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Miss Arkie - The child of doom

zemaxs·11/15/2015, 5:18:15 PM·2 votes·1,212 views
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Type: melee Role: AD mage

Passive Mutation and Evolution Killing an enemy champion or scoring an assist will give mutation points. You can spend them on upgrading your abilities. However, your basic attacks deal reduced damage, but you can mutate this passive to get increased damage per mutation point. |Mutation points on kill: 2| |Mutation points on assist: 1| |Basic attack damage reduction: 35%| |Basic attack damage increase per mutation point spent: 5% up to maximum 70%|

Q Acid Mucus Launch acidic projectile in targeted direction dealing physical damage to first enemy hit. You can spent mutation points on this ability for it to deal more damage. |Physical damage: 80/120/160/200/240 (+80% AD)| |Range: 720| |Cooldown: 7/6.5/6/5.5/5 sec| |Mana cost: 45| |Bonus damage per mutation point spent: 7 (+2% AD) up to maximum 98 (+28% AD)|

W Acid Blob Create an acid blob in targeted area. After a delay it will explode dealing physical damage to nearby enemies. Spending mutation points on this ability reduce delay before explosion. |Delay: 1 sec| |Damage: 100/130/160/190/220 (+60% AD)| |Range: 680| |Radius of explosion: 250| |Cooldown: 5 sec| |Mana cost: 60| |Delay reduction per mutation point: 5% up to maximum 70%|

E Devouring Storm Increase you movement speed and cause you to deal physical damage to nearby enemies for duration of this ability. Heal yourself for portion of damage done. Spending mutation points on this ability increase healing taken from damage done. |Bonus movement speed: 20/25/30/35/40%| |Damage per sec: 40/60/80/100/120 (+30% AD)| |Duration: 3 sec| |Healing: 30% of damage done| |Radius of damage: 300| |Cooldown: 10 sec| |Mana cost: 70/80/90/100/110| |Bonus healing from damage done per mutation point: 8% up to maximum 112%|

R Monstrous Form Take monstrous form increasing your attack damage, movement speed and passive health regeneration for duration of transformation. While in this form champion kills and kill assists increase duration of this form. Spending mutation points on this ability in crease your maximum cooldown reduction and gives bonus cooldown reduction. |Bonus attack damage: 40/50/60| |Bonus movement speed: 45/65/85| |Bonus base heal regen: 200/250/300%| |Duration: 6 sec| |Duration increase per kill or assist: 2 sec| |Bonus maximum cooldown reduction per mutation point: 2.5% up to maximum 35%| |Bonus cooldown reduction per mutation point: 1% up to maximum 14%|

Story

She is from mysterious eternal violet mist village. No one really knows where it is. People say that this village was cursed by gods to be lost for eternity. Many different ancient creatures are still lost in this village for all eternity, but one of them managed to escape. Little larva of unknown species escaped this eternal violet mist village. It attacked and infected first human being in its path transforming and mutating her.

Little Miss Arkie is a fusion of that larva from the village and a little girl. Her objective now is to grow up and create more of her kind. She will mutate even more, breed and fill the world with her kind. Only non-human creatures are immune to her kind, so any non-human beings is a threat for her and she wants to destroy them. That is why she is hostile to these champions: Aatrox Amumu Anivia Azir Bard Blitzcrank Brand Cassiopeia Chogath Elise Evelynn Fiddlesticks Fizz Galio Gnar Hecarim Heimerdinger Jax Kalista Karthus Kennen Khazix Kindred KogMaw Lissandra Lulu Malphite Maokai Mordekaiser Nami Nasus Nautilus Nocturne Nunu Orianna Rammus RekSai Renekton Rengar Rumble Shaco Sion Skarner Soraka TahmKench Teemo Thresh Tristana Trundle Twitch Urgot Veigar Velkoz Viktor Volibear Warwick MonkeyKing Yorick Zac Ziggs Zyra

3 Comments

Ionian11/15/2015, 5:59:10 PM1 votes

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AD mage

That is a contradiction.

ShatteredSkys11/15/2015, 9:54:17 PM1 votes

Hey! Here are my thoughts on your concept!^_^

AD Mage: An AD mage isn't really contradictory but I have to bring up that the current itemization doesn't really work with mages:/ For an example standard mages tend to want CDR AP, and Mana regen. The only AD item to my knowledge that gives CDR if I remember correctly is Black Cleaver and that's only 10% so you can't really spam spells. And no AD item outside of Essence Reaver(only crits thought) and Manamurne give mana regen so spamming spells might be an issue. Also AD items gives less stats than AP, for an example Ludens gives 100 AP and Deathcap gives 120 AP while IE gives 80 and BT gives 80. But you concept doesn't seem like an AD mage but I just wanted to bring that up.

Identity: Although you want her to be an AD mage she feels kind of like a juggernaut to me. Her E and R encourage her to dive into the fray giving her healing and defensive stats to survive and dish out as much damage as possible. She's immobile and lacks utility similar to a juggernaut. Though her E and Q lean more toward being mage they can also sort of

Passive: This is kind of snowbally, it means if here team is ahead you'll be able to stay ahead because of the power you get but if you're behind this passive is going to be very hard to stack.

Synergy: Personal thought but I feel like the Q and W don't really work well with the rest of the kit. They're two separate abilities that just don't fit in that well with the rest of the kit. There perfectly fine abilities but they don't really work with your other abilities, what I mean is look at a champion like Ekko, all his abilities can work with each other. His Q applies a slow which makes landing his W easier and applies two stacks of his passive which lets you E to proc your passive, your E and R lets you gap close to proc his W. Ekko's abilities work together in unision. Just something to keep in mind when making concepts.

Lore: Sounds like something Lovecraft would write. Pretty interesting but like all things could be expanded. Like is the larvae in full control or does Miss Arkie also act like a little girl?

Overall: I think you have a pretty cool concept. I think you should decide whether you want to lean toward her being an AD mage or more toward juggernaut. She feels more juggernaut to me but she can still go either way, her kit is a bit divided between these ideas so choose one and go with it. Her lore is something new, never heard of anything like that before I'll give you that. Anyway hoped this review helps with your concept! ^_^

Rook Loux11/15/2015, 10:26:55 PM1 votes

Annie and Velkoz had a baby