New Amumu long lore found on PBE

darkdill··27 votes·8,214 views

Source: http://www.surrenderat20.net/2014/12/1217-pbe-update.html


"Greed and Tears

"The gods were angry, and shook the land. Cracks rent the earth," said old Khaldun, his crag-featured face lit by firelight. "It was into one of these fissures that a young man ventured. He found an opening; the entrance to a tomb, hidden for the Jackal knows how long. The man had little ones to feed and a wife to please, and so he ventured in, lured by opportunity."

Adults and children alike crowded in close to hear the old storyteller's words. They were all weary - they had traveled far that day, and the Shuriman sun had been unrelenting - but Khaldun's tales were a rare treat. They drew their cloaks tight around their shoulders against the chill of the night and leaned in.

"The air was cool in the tomb, a merciful relief from the scorching heat outside. The young man lit a torch. Its light made shadows dance before him. He stepped cautiously, wary of traps. He was poor, but he was no fool.

"The walls inside were smooth obsidian and carved with ancient writings and images. He could not read - he was a simple man - but he studied the images.

"He saw a boy prince, sitting cross-legged upon a sun disk borne by a team of servants, a beaming smile upon his face. Chests of coins and riches were piled before him, the offerings of strangely garbed, bowing emissaries.

"He saw other carvings, again showing the smiling prince, this time walking among his people. Their heads were pressed to the ground before him. Stylized rays of sunshine radiated from the boy's crown.

"Before one of these images was a small, gold statue. It alone was worth more than he could have hoped to earn in ten lifetimes. The young man took it, slipping it into his satchel.

"He did not intend to linger. He knew it would not be long before others came upon this place. When they did, he wanted to be gone. Greed makes fools of even the greatest men, and he knew that others would willingly spill his blood to claim that golden statue - and the other riches that were surely further in. Avarice was not one of the young man's faults, however. He felt no need to delve further. The other treasures hidden here were someone else's to claim.

"He looked upon one last image before he left the tomb. It showed the boy prince dead, lying upon a bier. Those closest to him were wailing... but further back, people were celebrating. Had the boy prince been beloved, or had he been a tyrant? There was no way of knowing.

"That was when he heard it: a sound in the darkness that made his skin crawl.

"He looked around, wide eyed, holding his torch up before him. Nothing.

"'Who's there?' he said. Silence was his only answer.

"The young man shook his head. 'It is just the wind, you fool,' he thought. 'Nothing but the wind.'

"Then he heard it again, more distinctly this time. A child was crying in the darkness further into the tomb.

"Heard anywhere else, his paternal instinct would have been to go to the sound. But here, in the darkness of a funereal tomb?

"He wanted to run... but he did not. The sobbing touched his heart. It was filled with such misery and grief.

"Was it possible there was another entrance to this tomb? Had a young boy found his way down here and become lost?

"Torch held high, he crept forward. The weeping continued, echoing faintly through the gloom.

"A wide chamber opened before him, its floor black and highly reflective. Golden artifacts and jewel-inlaid walls glinted within. Gingerly, he entered the room.

"He stepped back sharply as his heel sent ripples spreading out across the floor. Water. The floor was not made of reflective obsidian - it was covered in water.

"Kneeling, he scooped a handful of it to his lips. He spat it out immediately. It was salt water! Here, in the heart of Shurima, a thousand leagues from the nearest sea!

"He heard the sound of the boy weeping once more, closer now.

"Holding his torch before him, the young man glimpsed a shape at the edge of its light. It appeared to be the child, sitting with his back to the man.

"Carefully, he stepped into the room. The water upon the floor was not deep. The hairs on the back of his neck stood on end, and fear clutched at his chest, yet he did not turn to run.

"'Are you lost?' he asked, as he stepped closer. 'How did you get here?'

"The shadowed figure did not turn... but he did speak.

"'I... I don't remember,' he said. The sound swam around the young man, echoing off the walls. The boy spoke in an old dialect. His words were strange... but understandable. 'I don't remember who I am.'

"'Be calm, child,' said the man. 'All will be well.'

"He stepped closer, and the figure resolved itself before him. His eyes widened.

"The shape before him was a god-statue carved in onyx, nothing more. It was not the source of the crying, nor of the child's voice.

"That was when a small, dry hand grabbed him."

The youngest of the listeners gasped, his eyes wide. The other children laughed in false bravado. Old Khaldun smiled, a golden tooth glinting in the firelight. Then, he continued.

"The young man looked down. The linen-wrapped corpse of the tiny prince stood beside the man. Dull, ghostly light emanated from the deathly boy's eye sockets, though his entire face was bound in burial wrappings. The corpse-child held the man's hand.

"'Will you be my friend?' the boy asked, his voice muffled by linen.

"The young man lurched backward, breaking free of the child's grasp. The young man looked down at his arm in horror; his hand was shriveling, turning black and withered. The wasting touch then began to climb up his arm.

"He turned and ran. In his shock and haste, he dropped his lantern. It hissed as it fell into the lake of tears, and darkness descended. Still, he could just make out the glow of daylight up ahead. He ran toward it, scrambling desperately, even as the wasting death crept up his arm towards his heart.

