Jaquan's Review Center

Yo Niqqa Jaquan·1/4/2017, 6:34:47 PM·2 votes·1,125 views

Hello friends and foes, Yo boi Jaquan is here to review your champions. I wanted to keep the creativity of the community going a bit faster than the CCOS (As cool as they are) events and in a centralized place for everyone to refine and better ideas.

With that in mind, I will not allow any form of aggression or insult from both creator or reviewers alike. This thread is for people to hone their craft at world building and character defining in the limitations of the League of Legends lore. Anything else will cause you to be barred from submitting champions to be reviewed by myself but you can still have other review it if they deem you worthy enough to review still. Mind it takes quite a bit to to make me straight up refuse to review someone's idea, (as I love reading and creativity) just be nice to your critics and we'll have no problems.

I will have my own scale for the review structure. The template goes as such:

Lore - /10 Abilities - /10 Originality - /10 Thematic Unity - /10 Effort - /10 Creativity - /5

Reviews will be posted under a section for those to read and review themselves in a section after a few have been submitted. Top reviews will be posted in a separate section for those to read and better their own designs by seeing what excellent examples look like.

With that out of the way, I would like to extend a question to those reading. Would you like a Discord server to discuss these in more depth? I would love to talk with some of you about ideas, as well as play some games on the rift. I will open a poll for the next week so please select either yes or no if this would be a good idea. Essentially if it gets to a 90% vote I will make it and leave a link at the bottom of the post.

Welcome to the review center! Let's create some magic people.

16 Comments

Fertsa1/4/2017, 10:44:25 PM1 votes

So do we just leave links to our concepts here?

FlameHalbrdOkido1/5/2017, 2:26:37 AM1 votes

Is there a limit to how many concepts we can submit? or maybe a time frame limit such as 3 months ago to now? The main problem iv'e run into with the community run champion concept competition was that time wise I was always out of synch, id be in the middle of creating a new champ when the competition was running, and my other concepts would be too old, and of course i could never decide which ONE concept to submit\

"Top reviews will be posted in a separate section for those to read and better their own designs by seeing what excellent examples look like": this is a good idea, as I'm always trying to figure out the best way to craft my posts to draw in the most attention, one things for sure, ive found that having good splash art at the top is a good idea

FlameHalbrdOkido1/7/2017, 2:46:22 PM1 votes

Ok heres the next one, its just as unique but the basic idea behind it has been confusing to some people

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/2hsvQLb1-locriktus-the-indomitable-infestation

FlameHalbrdOkido1/15/2017, 4:59:43 AM1 votes

No more reviews?

FlameHalbrdOkido1/18/2017, 4:39:15 AM1 votes

Just recently made a couple balance changes in case u already read it, mostly in W's Upsurge radius and the Ult's mana costs, wording, and CD mechanics Changed Q's armor to resistances gave E some better wording and that might be it.

ok i made a lot of changes to almost everything