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[Concept rework]Fiddlesticks,the cursed one.

OoTriloDiveroO·3/13/2019, 1:32:25 PM·11 votes·7,740 views

Theme https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-heSRbvCErU

by Sound Candle

[Lore]

Long years ago,in one Demacian farm was lived a hardworking farmer with the name Fidd.As a person he was 69 age old,he was very kind to him neighbors and especially he love children,because by him points of view the young generation is the future of Demacia.One day,which has become a dreadful news for Demacia,all farmers lose their fields of wheat,they all was destroyed and consumed by a mysterious monster.But this was only the beginning of problems,Demacia was in that situation were everyone suffered by hunger,at this point,Fidd didn't have any ways and decided to find the monster who consume all their fields of wheat,because everyone feared him.By legends,the monster who did it was a evil spirit what comes far away from Demacia,from that place were nobody come back,and now this spirit lives in one dark forest near the village were Fidd lives.After finding some informations about the spirit,he take his scythe and went into the dark forest.Inside,the forest was really dark,the trees was so high what it was impossible to see the blue sky,but Fidd continued to go ahead in search of the spirit.On Fidd's way,he find a abandoned house,the house was really old and dilapidated at the view,but something attracted the attention of Fidd,it was a small glowing turquoise ball what beckoned Fidd to come in.Fidd was not inclined to follow the glowing ball,but then he suddenly heard a howl of a unknown animal,and then Fidd did not have a any way,and he decided to came in the house.Has passed 5 minutes,the animal leave,Fidd sighed with relief,and then he started to explore the house,by sight the house looks like a hunter's house,because of different animals heads on the walls,Fidd came to the bedroom,he saw a small altar were someone did a ritual,on the center of altar was a homemade scarecrow of wheat,the scarecrow looking as a monster with long legs and arm,the mouth was littered with sharp broken knifes what looks like a teeth,he has two big eyes who gave the impression would this scarecrow watch everything.After contemplation of the terrifying "masterpiece",Fidd leave the bedroom.After that,Fidd noticed a strange trapdoor with a painted red X on them,Fidd opened the trapdoor,and saw a basement with another scarecrow what he find in the bedroom,but this one looked like more....alive? In that moment when he saw this scarecrow,Fidd was scared,he was panicked and when he started to go backwards,something was on him way,in this moment the Fidd's heart started to tremble with fear,and when he turned his head to what was behind him,he was so scared what he even screamed...it was the undead,the owner of this house,"The dead Hunter".The dead Hunter with a strong grip grabbed the Fidd's throat and framed his back to the nearest wall,then he spoke:"I HaVe fUlFiLleD mY pUnIsHmEnT,nOw,iT's yOuR tUrN",after these words The dead Hunter loosened his grip,and then he fall to the floor and started to decay,with the grip what he catch Fidd,he left an imprint of a strange rune on Fidd's throat.But that was not the end,these two scarecrows what Fidd saw came to the living room were is Fidd,and started to looking at him...Fidd was scare,and wanted run away,but for fear he could not do anything...The both scarecrows opened their mouths,from their mouth came two small glowing turquoise balls,then Fidd get it,it not just a glowing turquoise balls,it was the soul fragments of The dead Hunter.After that,both soul fragments came closer to Fidd,they save his fear,he was scared before everything he saw,but when they saw the rune of his throat,the sentence was decided,the soul fragments instantly went into the Fidd's mouth,Fidd tried to do something,but was too late,the soul fragments started to transform his body,flesh became as wheat,bones became as sticks,skin became as rags,the Fidd's life flew in his eyes,he felt pain,but he could not scream in pain,his body was exhausted and was ready to fall in the floor,but he couldn't do it,then all ends.............dark...darker.....more darker......darkness filled him soul,now he was not a human,he is a monster,monster who thinking what he could forget the past....but no.......

Fidd open him eyes,he was exhausted and hungry....hungry for human soul...When he got up,he sniffed,he smelled a village near the dark forest,there was many souls to harvesting,what a wonderful feast,after these thoughts,Fidd cannot stop him emotional splash and screamed as a mad man,all the dark forest heard him scream,even the village heard it...then the house were was Fidd started to glow in turquoise light,but fast it removed on light green...

