The Pool Party Miss Fortune splash is... okay

http://i.imgur.com/liVoMwM.jpg

And that's the problem. It shouldn't be just okay, it should be amazing. Compared to other recent splashes it simply doesn't measure up and I think many people will agree it needs more work/another attempt.

I am normally against the "my waifu isn't pretty enough" circlejerk but I do think fans and fans of incredibly sexy women in general deserved something spectacular and all the enthusiasm this splash was anticipated with made me wish they got it.

I'm not going to thrash this work because it's far from bad but there's plenty of constructive criticism floating around the web. My personal comment is that it lacks the passion some other splashes shine with. As long as the fanbase is civil and does not overreact I believe improvements can be made.