[Champion Reviews] For the first time ever!

Flintfall·11/2/2014, 11:34:44 PM·11 votes·3,303 views

Most of the time I give itty bitty little bits of feedback on a select few concepts, so I want to go a little further than that while also having an excuse to only do it to some people.

Limited to one concept per person, this can include any concept you've ever posted.

#Stuff you will get:

  • In depth feedback on Lore, Kit, and Quotes (plus other stuff).
  • Every point of criticism will be backed by suggestions to help alleviate issues.
  • An on-going discussion, I won't drop a review and leave.
  • General feedback on overall design and thematics (if necessary)
  • All of this in a (hopefully) completely respectful tone with the sole thought of helping you and your design.

To assure you I'm not a raving madman, here is my concept résumé:

Gnarr, The Harvester Jungler

Sangrin, the Drifting Storm Top laner

Maud, the Zaunite Spitfire Marksman

Kawpra, the Kumungu Devil Support

Han, the Resolute Mid laner

Shrike, the Stormchaser Mid laner

Dane, the Silver Star Marksman

Gex, the Collector Jungler

I await your requests!

http://i.imgur.com/KtlfQio.gifv

######I'm just as popular as bing aren't I?

44 Comments

dustwind811/4/2014, 2:07:19 AM2 votes

Reviewing threads should be something you enjoy doing, if it feels like a job stop... I had a review thread and stopped when it felt like i started losing interest... i might create a new thread again soon... I am stuck deciding if i should finalize my champs i have concepts started for first though... cause i have more in the pipes.

Rosemarie11/3/2014, 4:15:16 AM2 votes
Hoffmisc1/13/2015, 12:21:06 AM2 votes

Is this still open? Because...

I know I've bothered you with many a concept in the past but, this is one I never showed you.

######Mainly because I just made it over the past 5 days... and you're never on skype so I can't randomly sent all of my shit to you

dustwind811/3/2014, 5:43:59 PM1 votes

could you please review Mary Aunette

Edit: oops linked to wrong thread XD

Leroyswish11/3/2014, 11:42:38 PM1 votes

Hello, Flintfall! It's been a while. In the spirit of Halloween, I've created Skulk, the Harrowing's Hallow. He is very fresh and still very much a work in progress. I look forward to hearing your thoughts.

~ Leroy

Vielle11/3/2014, 3:29:25 AM1 votes

I'll be your first customer!

I've read a couple of your champions, too, and they are amazing. Maud had me literally laughing out loud. The game needs an old lady champion. I'll gladly do a counter-review in exchange.

This is a champion I actually submitted back in January, back on the old boards - I've been refining it for a while, and I think its current iteration is rather good. There are some intrinsic design issues which are problematic in a logistical sense, though.

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/nc8eBG0k-champion-concept-p-1108-the-failed-prototype

Looking forward to seeing what you think!

RedXIIIisNanaki11/4/2014, 2:38:38 AM1 votes

Hello! I'm looking for a full review on a concept of mine! If you could, in your review please leave like some sort of direction I could go with a lore? Because I suck at lore and I want to do it myself, I just need a little push in the right direction. :]

Enough of my babbling, here's the link! Xuen

dustwind811/5/2014, 12:01:12 AM1 votes

Thanks for the review, I responded to your questions and points. I did a couple minor changes. I really like your reviews =)

Gjom11/5/2014, 3:53:39 PM1 votes

I would love a review on my champion, Padlock!

Padlock I love him, and I would love to hear your opinion, critisisms.. etc. :D

Zanryu11/5/2014, 10:09:26 PM1 votes

If you have some spare time, mind to look over Tillion, the Argent Wing?

Panthalassa11/6/2014, 3:02:36 AM1 votes

If you could review my concept, that'd be awesome. Get to it whenever you want, and don't feel obligated =3

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/euY9Iv5J-champion-concept-terrax-the-awakened-wraith

The Stoic Hero11/6/2014, 3:53:37 PM1 votes

Would you mind doing a review on my Character Concept: Ryouhei, Chaser of the Wind?

Tamur11/4/2014, 2:26:14 AM1 votes

Got one here for you http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/tj5hOfm0-zimn-the-wuju-demon

I don't mind doing review trades just takes a couple of days for me to do mine

SolidPooh11/3/2014, 6:26:47 AM1 votes

Valiance

I commend you, and I may request your words as well some time :)

TheHobbits11/3/2014, 6:36:28 AM1 votes

Feedback on the Unprepared Garen Skin would be much appreciated.

Thanks