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[Character Concept] - Maverick, The Unseen

Xisled95·12/10/2013, 10:35:00 PM·2 votes·899 views
  • Didn't know Maverick was already taken O_o sorry!!! Revised name: Valerian, The Unseen

Lore: Hailing from the law enforcement department of Demacia, Valerian was a special ops commando who was initially hired to track the worst of criminals in Valoran. His face is unknown; his entire body is covered head to toe in a combat suit. However, after apprehending an absurd number of criminals in a short time, it was increasingly clear that Maverick, armed with superhuman psionic ability, was more than just a normal human. As such, he was inducted into the League as a marksman and assassin.

Traits: High ad and ap combo, low hp, medium to high difficulty

Passive - Psionic awareness: Valerian will reveal enemy champions that have less than 50% hp within 1000 range of him for one second. Cannot reveal the same champion more than once in 100 seconds. Has a 30 second cooldown.

Q - .900 Caliber Anti-personnel Round: Valerian fires his Canister Precision rifle in a specific firing mode, dealing 90 damage +15/20/20/20. Has a 9 second cooldown and scales with AD (+8%). Range: 475

W - Psionic assault: Valerian uses his mind to attack the target enemy champion, dealing 50 damage + 15/15/15/15 and stunning the target for 2 seconds. Has a 12 second cooldown and scales with AP (+10%). Range: 375

E - Personnel cloaking: Valerian operates his combat suit's cloaking ability, making him invisible and untargetable but still subject to CC spells, AOE spells and chain damage spells. Stunning this unit will reveal Valerian for the duration of the stun. While cloaked Valerian moves 5% faster but cannot attack, and using this ability costs 5% of total mana every 5 seconds. Has a 7 second cooldown upon deactivation and scales with AP.

R - Calldown Nuke: Valerian unleashes a classified level ordinance on his enemy target, dealing 350 + 50/50/50 damage in a circle (diameter of 400 units) and dealing another 50 true damage over 3 seconds. The over-time damage does not scale with AD nor AP, but the impact damage scales slightly with AD (+5%). Casting time is 1.5 seconds and a large red circle at the target location will appear. Has a 125 second cooldown. Range: 400

Starting stats: HP: ~460 Mana: ~400 Basic damage: ~60

Thoughts?

9 Comments

DubleDice12/10/2013, 10:58:23 PM1 votes

Good thought and layout, but your forgetting key elements. For example: what about his basic attack, it really isnt helpful to a champ, to not have a basic.

Also his E sound like a great idea, but 5% of his total man is a alot, and sounds like a massive mana drainer. Make it more simple like 2% or 1%.

His Passive is kinda OP and is the same idea as an ULT, 1000 range is like 25% of the map. and 30 second cooldown would be a little low for this ability because their are ults that can attack champs at a large radius, your basically giving your team Aimbot.

The name is already taken as well, Maverick the king of the Void.

Also his W doesnt really make sense. He uses his mind, that really isnt something a Commando unit would do XD. It would make sense if he shot a taser or something, but his mind XD cmon.

Overal its a great process, and I recommend you take a look at my Concept as well, because their both great idea's, but mine has alot of time put into it, and you might be able to get a good idea out of it.

Sorry I typed so much XD!!!Aatrox

DubleDice12/10/2013, 10:59:08 PM1 votes

Here is the link to my post http://community.na.leagueoflegends.com/c/ideas/85PTLuoj-character-concept-acarnius-dictator-of-darkness-must-see-editedx2

DubleDice12/10/2013, 11:01:33 PM1 votes

Ill thumbs your up because I feel like this could be a good character. Just need work.

Chosen Chozo12/11/2013, 1:39:33 AM1 votes

I kinda like it so far, but there's a few things I'm confused about. A lot of his abilities don't scale that well, and I'm not sure if you wanted that to be the case, since he doesn't have any steroids like most ADC's (I'm assuming he's an ADC).

It sort of looks like this champ is an ADC/assassin hybrid, in the same realm as Quinn or Twitch. Is that what you're trying to make? It seems like it could work if his abilities scaled really well, like Lucian's or Graves. Right now though, 8% off of either bonus or total AD isn't much.

His ult's a bit strong and seems out of place for the kind of character you want (a big AoE attack that's good in a team fight doesn't mesh well with an assassin's kit generally). Maybe some kind of long range fast moving shot, like Jinx's W but longer range and much more damaging?

Lazy Lambo12/11/2013, 2:50:12 AM1 votes

i just think that base mana* is kinda high xD

Hokage Dattebayo12/11/2013, 3:57:37 AM1 votes

I think the passive is a problem. the idea of revealing units to hunt them down is good but the 1000 range is a little short. a warwick e passive is infinite gives movement spd and has a range of about 4700. Not to mention the range on the other abilities.