{Champion Creation} Sei, The Telepath

LilStacey87·11/9/2015, 11:20:37 PM·2 votes·897 views

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FIRST AND FOR MOST I WANT TO THANK THE SUMMONER THE DJINN FOR HELPING ME REWORK AND BALANCE MY ABILITIES.

Hey, so I was thinking about leagues champions and I'm kind of a fanatic when it comes to KITs, Niche's and Art, so I decided to see what I could come up with. This is just the moves, Quick and easy. Let me know what you think.

Role: Mage/Fighter

Base Stats: Health 571 – 2016 Attack damage 61 – 116 Health regen. 5.4 – 19.3 Attack speed [*] 0.651 (+0% – 51.0%) Mana 392 – 1276 Armor 24.2 – 87.1 Mana regen. 5.0 – 22.0 Magic res. 32.1 – 53.4 Melee 250 Mov. speed 360

Auto-Attack Animation -Aaryan will throw a whiff punches that hits targets even if they are at 250 range. -Empowered attacks would look like devastating blows that also hit from range (Think Kayle, but with a visual wind-like projectile.)

PASSIVE: -*Aaryan uses a Rage Bar as his resource, in combat Aaryan gains Rage over time, dealing or taking damage further increases Aaryan's rage until full. At full Rage, Aaryan's missle speed and cast animations on Ablities become much faster.

(Ability 1) Q: Telekinetic Grab Aaryan fires a blast of kinetic energy out to 800 range dealing (80 / 120 / 160 / 200 / 240 +75% AP) magic damage, lifting up the 1st enemy stuck and putting a target in Stasis 1 second. While lifted, Aaryan may recast it within the next second to use Telekinetic Throw, OR (E) Telekinetic Slam to be cast in mid-air.

Q: Telekinetic Throw He may reactivate this ability to launch the enemy up to 600 / 700 / 800 / 900 / 1000 units in the direction of the cursor, Enemy champions are thrown only half the distance, targets struck by the enemy unit are knocked aside. But the targets will stop moving upon collision with structures.

The reduction of distance thrown for enemy champions helps mitigate this ability. The scaling toss range makes this MUCH stronger the later in the game you are. You're also rewarded slightly for hitting champions with other champions, but the overall CC duration remains relatively low, since it IS a basic ability). >The thrown unit is considered to be under Forced Action until destination is reached.

COOL DOWN: 14/13/12/11/10 seconds Range: 800 TYPE: Skill-Shot/Skill-Shot

(Ability 2) W: Psychic Assault Aaryan pummels his opponents with a barrage of telekinetic blows. He gains maximum attack speed and 450 bonus range for his next four attacks (or for 3.5 seconds, whichever comes first), each of which deals ( 10 / 20 / 30 / 40 / 50 +30% AP) bonus magic damage and hit in an AoE around the primary target. The last attack deals double the bonus damage (20 / 40 / 30 / 80 / 100 + 60% AP) and slows any targets struck by 99% for .5 seconds.

Cooldown: 15 / 14 / 13 / 12 / 11 seconds Range: 700 (Max) TYPE: Empowered Basic Attacks

(Ability 3) Slam After a brief delay, Aaryan attempts to lift up units in a targeted area and slam them into the ground, dealing 80/110/140/170/200 (+.8 AP) Magic Damage in an AOE and slowing enemies by 50% for 1 second. Minions and monsters around the slam area and including the unit slammed take double damage

COOL DOWN: 6 seconds RANGE: 800 TYPE: AOE with a small delay.

(Ultimate) Calm Metamorphosis Aaryan drains his current rage as he coverts into state of composure, his walk animation is changed into a hovering glide and he gains his Supreme Focus passive even without full rage until empty. While the Rage is draining. Aaryan also gains 30/35/40% Ability Power, Magic Penetration, Movement Speed and a percentage of his missing health based upon how full the Rage Bar was when he activated his Ultimate. Landing abilities in this state also decreases all cooldowns by 3 seconds per strike. COOL DOWN: 80/60/40 seconds COST: All Rage TYPE: Skill-Shot

EXAMPLE BUILD: , ,

SPEECH Champion Select

Mind of Matter!

Movement

I'm going No rush Take your time Patience Calmly At Steady Pace Focus

Casting (Q) Telekinetic GRAB in regular form

Come mere' No escape Hold still Don't move! ...

