[CCOS] Avalon, The Heart of Swords

ShatteredSkys·12/25/2015, 7:50:50 AM·6 votes·1,736 views

Avalon, The Heart Of Swords

“So here I stand against it all With a heart of ash, of dreams long gone On a hill of swords, of wishes I’ll never hold But from this hypocrisy something true stands tall A reforged dream, of pain and struggle A rusted desire, of battle and victory A distant dream and a farfetched desire But a real sword.

My heart is made of swords”

-Avalon, The Heart of Swords

Primary Role: Fighter

Secondary Role: Tank

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Resource: None

Short Lore WIP Of all the heroes in Demcia perhaps none other is stranger or more unsung than Avalon, The Broken Sword for one simple reason. He’s a Noxian.

Avalon was born from a family of Noxian refugee who in there desperation thought aid from their greatest enemy. Demacia amused by this granted the family a place to stay on the border of the kingdom, a wild and dangerous place but the family still happily accepted. And it was here in the shadow of the kingdom that Avalon was raised. Here he learned of the great stories of Demacia; stories of heroes in glowing armor vanquishing the tides of evil. But there was one story that Avalon always demanded the storyteller recite, a story of Orlon the founder of Demacia creating a place where anyone who wanted to good was welcome. Avalon always dreamed of being a hero like Orlon though he knew this dream was silly.

When war came and destroyed everything Avalon had known he followed the only thing he had left, the silly dream of his. So he joined the Demacian army and to his delight was handpicked for a special unit of Demacian soldier to learn how to forge swords from mana. Never suspecting it was all but a devious trick to create cheap weapons Avalon put his heart into learning how to forge swords believing it would be his path to becoming a hero. It was, but not had he had suspected.

On one ungodly night everything shattered, Avalon’s Noxian background was made clears and his peers turned against him. On the same night Noxians raided the camp and only Avalon survived the massacre. He may have lived but the dream he kept in his heart was in tatters. How could he become the hero he dreamed of now? Demacia wasn't the place he dreamt it to be, it wasn't a place where anyone could become a hero.

Then the strangest thing occurs, a yordle appears. A yordle with blonde pig tails and an oversized hammer, she consoled Avalon and from her words Avalon found meaning and his dream was once again revived.

Years later he still follows that broken dream, he wanders the lands of Demacia defending towns and fighting off wild creatures, anything to prove that this lowly Noxian can and will become a hero of Demacia.

Long Lore WIP WOuld love feedback though

It has been ten years since that ungodly night but I still remember it like it was yesterday…..

Dawn broke on what was left of the Demacian camp, the morning light shown down on the once proud barracks now splintered and burning. And with the morning the atrocities of the night were revealed. Corpses everywhere, corpses of my fellow soldiers, of nobles, of Noxians, of my teachers, of heroes all littered the ground dying it a dark sickly red. But you could still hear the clanging of swords echo through the ruins as the last two combatants fought for dear life.

Than the ringing stopped, I closed my eyes as tightly as I could and plunged my sword through the man’s heart, arcane steel cutting through the man’s iron armor like a hot knife through butter. I try and keep my eyes closed as the last visages of life fade to nothing. Bile form in my throat and I try to keep it in as the soldier passes on to the next world. Still I don’t want to open my eyes, the soldiers looked so similar to my late father. I couldn’t help but wonder that maybe he was a father as well and that back home he had a son waiting for him just like I was…..

I dismissed the thought and quickly turned around and surveyed what was left of the camp. There I stood on top of what once was a small green hill where we soldiers got together and dreamt of life after the war. Now it was nothing more but a hill of corpses and swords, my swords…. I was the only one who survived that massacre, I knew I should’ve been happy or at least grateful I made it out. But I couldn’t……I couldn’t bring myself to feel that way…… All I felt was despair as my dream came crashing down on me.

It was here my dream died…. It was here that I was branded a Noxian, it was here that everyone condemned me, ridiculed me, and even demanded I be hanged…..

It was that moment during the height of my despair the most explicable thing happened. A yordle appeared! As ridiculous as it sounds a little yordle with blonde pig tails and an oversized hammer came forth though the bodies and swords awkwardly apologizing for my losses. She asked me were there any heroes left.

“They’re all dead….” I responded as I gestured toward the corpses with my bloody sword.

“Oh…” the yordle look at the ground sadly only to quickly raise it again with a glimmer of hope in her eyes “What about you! Yeah! You look like you might be the hero! I think?”

“Me? No…..” “Why not! You look like a hero! I think? I’m not very good at this but you sure do look like a hero!”

I hesitated but I said the words that have condemned me for so long “Because I’m a Noxian…..”

I remember to my surprise she didn’t seem to phased by my confession “How does that matter?

And he …. I knew that story so well I could quote it word for word. It was the story that my dream originated from. But that Demacia is fake, the country that Orlon created doesn’t exist anymore even if it once did.

But did it matter it was fake? It had been fake all this time that Demacia that I dreamed of never existed, did it matter it was now broken? What was stopping me from following this shattered fake dream? It wasn’t much but slowly the despair edges away and hope starts to take its place, a fake hope but hope nonetheless.

The little yordle tried to hand me the hammer but I declined, I wasn’t a hero back then and besides I already had enough swords.

“Umm how many?” the little yordle asked?” She looked pretty confused.

I racked my mind and with a quirky smile that I had never thought I’d be able to make said “Only 2.735 thousand” it really was a stupid thing to say it didn’t even make sense, but it made me laugh like I never laughed before. The little yordle looked even more bewildered and I just couldn’t stop laughing, that silly thing made me happy for some reason and my sorrow vanished.

