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[Concept rework]Mundo,the laboratory monster.

OoTriloDiveroO·2/8/2019, 12:28:47 PM·2 votes·2,521 views

visual https://media.lolusercontent.com/api/embedly/1/image/resize?url=https%3A%2F%2Fcdna.artstation.com%2Fp%2Fassets%2Fimages%2Fimages%2F006%2F200%2F426%2Flarge%2Ftom-barton-concept-2-v15.jpg%3F1496761631&key=a45e967db0914c7fb472fd4381e6c85b&width=425 by Tom Barton(regular form).

https://media.lolusercontent.com/api/embedly/1/image/resize?url=https%3A%2F%2Fcdnb.artstation.com%2Fp%2Fassets%2Fimages%2Fimages%2F006%2F200%2F425%2Flarge%2Ftom-barton-concept-2-transformation-weapon.jpg%3F1496761634&key=a45e967db0914c7fb472fd4381e6c85b&width=425 by Tom Barton(ultimate form).

[Lore]

A long time ago,in one Piltover house was born a ugly boy with purple skin and blue tongue,his name was Mundo.In Mundo's childhood everyone in school laughed and bullied him,because he didn't looks like they,and because of that Mundo didn't have friends...the only friend was a street puppy what he called him Roxxy.When Mundo grows up,in him 32 years,his mother suicide because of fathers death in factory accidents,after that Mundo became lonely,he tried to find a wrok but everyone drove him out for a terrible view.One day,when Mundo was sleep near one trash can,a mystery person come to Mundo offered him a job,this person have a slim build with a green eye,Mundo get it fast what this person is not from Piltover,but because of hopelessness, Mundo agreed to this job.Has passed 15 hours as Mundo and the mystery person walked,and they finally come to one abandoned house,to the Mundo surprise,inside this house was a big laboratory,Mundo was impressed by the mystery persons laboratory but suddenly,the mystery person hit with a heavy steel rod on him head and Mundo fell to the ground.After that,Mundo wake up in a strange room,it was not the laboratory of this mystery person,it was a different place.When Mundo tried to move him limbs,he get what he is chained,scared Mundo start to scream loudly and loudly for salvation,but the echos from the corridor was the answer to him scream,suddenly Mundo have heard steps,what slowly coming to him room,because of that Mundo started to panic and shake convulsively,until this person come to him room...it was the mystery person with green eye...the person come closer to Mundo,and he says to him:"I have watched you for a long time, I saw you laughing and teasing you,because you are not like they...you are different.".after that,the mystery person inject to Mundo's neck a syringe with sleeping pills,and after that,he say:"Shhhhhhh,unleash your malice and anger...especially...to your particular".

After 25 hours.

Mundo has wake up,his thoughts were vague and his mind confused,he didn't understand what he must to do or why,when he saw the chains what chained him,with anger and force he break them.after that,he find a cleaver and a old old shabby lab coat...on cleaver was a paper with a message:"Weapon,what deserve your enemy!",signature-Doctor S@#%$. Mundo walked long time in corridors,and finally find the door,with force he break it and saw a city with a lot of toxic clouds and smells of chemtech,but in one moment,Mundo has smell something different in air,he went over the smell and discovered a lonely man who waited something.After finding the lonely man,in Mundo's mind what triggered him..."Kill him",after that with crazy laugh Mundo start to run to the lonely man,but unlucky the lonely man too late saw the monster and he fell down to the ground,the man beg for mercy,but Mundo take him cleaver and with smile on him face make a blow what cut of the mans head,after this killing,Mundo start to like it and wanted more.Every person what walked alone will be brutal killed by a purple monster!but none know...what inside the big purple...monstrous body,hide a child who was unlucky in life...

"Mundo "slurp",wanna plaaay!" -Mundo.

