Fanfiction Idea

WitchQueen Annie·4/14/2017, 10:37:07 PM·1 votes·277 views

I have this idea for a fanfic, now I just want to run it by you guys to see what you think:

Viktor agrees to design a new bridge for the government of Ionia. In exchange, Ionia pays him a large amount of gold and agrees to let him harvest some rare minerals from the forest for his experiments.

Viktor and a small group of robots set up camps and start harvesting.

Xayah doesn't like this and warns Viktor that he must leave the forest alone. Viktor shows her the authorisation papers from the government but Xayah doesn't care.

At night while Viktor is absent, Xayah attacks Viktor's camp and sabotages much of the equipment, taking out some of the robot guards. She believes that Viktor will be forced to leave with the damaged equipment.

However, Viktor returns and using human ingenuity repairs everything, using a combination of improvisation and good use of his surroundings. Soon, the machine camp is working again and the logging/mining resumes.

At which point Xayah and Rakkan show up to stop this. Viktor attempts to explain but Xayah does not listen and starts killing many of Viktor's guards. Viktor himself is forced to fight and but is unable to tag the very fast Vastaya.

Viktor eventually manages to land a Gravity Field.

Saying "My opponents need to be upgraded," he proceeds to fry his enemies with a Chaos Storm, finally ending the reign of terror.

The Epilogue shows Viktor setting up a medical center in Ionia, using new technology he has invented to cure people of ailments while a robot helps him take notes on the progress.

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What do you think? Potentially a good fan fiction?

1 Comments

CobaltTheMadMage4/14/2017, 11:08:19 PM1 votes

One would think with Viktor's reliance on technology and apparent lack of interest in magic he would be the very thing Xayah would not be interested in, since her mission is to stop humans from interfering with the flow of wild magic Vastayah are so dependant on.

Rakan meanwhile would just go full ADD on all the machinery, accidentally dismantling it to the tune of "What's this do? What's that do? Ooh, shiny; what's THIS for?" etc. etc.