Ever since that night I’ve stood on top of a hill of sword following that dream. I’ve wandered the lands of Demacia defending towns from invaders and saving citizens from wild beasts. It hasn't been easy, many times I've had townspeople pelt rocks at me as i strolled through a town, I've had knights challenge me demanding my exile from Demacia, and I've even been barred from cities just because I look like a Noxian. But I have had my successes, yesterday as I passed as small farm a little boy ran up to me asking if I was Avalon. Perhaps my dream isn't as far as I thought.

But…. there was one last thing that I wondered on that hill of swords…. A thought that I had never really bothered with. As I stood on that forsaken hill and watched as the morning sun banished away the darkness I wondered why was I so fascinated with becoming a hero? Back then I had no noble desires of seeing a better Demacia nor was I particularly concerned with saving people back then. So why was I so focused on this fake dream? As I searched my heart for answers I found myself standing in a burnt out wasteland, there once was love, happiness, a future here but now it was devoid of anything but the ash of those dreams and swords as far as the eye could see. Brilliant swords of the heroes I had heard stories about, they promised me the victory that I so desired. But I knew they were all fake, that the victory they promised me was nothing but a fantasy. But that didn’t matter, so I reached out toward the nearest one and grabbed its hilt. But before my hand can grip the metal something catches my eye. On top of the hill stood one last sword, a pitiful thing, clearly reforged from shards and rusted from neglect. It promised me a life full of struggle, of being dogged by others, of battles, of happiness, of sadness, but it promised me the victory that I want. As I walked toward it I notice there’s something different about this sword, I couldn’t explain it but there was something….reassuring about this sword….. I reached the sword and grabbed its rusted hilt lifting it from the grip of soot and ash.

It is real.

-Avalon, The Heart of Swords

Base Stats Health: 558.48 (+86 per level) Attack Damage: 56.04 (+3 per level) Attack Speed: 0.625 (+3.5% per level) Movement Speed: 340 Health Regen: 5.34 (+0.5 per level) Armor: 24.376 (+3.2 per level) Magic Resist: 32.1 (+1.25 per level

Kit Passive: Arcane Steel Every time Avalon autoattack an opponent with a W empowered auotoattack applies a mark of Arcane Steel. When two marks are applied Avalon’s next W empowered auto will instead execute the target dealing 5%/10%/15%/20% (+ 3% for every 25 bonus AD) of missing hp as bonus true damage.

Q: Blade Run Cooldown: 16/15.5/14/12.5/11 Range: 650 Active: Avalon clicks on a fully formed sword and dashes to the sword. If an enemy is within 100 range of the sword he slows them for 60% for 2 seconds and deal 25/50/75/100/125 physical damage + .6 of bonus AD. If he has not yet equipped a sword he’ll equip the selected sword upon reaching it.

When dashing to a sword the selected sword cannot be destroyed.

Once Avalon has dashed to a sword he cannot dash to the same sword again for 15 seconds.

W: Hill of Swords Cooldown: 20/18/16/14/12 Range: 800 Active: Avalon clicks within the range of the spell and spawns a sword. This sword forms for 1.5 seconds, if an enemy stands on the sword while it’s forming for .75 seconds it shatters. If the swords fully form Avalon can interact with it with his abilities as well as pick up to empower his auto. He can only wield one sword at a time. Avalon must be within 175 range of a sword to pick it up. Once he AAs with a sword the sword breaks.

For the next six seconds Avalon’s next auto will do an additional 3%/4.5%/6%/7.5%/9% +1% for every 25 bonus AD he builds of the targets total hp as bonus physical damage as well as applies a stack of Arcane Steel.

Avalon stores his swords similarly to how GPs barrels work, he can store up to 1/2/3/4/5 swords at a time however there is a two second cooldown before he can put another one down once the spell is cast.

Avalon can only have 7 swords on the field at a time. Each rank of his ult allows him to have one more.

Avalon's swords will break after three minutes.

An enemy can break his swords by standing within 100 range of it for 1.5 seconds. If Avalon leaves 700 range of a sword for five seconds the swords break instantly when stepped on.

Upon being picked up Avalon’s swords give him a 10% burst of move speed that decays over 1 second.

Every time Avalon autos an enemy champion the cooldown of Hill of Swords is reduced by 3.

Swords cannot be teleported too nor do they grant vision.

E: Flash of Grey Cooldown: 18/16.5/15/13.5/12/10.5 Avalon can only cast this spell when wielding a sword. When cast Avalon raises his sword for .5 seconds, after the delay he spins the sword around him(for those who’ve played smash think of Link’s spin) stunning everyone within a 350 range for 1.25 seconds and dealing 50/75/100/125/150+ 1. bonus AD ratio. All enemy champions hit gain a stack of Arcane Steel. Casting this spell consumes Avalon’s sword. Flash of Steel CAN proc the third mark of Arcane Steel.

Avalon can move while casting Flash of Steel but cannot cast any spells or summoners during the delay.

The cooldown of this ability is not affected by CDR and instead goes down based on how many swords are around Avalon. Each swords grants Avalon 10% CDR on Flash of Steel however is capped at 0/1/2/3/4/5 swords.

R: Ash and Swords Passive: For every sword Avalon is within 1000 range of Avalon gains 6.5 Armor and Magic Resist stacking up to 5/7/10 times.

Active: Avalon channels for 2.5 seconds and summon a ring of 5/6/7 fully formed swords. Range 700 Cooldown 120/100/80

After casting Avalon's swords cannot be broken for the next ten seconds.

General Overview: Unlike most bruisers Avalon is a defensive bruiser who specializes in holding objectives and dissuading dives. Avalon has everything in his kit, massive damage, mobility, survivabiltily, and CC. However his power is restricted by a stationary element, Avalon's forged swords.

