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Asami, the Eternally Devoted

Jellycake Demon··2 votes·1,200 views

Hello everyone JellyJackJak22 here with another Champion Concept, now i know i keep asking this (usually at the bottom of my concepts) but please i want hear your Comments on my concepts. by reading them i can see flaws that i myself have missed (also because i'm this Champions creator i might be a little optimistic about my own work) & therefore i can make the changes that need to be taken, also don't be afraid to ask questions that's part of being a concept artiest & creator i want to hear feed back on my creations. so please leave a comment down bellow.* (bow my head)*

Primary: Support. Secondary: . Additional Roles: Player Choice. Statistics: Attack Power: 2. Defense Power: 5. Ability Power: 6. Difficulty: 6. Place of Origins: Demacia. Upon Selection: We shall endure everything together.

Friends: Lux & XinZhao. Enemies: Leblanc.

Appearance: Asami is a 5'ft tall mid-built Ionian woman with a very carrying personalty. She has short blonde hair that has a medium length ponytail, as for her eyes her left eye is blue while her right eye is silver. her outfit is a medium length coat with long sleeves & a hood that she usually has up, she wears the same type of armor & clothing as Lux but her jacket has minimal armor plating on the shoulders. she wears a pair of tight jeans & wears light armored shoes. as she is very magically imbued she hovers in the air with a flux of energy emitting from her body.

Gameplay: Asami is a Back-Line Bottom Lane Support that's all about devoting her time & energy to help her Lane Partner stay alive & keep putting pressure on the enemy Bot Team by keeping her teammate in top condition, as she is all about keeping her allies safe & in good condition she has to rely solely on her own Lane Partner or other teammates to keep her safe so she can keep aiding them in the most crucial of moments. Asami is a Support that just gives & ask very little for the well being of her comrades....so she well not fail to keep someone she holds dear fie ever again.

Health: 388(+32). Health Regen.: 2.1(+0.38) Mana: 239(+34). Mana Regen.: 2.0(+0.39) Range: 500(Range). Attack Damage: 25(+2.0) Armor: 15(+2.1). Magic Res.: 30(+0) Attack Speed: 0.630(+2.2%). Move. Speed: 342.

Passive: Faith’s Champion. After 4 Ability uses Asami’s next Ability she uses either on herself or on an allied Champion will apply Faith’s Champion to that target, Faith’s Champion will Restore 4% of the targets Max HP & Mana as well as grants a 15% increase to both the targets Armor & Magic Resist for 3 while also making them Immune to Crowed Control Effects for 1 second. While a target with Faith’s Champion is active their Basic Attacks will deal 4% of their current Attack Damage as Physical Damage or current Ability Power as Magic Damage whichever is greater.

Q-Ability: Devotion. Range: 450. Cool Down: 24/22/20/18/16. Cost: 10. Heal: 15/20/25/30/35(+40% bonus AP). Total Heal: 120/160/200/240/280. Activate: after Asami has chosen a single allied Champion within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Asami will create a stream of life force that stems from her heart to her chosen target, when the stream makes contact with the target it will Cleanse the target of any Crowed Control or Debuff then will start to Heal the target every 0.5 seconds for 4 seconds. While the stream is active the Ability will drain its Mana cost every tick of Heal also Asami must Channel this Ability making her unable to use any of her other Abilities unless she recast this Ability to end its duration early, if Asami runs out of Mana while the Ability is active it will end & then will go on Cool Down.

W-Ability: Bonds. Range: 450. Cool Down: 18/17/16/15/14. Cost: 60/70/80/90/100. Damage Reduction: 8%/10%/12%/14%/16%. Passive: when an allied Champion is within 350-radius of Asami she will create an invisible mark on the targets back, while an allied is marked that allied Champion will gain 4% of Asami’s current States. Activate: after Asami chosen a single allied champion within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Asami will have the mark on the targets back grow in size creating a tether between her & her chosen ally, while the tether is active all damage dealt to the tethered ally either from a Basic Attack or Ability it will be dealt to Asami instead but she takes reduced damage.

