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Champion Design Concept : Lootus The protector of Hope

xXAcceleratorXx·5/3/2016, 7:09:28 PM·1 votes·915 views

Ｈｉ ｇｕｙｓ！ today i was listening to some music today and then i suddenly came out a champion design concept. Hope you guys like it !

Ｎａｍｅ： Ｌｏｏｔｕｓ （name meaning : hope in Estonian ) Age : 17

Lore : "Grrrrrr" I looked over the grass there is a gromp attacking a little cute puppy. I stand there not moving but waiting for what is gonna happen. The gromp jumped toward to the puppy, The poppy went attacking the gromp but it didn't work. The gromp then open his mouth and preparing to eat the puppy. Suddenly the rock under the gromp flew up high in to the sky and flied away. The puppy looked toward me, I smiled, walking toward to the puppy and kneel down to pet him. " You did good. Spem" The poppy bark jumping around me. Looks like he likes he new name. " Never lost hope. This is the most important. Never forget it ok ?" I am telling Spem as i also reminding my self about the past i went through" "Please don't hurt me! " A boy cry out of tears he wanted to run, but he cant. His lost his power to even stand up. The Giant creature didn't listen and walk toward him. The boy lost all the hope to survive and waited for being eat. " Don't give up ! Stand up ! I will help you ! " There is a voice echo in the boy's head. He stood up slowly, but still confused what to do. "Raised up you hand imagining the piece of ground flew up" The voice echo in the boy's head again. He closed his eyes and did what the voice told him to. When he open his eyes he is surprised. He saw the scene that he imagined happening right in his eyes. " Lets sent him away alive " The girl voice that echo in his head again. The boy try imagining the rock move back and it did. The boy rush back to his village and told his parent about it but non of them believe him also he lost his specially ability. 2 years later, this small village got attack by Noxians, The village had no hope to win the battle, some of the villager suicide include his parents. He sitting in a corner in the house waiting for his death while there is a familiar voice echo in this voice " Dont give up ! Run ! " The boy remember that day he escape from his death. He stood up and run away from his house. He ran as was as he can until he met a man holding 2 axe. " WELCOME TO THE DRAVENLAND !!! " Then he throw his axe to the boy. The boy was scared then he closed his eyes. Suddenly his eyes came out with light and the axe which draven throw to him bounce back ..... no is more faster and stronger then draven thrown at him. Draven doge the axe and was stun. The boy walk slowly toward to draven "Go or die" he speaked. Draven knows that now is not a good time to fight with him so he pick up his axe and walked away. The boy remember all the memories before he is born. "So you finally remember Lootus ? " The girl voice echo in his brain finally talked again. " I remember all the things now. Got to stop that "thing", he will destroy the world. right ? Azanesper." The boy smiled and walk away from the village. I stood up and and picked up the puppy. "Hey Azanesper. What do puppy likes to eat ?"

Basic in formation :

Health:616.28 (+84.25 per level) Armor: 22.88 (+3.5 per level) Attack Damage:53 (+4 per level Magic Resist:30 (+0 per level) Attack Speed:0.658 (+3.2% per level) Movement Speed:345

Skills : Passive: Wu xing : Tu When ever Lootus use a skills he will grant 20 % of Wu xing bar. When the Wu xing bar is full he skiils will grants special affect.

Q: Wu Xing : Shui Lootus creates 2 waves and then the waves after a short delay, they fire projectiles that deal Magic Damage and slows enemy champions. When Wu xing bar is full : It will blinds enemy. Damage : 70/120/170/220/270 (+75% Ability Power)

W: Wu Xing : Jin Lootus will create a metal spike and knock up the enemy also making the enemy bleed and slowed When Wu xing bar is full : It will cause the enemy to get poisoned also silence Damage: 50/85/120/155/190 (+30% Ability Power) E : Wu Xing : Mu Lootus sends woods through the ground to ensnare his target, dealing damage and rooting enemies they come across. When Wu xing bar is full : It will also ground and slows the enemy for a short time Damage : 80/120/160/200/240 (+60% Ability Power)

R : Wu Xing : Fire After a short delay, Lootus creates a huge pillar of flame under himself dealing magic damage to enemy units within the area also healing his teammate for 5 second . Wu xing bar is full : dealing 8% of the enemy maximum Health in magic damage over 4 seconds. Damage : 175/300/425 (+80% Ability Power) Heal : 80/110/140/170/200 (+60% Ability Power)

Thanks for all of your attention, Hope you guys can give me some comments to improve my designs

3 Comments

CarbRundum5/3/2016, 11:30:14 PM1 votes

Lootus seems like a champion with a lot in him, but is ridiculously overpowered. First things first, is he melee or ranged? Because if he's melee, then his ultimate would be really powerful and he'd still have a lot of ranged harass. If he's ranged, then his ultimate seems, from the wording, like it has very little opportunity to be used offensively. His kit has really high amounts of damage, both in the base damages for his abilities and his scalings. The damage needs to be tuned down a little. Also, he has so much ridiculous utility that he is never ever a bad pick. His Q slows and blinds with a full Wu Xing bar. His W is a knockup, a damage over time, and a slow, as well as a potential extra damage over time and silence. That is WAY too much for one ability to have. Entire champions whose kits are designed to disrupt enemies, such as Cho'Gath, do not have as many effects in their entire kits as is in that one ability. Cho'Gath has a knockup/slow and a silence. That is 3/5 of this one ability. And his E also has way too much utility. It roots and potentially grounds and slows multiple enemies. Again, look at the scale of these abilities compared to entire champion kits. This E in and of itself contains almost as potentially devastating crowd control as Nautilus. On the other hand, his Ultimate seems really... underwhelming. In a kit with abilities with absolutely absurd amounts of crowd control and utility jam-packed into them, his ultimate deals a respectable amount of damage and heals a pretty good amount, and that's it. Granted, that's about as much as an ability should do, as an AoE damage/heal, but comparatively, it feels... off. The rest of the kit also gives off the impression of being ranged projectiles, but this ultimate being melee seems like it isn't quite right for the kit. Also, the Wu Xing bar effect is really underwhelming, considering it's literally the same amount of damage as Brand's old passive, and he could proc that on a basic ability.

Overall, the concept, in terms of theme, is really cool. There's no champion in League that is based off of the Chinese elements yet. However, the damage and utility that this kit brings is completely too overloaded. I recommend you look at some other champions that have play styles similar to what you want Lootus to have and then model the amount of damage and crowd control roughly around what they have.

P.S. The Chinese word for fire is Huo, not "Fire". I just noticed that you used Chinese Pinyin for all the other ability names but not the ultimate.