Avalon's swords are the key to making him work, they are everything to him and must be maintained if he wants a presence battle. Proper positioning with them is key as placing them improperly cuts Avalon's power and gives the enemy gold. This is especially the case when trading, the cd on Avalon's swords is very high out of combat so he can't stall for eternity but in combat it becomes fairly spammable. But in order for Avalon to trade he must place it in a smart position because any sword he can easily access his opponent can easily access. This means that Avalon must place them in positions he can punish the opponent for or places they can't reach.

But at the same time they can counterplayed by walking on them to destroy them. With proper teamwork Avalon's swords can be completely negated by ccing Avalon and rushing to demolish his swords. But it's risky.

Because of the stationary aspect of Avalon's swords he struggles to go on the offensive and does his best against teams that come to him. On the offensive Avalon cannot use his ult to drop a circle of swords because of the 2.5 channel and any individual sword he drops can be easily focused and destroyed. However this changes when Avalon can set up his swords before hand, this makes him excellent at protecting objectives and creating massive fields of zone.

Quotes

Being Selected: “And so here I’ll stand….”

Being Summoned: “Beautiful battlefields are the worst.” “Sigh… “Steel your hearts, battle is upon us.”

Moving: Hums Demacia Rising “They’ll remember the name Avalon!....Maybe! Haha” “Sorry! Just remembering a silly dream” “Sorry! Let my mind slip!” “Sorry! Just dreaming of the day I meet someone that recognizes me haha!” “…..” “Ever heard of Avalon? Up and rising hero? Popular with the ladies?” Hums “Maybe one day….” “I wonder what pa would’ve thought of me now….”

Attacking: “Sorry….”

Being Attacked: “So be it….” “I didn’t want it to come to this…” “Try me!” “I was trying to not hack you to pieces!” “This’ll only take three swords!”

Casting Hill of Swords: “" So here I stand against it all....." "With a heart of ash...." "...Of dreams long gone..." "With a heart of swords....." "...Of dreams I'll never hold..." "But from the hypocrisy...." "Something true stands tall....." "A rusted desire....." "A broken dream....." "A distant dream a farfetched desire..." "My heart....is made of swords...."

Casting Flash of Grey “Duck.” “Don’t blink.” “ See this sword?” “ Watch your neck.” “Back off!” “See the grey?”

Casting Blade Run "Out of the way!" "Watch your neck." "Get away from that!"

Occasionally when casting Ash and Swords

“So here I stand against it all With a heart of ash, of dreams long gone On a hill of swords, of wishes I’ll never hold But from this hypocrisy something true stands tall A reforged dream, of pain and struggle A rusted desire, of battle and victory A distant dream and a farfetched desire But a real sword."

Jokes:

Taunts: Raises his hand and creates a sword then brings it down to point it directly across from him. If he taunts specific enemies he’ll create a copy of their sword and occasionally critique it.

“You shall not pass!” “Walk away, don’t make me cut you down….” “Stand down, we both know how this ends.”

Riven “Welcome to sword insurance! How may I be of service? There’s no shame in chasing a broken dream. As long as you chase it…… Think about it. “Hmm more of a club than a sword really. But how are you holding this thing?!” “Birds of this broken feather.....Don't flock together...”

Fiora “Amazing craftsmanship as always, only the finest blacksmiths in Valoran could forge such a master piece….or me of course…..”

"Fiora, one day I will put an end to this but until then try to umm be little less .....trigger happy....."

"Peasant to you but at least hero to some."

Yasuo

“Is a sword’s only purpose to shatter?.... Think about it. “Fast as the wind and sharper than bluesteel, but lacks any weight….a true specialists sword.

Tryndamere

“Now if I had a sword like this…..” “…..This weapon……You said you’re fighting for peace aren’t you?”

Garen

“DEMACIA!!!” “How do you spin for so long?! I can hardly do it once!” “So any tips on becoming a legendary hero? Like do 100 sit-ups every day or shout Demacia at the top of your lungs before every battle?” “Huh. Lighter than it looks!”

Poppy: “Poppy as your friend please don’t aim don’t aim for the face!” “ Your hero is closer than you think Poppy….. And no it’s not me. Don’t give me that look!” “ Sigh Orlon you could’ve just said it.......”

Quin “Quinn just.....just don't get your hopes to high about Demacia....Trust me it hurts when it comes crashing down.” “It’s a bird! It’s gyropcopter! It’s…. actually it’s a bird…..” “ Squawk! Sorry just saying hi to Valor!” “So what’s this I hear about you Jarvan and Shyvana?”

Buying items: Doran’s Blade: “The more the merrier! Well that’s what I would normally say.” “A fairly basic weapon but I cannot deny the workmanship.” “This Doran must be a nice fellow.”

Doran's Shield "Simple yet effective." 'I would quite like to meet this Doran fellow. He seems to know know his trade."

“ Hydra: "Exotic." "What an interesting shape......totally practical for combat.......You know I'm being serious right?" "What a curious shape. "Huh. Never seen a sword like this.:

Bloodthirster: “Its hunger is…..Appalling…..” “A blade like this can never be sated…..” “Blood begets blood…” "A butcher's weapon..."

Lord Dominik’s Regard’s “Lord Domink, you have my regards! “Can we fall the giants?”

Mortal Reminder: “There are no immortals on the battlefield….”

Randuin's Omen "A proper warning!" 'Maybe they'll stop running at me like headless chickens now. ....Probably not...." "I won't be dying anytime soon with this!"

Banshee's Veil "Fighting magic with magic!" "So.....Where's this banshee?

Triforce "Strength, agility, and magic. The perfect trinity!" "A sword for every situation!" "You know I always wondered how use these. Where do you hold the third sword? Your mouth? "2736......, 2737......., 2738.........

Black Cleaver "Effective....But it leaves a bad taste....." "Never was one for brutality....." "Sigh......."

Yoummus's Ghostblade "Otherworldly as it's beautiful." "The craftmanship on this sword is....stunning....." "I really wish I can forge a sword like this one day!"