E-Ability: Rejuvenation/Retribution. Range: 550. Cool Down: 14/13/12/11/10. Cost: 50/60/70/80/90. Heal: 40/60/80/100/120(+50% bonus AP). Magic Damage: 95/145/195/245/295(+30% bonus AP). Activate: after Asami has chosen either herself or an enemy Champion within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Asami will create a small orb of energy of a different color depending who the target is: Asami: after choosing herself then upon this Abilities Activation Asami will create a small yellowish orb that will Heal herself then grants a Shield that’s equal to 5% of her Max HP that will last for 2 seconds. Enemy Champion: after Asami has chosen an enemy Champion within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Asami will hurl a large purplish energy ball at the target dealing Magic Damage & Stunning the target for 1.5 seconds.

R-Ability: Souls Counterpart. Range: Self-Cast. Cool Down: 170/150/130. Cost: 110. Activate: after Asami has activated this Ability she will create a tether of energy that stems from her heart out to any allied Champions that are within 250-radius of her, these tethers will reduce the duration of all Crowed Control effects from enemy Champions by 6%, while also getting 4% increased effects from both Heals & HP Regeneration.

Bottom Lane Summoner Spells: summoner 4 + summoner 3.

Item Build: Starting Items: item 2003/item 3301/item 2044(x1)/item 3341. Essential Items: item 3158/item 3069/item 3512/item 2049. Offensive Items: item 3116/item 3001/item 3027/item 3174. Defensive Items: item 3102/item 3065/item 3110/item 3025.

Champions that Asami Synergies Well With: Graves, the Outlaw. Because Graves is an ADC that can dart in to a fight & apply heavy burst damage the added protection & survivability that Asami brings just adds more time that Graves can simply focus on dealing damage to the target while Asami worries about his safety & keeping him alive while also providing what little offensive bonuses she can give.

Jinx, the Loose Cannon. Jinx has so many options at her disposal for offensive gameplay but has very little means of actual escape or sustain in the early to mid game, but when she's paired with Asami who brings an assortment of Heals & protection Jinx can really cause havoc & just tear into her opponents also Jinx limited escape potential or lock-down is also given Asami as she has form of escape.

Lucian, the Purifier. with skill in hand & deadly tricks Lucian can be a great offensive partner for Asami while she may not be directly in the fight her Abilities allow her to make Lucian a powerful threat especial if Lucian is holding Asami's Faith's Champion & Bonds Ability effects allowing him to dive the enemy & ultimately destroy them then quick get out of danger before his invulnerability has worn off.

Champions that Asami Struggles With: Morgana, Fallen Angel. with her major area denial Ability & her superior Crowed Control effects Morgona is a major threat to Asami's gameplay since her Abilities have lengthy Cool Downs & she has not major means to neutralize heavy CC enemies Asami will be almost rendered useless.

Leona, the Radiant Dawn. If Leona gets the chance to get in close to Asami with her ADC right behind her Asami will have no way to protect herself from both Leona's good burst damage & Crowed Control Abilities also if Leona's ADC is in the mix then Asami is an easy kill.

Thresh, the Chain Warden. with re-positioning in hand & major area-lock down Thresh is Asami's worst nightmare if she is caught with no way to be able to save her ally or even worse have any means of saving herself if Thresh is able to get in close & really throw Asami around like a rag-doll letting his ADc grab an easy kill & a way to make Asami's ADC vulnerable.

17 Comments

GuileRaven1 votes

Her name is Asami but she's caucasion?

Jellycake Demon1 votes

she's the daughter of a Demacian woman & a Ionian man, but she looks more like her mother. her name was given to her by her father

GuileRaven1 votes

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she's the daughter of a Demacian woman & a Ionian man, but she looks more like her mother. her name was given to her by her father

Darker features tend to be more dominant. Most mixed children look more Asian than Caucasian. Why even bother making her part Asian if she's just going to look completely white?

