Champion Concept: Aevin, the Void -Touched Yordle (AP assassin/Jungler)

AnonymousEnigma·4/21/2015, 7:26:20 PM·2 votes·605 views

UPDATED This is my first Champion Concept, so sorry if it sucks :( Anyway, here goes Appearance: Aevin is very short, with a melee range of 150. He kind of looks like the smaller heartless from Kingdom Hearts. He wears a hood like Redeemed Riven. Alignment: Bandle City/Neutral Birthplace: Bandle City Lore: Aevin was once a small and intelligent yordle, often picked on for his quiet nature and intense curiosity for magic. He often sought out tutelage from other magically-inclined yordles, but was shunned for his submissiveness, and became depressed and gloomy over time. He became friends with other yordles such as he, and often admired their lack of dependence on magic. One day, as Aevin was walking through the woods, he came across a strange-looking and childish yordle. The yordle told him of a place called the Glade, where creativity and curiosity were admired rather than demeaned. Aevin immediately set off to find this place. He searched all of Runeterra, eventually making it to Shurima. In Shurima, as his hunger for finding the Glade grew, he came upon a collapsed city with a portal in it's center. He sensed darkness in it, but in his sadness and need for acceptance he stepped into it, thinking that it was a portal to the Glade. What he entered was not the Glade- It was the void. He saw many horrible things, and slowly became corrupted by dark magics. just as his final spark of light was about to die, he remebered his purpose to find the Glade and also realized that he needed to warn the people of Runeterra of the oncoming threat. With all of his will, he picked himself up and fought through the darkness, and eventually fond a way back home. He was not, however, unchanged. Aevin's submissive nature was replaced by aggression (especially towards the Void), and his pursuit of magics was twisted into a fascination with the dark arts. When Aevin went to warn others, however, they saw him and his warped appearance as an abomination. Aevin sought out the only place he could make a difference, and where all manners of strange people are accepted - the League of Legends. Friends: Rumble, Amumu, Gnar, Kassadin Enemies: Cho'Gath, Rek'Sai, Kha'Zix, Vel'Koz, Kog'Maw, and Malzahar Quotes:

Selection: Will you fight the Void with me, Summoner?

Movement: As you wish On my way For Bandle City! One day... I will find acceptance I must move forward Through the darkness Darkness cannot shackle me I must remember my past Onward As much as it takes I will prevail The darkness hides abominations

Attacking: They will pay for turning me into... this My resolve will not waver To battle! Even my shade can defeat you I can control the darkness Invaders shall not be shown mercy Return to where you came The ends justify the means I do what is necessary Darkness can be anywhere

Taunt: I have proven my will - have you? The Void showed me your defeat.

Joke: The speed of light... what about the speed of darkness? The hood gives me shade... oh wait...

Stats: 350 (+80 per level) health 30 (+.5 per level) armor 20 (+ .4 per level) magic resistance 345 movespeed .70 (+ .01 per level) attack speed 350 (+ 30 per level) mana

Abilities:

Passive: Darktouched When Aevin casts a spell, he gains a stack of Darktouched. At 4 stacks, he stealth for .5/1/1.5 seconds, and when he reappears he does 50 (+20xlevel) physical damage to all enemies in an AoE.

Q: Voidslice Aevin strikes forward with darkness, dealing 60/90/120/150/180 (+.5 AP) damage in a short ranged projectile. Enemies in melee range take 50% extra damage Cost: 40/50/60/70/80 mana Cooldown: 7/6.5/6/5.5/5

W: Siphon Passive: Aevin's spells heal him for 1% of his missing health, and deal the same amount in bonus magic damage Active: Aevin marks the closest enemy in a 300 range radius and deals 60/100/140/180/220 (+.7 ap). after 1 second, Aevin can reactivate the ability, healing allies in a short range of the marked champion for 25% of the damage dealt. The heal increases the longer the mark is left, for a max of 50% damage dealt. Cooldown: 15 seconds Cost: 50/55/60/65/70 mana

E: Through the Veil Aevin enters the void, gaining 30% (+.1% per 2 ap) movespeed, but is unable to deal damage, and taking 50%reduced damage. After 1 second, he can reemerge at target location in a large radius, however, the longer he is in stasis the shorter the range of the dash. He can pass through some walls, but not many.

Cost: 100 mana (all ranks) Cooldown: 25/24/23/22/21

Cost: 70/80/90/100/110 mana

R: Voidshroud Aevin gains an aura of darkness and gains max stacks of Darktouched for 3 seconds dealing 100/150/200 magic damage per second (+.25 ap) to any champions in range, and gains 30 mr/armor for the duration. Aevin cannot use abilities during the duration, and can reactivate it at any time to stop it. Cooldown: 120/100/80 seconds Cost: 100 (all ranks)

What do you guys think?

4 Comments

warwiller4/21/2015, 7:56:45 PM1 votes

The story was very good up until the point where he remembered his purpose just as he was about to be consumed by darkness then becoming un-consumed by darkness just because he had a touchy moment. ANd then the joining the league to reach his goal bit. I hate it when Riot does that. As if the league is the only hope for everyone. Sort of.

The name is good, kind of. But it needs work.

Everything after that is bad

The action quotes are bare of any quality. I think one of the things they should do is give a sense of his character, personality, motivation, etc. but it must be indirect. He cant say "I shall destroy all beings of the void!" and that proves he hates the void... how about soemthing liek "darkness dwells around corners" whech indicates he he had had some dark experience of some kind.

The spells are aboit the same.

So far, this is the best champion concept ive ever seen.

TheCreatorGuy4/21/2015, 9:45:35 PM1 votes

This post looks very thorough, however I would like to point out a few things about how balanced he looks. Aevin seems to have very little counterplay, especially in a solo lane environment. Just think about it: He stasis's in to engage the enemy (darktouched 1), then e's, giving them NO vision of you(darktouched 2), then you qto deal damage, to stealth, then run away with darktouched stack 3. Also, his q does literally 360 damage in melee range, which wouldn't be hard to do considering your e. This doesn't include the 1.05 ap ratio, that's bigger than veigar's ULT, on a 5 second cd!

toxicpanda364/22/2015, 12:36:46 AM1 votes

Mabye you should have him meeting some of his enemies in the void and how they impacted him. So that you can have a secret taunt/joke to that champ.