"At any moment, he expected to feel the deathly boy's grasp upon him... but did not. After what felt like an eternity, but could only have been a matter of heartbeats, he burst from the darkness into the desert heat once more.

"'I'm sorry,' echoed a mournful voice from the gloom behind him. 'I didn’t mean to.'

"And thus, the Tomb of Amumu was unearthed," said old Khaldun, "and the deathly child released into the world."

"But everyone knows he isn't real!" cried one of the children, the oldest of them, after a moment of silence.

"Amumu is real!" said the youngest. "He's wandering the land trying to find a friend!"

"He's real, but he isn't a boy," said another. "He's a yordle!"

Khaldun laughed, and pushed himself to his feet with the aid of a gnarled walking stick.

"I am old, and we have far to travel tomorrow," he said. "It is past time I was abed."

His audience began to dissipate, smiling and talking in low, familial voices, but one child did not move. She stared at Khaldun, unblinking.

"Grandfather," she said. "How did you lose your arm?"

Old Khaldun looked down at the empty sleeve pinned at his shoulder, then flashed the girl a grin.

"Goodnight, little one," he said with a wink."

101 Comments

Earl Eulrich23 votes

might be the first lore redo i actually really like (especially as he could still be a yordle), though it still doesn´t offer any reasoning for giving up on the league (and it doesn´t offer much more intel on mumu than the original lore, but it adds a little more to shurima).

Rew7113 votes

If he's a yordle, GIVE HIM EARS!! If he's a child, that make 3 children champions. Annie and Nunu gained a new ally.

(This new Lore is just so they don't have to make him ears.)

SpecterVonBaren7 votes

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If he's a yordle, GIVE HIM EARS!! If he's a child, that make 3 children champions. Annie and Nunu gained a new ally.

(This new Lore is just so they don't have to make him ears.)

Four actually. Gnar is also a child.

Destínum10 votes

Make that five KogMaw.

IAintDarius3 votes

I'm pretty sure Lulu is also a child. So six.

Destínum7 votes

Mentally, maybe, but not physically.

IronChefBoyardee8 votes

For people saying "give him ears!" It doesn't make any sense for Amumu to have ears because you don't have bones in the visible parts of your ears. that's just flesh. Same for animals, probably the same for Yordles. No bones=no undead ears.

A Superb Villain7 votes

but it adds a little more to shurima).

This is becoming an increasingly apparent trend; champion stories reveal less about them and more about the world.

Regarding Amumu's lore, they give us a vague idea of what the Sad Mummy is about - he cries, he is cursed, he was once royalty - while establishing more of Shurima's culture. Is this more appropriate than a biography, like those once provided by Riot for us to read, or should we know more about a champion and less about the world?

Narasimha2 votes

Its better to learn about the world, since thats something we can't see in the game.

RoyaiChaos11 votes

Well it explains why he can't find a friend which imo is pretty significant. It also expands more upon his tears, and yeah it's still like "who was he", but I think that's part of what makes Amumu who he is. If he knew who he was in his past life, he might not be the "sad mummy"

But it's still a step up from his old lore, even if it doesn't say all that much about Amumu himself, but again, I think the mystery is part of his character (he's sad because he doesn't know who he was and can't find any friends because of the curse)

Solideus3 votes

I think the Yordle part was a tongue-in-cheek nod to his history as a character. I doubt he will actually be a yordle, that would most likely have been made more clear in the story if that was the case.

Trylobyte12 votes

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This is becoming an increasingly apparent trend; champion stories reveal less about them and more about the world.

Regarding Amumu's lore, they give us a vague idea of what the Sad Mummy is about - he cries, he is cursed, he was once royalty - while establishing more of Shurima's culture. Is this more appropriate than a biography, like those once provided by Riot for us to read, or should we know more about a champion and less about the world?

It's already more informative about Amumu than his old bio...

Grand Viper11 votes

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It's already more informative about Amumu than his old bio...

How so? I'm actually incredibly confused as to what we know about Amumu now that we didn't before.

We didn't know he was royalty? He's a mummy, mummification wasn't done for the average person. He also has the King Tut skin, and I actually have no idea how this is any different from his original lore.

I'm legitimately confused as to what I'm supposed to be finding here, what is it that we now know that wasn't known before?

  1. He is sad

  2. He is a mummy

  3. He is some sort of royalty since he is a mummy

  4. He does not know how he is a mummy

  5. His touch is cursing (It's his innate passive)

  6. He may not remember his past

We've known this information for literal years. This short story I see absolutely nothing that says any different, not even his dialogue.

Now if it was Amumu meeting Annie (Who is that? Annie ) for the first time and actually getting champion interaction, and his own perspective and his own thoughts about everything and dealing with that then we could state that there's been more development had even if not much is said. At least this way it's at least examining the personalities of 2 champions (that we give the faintest crap about compared to some guy who narrates) and trying to extrapolate upon that.

Shurima was developed? How so? We knew they had merchants and caravans thanks to Rek'sai, we know that there are an indigenous people of Shurima, we know that they need to exist through some sort of structure possibly tribes and the like since the royalty fell centuries prior and with the resurgence of Azir they'll be unified (I'm thinking, hoping there's an 'or else' here) under him, and so on and so on.