Jellycake Demon1 votes

true but not always there are a few exceptions, i'm a mix myself my mom is Japanese & my dad is Caucasian & i'm more white then Oriental. but if this is a big problem for you i'll change Asami to Ionian.

GuileRaven1 votes

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true but not always there are a few exceptions, i'm a mix myself my mom is Japanese & my dad is Caucasian & i'm more white then Oriental. but if this is a big problem for you i'll change Asami to Ionian.

" more white then Oriental"

Unless your mother is also mixed, I am sure you have more Asian features than you actually realize.

Jellycake Demon1 votes

well you never know. so other then this racial disputed is there anything else you see problems with that need fixxing ?

GuileRaven1 votes

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well you never know. so other then this racial disputed is there anything else see problems with that need fixxing ?

Appearance wise, she seemed kind of like Lux 2.0 especially since you were planning on making her a support character. If your changing her appearance, then I suppose this won't be as much of an issue.

Gameplay wise, she seems extremely broken. She's constantly casting heals, giving mana, spamming cleanse (cc based supports would be almost useless), she can even give her stats to others?

Jellycake Demon1 votes

she only has 1 method of Cleanse & that's tied to her Q's Heal but because of its long Cool Down & its mana drain Asami needs to keep on eye on her Cool Down & make sure to use it at the right moment.

as for giving a % to allies i think i used a to high # so i might drasticlly lower it.

its true her Passive Faith's Champion is a mini-heal & it makes the Champion Immune to CC but thats only for 1 second. also in order for her to use this Passive she needs to cast in total 5 Abilities in order to use it & because of the Cool Downs i gave her that's gonna be a big problem early to mid game (late game she might be able to use very often if built the right way.

as for her Ultimate she can lower the duration of CC moves but it's nothing major, its basiclly a large steroid if allied Champions remain in a close proximity of Asami.

GuileRaven1 votes

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she only has 1 method of Cleanse & that's tied to her Q's Heal but because of its long Cool Down & its mana drain Asami needs to keep on eye on her Cool Down & make sure to use it at the right moment.

as for giving a % to allies i think i used a to high # so i might drasticlly lower it.

its true her Passive Faith's Champion is a mini-heal & it makes the Champion Immune to CC but thats only for 1 second. also in order for her to use this Passive she needs to cast in total 5 Abilities in order to use it & because of the Cool Downs i gave her that's gonna be a big problem early to mid game (late game she might be able to use very often if built the right way.

as for her Ultimate she can lower the duration of CC moves but it's nothing major, its basiclly a large steroid if allied Champions remain in a close proximity of Asami.

"increasing allied Champions current Attack Damage & Ability Power by 12% all for 3 seconds"

Riven's ult gives her 20% AD increase allowing her to completely smash people with auto attacks alone. Now you want to make a champion who can give a weaker version of Riven's ult to everyone in the team. Granted, it only lasts 3 seconds, but some champions can completely smash people in those 3 seconds. Can you imagine this combined with Riven's ult? She'd deck an entire team in those 3 seconds. So would Shaco, Yi, any ADC with a decent attack speed steroid; and AP champions with lots of AOE or spammable abilities.

Jellycake Demon1 votes

hmmmmm that's a good point...so should i change the % or change the Ability in total?

GuileRaven1 votes

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hmmmmm that's a good point...so should i change the % or change the Ability in total?

I think she should amplify healing, like an aoe spirit visage.

Jellycake Demon1 votes

should i make it a A.O.E burst or keep the tethers that will instead amp Healing?

GuileRaven1 votes

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should i make it a A.O.E burst or keep the tethers that will instead amp Healing?

Soraka already has a burst heal ability. I think this one should keep the tether effect and amp all healing/regenerative effects. Also, I think don't think the tether should break when out of range. That would make it a bit too limited; but you should have to be in range to receive it. Actually, I think it's tame enough to make it global.

Also, one of her other abilities should be a channel based heal. Like a reverse fiddlesticks drain.

In fact, I think overall she should have sort of a spirit ability theme. Like a non-evil necromancer. She should have the same passive as Karthas.