Jokes:

While preforming a joke Avalon will start fooling around, he'll start talking like a stereotypical comic book hero while forging a sword behind his back and whipping it out to finish the joke. However Avalon's magic is based around what he has in his heart and around other it tends to pull what's from their heart which creates some strange situations..... P.S. If you've ever played Fallout 4 imagine him talking like the Silver Shroud.

"It's I! Avalon! The Heart of... Reveals a malformed sword .......horribly crafted swords....."

For it's I, The Heart of..... Reveals a malformed sword .......Cut the tape!"

Joking near Pantheon "MY PROFESSION!? Reveals a loaf of bread "......a baker.....?"

Joking near Garen "Mighty Garen, I have long shadowed your deeds but today I reveal my self as! Reveals a figurine of Katarina "Whaaaa?! Sorry Garen I have no- Why are you turning red?

Garen, today you meet a hero s mighy as you! I am- Reveals a Katarina figurine "Eh? That's weird....HEY WOAH GAREN STO-

Joking near Katarina "VILE ASSASSIN! TODAY YOU MEET YOUR END! FOR I AM- Reveals a figurine of Garen ".........I don't even know so- Why are you turning red!?

"Today will be your last wicked vixen! For I am- Reveals a figurine of Garen (Sarcastically) "......A mighty hero of Demacia...... Stop laughing I am!!"

Joking near Rumble "Mechanized Mence! Feast your eyes on- Reveals a Tristana figurine "......Wait isn't this Poppy?"

Yordle who thinks he's a robot! Feast your eyes on- Reveals a Tristana figurine "......You can keep it if you want.......

Joking near Quinn "Quinn! Today a new force of justice takes flight! It is I- Reveals a Jarvan figurine ".........Errr....well that happened....Valor stop it! I know you're laughing at me!"

"Quinn, a new force of justice takes flight! It is I- Reveals a sword "Wow , I actually pulled it off...Wait... GOD DAMMIT!!!"

Joking near Teemo "Little fluffball do nor fear! For it is I- Reveals an abomination "WHATINTHEBLOODYHELLISTHAT!!!!??!"

Joking near Soraka "Magic goat, fear not for it is I the the Heart of- *Reveals a banana" "....Bananas.....

"Might banana thrower, it is I- *Reveals a banana" "....Yes that's a banana....No I'm not happy to see you..."

Joking near Graves "Outlaw....Today you face..... Reveals a cigar ........................

Animations: Autoattack: Avalon forges a silhouette of his swords in his hand and attacks with it. After every attack the silhouette fades and he makes a new one every time he attacks.

Passive" Every time Avalon applies a mark a small gray sword appears underneath the target.

For the first mark he strikes from the right and the mark appears on the right side.

For he second mark he strikes from the left and the mark appears on the left.

When popping the final mark outside his E he brings the sword overhead with both hands and brings it down on the enemy. The two marks then move toward each other then fade.

Q: Avalon dashes to a sword similar to Yasou's animation.

W: A blue silhouette of a sword forms where Avalon casts the spell. After the silhouette finishes charging it turns into a sword.

E: Avalon raises his current sword with both hands to the right and after a short delay swings it around him.

R: Avalon brings his hands together almost like he's praying and starts chanting. Most of the time it's practically a whisper but occasionally he says his chant out loud. While chanting blue silhouettes form around him and ash starts blowing around him. When the chant ends the swords fully form and the ash blows away from him.

Appearance: Avalon is a middle aged man in his late twenties with messy, jet black hair and dirty brown eyes. He’s rather average looking, he wears an old , battered light leather armor. He has a Demacian iron gauntlet and armguard for his right side but he lost the rest of his old Demacian armor years ago. Despite being a fairly decent swordsman he normally does not carry any weapons.

While alone Avalon tends to be rather silent and slip away into daydreams. With other people he tends to be rather silly and quirky. He always does everything with a quirky smile on his face and can't really be taken seriously. His experiences during the war gave him an appreciation of simple and silly things. He tries to be polite and friendly to other people even those he does'nt like, this why most of his taunts come off kind of like jokes. He'll only act violently against foes he truly hates. His demeanor shifts during battle where he takes a more serious and no nonsense approach. He also dislikes killing, he’ll try and go out of his way to not have to kill someone but he understands that in many cases it’s inevitable.

Relationships

Positive: Poppy Close Friends Ever since their meeting years ago Poppy and Avalon have remained close friends. They often run into each other on their respective quests, getting together to tell each other stories of their adventures or grouping to fight off invaders of Demacia. Avalon holds Poppy in high regards as a great hero while Poppy regards Avalon as a true hero of Demacia. Avalon believes that Poppy is the hero destined to wield Orlon’s hammer and has tried convincing Poppy directly but to no avail. He regards Poppy’s naivety almost as a mixed blessing. Poppy on the other hand thinks that Avalon might be the hero she’s looking for by the always denies being a hero yet and turns down the hammer.

Quinn Associates Quin and Avalon know and respect one anotherand occasionally work together but that is as far as their relationship goes. Quin grew up in the outskirts of Demacia and is familiar with Avalon’s reputation of repelling invaders and protecting farmers. Avalon is impressed and a little jealous of Quin being accepted as a knight of Demacia. He’s however a little worried that one day she’ll witness an event similar to the one which shattered his dream so he gives her warning but nothing more. Avalon does occasionally go to Quin for information on areas that need to be defended and the state of the Demacian court.

Garen /XinZhao - Respect Garen and Xin Zhao are Demacian warriors who are less involved with politics and judge a man by his deeds. Both view Avalon as a hero of Demacia on merit alone. In turn Avalon regards them as Demacia’s greatest heroes though he thinks Garen is a little thick-headed.

