(Reworked Champion Concept) Onani, The Mechanized Sharpshooter

Crowe Stalker·1/13/2014, 3:32:54 AM·7 votes·1,663 views

(First Major Edit: Skin Concept Conceived: Red Zone Onani)

Visual Concept: Like the attached, except maybe with a more human head. But still one giant faceplate that could be a glowing eye. It's rifle uses lasers, which might change color with alternate skins.

Lore: A nameless and faceless character in Zaun's history, the only few people that knew him tell cryptic tales of a shot that saved their lives or some person's head abruptly exploding. What IS known for certain was he was, in fact, human. He was a high quality Hitman, killing nearly anyone and everyone he was asked to kill in the city-state area. Oddly, he never took jobs against Piltover, but he did not have a particular love for them... Some theorize he was born there, others theorize he had a thing for the Sheriff of Piltover, while others simply believe he was comfortable and familiar with the Zaun City-State area, and didn't have much need to journey elsewhere.

The only one who could claim to know how better than anyone else is Viktor. Recently, his skills had been falling off. Provided, his targets still died, but he was starting to miss his shots or barely hit them: Age was taking the professional, and he had no desire to quit. He approached the Machine Herald for replacement parts over time, until he woke up one day and decided to be rebuilt from the ground-up.

Now, the sharpshooter has forgotten all about his professional career, seeking only to bring forth the cause of the Glorious Evolution that has proven to be his Salvation. He was eventually introduced by Viktor into the League, where he quickly became comfortable, continuing to hone it's already fine craft.

Passive: Unseen Mobility: Whenever Onani is out of sight, he's out of mind. He benefits from +10% movement speed when not in the enemy's vision (Special: While a friendly Nocturne 's Paranoia is active, only enemy champions vision can deny him this bonus.)

Q: High-Impact Bolt - Onani focuses and fires in a straight line (800 units forward, 50 across) dealing (150/200/250/300/350 +50% AD) damage. All damaged targets suffer on-hit effects. Basic Attacks will reduce the cooldown by 1 second (does not apply to item 3085) (10 second cooldown, 50/60/70/80/90 mana cost)

W: Disruption - Onani fires a non-lethal blast at the target champion's head, dealing (100/125/150/175/200 +25% AD) damage and stunning the target for (/1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2) seconds. (12 second cooldown, 800 range, 60/70/80/90/100 mana cost)

E: Stealth Field - Onani has been given prototype stealth technology by Viktor. He may vanish for 3 seconds, during which Unseen Mobility is activated (whether they can still see him or not) and any attacks made deal (+20%/40%/60%/80%/100%) additional damage. (50 mana cost, 20 second cooldown)

R: Extermination Directive- Onani activates an experimental mode called Extermination Directive. While Extermination Directive is active, Onani gains Heat Detection, ignoring all Stealth, gains an additional (+10%/15%/20%) scaling on Attack Damage, and gains Unseen Mobility (which will remain for the duration of Extermination Directive) During Extermination Directive, Onani may only attack Enemy Champions or the enemy Nexus. If you score an Assist or a Kill on an enemy Champion, all other cooldowns are reset. (120/90/60 second cooldown, 100 mana cost, lasts 10 seconds) (Ideally, during this his vision will change similar to that of Rengar during Thrill of the Hunt.)

Stats: HP: 400 (+80)

HP Regen: 5 (+0.5)

Armor: 12 (+3)

Magic Resist: 30 (+1)

Attack Speed: 0.7 (+3%)

Attack Damage: 50 (+3)

Attack Range: 600

Movement Speed: 340

Overview: Onani is a wandering assassin who would be most comfortable in Mid Lane or Bot Lane (Top Lane is possible, but ill-advised) His kit is designed around harassing or picking off lone enemies (though nowhere near as effectively as say Nocturne or Khazix) He is primarily attack damage, with some viability to movement speed and attack speed. He is meant to be an aggressive poker when in lane, being sure to punish any attempt at gathering creep score with a hard hit from High-Caliber Shot. Champions with strong pokes early-game (AhriCaitlynTristana) can reasonably out-trade him early on but units with low health or dependent on melee attacks will have a hard time against him. Tanky Champions may also be a bit more difficult, but careful plays will make it little more than a bother you can't force them back as easily.

Early Game: Mid-Lane or Bot lane you want to angle yourself to get as many minions as possible while still trying to poke out your enemy laners. be sure to ward the brush on bot lane unless you want to get blind-sided (your Stealth Field will only protect you from so much...) and for Mid, just be careful: You may have mobility on your side, but you aren't able to escape every gank because of it. If you are winning in lane, be sure to clear out the next wave and then move to help another lane that may need assistance or help your jungler with his/her/it's gank. You are most vulnerable to shutdowns right about now, so play cautiously.