[Statistics]

Health: 561.2 (+ 90) Health regen: 9 (+ 0.9) Mana: 325.6 (+ 42) Mana regen: 7.44 (+ 0.5) Range: 125 Attack damage: 67 (+ 3.5) Attack speed: 0.638 (+ 3.48%) Armor: 34 (+ 3.5) Magic resists: 32.1 (+ 1.25) Movement.Speed: 350

Role:Fighter Class:Juggernaut Lane:Top Damage:Physical primary recourse: Melee champion.

[Ratings]

>Damage:3/3 >Toughness:2/3 >Utility:0/3 >Mobility:1/3 >Crowd control:2/3

[Abilities]

[Passive]Madness: >When the enemy champion use his abilities to deal damage on Mundo,Mundo take a stack for every different ability dealted by enemy champion.If Mundo collect 5 Stacks of madness,the next ability from enemy champion will triggered Mundo to became mad.In this form,Mundo increase him attack damage,movement speed and health regeneration.

>cooldown:20 seconds.

"You make "slurp",Mundo angry!" -Mundo

[Q]Butcher's cleaver: >Mundo take his cleaver,increase his next AA range.If it hits a enemy champion,it deal physical damage,slow and reduce enemy champion healing for 2.9 seconds.If it kill a minion,it reduce by 1 second the ability cooldown.(This ability can hit the tower or Inhibitor)

cooldown:20 seconds. "You make "slurp",Mundo angry!" -Mundo

[W]Shock therapy: >[first cast]:Mundo charge him electric collar for 8 seconds,increase him armor and magic resist.

>[second cast]:To the end,or after 2.5 seconds,Mundo will make a explode of electricity what will silence the enemy champion and deal physical damage. >(Than later you will press the ability,the more the damage will be deal.)

>cost:80 mana. cooldown:15 / 14 / 13 / 12 / 11. effect radius:175.

"Phehehe "slurp",Mundo like shock therapy!". -Mundo

[E]Sadistic inclinations: >Mundo run to enemy champion and after Mundo reaches to him,he deal physical damage and _stun_him for 1.5 seconds.(In that moment,Mundo can't use his ability or stop the active ability.)

>cost:40 mana. cooldown:24 / 22 / 20 / 18 / 16. target range:1000.

"Come to Muundoo,phahaha!"slurp"". -Mundo.

[R]Masochism:

>Mundo make a big cut on his right arm and after 1.5 seconds he start to regenerate him health over 12 seconds.

>cost:25% cooldown:110/100/90 total regeneration:50 / 75 / 100% maximum health

"Pain "slurp" is fun,phahaha!" -Mundo.

And of course,i want to say a big thanks to my friend Leona Black it was his vision of Mundo that inspired me to create this concept rework!

15 Comments

Gilgayu2/8/2019, 12:39:56 PM2 votes

I'll give an in-depth analysis later today, but just a heads up: symbols like > don't translate well from docs to this board, so you have to retype them to make them look the way you want them to :)

ZaneShadow2/8/2019, 3:33:56 PM1 votes

So, is this a bruiser or tank design? I’m not sure. No Juggernaut I know of has a defense steroid in their kit, while this mundo has a few. It could work still, it’d just be VERY difficult to balance

Also, no Juggernaut has a long dash range. The longest is Illaoi, who has a fraction of that range.

I like the directions, and overall it’s a cool and unique concept. However, it suffers from wanting to do Tank things while packing Juggernaut damage, a combo that is avoided in champion for a very good reason.

Some quick fixes for your consideration:

Q: cooldown from 20–>12/10/8/6/4 remove slow

W: Remove Silence and put slow from Q here. Deals Magic Damage(Having a blitzcrank Ult on a regular ability could be a bit much, drop the silence)

E: Range from 1000–>250.

14daysuspensionk2/8/2019, 3:56:15 PM1 votes

The visual concepts are good, but the cleaver on the ultimate doesn't look like it fits.

Gilgayu2/8/2019, 8:03:31 PM1 votes

Em, ZaneShadow summarized it pretty well, so I'll just point out a few more things.

One of the most important aspect of the current Mundo is his anti-mage e. This is his current e's passive

PASSIVE: Taking magic damage or paying a health cost increases Dr. Mundo's Magic magic resistance by 2% for 2 seconds, stacking up to 6 / 12 / 18 / 24 / 30%.