The human who was Fidd is gone,there is now Fiddlesticks,the new terror of the village in Demacia what was near to the dark forest.

"AaaaaHaHaHAhaHaaaA!!!! -Fiddlesticks,the cursed one.

Fiddlesticks Visual http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-cMpfkojD9CM/UtQLIRQ-jlI/AAAAAAAAAw0/7w1ocQ2Cfhc/s1600/Fiddlesticks_textured.jpg

[Statistics]

Health: 524.4 (+ 80) Health regen: 5.5 (+ 0.6) Mana: 500 (+ 28) Mana regen: 8 (+ 0.8) Range: 480 Attack damage: 48.36 (+ 2.625) Attack speed: 0.625 (+ 2.11%) Armor: 30 (+ 3.5) Magic resists: 30 (+ 0.5) Movement.Speed: 335

Role:Specialist. Class:Mage. Lane:jungle(mid?) Primary recourse:Mana. Damage:Magic. Range champion.

[Ratings] Damage:3/3

Toughness:0/3

Utility:2/3

Mobility:1/3

Crowd control:1/3

[Abilities]

[Passive]Unseen horror: Fiddlesticks have a terror radius,were every 7 seconds the enemy champion gets one (Maximum 3 Stacks of panic) Stack of panic.If the enemy champion have already two Stacks of panic,the next Fiddlesticks ability what will hit the enemy champion,will do bonus magical damage and scare him for 2.1 seconds. [passive]Imminent danger:Fiddlesticks gets bonus on movement speed to the enemy champion who has two or more Stacks of panic.

Effect radius:1500

"HeRe I cOmE tO fInD yOu,HuRrY uP aNd rUn." -Fiddlesticks

[Q]Scythe lash: http://66.media.tumblr.com/8cd0f73a172bc578cfb14474f58494c4/tumblr_mnh11snIpc1s5nlk4o4_500.gif Fiddlesticks create a spectral scythe what deal magical damage.If the scythe hit's the enemy champion,he will come back to Fiddlesticks and reduce the cooldown of the ability for 1 sec.

cost:70 / 75 / 80 / 85 / 90 mana. cooldown: 15 / 14 / 13 / 12 / 11 seconds. target range:750

"Cut cut cut,cutting all the flesh mhahaha!" -Fiddlesticks.

[W]Soul harvesting: Fiddlesticks start to drain from the enemy champion him health,deal magical damage and heals himself. (If Fiddlesticks will move,the heal will be less but the enemy champion will be slowed).

cost:80 / 90 / 100 / 110 / 120 mana. cooldown:4 / 3.75 / 3.5 / 3.25 / 3 seconds. target range:575 heal ratio:60 / 65 / 70 / 75 / 80%

"Sweet sweet..souullsss.." -Fiddlesticks.

[E]Jumpscare: Fiddlesticks make a jump and after that he scare in cone the enemy champion who was in front of him,and also gain a movement speed buff in four levels.

cost:75 mana cooldown:15 / 14 / 13 / 12 / 11 seconds. target range: 575 movement speed buff: 25 / 30 / 35 / 40% triangle:50°

"Fear,such a sweet word." -Fiddlesticks.

[R]Crow attack: https://thumbs.gfycat.com/UntidyChubbyBovine-size_restricted.gif Fiddlesticks after 4.5 seconds call the crows to fly forward and deal magical damage to enemy champions or minions.

cost:100 mana cooldown:170/160/150 target range2000

"Death came to everyone...EvEn tO a ChEaTeRs!" -Fiddlesticks.

[Interactions]

Champion select:"The game beginssss,hEhEhEheee......"

Champion select:"None can hide..."

Attacking the enemy champion/minion:

1]Do you feel,fear? 2]Sweet soul. 3]Trembling with fear 4]I can sense your horror. 5]Do you fear,death? 6]Reap out the flesh. 7]Feel the grasp of death. 8]Warm blood. 9]Did your heart is beating? 10]Skin...disgusting.

Movement/to enemy champion:

1]I her your footsteps. 2]I'll never end my punishment...never. 3]I can hear your sharp breath. 4]You can't hide from me. 5]Leave the hope for salvation. 6]I can sense your horror. 7]I smell the taste of souls. 8]I'm coming. 9]Suffering never ends. 10]You are next.

