Nakamaro [Servant of the Oni] Final
This is the final draft of my champion concept, Nakamaro [Servant of the Oni]. Please give as much feedback as you can guys and I hope you enjoy my final version!
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Lore: *The Iwahara are an ancient order of assassins hailing from Ionia. They accept no contracts, and never seem to pursue targets for political or mercenary reasons. Their killings bear no relation to any recognizable agenda, and can seem to be completely random. Through rumored whispers, it is said that they guard a sword of great evil whos hunger must be sated, lest the demons that reside within the blade break free and wreak havoc upon Runeterra. It is also said that the leader of the clan must bear this burden. *
*Raised together within the Iwahara Clan, Nakamaro and Kaii were seldom apart during their youth. Being the younger of the two, Nakamaro looked up to Kaii, and considered his older brother to be a superior warrior. Eventually, the Iwahara Clan commandment was revealed to the two boys after they discovered Akuseki, the evil soul-stealing sword that would be used in the ritual to decide the clan's leader. The commandment deems that the next clan leader must be determined by a duel to the death between the eldest clan heirs—in this case, Nakamaro and Kaii. Aware of their destiny, the brothers trained incessantly. 10 years passed as the brothers refined their techniques and honed their senses, preparing for the longtime duel and training their skills. The duel occurred beneath a full moon and after a long exhausting fight, Nakamaro finally slew his brother, though he felt a great deal of guilt from it. *
Four years after, the Iwahara clans village was ambushed while Nakamaro was performing a high profile assassination. He returned to find his clansmen slaughtered and his home reduced to smoldering ashes. Eight months later, Nakamaro learned through an anonymous tip that the Order of the Shadow was hired by the Noxian High General, Swain to eradicate his clan and destroy all traces of their existence. That day, Nakamaro made a pact with the demons residing within Akuseki: The demons would grant him the power to slay those who destroyed his clan and in exchange, he would feed the blade with as many souls as it desired, including his own when the task was complete...
Nakamaro (Servant of the Oni) Hero Type: melee **Resource: Yin **
NOTE: Yin depletes over time at a rate of 15 yin every 2 seconds. This rate is reduced by half while in combat.
**Passive: The Blade Hungers... ** The evil sword that Nakamaro carries constantly thirsts for more blood. As Nakamaro kills enemies, his attacks will become stronger and the enemy will be petrified, though dead. After a short time, the sword will accept the offering and consume the yin of the killed target, sating its hunger for a little while longer. If Nakamaro fails to kill any enemies and runs out of yin, the sword will begin to drain the life from Nakamaro until he kills something.
NOTE: Health will deplete at a rate of twenty HP per 5 seconds until Nakamaro regains any amount of Yin
Passive Mechanics:
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3 second offering timer (killing another enemy within the 3 seconds will reset the timer)
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5 levels of attack power increase, each level increases base damage by 5% (+25% of bonus Attack Damage) 2a: 1-4 enemies (level 1) 2b: 4-6 enemies (level 2) 2c: 6-8 enemies (level 3) 2d: 9 enemies (level 4) 2e: 10 enemies (level 5) 2f: If Nakamaro has slain 4 or more enemies within the 3 second timer, the final offering will yield 1.5 times the amount of yin from all targets slain 2g: Nakamaro loses the damage bonus when the yin is collected 2h: The 25% bonus from additional Attack Damage is static throughout the swords levels. Only the base damage will scale.
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Returning to base can replenish yin as well
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Nakamaro starts with full yin. It will only begin to deplete upon his first auto attack of the game
Skills:
**Q: Throw Kunai **- 6 second cooldown *Throws a kunai to slow the target by 15% for 1.5 seconds and deal a small amount of damage. Skill Shot. (30/60/90/120/150 damage *
**W: Mirror Image **- 6 second cooldown Dodges an enemy attack by creating an after image.
- Can only be used during an enemy champion auto attack and before any damage is applied.
- Direction of the dodge can be changed depending on the position of the cursor.
- If Nakamaro dodges a fatal blow, the cooldown for Mirror Image is reset.
- If a target is afflicted by the slow from Throw Kunai, Nakamaro can dash towards them
**E: Jump **- 10 second cooldown *Nakamaro leaps into the air, briefly giving him vision of the surrounding area. Throw Kunai can be used in a cone AOE while Nakamaro is airborne. *
- Allows Nakamaro to see through bushes, but NOT invisible targets... EG: Shaco invis, Eve invis, Rengars Thrill of The Hunt, etc.
- All targets caught within an air Throw Kunai will be slowed and damaged.
- 450 range cone in front of Nakamaro when he uses Throw Kunai in the air
R: Makimono Scroll - 70 second cooldown Nakamaro unleashes one of three powerful ninjitsu to aid him in combat.
6 second selection timer
- Ka'en... Sends out a fire nova from Nakamaros location, dealing a large amount of damage and applying a small burn DOT to enemies caught in the blast. (400/500/600 radius)
- Kamaitachi... Empowers Nakamaros sword with a temporary ranged attack. (3/5/7 attacks)
- Raijin... Creates a shield of lightning around Nakamaro, absorbing a set amount of damage. (20% of maximum health)
Ulti explanation: *More or less, Nakamaros ulti would work In an extremely similar (if not exact) manner as twisted fates skill "Pick a Card". The starting icon for the skill would be the scroll itself and once used, the 3 spells would rotate until one is selected within the timer. The rotation will stop at whichever spell was there when the timer stopped. Once the spell is used, it returns to being the Makimono scroll. *
**Note: **Enemies CANNOT see which of the 3 ninjitsu spells you select.
**Stats:**
*Health: 450 (+70 per level)*
*Yin: 300*
*Attack Damage: 52 (+3 per level)*
*Attack Speed: 0.768 (+3% per level)*
*Movement speed: 375*
*Health Regen: 6.00 (+1.00 per level)*
*Armor: 23 (+2.50 per level)*
*Magic Resist: 31 (+1.00 per level)*
**Quotes**
Selection: Revenge has a price...
**Movement:**
*Patientce, Akuseki...*
*I know … something of grief*
*I can't let go of MY demons..."
*Noxus will pay for its genocides!*
Attacking: You are weak!
FEAST, AKUSEKI!
you cannot protect anything, let alone yourself!
**Taunt: **
*Noxus will not be safe so long as I draw breath*
Against enemy Champions
Killing Swain:
Feel my hatred!
You do not deserve to live
The crows will feast on you after my sword has taken its fill...
Killing Zed:
I am the true ninja master
The Order of the Shadow is nothing compared to the Iwahara clan
The shadows will not save you this time, Zed!
That's it guys, the final version of my champion, Nakamaro. give some feedback and tell me what you guys think!