So what does this short story of Amumu's bring that we didn't know before? What has it developed?

I don't think it's developed a single thing.

GreenLore14 votes

Before it wasn't clear if he was royal. Keep in mind that amumu was cursed,he might have been a precious slave of the pharao or was turned into a mummy by some kind of magic,not necessarily a proper burial(and skins have usually nothing to do with the story anyway)

His touch being a curse was not really known before,I mean yeah it is his passive,but not all abilities are really explained by lore and it was definetly never shown to be THAT bad.

Also the fact that the people celebrated when he died is interesting,it reveals something about him,but is obviously another mystery too.

Stars Shaper1 votes

He seems to be a royal from the Parrot.. ops.. Azir Bloodline now since the mention fo the Sun Disc.

We now need to know if it was before or after him.

Dr Clueless PhD7 votes

It should be before. When Azir's Ascension went south, the whole Shuriman empire of his time crumbled (figuratively and literally in some places).

the14baller10 votes

In Game Version Excerpt:

"The young man flashed backward, breaking free of the OP jungler's autoattack range. The young man looked down at his stats in horror, his magic resist was lowered, turning him into a easy target for a mage [...] He turned and ran. In his shock and haste, he forgot to take the ally Thresh's lantern. It glowed as it slowly disappeared, and the Fog of War descended. Still, he could just make out the light of his turret up ahead. He ran toward it, scrambling desperately, even as the enemy's team 16/0 Katarina shunpoed up his minion wave towards his heart..."

LordHippoman9 votes

Somebody get me that "It's Happening" GIF, STAT.

LordHippoman6 votes

Wow, only 1 minute. Good time. Zilean

GenoXx7 votes

I am quite sure he is a human child. It said a "boy prince"...in Shurima......He's human guys

Narasimha5 votes

Or so says the storyteller. And who knows if he has it right? I highly doubt the painting were his top priority at that moment.

RoyaiChaos3 votes

Well the last painting showed them rejoicing at his death. Amumu imo is pretty kind and not really a dictator, so my theory is that they killed him because he was a yordle, which is why the people were so split at the time. Half of the people accepted a yordle ruler, the other half couldn't stand for it.

CupcakeTrap6 votes

I appreciate the momentary mention of him possibly being a yordle. I take that as a positive sign: a reluctant admission that they'll take at least a token step to avoid demolishing established lore. This Amumu background is vaguely backwards-compatible. So it seems at a first glance, anyway; maybe I've missed something.

Trylobyte5 votes

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How so? I'm actually incredibly confused as to what we know about Amumu now that we didn't before.

We didn't know he was royalty? He's a mummy, mummification wasn't done for the average person. He also has the King Tut skin, and I actually have no idea how this is any different from his original lore.

I'm legitimately confused as to what I'm supposed to be finding here, what is it that we now know that wasn't known before?

  1. He is sad

  2. He is a mummy

  3. He is some sort of royalty since he is a mummy

  4. He does not know how he is a mummy

  5. His touch is cursing (It's his innate passive)

  6. He may not remember his past

We've known this information for literal years. This short story I see absolutely nothing that says any different, not even his dialogue.

  1. We knew this. It's in his name after all.

  2. Same.

  3. That was inferred, but not known. There's a difference. Skins aren't canon, so we can't rely on his Pharaoh skin, and mummification wasn't just for royalty. The royal ones are simply the only ones most people know about. In fact, a quick Wikipedia visit shows the Egyptians had multiple methods of mummification based on how much the family could pay.

  4. It explicitly states in his old lore that yes, he was well aware he's a mummy. "While Amumu still hasn't learned much about his past, he has learned a great deal about who he has become. He is most assuredly undead..." Now, he's not sure. This change must've slipped by you.

  5. But now we know the curse affects normal people and Champions differently, since his passive doesn't cause any damage to champions but just a touch was enough to cause a regular guy's arm to rot off.

  6. Or he may. He's more likely to now since he's, you know, in a tomb filled with a detailed history of his life. We know more about his life now than we did before.

ArbiterOfTruth2 votes

Actually on 5, before the retcon at least, summoners were able to limit the abilities of champions. Champions like Syndra and Xerath could easily destroy the Rift if they were allowed to use all of their power, if they are as powerful as they say they are. Now with the retcon in place you may be correct. Champions have the ability to resist magic to some degree and Amumu's touch attacks that innate resistance, but for a normal person without any special abilities that could easily have more devastating effects as shown by the lore.

Grand Viper4 votes

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  1. We knew this. It's in his name after all.

  2. Same.

  3. That was inferred, but not known. There's a difference. Skins aren't canon, so we can't rely on his Pharaoh skin, and mummification wasn't just for royalty. The royal ones are simply the only ones most people know about. In fact, a quick Wikipedia visit shows the Egyptians had multiple methods of mummification based on how much the family could pay.

  4. It explicitly states in his old lore that yes, he was well aware he's a mummy. "While Amumu still hasn't learned much about his past, he has learned a great deal about who he has become. He is most assuredly undead..." Now, he's not sure. This change must've slipped by you.