Negative: Fiora Enmity Fiora and Avalon dislike one another; Fiora regards Avalon as something worse than peasants and disregards his existence. Avalon on the other hand hates how Fiora kills anyone who as much makes fun of her family. He believes it’s a silly and callous reason to kill someone. He wants to challenge Fiora to stop this but he doesn’t know how to duel and is aware without more than five swords he probably won’t win versus Fiora.

All Noxians: Avalon’s family are Noxian deserters and he is regarded as a traitor by all Noxians and their champions.

In turn Avalon despises the Noxians for what they did to his family and for their wars on Demacia. He does however respect their strength but there are just some of them he just can't stand.

Draven Hatred Avalon finds Draven's execution shows distasteful.... He considers it a mockery of human life and thinks that Draven is a pathetic narcissist. Draven on the other hand doesn't even know Avalon exists.

Sion Hatred Avalon has only heard the rumors of Sion, a weapon of Noxus that has crushed Demacian forts single handily and bloodily. He hates the sheer brutality of Sion's methods and wants to put a stop to him. However he understands that if he tries to help out on the battlefield both sides would most likely kill him. He also has no idea just what Sion is and his knowledge on his is vague at best.

Most Demacians: Avalon is not very popular with most Demacians, his Noxian origins cause a lot of fear and suspicion in many people and he often finds himself barred from towns. And even in those towns that let him in he’s barred from most shops and often finds himself tailed by suspicious town members. However in the outskirts of Demacia on the fringe towns and farming communities he’s more than welcome. In these areas he defends the towns from raiders and monsters and is often regarded as a hero.

Neutral

Riven Even though Avalon mostly wanders the lands of Demacia he sometimes leaves to just see the rest of Runeterra, during his journies he has run in to Riven on occasion. Unlike most Noxians he doesn't hate Riven, he feels that went through a very similar experience losing a belief they once held above all. But Avalon still chases that dream while Riven is more or less still looking for answers. Avalon tries to help Riven by trying to talk to her but even though Avalon won't attack Riven she does not treat him the same way........

Early Game: Avalon is at his weakest during the early game. His bases are pretty low and he's reliant on scaling in order to do damage. During this point in the game he wants to focus mostly on farming and only trade when opportune moments arise. Proper sword placement is key during this point in the game, they can zone out the enemy laner and create safespots where Avalon can farm, they also work as an escape with his Q. However he has to place them smartly, the cap on the swords is fairly low early on and the cooldown is massive when not in combat. Improper sword placement hurts Avalon's early presence and gives the enemy laners a bit of extra gold.

Mid Game This is when Avalon starts to spike, as he gets his AD items Avalon's damage starts to spike heavily with his high AD ratios. This is also the point where fights for dragon and tower start to occur which favor Avalon. He can easily secure objectives by dropping his ultimate and dissuading any dives an forcing the enemy team to slowly pick his swords apart. He's however a tad squishy at this point in the game so he has to play a bit safe.

Late Game This is where Avalon truly shines, at this point he'll have the damage and tankiness to survive and dish out tons of damage. This also where sieges start occurring and fights for Baron start both scenarios where Avalon shines in. At this point Avalon will have the items he needs to both be tanky and deal tons of damage. His W and his passive will allow him to duel virtually anyone, he can lay down the CC with his E, and he gets fair bit of tankiness from his ult passive.

Avalon Works Well With Avalon works best against engage comps and with siege comps. He can dissuade a dive from happening and zone for his siegers. Champions like Heimer and Karthus help him provide even more potent zones while provides support for hyper carries and siegers like Trist, Kog Maw, Xerath, and Ziggs who can fire away from the protection of his swords.

Avalon Struggles Against Mobile early game bullies like Riven and Renekton hard counter Avalon, they are strongest when Avalon is weakest and can easily use their spells to shatter Avalon's swords. He also does very poorly on engage teams as going on the offense is awkward for him. But probably the hardest counters to Avalon is displacement, Avalon wants to fight in his swords but a Ali W or Janna ult can separate him from his swords making him very vulnerable and substantially weaker.

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Starting Items: item 1055 item 2003 item 1054 item 2003 item 1029 item 2003 item 1036 item 2003

Core item 3071 item 3142

Defensive item 3742 item 3102

Offensive item 3748 item 3072 item 3035

Further updates" -dialogues will be updated -updated lore will be added would love some feedback on current lore -Kit will be tuned

Bonus: I have reviewed, http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/BeeGofJ1-ccos-sera-the-lightwing-prodigy http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/uhBHxAxt-champion-concept-reis-the-high-seas-navigator

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LSmaster1612/25/2015, 3:24:53 PM1 votes

Lore: awesome, has he met any other champions aside from poppy? Friends? Enemies? Great job with the lore. Passive: true damage execute at end of combo, makes him do a lot of damage if he can get the autos off. Might be too easy to get off when he has swords nearby. At full build would do pretty close to 70% missing health true damage... May want to lower scaling a bit. How fast do marks go away? Q: mobility, sword defence, combo into e. Simple, useful, good skill. W: damage if he stays in an area. Might get destroyed too easily. Possibly make swords immune if he is in the area. Possibly make the damage buff trigger after 1 second to make the passive only trigger if he can focus a target for a while. This would let you put more damage into the passive then otherwise. Unless you want the passive to be easier to trigger. Looks like 19% max health damage at full build. How many can you have down at a time? How about 3/5/7/9 scaling with ult. This would mean that in the early game he has to choose between his passive and an escape route. E: aoe stun, decent wind up, I don't see any problems with this skill. R: cool skill both gameplay wise and thematically. Passive might be too strong late game if you use the sword destruction change. What do you think of someone charging this in a bush when someone is passing by like a nunu ult? VO: I love it. Might want to move first riven interaction to a joke. Items: why the spirit visage? He has no self heals. Also, would probably want LW to help the max health physical damage against tanks and death's dance for healing off of w procs. Maybe replace BT with dd and make LW at least an offensive option.

