June CCOS Entry: Gravitus, the Living Black Hole

Psychoaryama·6/14/2015, 5:29:20 AM·2 votes·929 views

I will still be taking suggestions even during the CCOS competition, so if there's something you don't like, feel free to say anything and I will see if I can make the changes you want or at least tell you why I don't feel like it would work too well with whatever I had in mind. Excessively rude/cruel comments will be ignored even if they have good suggestions, and the suggested changes in such comments will not be made unless I later feel like they'd be good or someone else makes the same suggestion in a nicer comment. Nicer does not mean "Oh, I loved it, there were just a few things I'd like to see changed...", you can say you don't like the champion, just nothing along the lines of "This made my eyes bleed", "This made me want to hurl", "I can't believe you're this stupid", etc. Those comments are unhelpful. I will consider comments along the lines of "this could never be put in the game" if you have any good reasoning behind it, but even then please remember that this is just a champ concept so those kinds of comments may still not have any effect on the champ even if you have the best arguments in the world.

Special thanks to KrazeeSkull16 for making suggestions about what abilities Gravitus should have.

Gravitus, the Living Black Hole

Look: A completely black humanoid creature that floats rather than walks. His eyes are small and pure white, and he has no mouth. His passive causes him to have debris orbiting around him in a ring, similar to Saturn's rings.

Role: Tank; Secondary: Mage

Stats: Health: 562 (+89.9) Health Regen: 9.0 (+0.9) Mana: 280 (+44) Mana Regen: 7.39 (+0.6) Attack Damage: 59.2 (+3.9) Attack Speed: 0.640 (+3.47%) Armor: 24.91 (+3.4) Magic Resist: 31.0 (+1.11) Melee: 125 Movement Speed: 345

Passive/Innate:

Innate: Natural Satellite Gravitus has such a powerful gravitational pull that he causes bits of debris to orbit around himself until it eventually collects into a rock that becomes a natural satellite around Gravitus.

Over time, debris collects and slowly orbits clockwise around Gravitus. After 3 seconds, a small ring of dust begins to form in the area between 1 and 125 units around Gravitus, and he gains 3% increased armor and magic resist. At 6 seconds, the ring covers the area between 1 and 175 units around Gravitus, and gives him 7% increased armor and magic resist. At 9 seconds, a small (50 unit diameter) rock forms at the edge of the ring and Gravitus gains 10% armor and magic resist. The rock orbits clockwise around Gravitus and takes 5 seconds to complete one orbit around him. Enemies hit by the rock as it orbits are dealt 10(+1 per level) physical damage on impact and 5(+1 per level) physical damage per 0.25 seconds that they are hit with it (should they follow it in its orbit). At 15 seconds, the rock grows to become 75 units in diameter, with its center at the edge of the 175-unit ring. Gravitus gains 12% increased armor and magic resist, and enemies hit by the rock are dealt 15(+2 per level) physical damage on impact and 7(+1 per level) physical damage per 0.25 seconds that they are hit with it.

Q:

Q: Expel Gravitus releases excess mass, blasting away nearby enemies.

Gravitus has a 0.25 second delay before creating a white shockwave around himself that blasts away enemies up to 300 units from him, knocking them back 100 units and releasing them from the effects of Gravity's passive for 2/1.75/1.5/1.25/1 second(s). Expel deals 35/70/105/140/175 (+45% AP) magic damage to enemies 1-150 units away and 25/50/75/100/125 (+35% AP) magic damage to enemies 151-300 units away. Enemies 1-100 units away when Expel is cast also lose 10% of their movement speed and armor for 2/2.2/2.4/2.6/2.8 seconds. If the rock from Natural Satellite has already formed, it will be shot out 150 units and, once it's finished moving 150 units away, it will explode if it hit anything (including walls, turrets, and units, ally or enemy). Enemies that it hits are knocked up for 0.25 seconds and are dealt an additional 10/20/30/40/50 (+40% AD) physical damage if hit with the 9 second rock, or 20/30/40/50/60 (+43% AD) physical damage if hit with the 15 second rock. After the rock explodes, the ring disappears and Natural Satellite starts over at 0 seconds. If the rock doesn't hit anything, then it will continue in the new orbit with an orbit time of 10 seconds, and the Natural Satellite armor and magic resist bonuses will be reduced to 7% for the 9 second rock or 9% for the 15 second rock. If the rock is still in this new orbit when Expel is cast again, it will move out another 150 units and explode whether or not it hits anything.