  5. But now we know the curse affects normal people and Champions differently, since his passive doesn't cause any damage to champions but just a touch was enough to cause a regular guy's arm to rot off.

  6. Or he may. He's more likely to now since he's, you know, in a tomb filled with a detailed history of his life. We know more about his life now than we did before.

1 & 2 cannot be addressed because these are established facts. That is my problem with the story.

  1. He is a mummy. Here is some information on mummification:

We know nothing about the funerals of ordinary people, but the decoration in Old Kingdom tomb chapels tells us a little about the funerals of nobles. The Pyramid Texts and the layouts of royal mortuary temples give us some idea about rituals surrounding the death of the king. Although there were changes to this ritual over the next two thousand years, the changes were surprisingly minor. Evidence from the New Kingdom and Late Period suggest that the rituals that had once accompanied only kings and nobles later were performed for small landowners and craftsmen. How were the masses, the farmers, taken to their eternal rest? We do not know, but the Middle Kingdom text, The Dispute of a Man with his Ba, offers a sad image of the resting place of the very poor.

Those who built in granite, who erected halls in excellent tombs…their offering stones are desolate, as if they were the dead who died on the riverbank for lack of a survivor.

Source: The ROM

Or if you want me to be more specific:

Who Was Mummified

After death, the pharaohs of Egypt usually were mummified and buried in elaborate tombs. Members of the nobility and officials also often received the same treatment, and occasionally, common people. However, the process was an expensive one, beyond the means of many.

For religious reasons, some animals were also mummified. The sacred bulls from the early dynasties had their own cemetery at Sakkara. Baboons, cats, birds, and crocodiles, which also had great religious significance, were sometimes mummified, especially in the later dynasties.

Source: Smithsonian Encyclopedia

With the elaborate tomb design, the hieroglyphics drawn, the sun motif, the Egyptian themes and the general depiction of what the walls depicted, chances were that Amumu was of some sort of royalty or nobility. Commoners who could afford it were the rarity, and with how Riot tends to go with pop culture more than anything, pharaohs are the most commonly believed to have been mummified via the embalming process, or at least royalty.

It was established he was royalty for 5+ years by the mere fact that he is a mummy that had his own tomb rather than be surrounded by multiple mummies or even being mummified by the desert sands as most early mummification was done by. I did not need the confirmation of royalty via a short story, I needed characterization to be made.

No characterization was given to us about Amumu, in fact we know more about old Khaldun and his growth as a character than Amumu's.

This is as sad as Amumu.

Don't use Wikipedia if you don't know how to research and cite the sources that Wikipedia itself uses. You'd be surprised how much is summarized.

  1. If he's not sure he's a mummy, or undead, then he's going to find out very promptly. It's not the change went by me, it's that it's so insignificant that it doesn't matter because he will find out. What would be more interesting in the story would be Amumu's realization that he's a walking shambling corpse and we are privy to his realization of that. This is another really simple venue that could have been explored but was not. We already have the background information on Amumu, why not expand on the character himself?

  2. That is a bad explanation for the lone fact that then his passive should be causing DoT for the idea of a curse that causes rot, but that is also what his Tantrum does, isn't it, doing DoT over time? His Ultimate is also Curse of the Sad Mummy, and he wraps you in bandages. Is he trying to hug you or trying to mummify you, I'm not sure.

This is not interesting because I don't see any new information I could not infer from before. This is confirmation of what his curse does, yes, but it could have been handled a million different ways. I can even write a short story for the board as an example if you wish.

  1. We know about the same amount since not one modicum is concrete information and it is all speculation. They could've stretched this "bio" out three times longer, and it still would not have told us anything about Amumu or Shurima that we don't already know. The fact that people were happy and sad when he died. which, by the way, carving that in the tomb is like carving "well, people either loved him or hated him!" as an epitaph on a tombstone is absurd and a huge stretch in logic for why whoever lovingly created this resting place for him would do so aside from being able to enable heavy-handed narration.

I will in fact say we do not know more about his former life because of all the evidence I've brought to the table, along with the fact that his old lore was:

Perhaps one of the oddest champions in the League of Legends is the yordle known as Amumu. His life before joining the League remains unknown to all - especially Amumu. All he remembers is that he woke up alone inside a pyramid within the Shurima Desert. He was wrapped in mummy wrappings and he could not feel his heart beat. Furthermore, he felt a deep sadness that he could not entirely explain; he knew he was missing his parents, though he could not remember who they were. Dropping to his knees, Amumu wept into his bandages. No matter what he did, it seemed he could just never stop his tears or sadness. Eventually he got up off his knees to mope and wander the world, making his way to the League; it would seem that even the raw power of unleashed emotions can be used to benefit the plans of summoners.

To this day, Amumu remains a very sad mummy, occasionally experiencing moments of extreme anger followed by bouts of crushing depression. It is during these times that it is best to stay out of his way, or you may find yourself wrapped up and strangling inside his tear-stained bandages.

His current lore is:

Amumu is a diminutive, animated cadaver who wanders the world, trying to discover his true identity. He rose from an ancient Shuriman tomb bound in corpse wrappings with no knowledge of his past, consumed with an uncontrollable sadness.

and the short story tells us that he is a sad mummy whose past no one knows, and he is a child, and he wants friends.