Aqua474812/26/2015, 8:54:32 AM1 votes

Senpai this is too good.....

Lore

This is very good concept. I like it alot, mainly because of his cool identity: A noxian born demacian. It really makes him stand out because Riot really doesnt have a champion like that currently.

Clarification: You mention that he lost everything after war came to him, but you never actually said what that was (unless you did and i didnt see it). Im thinking its his parents but if you can you may want to actually say what it is.

Passive:

Oh boy true damage, something it seems like everyone has these days

Sure its pretty powerful, considering that he deals it every 3 auto attacks, but if you think about it the true damage thing thats going around is happening to counter the tank meta (and its working have you seen any sejuani or gragas jungles recently?). His passive is great to make fights against top tanks (like Malphite Sion or Natilus) and make sure that you can actually do damage to them.

Heres the kicker: For non slippery fights and assassins who go top, this could be an annoyance that can turn into a nightmare. Considering the movement Avalon has with his W Q and the slow stun he can get with his Q E he can easily free poke his opponent, which could also turn into a kill

Suggestion: Keep the true damage but change how it applies or put a cooldown on his passive stacking.

Q:

This is like Jarvan IV yeah? Its a good dash for escapes or for engages, making it versatile in its use. Its also pretty great to see the equip sword feature, as this can set up an easy poke combo with W Q E auto attack.

Suggestion Cause Avalon to deal damage to everyone along the path he travels. This gives this ability a bit more damage output. Believe me there are a lot of champions that have some kind of skill that can possibly get out of the range of his stun, so the damage from this can make sure that this skill isnt that useless.

W

The main part of Avalon. its basically a Jarvan IV flag without the vision plus the destroy gold bonus from Gangplank barrels. This skill i cant fund much to change, which is good.

Logical Opinion: Shouldnt you break a sword by auto attacking it instead of standing on it? Unless the sword is super fragile then why would it break by you standing on/by it.

Logical Opinion: Shouldnt the sword deal damage to an enemy if it hits them. I mean its a freaking sword and your telling me it wont hurt anyone if it touches them?

E

Its a good thing i can imagine this because i played smash [slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

Anyway this ability there is nothing wrong. Again like his Q champions with dashes or jumps can possibly get out of range of this, so this iss completely fine. Nothing i need more to say.

R

Sure its boring but it tactically works. It makes sure that you have a lot of swords to use your abilities on in teamfights and such. I dont see any problems with this at all. It doesnt bring much to the table itself but with his other abilities it does a lot.

Quotes

All of these are great quotes, although some of the taunts are more like jokes, which is ok but you may want to make them sound mroe like taunts.

Clarification When you say across from him does that mean like side to side?

Items

Just a question but why spirit visage?


Other than those things i think you did a good job :) cant wait to see what your score it.

P.S. Since you critique so much i was kinda scared to critique yours senpai- i mean ShatteredSkys.

ShatteredSkys12/27/2015, 5:30:36 AM1 votes

Small up date on lore and dialogues. Still thinking about possible ways to tune the kit.

MrSlowDie12/28/2015, 10:08:40 PM1 votes

Hey. I think it's a great idea. it's almost flawless if you ask me.

But if there's something that bugs me is his passive. which deals 30% missing health as true damage. And it can surpass garen's ult + villain debuff if he can achieve 75 bonus AD. Not only he will become a ultimate tank killer, but also destroy squishy fairly well. My suggestion is decrease the damage or make it not dealing true damage. I know that he has a subtle CD of his passive because of his W.

And I have a question for his ult. If he's interrupted when channeling, will it go on full cooldown? If yes, then I think it's too feast and famine. His damage output will greatly decreased if he failed, but he will do a great job on cleaning up. Maybe its cooldown should be halved when interrupted. The feast side will be automatically fixed if you reduce his passive damage as I said above.

Dis The Chris12/29/2015, 6:32:28 AM1 votes

So as a promised review and I hope I'm not too late for you to make changes - here's my thoughts:

Arcane Steel

Every time Avalon autoattack an opponent with a W empowered auotoattack applies a mark of Arcane Steel. When two marks are applied Avalon’s next W empowered auto will instead execute the target dealing 15%/20%/25%/30% (+ 4% for every 25 bonus AD) of missing hp as bonus true damage.


Reliant on Hill of Swords but given that the swords can only be broken through his Flash of Gray - I believe this is fine. To be honest, it is not that hard to proc Arcane Steel provided Avalon's mobility and crowd control power, the only thing you'll need to worry is grabbing an Arcane Sword which is rather easy if I were to play him

Blade Run

Avalon clicks on a fully formed sword and dashes to the sword. If an enemy is within 100 range of the sword he slows them for 60% for 2 seconds and deal 25/50/75/100/125 physical damage + .6 of bonus AD. If he has not yet equipped a sword he’ll equip the selected sword upon reaching it.

When dashing to a sword the selected sword cannot be destroyed.


Nothing much I can actually say about this ability, like majority of his skillset, is reliant on the existence of an Arcane Sword. Given how Arcane Swords have plenty of ways to be destroyed and has lower dash range than the range of Hill of Swords, I can recommend lowering the cooldown, given how it is predictable for players where Avalon can possibly dash. Perhaps allowing Blade Run to be used a 2nd time (similar to Fiora's old Lunge) to provide Avalon increased mobility as well as interesting gameplay. If you would take my suggestion in Hill of Swords, I would rather have you remove the component where the selected sword cannot be destroyed.

Hill of Swords

Avalon clicks within the range of the spell and spawns a sword. This sword forms for 1.5 seconds, if an enemy stands on the sword while it’s forming for .75 seconds it shatters granting 25 gold. If the swords fully form Avalon can interact with it with his abilities as well as pick up to empower his auto. He can only wield one sword at a time. Avalon must be within 175 range of a sword to pick it up.