GuileRaven1 votes

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Soraka already has a burst heal ability. I think this one should keep the tether effect and amp all healing/regenerative effects. Also, I think don't think the tether should break when out of range. That would make it a bit too limited; but you should have to be in range to receive it. Actually, I think it's tame enough to make it global.

Also, one of her other abilities should be a channel based heal. Like a reverse fiddlesticks drain.

In fact, I think overall she should have sort of a spirit ability theme. Like a non-evil necromancer. She should have the same passive as Karthas.

You know what, don't make the tether an AOE. Make it attach to one person. It should give the spirit visage style effect, but if their health hits zero they should automatically get pulled to her and resurrected (as in the person who killed that champion still gets the kill cash); she should be able to cast it on anyone from anywhere.

Barry Zukercorn1 votes

This is the first time I've tried to thoroughly critique a champion. I apologize if I come off rude, or overwhelming. I

Asami in her current state appears to be an Anti-Lockdown support providing a lot of CC reduction, healing over time, and damage mitigation in trade for insane squishiness and extremely long cooldowns. After reading over the kit as a whole I feel like this is where it was headed and honestly I love the idea of a niche pick that mitigates the overwhelming feeling that can come from team compositions with a lot of CC or punishes teams that have one intiation CC similar to what a morgana blackshield provides to the team.

I have to put some of these things in perspective though, her level 1 health is not only the lowest, but the lowest by 60 or so health. Given the growth rate at level 3 she has Anivia’s starting health a mere 480 which is currently the lowest level 1 health in the game. Which means one step of bad positioning and she’s likely dead. She also has the lowest health growth in the game by half or so Gnar at (65) Anivia at 70. As a support items aren’t plentiful and this makes her too easy to be picked off. If you need some perspective on this visit: http://leagueoflegends.wikia.com/wiki/Base_champion_statistics

While I can agree that major facet of this character is managing cool downs appropriately, all of her cool downs are so long it will make playing this champion really boring for most of the early game. I think if her cool downs and power levels are to be retained then she should likely have some sort of passive attached to an ability that rewards her for being active in the lane similar to how Soraka gets rewarded for landing her Starcall (Q) thanks to her Astral Infusion (W) passive or how Thresh gets rewarded for auto attacking with his passive on Flay (E).

Passive: Faith’s Champion. After 4 Ability uses Asami’s next Ability she uses either on herself or on an allied Champion will apply Faith’s Champion to that target, Faith’s Champion will Restore 4% of the targets Max HP & Mana as well as grants a 15% increase to both the targets Armor & Magic Resist for 3 while also making them Immune to Crowed Control Effects for 1 second. While a target with Faith’s Champion is active their Basic Attacks will deal 4% of their current Attack Damage as Physical Damage or current Ability Power as Magic Damage whichever is greater.

I feel like this passive just does too much: % Health and Mana heal on top of blackshield, on top of armor and MR boost, on top of Damage amplification is honestly just overwhelming. In my opinion it needs to be toned back some as well as have some focus toward exactly what you want her to be, this is just so broad. I think that the armor, MR boost and CC immunization would suffice to make this passive be toned down as well as focus on her ability to mitigate damage and CC.

Q-Ability: Devotion. Range: 450. Cool Down: 24/22/20/18/16. Cost: 10. Heal: 15/20/25/30/35(+40% bonus AP). Total Heal: 120/160/200/240/280. Activate: after Asami has chosen a single allied Champion within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Asami will create a stream of life force that stems from her heart to her chosen target, when the stream makes contact with the target it will Cleanse the target of any Crowed Control or Debuff then will start to Heal the target every 0.5 seconds for 4 seconds. While the stream is active the Ability will drain its Mana cost every tick of Heal, if Asami runs out of Mana while the Ability is active it will end & then will go on Cool Down.