I do not see what was added that we could not infer from before with some thought and easily done speculation.

This is my problem with this short story.

Trylobyte2 votes

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What more do you want to know about him, exactly? Do you want Riot to post a full and complete biography, outlining details of his life that no longer matter because he's been dead for a few hundred/thousand years and doesn't remember it anyway? I see the story as not saying much and leaving a good bit open to mystery and speculation, but look around. Look at this thread. We LOVE speculation. The lore would lose a lot if they straight up explained everything and didn't give us anything to debate or infer.

Grand Viper5 votes

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What more do you want to know about him, exactly? Do you want Riot to post a full and complete biography, outlining details of his life that no longer matter because he's been dead for a few hundred/thousand years and doesn't remember it anyway? I see the story as not saying much and leaving a good bit open to mystery and speculation, but look around. Look at this thread. We LOVE speculation. The lore would lose a lot if they straight up explained everything and didn't give us anything to debate or infer.

I want development of the character to be had.

You're also talking to someone who's been around since Season 1, 5 years, speculation was my bread and butter. Go to the old lore forums and fanfiction forums and look up my name, nothing to hide there from me. I have speculated a gross amount.

This path that was taken for Amumu is utter nonsense when you could have taken a multitude of other routes in order to focus on Amumu, and create speculation and develop said character and have interactions with other important characters (aka League Champions) rather than some dusty old mop that will be forgotten about because they are not even a secondary or tertiary character, they're not even the Chorus, they're just "Some Guy".

What I want to know about Amumu is development, a push past the prologue, a push past the setup, I want to see Amumu's thoughts, I want to see what his fragmented memories are, I want to be introduced to the true depth of despair he felt when he awoke as a corpse alone in a tomb with all of his loved ones nothing more than shadows and dust. I want to know what was evoked in Amumu when he first met Annie, and how did the two become friends if his touch causes rot. I want to know more than what I already knew about the champion, I want the focus of the story to be on the champion itself rather than focusing on an arbitrary character who will not have anything more to say, except that Amumu's been wandering for years and he's a legend, and because of that he's in the game called League of Legends (Ohhhh I get it!). I want to know why Amumu during the Shurima event was an associated champion of Shurima lumped in with Ezreal rather than a direct player and main character of Shurima like Azir, Nasus, Skarner, Rammus and Sivir. I want to know why we are made to speculate about Amumu's past meanwhile Karthus was completely rewritten because he was too mysterious and too much speculation was had and was needed to be clarified, but we're allowed to speculate about Evelynn, Elise, Amumu and the like. I want there to be more information than a prologue that is never expanded upon.

In other words, I want a story, not a bunch of lifeless words retelling me information I already knew.

That is what I want.

Trylobyte1 votes

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While I agree that I'd love to see these things, remember that a short story encompassing all those elements, done justice, would be a good length - I'd equate it to a comic book, if you want to add pictures and such. And if they do that for one champion, they're gonna be expected to do it for all of them, past present and future... and that'd be a hell of a lot of work for anyone.

Grand Viper7 votes

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While I agree that I'd love to see these things, remember that a short story encompassing all those elements, done justice, would be a good length - I'd equate it to a comic book, if you want to add pictures and such. And if they do that for one champion, they're gonna be expected to do it for all of them, past present and future... and that'd be a hell of a lot of work for anyone.

You could actually do a short story with at least one of those scenarios in the same amount of space that was done with this short story, while addressing how he first awoke, what his actions were, and set up a more compelling prologue. It'd be the same amount of work in all honesty.

I mean they published this 3 months after the Shurima event, nor did they ever establish a deadline for anything. They also have 100+ champions to make interesting stories for, to exceed the expectations of the original judgements and the JoJ and the like that was written for them, and are honesty, probably shorter than this story is.

Let's do a word count (Title's not included):

Irelia's Judgement - 1096 words

Amumu 'Greed and Tears' - 1273 words

They gave themselves this work. Rito were the ones to retcon all of their past work, they were the ones who put themselves into this position with the added fact that they already had a lot of crap on their plate to deal with. They have a lot to deal with, of course, so why go for this route? Why go for such a lackluster bang piece? Why not choose any other possible attempt, why focus so much on the storyteller indirectly telling us stuff?

Want to know a better short story written recently ?

Azir.

Another one?

Sion.

What did they have in common?

Their thoughts. Their mindset. Why they are champions, not legends. I liked these short stories far more than this. I may not even be the biggest Azir fan but his short story is much better than this.

I do not like this story for these reasons, Sam I Am, I do not like this story without any ham (substance).

Gigglebytes4 votes

I believe in the yordle!!! Also this is a REALLY long lore and I really like that. Hopefully people complaining about the lores will be comforted by this.

Sneak Dog4 votes

It's long, well-written and doesn't tell much about Amumu. It outlines him, previews him. It's a prologue of a story that might never come, considering how many other 'mysteries' there are. No, this can only comfort to the extent of showing that Riot has good writers.

Worse yet, for Riot to comfort me, they should stop retconning and replacing playable characters retro-actively. I miss Trundle.

