Lilith, The Black Queen (Midlane Mage/ AP Jungler)

Leonidas Freedom··33 votes·3,995 views
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#A Tale to Tell Zig, zig, zig, Death in cadence, Striking a tomb with her heel, Death at midnight plays a dance-tune, Zig, zig, zag, on her violin. The winter wind blows, and the night is dark; Moans are heard in the linden trees. White skeletons pass through the gloom, Running and leaping in their shrouds. Zig, zig, zig, each one is frisking, You can hear the cracking of the bones of the dancers. A lustful couple sits on the moss So as to taste long lost delights.

Within the Shadow Isles, it is not uncommon to see odd things. Death holds no true power on these lands, made of gravesoil and ashes of dead civilizations, long forgotten.

So why is it so unsettling to see that woman there, in the black dress, twirl and prance amongst the gravestones in the pale moonlight?

why... because she has no head, of course.


#Lore

Lilith is a kindly young girl from the Shadow Isles. Her Hobbies include gathering berries that grow near the gates of the many graveyards that adorn the land, skipping stones on the still waters of lakes, and dancing upon the freshly dug graves. She does not know who she was in her past life, or if she even had one. She just knows that those who are dead are her friend.

She has joined the league of legends for reason alone: to show everyone her dance skills (no really, she thinks its a talent competition or something)


#Gameplay

Lilith is designed heavily to be a mid lane burst mage who focuses on turning tides of minions against her opponent, and leeching the life from their very bones.

Because of her passive, she can do a lot of good in the jungle, and her kit does indeed help with with such things.


#Moveset

##Passive - Carrion Call

Enemy minions and large neutral monsters that are attacked by Lilith are marked for a short amount of time by a crown of black roses. if an enemy minion or large neutral monster that is marked dies, it rises again to fight for Lilith.

Large Neutral monsters get a copy of the buff that they have given to lilith (red brambleback has red buff, sentinal has blue, et cetera).

these zombies have a duration. This ability, which has a fairly decent cooldown, does not go on cooldown until the current zombie (as long as it is a jungle creep or champion (see funeral dirge) has been destroyed or has timed out, meaning that it goes on cooldown with minion zombies.


This encourages last hitting and allows you to keep your lane pressed while on midlane. In the jungle, it helps you clear incredibly fast, and will let you turn a champion's death into something much more beautiful.

##Q - Gravesoil

Lilith causes the ground beneath her cursor to become unhallow. This has a low cooldown that allows you to create paths of gravesoil. if Lilith and an enemy are on connected gravesoil patches, they take damage while she is healed. otherwise enemies lose movement speed and Lilith gains it while on disconnected patches of gravesoil.


This is a great sustain/punishing tool in lane, and massively helps in the jungle (where it's almost gauranteed to work.)

mechanically, this works similarly to both Gangplank's barrels in that each patch of gravesoil can link with nearby gravesoils to form complex paths, but it also works similarly to Karthus' Q in method of deployment.

##W - Overcast

Stormclouds appear over lilith, spreading darkness over her. while this is happening, she gains a shield and begins to consume it to refund mana for what is (at max duration) the full amount of the shield. if an enemy breaks her shield, she gains a slight movement speed boost for a short amount of time.


This is a decent sustain/defense tool. originally it was more similar to Master Yi's meditation, but I've tried to give it a more unique design

##E - Funeral Dirge

Lilith sings out a music note that fears the next enemy it detonates, fearing them. Her zombies will immediately begin targeting the marked enemy. If the enemy is targeted, Lilith marks them with Carrion Call. If she manages to kill the champion while marked, she will summon a Guardian Shade, a stronger version of the basic minion zombie. This zombie has a slight damage midigation, and deals slightly more damage to towers. Carrion Crown will not go on cooldown until the Guardian Shade has died.


This is a great tool for initiating in lane on a single target, simply directing your zombies where you want them to, and getting some simultaneous sustain and clear in the jungle.

mechanically it is a skill shot that functions similarly to sona's ult (in that it makes targets dance) and ahri's charm (a skill shot stun)

##R - Danse Macabre

Lilith begins twirls in place as this ult is channeled, then starts dancing. a large area around her becomes gravesoil and enemies too begin to dance. The effects of gravesoil apply to the area around her now (as it is quite literally gravesoil)


Mechanically this ability is similar to Morgana's ult or Kennan's ult.

functionally, all you gotta do is run in and pop it on a low enemy team and they'll do your bidding.

#Background Info Some additional information about Lilith.