This is a big part of Mundo that is often overlooked. Since you removed that MS boost from his ult, I suggest adding something like this for his ultimate's passive. ________- Although this is more of a personal preference, making his abilities cost mana instead of health probably isn't the best idea lore-wise. Besides those things this is a pretty nice rework.

Good job :D

Stars Shaper2/8/2019, 9:10:39 PM1 votes

Looks like Mr Hide and Mr Hide Hide.

Gilgayu2/8/2019, 9:48:16 PM1 votes

Perhaps rework skarner? If you think that's a good idea I highly suggest you to check out this thread. It states basically most things that are wrong with this poor bug.

OoTriloDiveroO2/8/2019, 12:29:09 PM1 votes

Hello there!

In this concept rework,i tried to make Dr. Mundo...or just Mundo...as a real experiment of one crazy scientist who w all know=))) [i hope,lol].

Anyway,i give to him something new,and keep something from old Mundo like him ult,because it will be not Mundo,if he will can't regenerate him health,right?

ANyway,hope you all like this concept=)

Chembaron Yamada2/9/2019, 12:05:54 AM1 votes

Ok, I really want to see Dr. Mundo updated and so will take time to go through this concept.

Visuals

I know this artwork and have to agree, it is great. It keeps the major thematics of Dr. Mundos visuals and enhances them by giving them the electric collar, which looks great and kinda gives him the feeling of the Frankenstein monster of League of Legends.

Nothing to complain here, great choice of inspiration for your concept.

Lore

First: You changed his name, from Dr. Mundo to just Mundo and there is no reference anymore of this fake title. I must say, I don't like that.

Dr. Mundo has always been known with that name and it shouldn't change. There should still be something in his new lore that explains why he calls himself Dr. Even if he is just insane and has a misconcept of the actual work of a Dr. in his head.

Second: You made him an experiment from Singed... I don't know if we should really go with that. While yes, he made quite some experiments and he could be one, it basically just makes him another Warwick, another guy who got altered by that chemistry madman. Dr. Mundo should feel distinct in his lore, he should have something that is his own, not being another version of the Warwick rework when it comes to his story.

Personally, I would like to return to the times in which Dr. Mundo was the Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde of League of Legends. That he used to be an actual doctor, but he went insane and made himself into that cruel creature we know.

Still your concept, tho. If you want him to turn out like that, it's legit. I just would like to avoid that myself.

Gameplay and Kit

Alot of thematics got lost here...

If I understand you correctly, then he doesn't throw cleavers anymore with his Q, but just uses them to increase his AA range and damage? If so, that's a no from me. Dr. Mundo definitely has to keep throwing cleavers, they are iconic for him (especially after that sweet VFX update we got).

Changing his health costs for skills to mana costs is also strange, his lore of being a masochist makes so much sense with this. I think he should keep the health cost.

The passive, while looking like a nice idea at first, could lead to some frustration. You are basically giving the enemy full control over your passive. You don't decide when to activate it in any way, just the enemy... Having this part of your kit, which seems quite impactful, just at the will of the enemy would feel bad.

But I really like your W (the charging mechanic is a nice idea and goes really well with the electric collar) and that you give him some hard CC on E. Juggernauts seem more successful if they have some hard CC and I would like to see something similar on the new Dr. Mundo. Honestly, it is kinda strange that all a guy of his size can do right now is slow you. ^^

The ultimate, you basically kept the same.... But I think it would probably need changes. This skill is a major part of why Dr. Mundo might feel frustrating to fight for many players. He definitely needs great sustain on his ultimate after his rework, but maybe not as so much regeneration over such a long time.

I would suggest to make his Q a skill with 2 effects: FIrst he throws his cleaver, dealing damage (and maybe slowing the enemy). The cleaver gets stuck in the enemy. The next auto attack on that enemy will rip out the cleaver, dealing further damage and reducing the cooldown.