Neir- The Undead Gate keeper

xXGoneXx·1/17/2015, 1:27:23 PM·2 votes·3,039 views

Neir- the gate keeper Passive: Upon death Neir has (4-5 seconds) to choose a target to replicate their health. The health then drains from Neir. (Best used against tanks) (New form) (Cool Down 4 minutes) Q- Neir slashes his scythe outwards in a cone shape dealing damage W- Neir marks the ground with a pentagram that gives a small amount of health E- Neir throws his scythe infront of him and drags it back with a chain. If someone walks through the chain they are slowed. R- Neir targets one enemy and drops his guillotine scythe and rushes towards them dealing damage upon slam down

**The image is not my own- he would look something like that though ** http://wiki.guildwars.com/images/6/63/Dhuum_concept_art.jpg

4 Comments

Aquaman7111/17/2015, 1:38:32 PM1 votes

So, I can't really give you a review of Neir without rudimentary numbers for his abilities for things like mana cost, damage, cooldowns, healing, etc.

Anyway, you have a pretty good kit here, with one exception. His passive is very OP. It pretty much means that Neir cannot die, which is just stupid. You might want to put a restriction on that, like Anivia's or Zac's post-death ability. For instance, Neir's passive should only be able to used once every four minutes or something like that.

Besides that, all you might want to change is that his E should only slow enemies who walk through his chain.

Keep up the good work!

Abriel991/17/2015, 2:39:11 PM1 votes

Just like aquaman said, can't really review it without numbers. Still, seems like a decent kit, except for passive which needs to be toned down to 75% of their health at least, and Neir dies after 10-15 seconds of being in that form. I don't like to self plug, but consider checking out one of my champions, Andom, to see how to properly organize a champion concept.

Heres a link. Keep up the good ideas, and remember, execution is important too.

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/5g02ZXUo-andom-the-dauntless

Sirsir1/17/2015, 3:19:38 PM1 votes

That would be an awesome Thresh skin :D