100s

This was something I thought of off the top of my head. I would give a picture to how I describe her, but I'm not sure I should use pictures other people have created from google. Otherwise I would use references from there to give you all a good picture. Sorry about that D:

Anyways, tell me what you think! Hopefully I did the skills right (In terms of damage and cooldowns and everything). The main thing is to focus on the purpose of these abilities.

She is an Ability Power focused Tank. Though she is meant as an Assassin too for quick and deadly damage. Please let me know what you think! Let me know if you think she is unique and someone you would use as a champion!

4 Comments

Alaurina2/13/2015, 5:30:36 PM1 votes

Hello there ^^ here my review for your champion

Let start with what i find realy nice about this champion. First i like the concept of the moon. Her ability are all unique and work quite well together, Overall its a nice concept

Though you cant concider her an assassin, she cannot leap in or out of battle. She would be more of a fighter mage

But the number you putted there are, lest say, really over what it should.

With the base health and AD you give her, she is the most powerful and tanky champion ( with no item, no ability). Check other tank or assasin champion to have more general idea of which stat you should give ;)

Passive : The healing part of her passive, does it have cd or no ? becose even Aatrox whihc is know to have a hgh sustain, doesnt heal % of his health ^^, Either change it to a number or add some cd on it ;)

Q : Lest say the passive damage are... over what they should, exemple. you have 200 Ap, and rank 5 : 25 + 60 = 85 true damage each attack. I think you should either reduce the bonus AP from it.

W : May we know how much reduction this ability give?,

E : again with the % heal ^^, which need to build mark on target, 25% healign is quite enormous.

R : from my guess she can be Cced after the stationary phase. The only part i am not sure is that you can do way too much damage in few time, i would advice reducing the damage output of it. else i dont see problem here ^^

Conclusion : While being a nice concept, she is not what we can consider tank (Someone who can peel for other), neither assasin ^^ I would see her as mage or fighter.

If you have sometiem, please review my Champion : Mortis, The Frozen Champion

MultiBuildMaster2/14/2015, 3:03:31 AM1 votes

all right for starters i love the kit however i think the lore needs some changing it seems to conflict slightly with Diana now for the ability's Passive: first part i lover the second part i dont love but dont hate it personally dont see the advantage of using it over mana Q: i think it should deal magic damage on hit because the true damage dosent make scenes thematically and its a bit strong however i see nothing wrong with the active W: Hello OP ability just way to strong even with the massive cool down my suggestion is W: kiara cleanses her self of all cc and dispels the energy around her slowing all enemies marked with marks of the moon by 20/30/40/50/60% for 2 sec and removing them E: Only problem i see here is that the scaling might be a bit too high R: OK this is so OP its not even funny i mean damage and cc immunity as well as increased AS and MS Relay? So my suggestion is R: Kiara gains 30/40/50% and her attacks become aoe cleaves dealing magic damage for the next 10 sec

so that's my thoughts on her, and to elaborate on my suggestions im picturing her as an ap as bruiser also becasue you dont whant to use images from google i did it for you scorce:http://wallpoper.com/images/00/33/64/21/scythe-glasses_00336421.jpg