Cost: 60/70/80/90/100 Mana CD: 7/6.7/6.4/6.1/5.8 seconds

W:

W: Mass Increase For an instant, Gravitus increases his mass and density dramatically, pulling nearby enemies and his satellite towards himself.

Gravitus has a 0.25 second delay before pulling enemies within 300 units of himself to be pulled 100 units towards himself. Debris pulled in with them will deal 30/60/90/120/150 (+40% AP) magic damage to enemies 1-150 units away and 20/40/60/80/100 (+30% AP) magic damage to enemies 151-300 units away. If Gravity's passive was has been deactivated by Expel, then it will be reactivated. If the rock from Natural Satellite has already formed, it will move inwards 150 units and, once it's moved in 150 units, will explode if it hit anything (including walls, turrets, and any units, ally or enemy). Enemies it hits will be dealt an additional 10/20/30/40/50 (+40% AD) physical damage if hit with the 9 second rock, or 20/30/40/50/60 (+43% AD) physical damage if hit with the 15 second rock. After the rock explodes, the ring disappears and Natural Satellite starts over at 0 seconds. If the rock doesn't hit anything, then it will continue in the new orbit with an orbit time of 3 seconds, and the Natural Satellite armor and magic resist bonuses will be increased to 12% for the 9 second rock or 14% for the 15 second rock. If the rock was in the larger orbit caused by Expel, then (assuming it doesn't hit something and explode) it will return to normal orbit and the Natural Satellite armor and magic resist bonuses will return to normal. The same goes for if Expel is cast when the rock is in a smaller orbit caused by Mass Increase. If Mass Increase is cast when the rock is already in a smaller orbit, then it will move in until it hits Gravitus and will then explode.

Cost: 58/68/78/88/98 Mana CD: 6.8/6.5/6.2/5.9/5.6 seconds

E:

E: Forced Orbit Gravitus forcibly throws a target opponent into an orbit around himself.

A target enemy unit up to 200 units away is thrust into orbit around Gravitus. They are still able to use spells, abilities, and items, but are unable to move on their own, even if their ability is supposed to make them move. They orbit Gravitus 1/1/2/2/3 times at the distance that they were at when the spell was cast on them, taking 1 second for each orbit. If Gravitus moves, their orbit will follow him. Every time they hit a unit, wall, or structure, they are dealt 9/12/15/18/21 (+50% AP) magic damage, and enemy units they hit are dealt the same damage that the target unit has taken over the course of their orbit(s) so far. Afterwards, they are thrown 50 units in the direction that they are going at the end of the orbit(s). If they hit a wall/structure when thrown, they will be stunned for 0.2 seconds.

Cost: 60/65/70/75/80 Mana CD: 12/11.5/11/10.5/10 seconds

R:

R: Gravity Enemies are pulled to Gravitus due to his powerful gravitational field. Enemies that get too close are slowly ripped apart due to the difference in gravitational pull on different parts of their bodies.

Passive Gravitus ignores collision with non-allied units. Enemies (including enemy minions, enemy champions and enemy non-neutral monsters) 1-500 units away from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 64 units per second. Enemies 501-1000 units from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 16 units per second. Enemies 1001-2000 units from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 4 units per second. Enemies 2001-4000 units away from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 1 units per second. Enemies 4001-8000 units from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 1 unit per second. Enemies 8001 units from Gravitus to the edge of the map are pulled towards him at a rate of 1 unit every 4 seconds.

