@Riot Anybody

I wanted to know if any rioter that enjoys and/or dabbles in the narrative arts would mind criticizing me on my first attempt at fan fiction. I;m not necessarily looking for any kind of fame, but I really enjoy reading all the different stories that league makes. Honestly I'm Inspired by it. So any criticism would be much appreciated.

Quick info on what I wrote. It's a story about the Headhunter skin line. Caitlyn being the main character. They aren't long (being on a small community app) and they aren't too fulfilling, but I'm proud of it nonetheless. I plan to do two more parts to finish it off, hopefully with a really good ending. Hope anyone who reads enjoys. And if anyone else wants to give criticism, feel free to help.

http://www.aminoapps.com/page/league-of-legends/7804989/hunted-a-headhunter-story-part-1

http://www.aminoapps.com/page/league-of-legends/8487996/hunted-a-headhunter-story-part-2