##Appearance Age: roughly 13-16 Clothes: fancy black and white dress with fluff and lace. Hair Color: Black as raven's feathers Eye color: sulfur yellow Additional Items: a jet black, lacey parasole in one hand, always opened overhead. it's more for shade then for weather. A basket full of berries, flowers, and her head.

##relationships

friends with most everyone from the Shadow Isles. also Annie because they're around the same age.

##Skin Concepts none yet.

##Quotes Champion Select: "Is it time to dance yet?" Upon Zombie Creation, allies Annie ult, allied Yorick ghoul creation, allied Morde ghost creation: "Yay, new friends!" Upon enemy Annie ult, enemy Yorick ghoul creation, enemy Morde ghost creation: "You have new friends too?"

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90 Comments

HayRoss9 votes

A slight problem with her, she appears to be lacking a head.

Hold on, I got a spare right here item 3001

A Miss Fortune6 votes

Lucian Senna is that you?

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

she's somewhere between the age of sixteen or thirteen.

lucian is a dirty old man o.o

A Miss Fortune4 votes

It was a joke.

the BLACK Queen...

sorry report me now

zemaxs4 votes

Why every other champion in this forum have -2 score but this one have +13?

regonas3 votes

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Why every other champion in this forum have -2 score but this one have +13?

Because author of this post and his friends are downvoting every other post in this forum, but upvote each others posts, so in the end everyone else ends up with --, while their posts ends up with +.

Lonely Flame5 votes

Or, just throwing it out there, because the OP isn't salty with the forums? Because OP doesn't spam average champ ideas every day? Funny thing is, OP here has been NICE to you (go through his comment history because I know you love doing that). He's done nothing but compliment your champs, and the only thing negative he's had to say is about your attitude, which everyone has told you to change, and you trash his because it got upvotes. Let go of your rage dude.

regonas2 votes

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Or, just throwing it out there, because the OP isn't salty with the forums? Because OP doesn't spam average champ ideas every day? Funny thing is, OP here has been NICE to you (go through his comment history because I know you love doing that). He's done nothing but compliment your champs, and the only thing negative he's had to say is about your attitude, which everyone has told you to change, and you trash his because it got upvotes. Let go of your rage dude.

Look, one of his downvoter friends.

Lonely Flame3 votes

Look, the guy who doesn't learn.

Leonidas Freedom4 votes

I don't know you but you've made my day infinitely better

Lonely Flame3 votes

No worries man. I'll give you a proper run down of your champ tomorrow (it's 4:15AM in Syd right now haha). You've got a good start, but we can definitely make this girl awesome.

Leonidas Freedom3 votes

I look forward to it

Meeks0112 votes

Says the guy downvoting all of OPs comments.

regonas1 votes

{quoted}

Says the guy downvoting all of OPs comments.

Simple - downvoters deserve to be downvoted. Don't do upon other what you don't wish done upon you.

Meeks0112 votes

And where is the proof of his downvoting? This sounds like jealousy to me.

Also, why are you downvoting if you don't want to get downvoted? You are breaking your own rule, dickweed.

regonas1 votes

Here is your proof

[{quoted}](name=Leonidas Freedom,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=rEuXKYcR,comment-id=0009000000000000000100000001,timestamp=2015-10-06T23:52:11.186+0000)

do you have your head so far up your ass that you're against free speech and opinion?

your ideas are bad, your comments are narcissistic, and you're an asshole. that's why not only me, but pretty much everyone with half a brain constantly thumbs you down. it's a matter of prejudice purely because of what you do.

Happy now, dickinson?

Leonidas Freedom1 votes

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I'm an asshole and people tell me this. also my ideas are bad and I can't take criticism. instead of accepting >that maybe I'm actually pretty terrible and my ideas aren't good, I just think everyone else is in the wrong

You are everything that's wrong with League of legends, the ultimate example of a toxic player.

regonas1 votes

[{quoted}](name=Leonidas Freedom,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=rEuXKYcR,comment-id=000900000000000000010000000000000000,timestamp=2015-10-07T00:24:57.873+0000)

You are everything that's wrong with League of legends, the ultimate example of a toxic player.

Did little downvoter kid cry a lot? item 3070item 3070 Does if feel bad? :)

Meeks0111 votes

Yes, because he summed up the truth perfectly.

Leonidas Freedom1 votes

I am downvoting. for, you know, the reason it was there: I downvote his bad ideas and upload his good ones. it just happens that he has more bad than good.

regonas1 votes

So funny to see you to try to lie :D ohh, these kids. More and more people will know how you downvote every concept better than yours (=any and all concepts ever made). The truth will set you free.