While Building rage

Your pushing my buttons Don't test me You don't want to see my mad side Your asking for it

Gaining Full Rage

Aaryan's hands will glow and his ability animations will change slightly, he'll put extra "umph" into his attacks and abilities to show he's really starting to be pissed off.

Using Ultimate

Witness my truth This is my reality I will not lose No mercy

Aaryan's hands glow as if the passive were active and there is a healing circle below him as the rage drains. His head is slightly tilled to the side and downwards as if he's had enough play time and his ability animation's seem more calm and finesse, though the missile speed is increased and his delay time on (E) is shorted.

Anyway...

Sei's Energy Regen is doubled every 5 seconds until full or an ability is cast. Every 3rd ability or basic attack on the same target also restores 50 energy and lowers all non-ultimate cooldowns by 50%.

Energy regenerates quickly enough the first bit isn't really necessary unless you've got huge energy costs. It's already 10/second, meaning it only takes 20 seconds to refill the entire pool. All you're really doing is creating a character who spams heavily every 5 seconds or so, which isn't that different from existing characters.

The second part is fine, except that without energy costs and cooldowns it's hard to judge. The cooldown part is probably WAY too powerful though, since you have THREE non-ultimate forms of hard CC already on a manaless champion. That's bad news.

Sei launches a skill shot of telekinetic energy within 700 range. The 1st unit struck will take deal 50/75/100/125/150 (+75% Ability Power) Magic Damage be rooted for 1 second. During the time of the root, Telekinetic Grab will become Telekinetic Throw.

Probably okay. Depends on the exact cooldown and cost, but the ability isn't insanely powerful.

Sei can throw the rooted target withing 450 range of where the target itself is, dealing 15 (+ 10% of the targets Max Health) Magic Damage and slowing them by 40% decaying over 2 seconds if they collide with an enemy minion or small monster. Thrown enemies who collide with terrain or other enemy champions are stunned for 1 second (Including the champion who this unit collided with) and take 50 (+ 100% AP) as physical damage. The thrown unit is considered to be under Forced Action until destination is reached.

This is the problem. If you hit once, you get a second hit (only one hit away from your 50% cooldown reduction) that is long-range forced displacement AND percentile maximum health damage AND AP scaling base damage AND potentially hard CC across multiple targets. Without consuming any sort of limited resource, since energy regenerates so quickly. That's a definitely no. Way too much stuff on this single ability.

Toggle: Sei Locks onto an unit within 1000 range, running into auto-attack target in range will cause Sei to attack them even without attack targeting (right-clicking the target). Also, The third basic attack on the locked target will be empowered, dealing (AD)+(AP) magic damage and increasing Attack Speed by 10% stacking 5 times. -Cost low energy per second and still works with Sei's passive.

...The toggle seems rather pointless. I'm not sure what this does that clicking doesn't already to. The passive is probably fine, although I have no idea how much damage it's supposed to be doing, which is a problem. Finally, HOW does this work with your passive? Does it count as one spell per second? If so, that's insane and has to be cut IMMEDIATELY, since the rest of this guy's moves are both hard CC.

Straightforward and somewhat thematic, I guess. Kinda boring for a telepath though (also, I think you don't mean Telepath -- Telepathy is specifically communication. This kit is closer to Telekinesis, so he might be Sei, the Telekineticist). It's also going to be overpowered if his passive remains the way it is -- there's currently 3 seconds of hard CC on non-ultimate abilities, and each one that hits reduces his cooldowns by 50%. Enemies will NEVER get to move. Ever.

Sei Blast an AOE of Kinetic Energy in a cone, charming all Champions struck for up to 3 seconds. During this Charm effect you can hold (ULT) button to charge up a blast in the same cone area dealing magic damage and Knocking back foes. Power and Knock-back increases the longer the blast is held.

...how on earth does a blast of Kinetic Energy (which is raw force, typically) charm people? The mechanic of this one is also a little weird -- do I press it and hold it? Do I press it, press it AGAIN, and hold it? Make that clear, please.

Anyway, 3 seconds of AoE hard CC on a nuke with more CC attached on a kit that already has repeatedly hard CC is WAY over the top. This is more powerful than some AoE initiator ultimates, and that's an issue.

{Champion Creation} Sei, The Telepath

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Anyway...

Ultimately, though, this ability just isn't interesting to me.