[Interaction with champions]

Taunt to enemy champions:

Garen:You cannot protect everyone,Crownguard Garen. Garen;I'll start with your sweet sister first,then you. Galio:You will not be near her always,and this will kill her. Galio:She will be mine,mine,MINE!!!! Kayle:Your judgment ends here,by my scythe. Kayle:Let's see who you will be if i'll cut off your wings. Lux:Shhhh,sweet soul. Lux:I am sure,your soul will taste wonderful. Morgana:You was alone,you are alone,and at the end you will BE alone!!!! Morgana:The shadow can't have light. Nocturne:Foolish demon,think you will win it? Nocturne:They all are mine now,go away! Udyr:Heheheee,i know your fear,spirit walker. Udyr:Think you can protect her?he will be mine! Sylas:Your revolution,ends with the all peoples of Demacians! Sylas:By my opinion,the mages have more tasty souls. Soraka:The child of stars,how sweet. Soraka:You cannot protect them,you can't protect even yourself!

Taunt to ally champions:

Zed:You have so much to learn. Kindred:"I",am death itself. Katarina:Be happy what we are allies,because i wanted to find him. Garen:Be happy what we are allies,because she was on my menu. Neeko:Wanna i tell you something,before what you will lose all your colors? Warwick:I suppose she beg for mercy when you kill her. Taliyah:"sniff" "sniff",the fear...you fear your power. Leona:Turn off your sun!!! TahmKench:Even the demons have fears,what did you fear my friend? Annie:Wanna play hide and seek? Caitlyn:In true,this hat looks ugly on you. Draven:Seems you didn't have good dentist. Illaoi:As i see,you are loyal to your god,now tell me...Are the god is loyal to you? Azir:Your people have dead already,thing you can arise them?

[Answer to enemy champion taunt]

Urgot:Give me a reason to fear you. Fiddlesticks:One guy say the same thing,and he payed for that with him soul!

Amumu:Let me give you a hug. Fiddlesticks:Your parents threw you,live now with that.

Irelia:Can you not hear the music? I shall enjoy watching you trip. Fiddlesticks:I guess your family beg for mercy when they have died by Noxians.

Kayle:Surrender to the light and I will spare your soul! Fiddlesticks:Think i have soul?

Kayle:"Ready to be judged?" Fiddlesticks:Ready to lose your soul?

Morgana:I know how it is to fall,so will you. Fiddlesticks:Seems it's painful to fall from the heavens,it is?

Sylas:Return to your master, like the lapdog you are! Fiddlesticks:I don't have chains to be a lapdog,look at yourself first.

Sylas:Let me help you think for yourself. Fiddlesticks:Thin better what you will do when my scythe will be near to your neck.

Garen:Come forth, you will find honor in death. Fiddlesticks:Nobody will remember you when i'll cut off your life.

Garen:The glory of Demacia will never fade. Fiddlesticks:Who says it?

Galio:Hey, you. Don't mess with Demacia, I saw you thinking about it. Fiddlesticks:I know you are here Durand,i'll find you!

Galio:I'm sorry, I just woke up. Were we fighting? Fiddlesticks:Ehhhhhhhh-.....-.

Lux:We should try being friends first, no? Fiddlesticks:NEVER!

Lux:Hello, person-who-irrationally-wants-to-kill-me! It's so good to meet you! Fiddlesticks:Don't mind,i am not happy to see you.

Nocturne:Bring me more flesh bags to slice up! Fiddlesticks:You think i have any flesh?

Nocturne:Bring me more flesh bags to slice up! Fiddlesticks:HMMM,give me a sec,let me seen in my bag..hmmm..no don't have.

Soraka:Do you always fight so poorly Fiddlesticks:Say again?

Soraka:I will not save you. Fiddlesticks:Better save yourself from me.

17 Comments

HA I am Shaco HA3/13/2019, 4:08:20 PM5 votes

I had a hard time understanding what you meant in some of the sentences but I see you've put work into this. I like it!

KillerNeko3/13/2019, 3:46:44 PM3 votes

Hmmmm a pretty interesting rework.... Messy in some part, but nevertheless you did a dedication in making this, so a vote up from me! :)

Ladrac3/13/2019, 9:07:51 PM2 votes

What you did there is great, I'm not really sure about his abilities, but they look ok. Anyway you did good work.