Hellioning4 votes

Ugh. I'm really getting tired of having the viewpoint character be some random joe unrelated to the champion. Like, at least Rengar is a champion so we care about what happened to him, even if Gnar's bio is completely useless when it comes to telling us about Gnar. I don't give a damn about that swordwife/that Noxian cartographer/Khaldun, because I'm probably never gonna see them again.

Like, I get the point of these bios is to show off how powerful these champions are supposed to be by comparing them to the 'normal' inhabitants of their territory, but they tell us very little about the champion themself. Amumu's bio is probably the best, because they give us a backstory and basic character and still leave questions to figure out, so I suppose my disappointment is because I was expecting something new.

Well, at least they're giving us the bios now.

Earl Eulrich3 votes

Well, as they seemingly want to contain the mystery about Mumu I think it´s alright in this case to have an unreliable narrator. I for one am just happy that they didn´t touch his Character too much (he can still be a yordle, it´s not even certain this is actually his own tomb where the narrator found him).

Hellioning3 votes

While I'm down for having Amumu mysteries, though I'd prefer to have some of them solved, I doubt that he's still a yordle. There's no reason for the narrator to go into detail about the images he saw if they weren't going to be important, and I doubt that Riot's lore team is into misleading the audience.

Impetual3 votes

Eh, it doesn't tell us much about Amumu, which is kinda dumb for a story** about** Amumu.

It's an enjoyable read, but kinda pointless. It barely tells us anything about Amumu at all, and considering he is the character this story should to be about, that's pretty bad.

Although it is well written, it doesn't really say anything of consequence. It's kinda pointless. Is this supposed to count as lore?

Terra Booma2 votes

Actually I feel it tells as plenty, sure there's a lot we knew already: The whole being sad thing, wanting a friend, coming from a tomb. They kept the confusion on whether he's a Yordle or not, which was a nice nod to the old lore.

But between the added bits on Shurimian life (Stories are clearly important) We also know just how bad Mumu's curse really is. It's not just sadness anymore. Now he has a problem is ANYONE HE TOUCHES LOOSES LIMBS. (And potentially your life)

Mumu doesn't want to hurt people, he's just looking for friends. The Crypticness of his rule is also helpful. We don't know how Mumu was in life, what if he (or his family) was (Were) a self serving tyrant(s) that was (Were) cruel to anyone not close to him(Them)? It'd explain why some people were celebrating when he died. What will happen when Mumu gets his memories back? What'll be his relation with Azir? I'm honestly really hyped for it all.

The thing that'd make this all perfect, would be if him and Annie were still friends. I can imagine a piece where Mumu is crying somewhere in the jungle place she lives in (Can't remember the name) and she walks up, in a panic for not wanting to hurt someone, Mumu pushes her arm away. (Causing the curse to touch her) but instead of losing an arm, some sort of flame stops it from doing anything.

So congrats Riot, and awesome bit of lore that bought my trust back.

Grand Viper5 votes

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Actually I feel it tells as plenty, sure there's a lot we knew already: The whole being sad thing, wanting a friend, coming from a tomb. They kept the confusion on whether he's a Yordle or not, which was a nice nod to the old lore.

Except they didn't. Riot explicitly stated that it would be too much to tackle to be an adopted Yordle in Shurima or go into the backstory of why a Yordle is in Shurima in ancient times (despite Gnar's prehistoric existence and maybe being in Freljords) and were making him a human boy who lost his parents.

But between the added bits on Shurimian life (Stories are clearly important) We also know just how bad Mumu's curse really is. It's not just sadness anymore. Now he has a problem is ANYONE HE TOUCHES LOOSES LIMBS. (And potentially your life)

The Mummy's Curse in pop culture tended to kill people. The added parts of Shuriman life are nothing new that haven't been discussed before, and why focus on everything else but the actual character?

Shurimans travel in caravans, Rek'sai's lore established this. They like telling stories, pretty much all of the Shurima event told us that. Amumu's curse was never really just sadness, it's his innate passive and his Ulti, he has a cursed touch that lower mag res and the Curse of the Mummy wraps you in bandages and mummifies you.

Mumu doesn't want to hurt people, he's just looking for friends. The Crypticness of his rule is also helpful. We don't know how Mumu was in life, what if he (or his family) was (Were) a self serving tyrant(s) that was (Were) cruel to anyone not close to him(Them)? It'd explain why some people were celebrating when he died. What will happen when Mumu gets his memories back? What'll be his relation with Azir? I'm honestly really hyped for it all.

Not wanting to hurt people is not new information. The cryptic nature of his life was addressed because it creates ham fisted narration, which is a precise problem when you're having someone carve those scenes for you. If it was a cruel reign, it'd be depicted with warnings and the atrocities he committed, if it was a benevolent rule it would have been showing puppies and rainbows and the like.

There's little grey area when you're making a funerary epitaph.

The thing that'd make this all perfect, would be if him and Annie were still friends. I can imagine a piece where Mumu is crying somewhere in the jungle place she lives in (Can't remember the name) and she walks up, in a panic for not wanting to hurt someone, Mumu pushes her arm away. (Causing the curse to touch her) but instead of losing an arm, some sort of flame stops it from doing anything.