Active Gravitus ignores collision with non-allied units. While active and while on cooldown, Gravity's passive is inactive. For 5 seconds, enemies (including enemy minions, enemy champions and enemy non-neutral monsters) 1-150 units away from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 1024 units per second; enemies 151-300 units from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 256 units per second; enemies 301-600 units from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 64 units per second; enemies 601-1200 units away from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 16 units per second; enemies 1201-2400 units from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 4 units per second; enemies 2401-4800 units from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 1 unit per second; enemies 4801-9600 units from Gravitus are pulled towards him at a rate of 1 unit every 4 seconds; enemies 9601-edge of map are pulled at a rate of 1 unit every 16 seconds. Additionally, enemies 200-151 units from Gravitus lose 9/11/13% of their current health per second, enemies 150-101 units from Gravitus lose 12/14/16% of their current health per second, enemies 100-51 units from Gravitus lose 15/17/19% of their current health per second, and enemies 50-1 unit(s) from Gravitus lose 18/20/22% of their current health per second as magic damage (+45% AP).

Cost: 120/140/160 Mana CD: 180/170/160 seconds

Lore

... ... ...Where... Where am... ...Where am I?... "Subject G is becoming conscious, and the horizon skin is stabilizing." ...What is this?... Everything is... white... It feels like there's a blinding light... all... around me... ...Wait, is it... changing?... What are these... colors? ...I... I think I see something... "Subject G is developing eyes on the horizon skin around the event horizon. He should gain vision soon." ...What... What's going on? Who's talking? Where am I?... "It's taking on humanoid form faster than we had anticipated." ...I... I think I can see... a wall? No, it's clear... maybe it's... glass? Where did I get that word from? TRANSFERRING KNOWLEDGE INTO MIND SINGULARITY. PROGRESS: 98% "Good, wouldn't want a stupid living singularity. This thing's dangerous enough as it is, the last thing we need is it bumbling around and messing something up." W... what? Living... singularity? What is happening?... Wait, this is glass... I'm in... some kind of chamber... and... is... is this my hand?... "The subject is analyzing itself. It's finally becoming self-aware." TRANSFERRING KNOWLEDGE INTO MIND SINGULARITY. PROGRESS: 99% *What is happening? Who are these... people on the other side of the glass? What are they doing with me? Am... am I - * "Hey, he's looking at you. Heh, you think maybe he thinks you're his mommy?" "Oh, shut up, that thing couldn't possibly know what a mommy is." "We're 99% done uploading all the information man has gathered over the centuries, I'm pretty sure by now it knows what a mommy is." "Well then it knows that I'm not one!" "Shut up, you two, you're annoying it." What are these people doing? Are they... arguing? No, I believe this is what they call teasing... It's amusing, but that other one is right... it is rather annoying. I take it then that I'm what these creatures call a ... "science experiment"? Yes, I believe that's the term. What were they calling me earlier? A "living singularity"? Heh, I guess whoever is... funding this must like black holes... ugh, I know they mean well, but perhaps they shouldn't have included an understanding of inappropriate jokes in the information they uploaded. "Hey, did you see that one show? I forget what it's called, it's really popular, the one where people made this monster and it got pissed at its creators and tried to destroy the world? What're the odds that's gonna happen here?" "Oh, um... I know this one, I know this one... Yeah, I can't think of the name, but I know what you're talking about, but that thing had psychic powers, this is just a black hole." "So, then, rather than explosions, we just have to worry about tiny quasars? Great, I feel sooo much better." Ugh, do they ever stop talking? I may fire off a quasar if you don't cut it out - crash "Huh? What was that?" "Hey, who threw my mug?! Was it you?!" "Me?! I didn't do it!" "Then how come did it just happen to come from where you're standing?" "I don't know! It just kinda flew off!" Huh, I could have sworn... yes, that mug followed a circular path around me. It seems that I can throw things into orbit around myself. Hehe, I suppose that one was right to worry about his creation having psychic powers. Now if I could just find a way out... wait, what's going on? "Hey, is it just me, or is the floor kinda coming up from around that thing?" "Well what did you expect? That thing's a living black hole, it's gravitational pull is enormous, that's why we had to create that gravity countering mechanism first so we wouldn't get torn apart!" TRANSFERRING KNOWLEDGE INTO MIND SINGULARITY. PROGRESS: 100%. TRANSFER COMPLETE. "Still, I don't like the fact that it's tearing up the ground in there. Plus all we really have between us and that thing is a bit of glass, and - woah, is that thing growing a ring around itself?" Ah, yes, that would explain it. As a living singularity, I suppose having a massive gravitational field is kind of a given. I wonder how long it's going to take them to realize the ring was my idea, though? Heh, oh well, it's just as much fun whether they're in on it or not... Hey, would you look at that? I can pull together the debris to make tiny rocks, too. Hmm... I AM only blocked by a wall of glass... I wonder if... CRASH ...Oops... I only wanted to throw the rock... but... I suppose... throwing the window works too... "Ugh... what... was... that?..." "...I... told... you... it would... do something like... that..." Um... sorry?... Ugh, great, they forgot to give me a mouth... I don't suppose they at least took the time to give me a name? "Hey what happened in here?! Is Gravitus okay?" ...Subject G... Gravitus... gravity... how... original... well, on the bright side, at least they didn't forget to give me an understanding of how sarcasm works... "Oh... I see it learned how to eject matter out of itself... Well this experiment is progressing a lot faster than expected!" Oh, is that what happened? Makes sense now that I think about it, I did lose the ring I had around myself. Oh well, I guess I should get going, this guy seems a bit too excited about how I just blew up his laboratory, I'm not sticking around to see what else he wants me to do... "Hm? Wait, where are you going?" Ugh, if I had a mouth I'd tell him I'm going to see the world... or his mother - GAH curse these scientists for teaching me about inappropriate jokes! That's it, I'm leaving, and these guys can't stop me!