For the next six seconds Avalon’s next auto will do an additional 3%/4.5%/6%/7.5%/9% +1% for every 25 bonus AD he builds of the targets total hp as bonus physical damage as well as applies a stack of Arcane Steel.

An enemy can break his swords by standing within 100 range of it for 1.5 seconds. If Avalon leaves 700 range of a sword for five seconds the swords break instantly when stepped on. Broken swords grant 15 gold.

Upon being picked up Avalon’s swords give him a 10% burst of move speed that decays over 1 second.

Every time Avalon autos an enemy champion the cooldown of Hill of Swords is reduced by 3.

Swords cannot be teleported too nor do they grant vision.


The backbone of Avalon's entire basic abilities and passive. Given how big the cooldown is, the positioning of Hill of Swords will always have an advantage and disadvantage. Utilizing Hill of Swords beside or behind Avalon will always guarantee an Arcane Sword but will have trouble engaging the enemy. Using near an enemy creates a risk of having it destroyed or making the enemy champion flee knowing that Blade Run will shut them down, also making it quite a disadvantage.

Additionally, the reward vs penalty is not balanced, seeing this is the backbone of Avalon's skillset early on the game or while his Here I Stand is on cooldown, an enemy breaking an Arcane Sword rewards them with Gold and shuts down Avalon's entire gameplay. Or they can just leave it there - wait for 6 seconds and go back to harassing Avalon whose ability is in cooldown. My suggestion is change it into an Ammo-base Ability where Avalon can create up to 3 swords at a time, cooldown doesn't have to change if that's the case but provides Avalon some backup when an enemy champion either destroys his sword or leaves the radius where Avalon can quickly engage.

If you were to change it into an Ammo-base Ability, I would remove the portion where Avalon's basic attacks reduces the cooldown of Hill of Swords as well as the Gold Bounty rewarded as the net gold gained from breaking a sword is something a smart player would not risk in exchange of damage.

Note: Troll players can spam Hill of Swords against enemies, constantly allowing them to gain Gold Bounty by stepping on them. Just a thought.

Flash of Gray

Avalon can only cast this spell when wielding a sword. When cast Avalon raises his sword for .5 seconds, after .5 seconds he spins the sword around him(for those who’ve played smash think of Link’s spin) stunning everyone within a 350 range for 1.25 seconds and dealing 50/75/100/125/150+ 1. bonus AD ratio. All enemy champions hit gain a stack of Arcane Steel. Casting this spell consumes Avalon’s sword. Flash of Steel cannot proc the third mark of Arcane Steel.

Avalon can move while casting Flash of Steel but cannot cast any spells or summoners during the delay.

The cooldown of this ability is not affected by CDR and instead goes down based on how many swords are around Avalon. Each swords grants Avalon 10% CDR on Flash of Steel however is capped at 0/1/2/3/4/5 swords.


Make it easier to read cause I'm not sure if the delay is actually 0.5 seconds or 1 second. Try "After a 1 / 0.5 second delay, Avalon raises his sword and spins...". Other than that, Flash of Gray seems to be the only other way for Avalon to control on how to destroy a sword. The ability itself is fine but how the cooldown works is confusion - it is based on how much swords surrounds Avalon up to a maximum of 50% at 5 swords, but if Avalon were to move around where he can be surrounded by 2 then 1 then 3 swords. How would that apply? While it may look cool on how Avalon can spam Flash of Gray, I find the cooldown mechanic a bit wonky.

Here I Stand

Passive: For every sword Avalon is within 1000 range of Avalon gains 15 Armor and Magic Resist stacking up to 1/3/5 times.

Active: Avalon channels for 2.5 seconds and summon a ring of 5/6/7 fully formed swords.


Apparently, this is the only thing that gives Avalon a constant buff on his Armor and Magic Resistance by placing a sword out of reach of an enemy but within range of the buff. For the Passive portion, I would recommend that the passive portion would be de-activated if Here I Stand is on cooldown to provide a momentary weakness for Avalon.

For the active part, regardless of how many swords Avalon can summon, he can only utilize a majority of maybe 1 or 2 swords before enemies would either start breaking those swords and gaining Gold from destroying a majority of the swords. Provided majority of Avalon's skillset has cooldown that one may consider long to medium, you can pretty much just use Blade Run once then Flash of Gray before wacking people with his swords until he can grab a new one (if there are any remaining ones) and continuing the process.

What I can recommend other than his passive going out once it is on cooldown is to cause all swords currently on the field to be unbreakable for a duration, similar to Illaoi's Leap of Faith wherein it gives Avalon an awesome time to control the battlefield where his swords remain in the field.

Overall

With the current set and playstyle of Avalon, he fits more of than an Assassin / Fighter rather than a bruiser. His kit has no sustain to call him an actual Bruiser, he just straights up destroys people who gets too close or gets caught from his Blade Run or Flash of Gray. He can definitely defend a place, not defensively but offensively as his abilities does not offer a way to negate enemy advances, the crowd control from his Q and E merely opens them up to being butchered which is in NO WAY that it is considered defensively. The passive buff given by Here I Stand does not offer nor grant Avalon the Bruiser status at all, it makes him durable and strong once his ultimate or enough swords are active which allows him to slaughter his enemies while shrugging off incoming damage.

The HeraId12/29/2015, 11:02:08 PM1 votes

Hello! I am a fellow contestant of the CCOS, even though in a review that is irrelevant, that is how I know of your concept.

I am not that good at reviewing lores so I am going to leave that be.