They are still friends, if you look at the character information it will show that much. And I actually would have preferred reading a story and having the nature of the curse revealed to us in this way by 2 League champions, 2 characters we're meant to care about, interact with one another.

Trylobyte1 votes

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Not wanting to hurt people is not new information. The cryptic nature of his life was addressed because it creates ham fisted narration, which is a precise problem when you're having someone carve those scenes for you. If it was a cruel reign, it'd be depicted with warnings and the atrocities he committed, if it was a benevolent rule it would have been showing puppies and rainbows and the like.

There's little grey area when you're making a funerary epitaph.

Ooooh yes there is. There are plenty of funerals where everyone shows up because the deceased was a family member, but it turns out nobody really liked him. The eulogies given at those are -real- gray, because you can't be openly insulting but you have absolutely nothing good to say. It's entirely possible the tomb painters were in the same situation; they had to depict the brief reign and death of someone of a dynasty they really hated but the most they could get away with was showing a few people cheering at his death because other living members of that dynasty would kill them otherwise.

Grand Viper3 votes

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Ooooh yes there is. There are plenty of funerals where everyone shows up because the deceased was a family member, but it turns out nobody really liked him. The eulogies given at those are -real- gray, because you can't be openly insulting but you have absolutely nothing good to say. It's entirely possible the tomb painters were in the same situation; they had to depict the brief reign and death of someone of a dynasty they really hated but the most they could get away with was showing a few people cheering at his death because other living members of that dynasty would kill them otherwise.

If you really want to go this route, then you'd have to cite that they'd erase the previous inhabitant's existence, using the example of Hathshepsut.

After 22 years of reign, Hatshepsut died and her stepson, Tuthmosis III, finally gained the throne that had been rightfully his for decades. Tuthmosis resented his long wait for power and was determined to make Hatshepsut pay. He wanted to wipe her from history so that Egyptians would forget that she had ever ruled.

In a massive operation, he ordered that her name and image be removed from every part of Egypt. He was so successful that Hatshepsut was totally erased from Egyptian history until 1903, when British archaeologist Howard Carter found her tomb and her story was rediscovered for the first time in 3,500 years.

Source: PBS piece on Hatshepsut.

This was a practice also done by the Romans and is continued to this day, it's called "Damnatio memoriae".

It is the erasure of every possible tangible historic piece of the person in order to wipe them from memory. You can imagine why this was done.

If Amumu was hated, really hated, it wouldn't be such a problem.

It's a huge stretch in logic for the tomb painters to be conflicted about how they should best depict the boy of some noteworthy importance.

Even if he was beloved, if his enemies wanted to erase all trace of his memory, it would have been easily done. Don't bring in the Great Gatsby scenario in a non-applicable situation.

The Soulforged1 votes

So it seems we still don't know if he's human or a yordle :/ At least this lore brought a lot more to his character :)

ItemsGuy7 votes

He is likely not a Yordle, due to Yordles getting weird and crazy when away from other Yordles. Also, I'm pretty sure the ears would've been pretty noticeable on those carvings if he were a Yordle, and everything in the tomb would have to be Yordle-sized because it's highly unlikely that a bunch of Shurimans would have a Yordle king for...some reason.

It's likely just a call-back to how people on the forums generally aren't sure whether he's a child or a Yordle, and if I recall correctly, the old bio flip-flopped between the two before settling on "child".

Onegarion3 votes

It could be why some of them where sad while others rejoiced after the prince was dead. Remember the man, who can't read, only looks at pictures. It wouldn't be hard to mistake images for other things.

Actually him being excessively sad would explain why he could be a yordle. We don't know exactly how yordles change. We know Veigar because he was tortured as well in noxus. I don't think noxus would be as bad as Shurima especially for someone who is high status.

ItemsGuy4 votes

Allow me to quote Helmight here:

A Rioter confirmed a while back that Amumu's history as a yordle child was getting retconned, as they felt that him being "a sad mummy without his parents who really wants friends AND is also a yordle" was adding too much to him. So he's just a human boy now.

Also, considering that these carvings allegedly depict Amumu during his life, if he were a Yordle, don't you think the narrator would've mentioned something about the huge Yordle ears on his head? He went into detail enough to mention the stylized rays of sun, so I think something as noticeable as Yordle ears might've merited mentioning, considering Yordles (save for a few in Piltover) live in Bandle City and tend to stay there.

Helmight7 votes

A Rioter confirmed a while back that Amumu's history as a yordle child was getting retconned, as they felt that him being "a sad mummy without his parents who really wants friends AND is also a yordle" was adding too much to him. So he's just a human boy now.

And in all honesty, I like the new lore only as a companion piece to the champion's original lore. Like Foolish Lantern said above, these stories do more to build the world and not much to build the champion - which is okay if presented alongside a long-form lore piece like from before the Great Retcon. By itself though, it leaves much to be desired.

In all honesty, I feel like the only reason we enjoy the new lore pieces as much as we do is because they were written for an audience who already knew the characters. Newer League players will probably just end up being more confused than before.