Mid game: Assuming you won your lane, Mid-game should be pretty good. If not, try staying under your turrets and farming a bit. item 3117 stacks extremely well with your passive (If they aren't warding the jungle, you can establish Global Presence quite easily.) Try to keep the lanes cleared out to ensure the enemy team is kept on the defensive. In a Team Fight, your job is to kill anything that's not the tank and kill it fast. If your team has any problems keeping up with one champion, a well placed Disruption can (and will) make many ganks more viable. Don't be afraid to use your Stealth Field if things get out of hand.

End game: Try to encourage your team to set traps: Try to bait Baron or engage in what would be a 4v5 while attempting to stay behind enemy lines. If you do this right, an Extermination Directive will quickly allow you to kill off most of their team very quickly from the flank before they even realize they are losing. Always be sure to focus down Supports, Assassins and ADCs primarily (although low-health targets are also a good idea) If a team fight is not an imminent threat, clear off any and all lane minions on their side and keep hard pressure on as many lanes as possible.

Dialogue - Champion Select: 'Eliminate All Resistance.'

Move Dialogue - 'Moving to position.' 'Deploying.' 'Command accepted, moving.' 'Parameters Set.'

Attack/Engage Dialogue: 'Target Confirmed.' 'They'll never see it coming!' 'Just another dead Fleshsack/Meatbag.'

Joke Dialogue: 'Error 404: Teemo Not Found.' 'Processing... Processing...' Various calculating and printer noises 'I have a message for you!'

Flirt Dialogue: 'If I was still Human, I would attempt to initiate mating protocols with you.' (This could possibly be an alternative joke to any female, not just Caitlyn)

Taunt Dialogue: 'Robots don't break, you do.' 'If I had a body, I'd spit at you.' Special Taunt - Jayce: 'You cannot stop the coming Evolution anymore than you can stop your bodily decay.' Special Taunt - Caitlyn: 'Which one's Bigger, Mine or Yours?'

Special Dialogue - Interrupting a Recall/Teleport: 'You aren't going anywhere!' 'No one escapes my sights!'

Skin Concept: Red Zone Onani - Red Zone Onani was a concept I came up with the afternoon after I submitted the thread, and I don't have the heart to try to change Onani around too much. Red Zone Onani would be a sort of cross between the protagonist of Crysis 3 and a Spectre from Starcraft 2. It would conceptually be him shortly before the final change to a robot (heavily augmented, but still human.) Like the Spectre, his mask is up most of the time, but comes down and covers his face whenever he activates Extermination Directive. Also, when Extermination Directive is active, all enemy Champions gain a visual mark similar to Mecha Kha'zix's Isolation mark, but instead it will glow red.

Alternative Dialogue

Move Dialogue: 'I'm on the way.' 'Time to move out.' 'Heading there now.' 'Yea Yea, I'm going.' (Special Dialogue if moving into brush) 'Let's set up an Ambush!' 'Maybe we should shoot in that first?'

Attack: 'They'll never know what hit them!' 'Another Day, another body.' 'Leave no witnesses!' 'Execute.'

Joke Dialogue: 'Hm... Do you think this suit goes with my Sniper Rifle?' Special Joke - Ally Caitlyn: 'You aim high, I aim low?' 'It's a pleasure Sheriff, you can consider me Deputy.'

Taunt Dialogue: 'You wanna see what your brains look like?' Special Taunt - Jayce: 'Viktor'll pay big for your body.' Special Taunt - Caitlyn: 'I gotta kill you now, no hard feelings, right?'

13 Comments

Honeysack1/13/2014, 6:03:34 AM3 votes

Fleshsack. You sir have an upvote.

Eltaraa1/13/2014, 7:37:13 PM2 votes

How is Disruption non lethal if it's doing damage? Any Damage can be lethal.

Gondlink1/13/2014, 9:37:41 PM2 votes

you should be a worker at riot you are great at this! i am just amazed!

The7thKing1/20/2014, 5:12:33 AM2 votes

:D check out majora idea, i have a feeling him and onani could be related somehow, Aatrox i approve of this. item 3198 for the revovlution! Viktor

New Morde1/14/2014, 12:39:07 AM2 votes

I feel like his base movement speed should be a little higher like 345 or 350. Sure his passive would make him the fastest non-booted champion at only 340 but he is a fully mechanized thing. He should be a little faster.Hecarim

Sam98011/14/2014, 2:28:02 AM2 votes

MAKE THIS RIOT

Maple Syrüp1/13/2014, 10:24:58 PM1 votes

Is there already some pictures out for onani? or the before reworked onani?

KILLMYCOW1/13/2014, 8:40:13 AM1 votes

Karthus