Possible Rework idea for miss fortune

well the title should give people a proper idea about what im about to say you see i was reading comments on the board when i saw someone propose a really good idea part of this "new" kit is inspired from his idea though i don't remember the summoner name ok so first her passive should be "Shock and Aww"-every basic attack deal 10 magic damage plus 6% total ad as magic damage stacking up to 5 times on a single target damaging targets with max stacks lets her fire her second gun to deal half her regular auto attack damage and apply on hit effects such as lifesteal and crit i feel like this would be a good passive for her since her guns are very special to her and a part of her plus she's a wild bounty hunter so she should go crazy fire another round to finish them off stacks fall off one by one every .5 seconds now her Q i feel like double up is a fine spell but instead of that stupid ap ratio since lets be real here we don't need another ap adc we already have as the hybrid ad ap adc and as the adc that can be a mage miss fortune will fire 2 bullets in front of her like normal a second bullet will hit a target behind the first prioritizing champions and dealing 150% damage if the first target is killed now here is the change this will apply on hit effects even crit and if it there are no other targets to hit behind the target takes 150% damage instead of the 100% this ability cannot hit stealthed targets on the second shot it scales with 70% of her total ad W strut/Charm passively gains 25/26/27/28/29/30 bonus movement speed, which increases by 8 each second up to a maximum of 70/75/80/85/90 bonus movement speed while not taking non-periodic damage also minion damage does not target her when she activates this spell she stuns all units within melee range of her for 1 second is depicted as a sexy and highly charismatic champion well why not give her that? yet still have some counter play as since it means she needs to be in melee range this spell serves as one of her only escape tool now for her E bounty hunter passively her auto attacks grant her 15% attack speed stacking up to 4 times for a total of 60% bonus attack speed she lose 1 stack every 1 second when she stops auto attacking after 3 seconds and she gains 10% movement speed when moving towards an enemy champion when she activates this ability she gains her strut passive back if it was removed and movement speed reducing effects are reduced by 50% for 3 seconds Finally her ult Bullet time she fires in wide cone 9/10/15 rounds of bullets dealing 50/100/125 plus 100% of her bonus ad and passively her auto attacks and damaging spells ignore 5% of the target's armor this is all the changes i can think of that can really make her shine