I think this ability is kind of neat. It has like a mini Mikeal’s Crucible with a heal over time effect. My immediate concern was with the massive impact that this can have in a fight, but the heal over time really allows for the ability to have some counter play in my opinion. I’m also assuming the cost is 10mana/second for a total of 4 seconds. I think to really gate the power perhaps a minimum amount of mana for the cleanse is also important, because being able to hold 10 mana for a cleanse might be strong. My large concern with this ability is the total CD. If it only goes on CD after the ticks complete, which I think might be important I’m not certain about that, then the cooldown level 1 is 28 seconds with a minimum of 8 seconds.

W-Ability: Bonds. Range: 450. Cool Down: 18/17/16/15/14. Cost: 60/70/80/90/100. Damage Reduction: 8%/10%/12%/14%/16%. Passive: when an allied Champion is within 350-radius of Asami she will create an invisible mark on the targets back, while an allied is marked that allied Champion will gain 4% of Asami’s current States. Activate: after Asami chosen a single allied champion within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Asami will have the mark on the targets back grow in size creating a tether between her & her chosen ally, while the tether is active all damage dealt to the tethered ally either from a Basic Attack or Ability it will be dealt to Asami instead but she takes reduced damage.

I think this ability has a lot of interesting facets to it. I think however that 4% of all stats is a bit broad much like her original passive. In keeping with her theme maybe give a percent of armor and mr and HP5/MP5. For a bit of reference Taric’s Shatter (W) passive gives 12% armor as an aura. An interesting sidenote with an ability typed in this stance is if she drinks a potion or heals herself her laning partner will benefit from this. This type of ability though encourages her to build armor and mr to maximize the effectiveness of both the damage reduction and the passive.

E-Ability: Rejuvenation/Retribution. Range: 550. Cool Down: 14/13/12/11/10. Cost: 50/60/70/80/90. Heal: 40/60/80/100/120(+50% bonus AP). Magic Damage: 95/145/195/245/295(+30% bonus AP). Activate: after Asami has chosen either herself or an enemy Champion within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Asami will create a small orb of energy of a different color depending who the target is: Asami: after choosing herself then upon this Abilities Activation Asami will create a small yellowish orb that will Heal herself then grants a Shield that’s equal to 5% of her Max HP that will last for 2 seconds. Enemy Champion: after Asami has chosen an enemy Champion within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Asami will hurl a large purplish energy ball at the target dealing Magic Damage & Stunning the target for 1.5 seconds.

I think a stun/heal/shield is a bit much for the anti-cc queen; it is like having the option of point and click Nami Aqua Prison (Q) or Sona Aria (W). What I think would be good to alter is instead of a self heal it increases her HP/5 while it is active and grants a shield. This would synergize with the passive on W. And as far as the secondary effect intended to be a harass and cc tool I imagine a strong slow on target and smaller slow on surrounding targets.

R-Ability: Souls Counterpart. Range: Self-Cast. Cool Down: 170/150/130. Cost: 110. Activate: after Asami has activated this Ability she will create a tether of energy that stems from her heart out to any allied Champions that are within 250-radius of her, these tethers will reduce the duration of all Crowed Control effects from enemy Champions by 6%, while also getting 4% increased effects from both Heals & HP Regeneration.

I think this ult is fantastic; it epitomizes her focus as an area of effect, CC reduction, Heal over time mage. I’m honestly not sure of the numbers on this type of ability. Thematically I think the secondary effect would make more sense if it was related more properly to her E; perhaps an AOE version of its active and passive at the very least I imagine it having the same range of 350.

Let me know your thoughts on my thoughts. I really enjoyed Asami's focuses as an anti-crowd control support.

Jellycake Demon1 votes

thank you i really love getting this level of feedback cause i know even if i think Asami is good there is always something that a creator will over look. i will make the changes to Asami, in the mean time could you look over some of my other Champion Concepts when you have some free time? here are the links:

Most Recent Concept: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/AMQd7eEh-jean-the-swift.

Here's my entire collection: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/player/NA/JellyJackJak22?content_type=discussion.

Barry Zukercorn1 votes

I'm glad you appreciate the feedback. I'm curious to know what you think about it. Sure, I'll look at some of the other concepts as well ^.^

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