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OMEN NEEDS TO BE MADE LIKE THIS HIS NAME SHOULDN'T CHANGE!!

DaTaMoUsE··0 votes·1,101 views

Omen

Q; Twilight Claw; This attack hits enemy's in a cone, creating a massive slow for 2 seconds to all it hits.Dealing 100 damage+(75%) AP and (15%) ad it costs 100 mana and has a 12 second cool down at rank 1 and 5 seconds at rank 5. Use after E for better damage output.

W; Terrors Bane; Upon casting He sends tail spikes flying at the enemy dealing 75+(100%) AP to all enemy's. After casting you can cast once more for 1/2 mana if it strikes an enemy reducing the cool down. Cool down 16 seconds rank 1, and 8 seconds rank 5

E; Crows Shadow; This attack summons a flock of crows that swarm Omen, and upon leaving, omen is invisible for 5 seconds. and is able to deal 10% extra Critical damage to enemy's turned away for 2 seconds after re-appearing. causing Area Of Effect damage for the attack. 70 mana at rank 1 and 55 at mana rank 5.

R; Final Omen; upon casting he gains a 50% AP buff and all ally's gain a 15% AP buff for 15 seconds. Each ability becomes an AoE attack for that 15 seconds, giving him heavy burst damage to enemy's around him. 450 mana cost rank 1 and 230 rank 3.

Passive; Black mana, every time Omen attacks an enemy he gains 10 mana per hit, and 10 health per hit. stack's 5 times. for each stack he gains + 15 AP and receives an additional 10 gold form minion kills.

HP; 750 MP; 550 CD; 10% Armor; 30 Magic resist; 0 AP; 65 AD; 20 Main roll; Jungle Secondary roll; middle or top

so just in case Rito you had any trouble making this character's attacks and everything, here is what i think he should be like. XP i spent 2 hours trying to make a balanced character but i think i may have made him a bit too strong.

> "I have found so much beauty in the dark. Because the light is filled with horror"

12 Comments

FloRaider423 votes

Omen got scrapped for a reason... [slayer-jinx-unamused]

DaTaMoUsE1 votes

i think he should still be made though he has potential

FloRaider423 votes

Please elaboborate I'm listening...

DaTaMoUsE1 votes

i figured since they scraped him they were having issues, well some issues i found were they had no idea how to make his kit unique, so i spent time trying to do what they did. i made this as a concept meant for people to help me edit it and make him actually appealing to riot i made this to see who still wanted their concept to come to life. i thought with his style of character he'd be a very good jungle assassin with mid or top strength. because he was small i figured he should have an ability to turn him invisible. so i made his E. he had spikes so i knew that he would be an interesting creature to throw spikes at you slow you and get to cast it again if he hits. that's all, i kinda figured he'd be fun to play if he was given a second chance.

FloRaider421 votes

The thing about introducing new champions is that they are supposed to bring unique and interesting playstyles into the game.

For that matter: Passive: Overloaded with Sustain, extra AP and ?Gold? Q: Pretty basic AOE attack with huge slow, but hardly any counterplay (channel?) W: Rumble E with restriction for the second cast E: Shaco Q with extra long invis and Aoe Damage R: AOE attack buff and AP Aura (!Design-Anti-Pattern!)

Sry if I was too harsh, but frankly this isn't an interesting concept.

The main problem with Omen is that everyone has different interpretations of what he should do. Some say he should throw spikes and be ranged, others say he could be stealthy, others think he looks like he would burrow.

Having no sense of identity or theme (Void creature or random monster) he was shelved and ultimately scrapped.

DaTaMoUsE1 votes

no worries, at all. i think i hafta agree with u XP i mean i did make him op but i know he'd be killed b losts of ap since he has 0 magic resist. plus im working on this cause i want to try some interesting things with characters cause i wanna work for riot REALLY bad so im working on my skill with the way i put characters together. so thanks for the help i appreciate what youve said and i will take it to heart next time i make a new champ or stuff like that.

FloRaider421 votes

Working for Riot is hard, especially if you only do concept creation, but shoot for the stars [slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

I would like to recommend Ninjaeds link collection, as it includes links to important informations like Design Anti-Patterns, some short lists of guidlelines and some ridiculosly long explanation of design aspects, that definetly are worth a read.

ModThe Djinn2 votes

{quoted} no worries, at all. i think i hafta agree with u XP i mean i did make him op but i know he'd be killed b losts of ap since he has 0 magic resist. plus im working on this cause i want to try some interesting things with characters cause i wanna work for riot REALLY bad so im working on my skill with the way i put characters together. so thanks for the help i appreciate what youve said and i will take it to heart next time i make a new champ or stuff like that.

A few comments, then!

Regarding Omen in general, I'd recommend looking at this. Omen suffered from a number of issues, including identity, in-game readability, expectations, and inspiration. I'd personally say that he doesn't really have ANY stand-out characteristics aside from being a spiky monster, and you'd really need to double down on some of his specific designs aspects and flesh out the character around them if you wanted to make any progress. Omen as-is is, I feel, not a strong candidate for a release of any kind.

Your kit is also a little thematically disjointed. We have something that strikes with physical traits a lot, but has huge AP ratios. We have a melee / ranged monster that throws crows around, becomes invisible, and becomes a spell-casting AoE machine. There's no real synergy or consistency to his kit, and not a lot of chance to counterplay or show mastery.

K542 votes

This is the most OP shit I've ever seen in my life!

In your favor: I don't look at many champion concepts, but that name "Omen" caught my eye.

Unfortunately, we already have Yorick for that.

DaTaMoUsE1 votes

yea but he's a cool champ to mess with and keep re working for the perfect skills and damage

DaTaMoUsE1 votes

Riot what do you think?

rtbf2232199601 votes

Ya know, you should be on riot's champion development team. You really know how to make an unbalanced champ! [slayer-jinx-unamused]

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