Passive: Arcane Steel Every time Avalon autoattack an opponent with a W empowered auotoattack applies a mark of Arcane Steel. When two marks are applied Avalon’s next W empowered auto will instead execute the target dealing 15%/20%/25%/30% (+ 4% for every 25 bonus AD) of missing hp as bonus true damage.

Alright, I like this ability in concept, but in my opinion, the amount of damage it can do seems ridiculous to me. As an example, if you have 105 bonus AD(as you say a Fighter, so let's say he has item 3748 item 3071 ), at max rank this puppy is going to hitting for 46% of their missing health, other executes that are percentage based are a small percents(8% is common, both elise and Lee have this as a starting point), and that is really enough. If someone is missing, say 1000 health as a tank, that is going to be giving a bonus 460 true dmg.

Be careful about percentages, they can seem small out of context, but once in use, they can become huge.

Alright, so let's move to the W since that is what his Kit appears to revolve around.

W: Hill of Swords Cooldown: 20/18/16/14/12 Range: 800 Active: Avalon clicks within the range of the spell and spawns a sword. This sword forms for 1.5 seconds, if an enemy stands on the sword while it’s forming for .75 seconds it shatters. If the swords fully form Avalon can interact with it with his abilities as well as pick up to empower his auto. He can only wield one sword at a time. Avalon must be within 175 range of a sword to pick it up. Once he AAs with a sword the sword breaks.

For the next six seconds Avalon’s next auto will do an additional 3%/4.5%/6%/7.5%/9% +1% for every 25 bonus AD he builds of the targets total hp as bonus physical damage as well as applies a stack of Arcane Steel.

An enemy can break his swords by standing within 100 range of it for 1.5 seconds. If Avalon leaves 700 range of a sword for five seconds the swords break instantly when stepped on.

Upon being picked up Avalon’s swords give him a 10% burst of move speed that decays over 1 second.

Every time Avalon autos an enemy champion the cooldown of Hill of Swords is reduced by 3.

Swords cannot be teleported too nor do they grant vision.

Alright, first with swords, how long can they last at max?

Alright, I like this ability quite a bit, the % dmg seems fine, with the same setup as before are dealing 13% bonus physical damage with an auto, however the CD seems short to me for that. I would say hold it at the 14, maybe up to 15 seconds, and have autos in general reduce the cooldown by a small amount(.2/.5/.75?). In team fight, where fighting is frantic and constant, you are prolly going to get your W off at least 4 times with the way it currently is, which would end up being around 39% max HP dmg, and 46% Missing HP True Dmg. Scales up pretty fast with how quick you can get it back up.

My suggestion is just give it a high base, and leave it there, but have it get reduced on all autos.

E: Flash of Grey Cooldown: 18/16.5/15/13.5/12/10.5 Avalon can only cast this spell when wielding a sword. When cast Avalon raises his sword for .5 seconds, after the delay he spins the sword around him(for those who’ve played smash think of Link’s spin) stunning everyone within a 350 range for 1.25 seconds and dealing 50/75/100/125/150+ 1. bonus AD ratio. All enemy champions hit gain a stack of Arcane Steel. Casting this spell consumes Avalon’s sword. Flash of Steel CAN proc the third mark of Arcane Steel.

Avalon can move while casting Flash of Steel but cannot cast any spells or summoners during the delay.

The cooldown of this ability is not affected by CDR and instead goes down based on how many swords are around Avalon. Each swords grants Avalon 10% CDR on Flash of Steel however is capped at 0/1/2/3/4/5 swords.

Solid ability, I like it, requires set quite a bit of setup to be extremely strong, and is in general a great ability in my opinion.

No real feedback here since he needs to have a lot of time in an area for it to be the strongest.

Q: Blade Run Cooldown: 15/13/11/9/7 Range: 650 Active: Avalon clicks on a fully formed sword and dashes to the sword. If an enemy is within 100 range of the sword he slows them for 60% for 2 seconds and deal 25/50/75/100/125 physical damage + .6 of bonus AD. If he has not yet equipped a sword he’ll equip the selected sword upon reaching it.

When dashing to a sword the selected sword cannot be destroyed.

Alright, fine ability here, not a whole to say, other than that with CDR and getting set up before a fight, I really don't think anyone is going to catch him. This ability makes me seem him more as a high dps bruiser, with assassin characteristics, then a bruiser, tank.

I would say up the CD on it, simply because at max cdr he turns into someone having yas's mobility, but a hell of a lot tankier.

R: Ash and Swords Passive: For every sword Avalon is within 1000 range of Avalon gains 12.5 Armor and Magic Resist stacking up to 3/5/7 times.

Active: Avalon channels for 2.5 seconds and summon a ring of 5/6/7 fully formed swords. Range 700 Cooldown 120/100/80

Alright, he are my concerns. At max rank, this ability is giving you a hefty 87.5(would round to 88) armor and magic resist. If he sets this up properly, he basically becomes really, unstoppable in that area, because his E will be sitting on a five second CD, and seven places for him to dash to for his Q. At full CDR, he gains a huge amount of power. I feel that this ability is the maker or breaker of this champion, because of the passive it gives, and how his kit works.

All of his abilities alone are fine in my opinion, but when paired with inherent tankiness, a huge amount of mobility in that area, I think that things could get broken quickly. I feel that the CDs on his abilities that directly interact with the blades need to be higher because of this ability, and yes, it does require a channel, but it will turn into the nightmare that fiddle has become to balance, because unless the other team has quite bit a vision, they are going to get destroyed by the sheer power this ability gives him.

Overall Kit: I like it, but I do think it needs some rebalancing because of the CDs it has, and the power that his ult gives him.

I love the concept, Quotes are nice for sure.

Best of luck, God Bless,

Rikir

Searedstone12/31/2015, 7:00:57 PM1 votes

"WHATINTHEBLOODYHELLISTHAT!!!!??!"

Got me rofl-ing!

Nice work dude

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