Ultimate Skin: TwoMew Gravitus Rather than just a humanoid, Gravitus is shaped like Mewtwo, but with a black body with small spots of light as though you're looking into space. The eyes are glowing white. When he develops rings because of his passive, it's replaced by bunch of blue flames like Will-o-Wisp circling him, and the "rock" is replaced with a Shadow Ball. When he casts Expell, regardless of where he's facing, he'll turn towards his "rock", put out his arms and say "Shadow Ball!"; If he casts it when he doesn't have a rock orbiting him, then he'll get into a wide stance and put his arms out to his sides, with his bod leaned slightly forwards, and his body will glow purple as he says "Shadow Pulse!" and a dark-purple pulse will be emitted around him. When he casts Mass Increase, he'll get into a wide stance and put his arms out to his sides, with his bod leaned slightly forwards, and his body will glow magenta as the area around him gets filled with tiny stars and become black/dark-purple as though in space as he says "Cosmic Power!" and the stars start moving in towards him. When he casts Forced Orbit, he faces his target, takes a step forward with his right leg and reach out with his right arm, and his eyes and hand and the target's body will glow magenta, and he'll say "Telekinesis!" and swing his right arm to the side as they begin spinning around him. When he casts Gravity, he will get into a semi-wide upright stance, face forward, put his arms out to his sides, palms facing up, and his eyes and hands will glow magenta while the area 2000 units around him becomes darker and debris starts floating towards him in a spiral pattern as he slowly raises his arms from waist-height to shoulder-height and says "Gravity".

2 Comments

Bottom Laner6/14/2015, 8:03:44 AM1 votes

So far with these two abilities uploaded I would love to see more of what this champion evolves into, however I think that his passive seems kinda annoying to play against due to the movement trolling and constant cc that would ensue due a constant slow/"turret trap" where x champion would try to gank and be unable to escape tower. I believe that his passive should be his ult rather where you could amplify the dmg to 100/125/150 magic damage every sec for give or take 5 seconds and change his passive to something like an oriOrianna style orbital with a rock orbiting Gravitus that grants MR and armor and deals dmg to units in its path. If you're taking suggestions for his W or E you could perhaps have grab with said orbital for the W and a kind of slam attack to knock up enemies with his immense mass for his E. I respect the changes you make to your champ and happy to have taken the time to supply constructive criticism. :)