OoTriloDiveroO3/13/2019, 5:08:57 PM1 votes

[Bonus to him lore]

[Curse of hunger]

By the legends,one Demacian hunter kill a white deer,this deer was the lovely animal for an ancient god of the dark forest,and when the god saw what the hunter killed the deer,the god fell in to anger.When the god take the form of a black wolf with red eyes,he started to seek the house of the hunter who kill's him white deer,but then he saw a terrifying,he saw the head of him lovely animal on the wall...after that the god lost his temper,he destroyed the house,and find the hunter,then the god spoke:"You kill my favorite animal,but that what you did was more pathetic what you did with him,you didn't eat him as a food,you use him as a trophy,now embrace the curse of hunger what will terrorize this village!".

The meaning of the curse is that:

You will be cursed for hundred years,until you find a new human who have make something worse than you,then you can pass your curse on him.

Now about the curse,your body will slowly decay,like with "The dead Hunter",it all depends on how much terrible act you did.Of course, you will feel hunger,and the only thing what you can satisfy your hunger with that curse is,to eat all the fields with wheat in village were you are,if you will not do it,the curse will regenerate your body but then the decay effect will be more slowly than it is. With Fiddlesticks it's hard to explain because BY him lore,he doesn't looks like he did something wrong,but only in first view.

If you want to know the true,what he done,just tell me.I'll wait)

CozinnLazzaPayne3/13/2019, 5:34:29 PM1 votes

I have entirely different Idea's for fiddlesticks and what should happen, and this isn't it.

CozinnLazzaPayne3/15/2019, 4:42:54 PM1 votes

I'm fine with a change to his passive but riot has already spent numerous updates getting this champion right. I play him a lot and don't want a full rework. his story could use a rework you are definitely right about that. right now the story is just about a creep no one can handle inside a box that no one knows why it exists or at least that is what I remember about it.

I play fid a lot up to 1.7 million mastery points. the only big flaws I have found with the champ are a slight lack of hp and a need to build move speed items or never keep up with all of the champions who have dashes in the kit. his q timer has a big delay in animation time that allows other champions to cast and interact before his cc hits and he doesn't have the same safety net other champs with similar cc effects have such in the case of morgana or janna where the cc takes time but you can barrier up to stop something bad from happening. so in short I think only this fear animation time needs any real work and the backstory. but on a side not I am not a big fan of the passive they gave him but it isn't entirely dead in the water. so if I were riot I would be very choosy over what would happen to this champion. most times even with the full reworks done to champions they keep a lot of the same feel on the abilities. like with warwick, and galio, even tho the changes were more drastic it kept a lot of the same feel. not always true. urgot got some big changes in feel. and what you impose is a big change in how the champion would be played.

CozinnLazzaPayne3/15/2019, 4:49:30 PM1 votes

I would actually prefer if riot re worked fiddlesticks story and all of the dreads stories. I guess dread's are a good name for what they are. a being born for/from fear to peruse just that so far shako, fid and nocturn are on the list I wouldn't mind if they added mordikaiser as part of it and added another new champion and just did an over all review of the stories and added another champion and flushed out that world rather then taking apart just 1 champion

CozinnLazzaPayne3/18/2019, 1:23:29 PM1 votes

ok then I will read the new lore and at best fiddle might just need miner changes. at least in my view. he was on the point of if they buff him he was overrunning the game and if they Nerf him no one plays him. so something could change it's just riot was dumbfounded on what to do with him. honestly just a slight tweak to his q might be all he needs now. maybe touch his passive but riot's crew seems to like the self synergy they made with him and be pretty proud of it, I don't know if the crew there would be ok with people stepping on their toes on that one.

Paletongue3/13/2019, 4:24:06 PM1 votes

At first I was opposed to giving fiddlesticks a dash/jump, but I suppose this is a mini ultimate.

Also, I think one of the most fun parts of Fiddlesticks is the bouncing Q that can be devastating to grouped up enemies. I do agree that his Scythe should be used more though!

Due to translation issues, I don't understand what the passive does.

HyperTechno3/13/2019, 4:26:57 PM1 votes

I like, you put some good work into it. +1