Talon Rework: Ideas & Concept

In this I mainly would focus on his abilities, so bear with me at the fact that some might sound quite wonky or stupid in general..

[ Q ] Razor Edge Talon strikes at his opponent dealing normal damage on the first, after 0.2 seconds the opponent takes a burst of "Bleed Out" or a secondary damage that comes along with the single strike due to Talon's blades being razor sharp and jagged like, dealing true damage afterwards.

[ Q ] Quicklash Talon dashes a short distance near his opponent dealing true damage upon hit leaving the opponent with bleed that lasts for 0.4 seconds.

[ W ] Blade Burst Talon gains movement speed and invisibility for 2 seconds, leaving him vulnerable to pink wards. Upon reappearing a burst of blades burst out from him like his ult but smaller and goes back in fastly dealing double damage.

[ W ] Marked As the summoner you click your target upon activation of this ability to work. As Talon you marked your target and sends 3 blades hurling at them dealing piercing damage at your marked opponent.

[ E ] Into Shadows Talon is able to disappear into the shadows and reappear 3 times in short distances wherever the cursor is pointing at. Upon appearing Talon gains a 0.3 second 100% crit chance due to him attacking the enemy from out of no where.

[ E ] Dash Talon dashes to desired location 3 times; 0.2 second cool down. For each dashes Talon stack "Bloodlust" 1st Dash: Makes opponent bleed 2nd Dash: True Damage 3rd Dash: 100% Crit Chance

When using the any dash you have exactly 0.5 seconds to strike your opponent or the effect won't go off. (Note: The dashes don't stack so you can't have bleed + true damage + crit chance at the same time..) This ability makes it so Talon players have to time their abilities as well as their positions making Talon unique.

[ R ] Blade Fury Talon instantly leaps at his targeting phasing them for 0.3 seconds (Slow) while unleashing a fury of strikes each one stacks, (He strikes 4 times) On his first strike. He slows them, his second strike, he makes them bleed, on the third strike, he does a small amount of true damage, and his final strike is a critical.

[ R ] Shadow Dance Talon dashes through his targeted enemy 5 times consecutively ; during those times he vulnerable to ranged attacks only. (Sort of like Fiora's old Ult (Blade Waltz) but less overpowered gives the opponent a chance to counteracting it.

Okay now this is my first time doing this so I'm sorry if this seemed shitty, I tried.. x3