ItemsGuy7 votes

Yeah, I get where you're coming from re: the "written for a veteran audience" thing, although now I'm not even sure whether these can be considered "companion pieces" even, since it's not exactly safe to consider anything before the Great Retcon canon. I mean, Skarner is clearly no longer the last guardian of the Crystal Scar (and now he and Rek'Sai are crammed in the "blue-and-purple, scorpion-like, violently territorial, desert-dwelling subterranean terror" corner), Nasus and Renekton are no longer from another planet with its own rules and culture, Cass is now cursed with awesome power she doesn't hate as "punishment" for breaking into a tomb (instead of cursed by the soiling of her greatest asset due to her own treachery), Xerath is a crazy evil doomsday villain who sabotaged his best friend and destroyed his kingdom instead of a magus whose thirst for knowledge of the arcane led to him losing everything, and so on and so forth.

The New Lore does a lot of things. It develops NPC characters we'll never hear of again. It tells us a bunch of stuff we already know about the world. It leaves questions that will never be answered (how can we see a follow-up to the Freljord Event at this pace, if we still haven't seen anything to that degree for Demacia, Noxus, Bandle City, The Void, Piltover, Zaun, etc. etc. etc.?). It throws out old worldbuilding and character development/characterization in favor of "re-establishing" characters and locations as empty archetypes and building hype for champ releases. It relegates a handful of champions to villains that must be defeated by huge armies and a rag-tag team of champions, and creates extravagant events that players/summoners will never have a part in. It reduces champion interaction to a staggering degree, due to geographical boundaries and more--why would Galio and Skarner, for example, have any reason to meet or interact (outside of maybe some contrived "WE GOTTA STOP XERATH" scenario)? It completely separates the story of the game from the game itself.

The New Lore does a lot of things, but developing champions/giving us insight to them on the level of the old bios and judgments is not one of them.

Trylobyte1 votes

But suppose he was only disliked by a specific group or class of people. Sure, if he were universally hated they would do that, but that wouldn't be so much of an option if the ruling dynasty, AKA his, were still fond of him but everyone else didn't like them. It takes powerful people to execute damnatio memoriae, after all.

You're putting a lot of effort into your research but not a lot into speculation on why this situation could be different.

Grand Viper4 votes

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But suppose he was only disliked by a specific group or class of people. Sure, if he were universally hated they would do that, but that wouldn't be so much of an option if the ruling dynasty, AKA his, were still fond of him but everyone else didn't like them. It takes powerful people to execute damnatio memoriae, after all.

You're putting a lot of effort into your research but not a lot into speculation on why this situation could be different.

You really want to go this path?

Very well.

If he was disliked by only a specific group of people, chances were they were the more powerful ones who could afford to damn his memory and erase every trace of his tangible existence with ease. If it was not them, then they'd be caring a lot more for how the prince is depicted in death.

You are confusing tangible history and intangible history. You are saying that maybe 1 person showed up to the tomb, but that doesn't mean the gravestone will necessarily read, "Here lies John Smith, Glad he's a corpse that I can spit on", it will just say "John Smith. 1903-1945". It won't say "John Smith: Sometimes an Alright Guy but Could be a Dick".

Why?

Because that is incredibly farfetched. So much is taken from Egyptian mythology, so much is lifted from it to the point that they're saying "By the Jackal!" and a lot of it tends to be the more pop culture aspects of it.

You want speculation as to why the tomb painters and the tomb engravers would show two conflicting stories? Because they were incredibly drunk while doing so. There's my speculation. You want actual speculation? It makes no logical sense, it only serves to confuse us and elicit more wonder as to whether he was beloved or not through a hamfisted manner when it could have been addressed with Amumu having his entire memory erased because of said enemies, the walls scratched out, the last relic that he owned was a gold statue of him and his family that old Khaldun steals in his greedy youth and Amumu is forever robbed of it. Gold wasn't readily found, gold is an often image seen for rich people, you could do a lot to create the speculation.

There's not much to speculate when it is done in such a hamfisted and poor manner. What can you speculate?

"He may have been good, he may have been bad."

Why does that matter when Amumu isn't a main player of Shurima, established by Riot in the Shuriman event and has the same level of importance to Shurima as Ezreal does? Or maybe that was an intentional lie to pull the wool over player's eyes so the revelation can be that much more a secret, just like Skarner defending the unknown thing of unknown. Maybe he is related to Azir in some distant way, but pre-Xerath Ascension or Post-Xerath Ascension? This is better speculation. This is done because of the sun motif, this is done not because of the confusion of whether or not he may have been liked or hated. The speculation lies elsewhere, not in whether he was good or bad, which I think is a really shoddy way of storytelling and narrative.

What I wonder because of the depictions is whether or not he has any relation to the royal family, aka Azir's lineage, any knowledge of Nasus, of Renekton, of Xerath, maybe a distant cousin who were the reason why the bloodline of Azir was continued because the God Emperor of Shurima's immediate family (Wife to children) were all killed by Xerath.

That is where my speculation lies, that is where it should lie and because of this, it does not frankly matter how the boy prince was viewed in all honesty. It creates a red herring that bears so little weight that it's just awkward to put in there.

As for my citations, I'm citing my sources so I don't sound like I talk out of my ass when I do bring them up, because I don't want to be ill-perceived in my responses on the information I provide. My personality is however debatable you want it to be.

That is my speculation.

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