{Champion Concept} Cedric, The Demacian Fury

LilStacey87·10/28/2015, 6:46:15 AM·2 votes·553 views
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LORE

Cedric is a Demacian Chancellor who uses brute force to judge his enemies. Although he follows the commands of Demacian authority he tends to go overboard when things do not rule in his favor. Highly skilled, he seeks to balance the injustice that is starting to plague his home. It's rare to see Cedric step down from his political position but not uncommon to see positive results when he does.

Passive:

Basic attacks and abilities reduce the cool down of other abilities by one second. Also, Cedrics Ultimate is Combo Link, which can only be used after one of his main skills. The amount of charges increase with level as well as the potency.

(Q) Mach Punch

Cedric throws a powerful left hook that deals AD damage and stuns the opponent for 1 second. During impact a circular pulse emits from the targets location and does AOE damage to anyone in the area. Mach Punch applies on-hit effects.

Combo Link- Cedric will attempt to through a gut punch to the same target, reducing the opponents armor for 5 seconds as well as healing himself for 15% or his maximum health.

(W) Exceeding Blows

Passive: Cedric gains % attack speed per attack or damage spell while in combat. The maximum speed caps at a different percentage per rank. For the next 6 seconds Cedric's basic attacks will deal a % of his opponents missing health and damage.

Combo Link- During the activation of Exceeding Blows, Combo Link can be used do a devastating round-house kick, dealing damage and causing grievous wounds.

(E) Acceleration Strike

While out of combat, Cedric will gain movement speed over time. This boost in movement has a cap per rank, however, clicking on an enemy unit will cause Cedric to lunge into battle, dealing a portion of his AD and MS and damage.

Combo Link- If Combo Link is pressed during the dash Cedric's damage will critically strike and Cerdic will gain a damage shield equal to his Max Health

(R) Combo Link

Combo Link holds 4 charges at max rank. At level 1 this ability is available holding only 1 charge, These charges are refreshed ever certain amount of seconds. If a combo link lands, Cedric becomes immune to disables for 3 seconds

4 Comments

Riven Lv 310/28/2015, 7:58:59 AM1 votes

But does he entertain?

AD Fluffy10/28/2015, 10:12:56 AM1 votes

The combo link idea i cool, I like that it gives his abilities extra punch (get it?). Here are my thoughts:

  • Q: I would have to assume this ability is intended as a lower cooldown ability, but DAMN, a two second stun each time? That might need to be lowered a bit to prevent stun locking

  • W: Perhaps having it cap at the attack speed cap is a bit high, especially with the ability to do % missing health

  • E: So much health. So much. You can walk into combat with rank 2 ult (2 combo points?) and get a HUGE shield, walk out, wait a few seconds, walk back in and get one again. His kit feels like a martial artist assassin, but with that shield he loses his weakness

  • R: I really do like the idea. Being able to effect your abilities in different ways allows the player to have to think about what would be best for the situation. It may need to, again, be tuned so that at max rank it's not a faceroll, but a good concept overall


So that's my two cents, take from it what you will, and be excellent to each other!

(Also, everyone has such cool artwork here. I love what you got going on. I wish I could draw, all I got for the Champ Concept I put out was a 7 page backstory :P)

NahDogSolRahn10/28/2015, 3:14:03 PM1 votes

Besides the wording on your post, I think this is very well made.