I Just Used League in a Poem for my Lady ;-)

Mister Modesty·Apr 17, 2016·3 votes·542 views

Should I compare us to League? I'm Support, you're ADC. I have the strength to hold our tower. But to move forward I need your power.

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RalanthaApr 18, 20162 votes

That's awesome :D My husband and I are much more corny. Usually... "Roses are red, the dogs love napping, I love you like Caitlyn loves trapping." "Roses are red, so are tomatoes. I love you like Janna loves throwing tornadoes."

BLACK REALM GODApr 17, 20161 votes

...LMAO... guy... this is the equivalent of roses are red violets are blue... come on man! put more effort into it. at least make it a sonnet or something. you're on par with 6th grade limericks and haikus right now. she means a lot to you right? then show her! put some effort into this poetry!

Mister ModestyApr 17, 20162 votes

This isn't the whole poem. It's just the part that uses League.

The world can't break me I can stand strong And nothing can take me After all I am a man But that's all I am And I've faced the world so long I know the way Help me take the steps We'll get there someday. You won't be alone, And you'll feel no pain. Because I will be there to shield you From abyssal blizzards and Hellfire rain. Let me compare it to League I'm Support, you're ADC I can keep anyone from taking our tower But to move forward- I need your power. And I can stand strong, I'm going nowhere Because I need your momentum To really get anywhere When we cross the storm, you will see When the sun smiles on you and me The effort is worth it, The path was true. The only one for me is you.

BLACK REALM GODApr 17, 20161 votes

meh, im not impressed with your form, but at least you can rhyme and such. it's sweet, but you're no poet. however im sure it will win her heart if she's a huge league fan and not into poetry too much. you should check out some of the formats of poetry and find one that suits you. sonnets ballads etc. and write something really classy. that will definitely impress someone! i give you an A+ for effort and a B- for format. that being said - poetry doesnt need form. it's about expression. although i'd rather have a copy of the mona lisa any day over a bunch of original paint splatters

Mister ModestyApr 17, 20161 votes

It's free-style. I hate iambic pentameter because it sounds monotonous. I dislike haikou for the same reason. Typical rhyme patterns are predictable ABAB AABB ABCCBA etc.

I just went from the heart.

BLACK REALM GODApr 18, 20161 votes

I'm with you there totally. Anyway good job. I hope she likes it.