Leonidas Freedom1 votes

I never said I was better than anyone else. I've never said I was best.

you did, remember?

regonas1 votes

[{quoted}](name=Leonidas Freedom,realm=NA,application-id=A8FQeEA8,discussion-id=rEuXKYcR,comment-id=0009000000000000000100000000000100000000,timestamp=2015-10-07T01:15:48.446+0000)

I never said I was better than anyone else. I've never said I was best.

you did, remember?

And kiddo can't deal with it. Boo hoo, will you die out of jealousy? item 3070item 3070 Boo hoo.

Meeks0111 votes

I thought I couldn't find someone more immature than my 12 years old sister but I think I just did.

Lance The Mage3 votes

Hey come on man

I liked your Zombina concept (However it needs changes)

Kas1273 votes

The name doesn't fit. Lilith is a demon-woman and not a dancing corpse.

Uiraya11 votes

Lilith is actually a name that people can have sometimes.

Weathered3 votes

It's a good concept, but the "no head" thing won't go through because of Riot trying to have an appropriate game.

Rip Graves's Cigar

Toxic Bilgerat1 votes

tahm can eat someones wife but graves can't have a cigar?

blackrosekitten2 votes

This is a very unique Idea I like it.

GOD OF HEMTAl2 votes

+1

Asperoth2 votes

nice idea, +1 for me, Altough she reminds me of the girl from the music video " A little piece of heaved" by Avenged Sevenfold

Kitsuki052 votes

the skinless skull doesn't really fit well with her thematically, her passive is a bit of a jumble mess. The only interesting part of her kit that I see is the gravesoil, but I think you need to work on wording it better. (also I think swain's passive is called carrion call)

With all the dancing in her abilities you'd think you'd go for a candy skull/ vodoo girl look, but she's all prim and Elizabethan

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

She's a creature from mythology called a dullahan. these are what spawned the story of the headless horseman from sleepy hollow.

before the whole "knight who rides around searching for his head." Dullahan were scottish spectres who roamed the country side in carriages, appearing as gorgeous women in gorgeous black dresses and carrying their heads along. If you met one as you traveled along the road, and she passed by without an issue, you would have luck for the year. however, if she poured a bucket of blood on you, then someone in your family would soon die.

it's not supposed to be a skinless skull. it's supposed to just be her head.

Kitsuki051 votes

there's no eyes and no nose, that's definitely a skull. If you wanted to go for dullahan, I'd suggest a more lively looking severed head. In any iteration of dullahans I've ever seen, the head is very well preserved.

Meeks0112 votes

I love it. Yorick champion update.

Big-ass necromancy fan.

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

I've always loved necromancy, but evidently that's "edgy" and "stupid"

Meeks0111 votes

Yeah, and people connect it to "necrophilia" or some shit.

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

Here, have this. amazing read.

Meeks0112 votes

Someone is downvoting all your posts.

But amazing read indeed, saved. Thank you. As well as your concept.

Arakadia2 votes

Noice! Seems like her pushing power would be REALLY good especially if the zombies attack enemy champions who attack the zombie as you basiclly would have a bigger wave and you just have to auto not necesarily "last hit". Nevertheless I'd like to see it in the game!Fizz

Alex Luu1 votes

her attacks don't sound very bursty mage-like since she has heals from her q w and r,she sounds like she'd be a support character along with her stun dance and shield. plus a decapitated champion might be too over-the-edge for riot since they wont even give graves his cigar back

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

these heals are for herself only, and come with (ideally) high damage.

how is she a support?

CasterGilgamesh2 votes

i think it might just be the cc that makes him think that

Leonidas Freedom1 votes

Swain best support NA

CasterGilgamesh1 votes

i actually remember that was a thing for a short time i just don't know when i played during late season 2

Leonidas Freedom2 votes

yeah. think it was mid season 3. the "burst mage support" meta.

essentially people just wanted to get into team builders faster.

it "worked"

CasterGilgamesh1 votes

well at least we still have Velkoz and Annie for burst support.....

Leonidas Freedom1 votes

Sona and Morgana are the only true burst mage/supports.

don't believe me? try getting hit by a full AP sona's q-empowered power chord while she has a lich bane.

CasterGilgamesh1 votes

honestly sona isn't in a very good spot since she is so nerfed honestly i want riot to rework her into a passive Aura support like she was meant to instead of the bullshit poke support riot forced her into morg is pretty good but it's not really the burst that people look for in her but her CC and spell shield

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